team vulgar display of power

[the shiny shuckle]

:kongler:TEAM VULGAR DISPLAY OF POWER:kongler:​

Hi every one welcome to my rmt! =)​

Please leave tips on how i can make my team beter.​

5/6 of my team only has one weakness​

:jump:AT A GLANCE:jump:

enter my team on http://pokemon.marriland.com/diamond_pearl/team_builder/
its really good
(i coudent figure out how to copy it)

:cloud:THE BUILDING PROCESS:cloud:​

It started with swampert having only one weakness, grass he works great as a lead. he can SR and roar which i like alot.​

I wanted another poke with one weakness that could take grass and do some damage. Scizor worked great.​

The bigest lead threat to swampert is roserade and he would ether sleep swampert or leaf storm him so i need some one to take fire, kingdra could do it and also only has one weakness.​

I wanted 2 more pokes with 1 weakness. I decided on joleton and slaking.​

Now i was weak to ground and fighting, gyarados helped that.
(sorry that jolteon and slaking don't move)​

THE BREAK DOWN / CLOSER LOOK / UNDER THE MICROSCOPE​

Swampert @ Leftovers
relaxed
240hp/216def/52spd

-earthquake

-stone edge

-stealth rock

-roar
synergy

-scizor​

he gets SR up and roars/earthquakes/stone edges till death or goes to scizor​

Scizor @ choice band
adamant
252hp/252att/4def

-u-turn

-bullet punch

-close combat

-pursuit
synergy

-gyarados, kingdra, swampert, gliscor​

great set preaty standerd switches in and bulet punches up a storm, dose loads of damage (band+adamant+252att+tecnition+stab) he can also trap with pursuit (not realy traping but i guesse you could call it that)​

Kingdra @ lum berry
adamant
252att/232spe/24spa

-dragon dance

-waterfall

-outrage

-draco meteor
syenery

-scizor​

preety good set i chose lum berry over life orb because general greatness of lum berry and geting confused from outrage also if kingdra gets statused with life orb damage can realy add up

Jolteon @ life orb
timid
252spa/252spe/4def

-charge beam

-thunder bolt

-hidden power

-shadow claw
synergy

-gyarados

this little guy is great he fast and has high special att i can easly tell when im going to get earthquaked so hes preety easy to handle

Slaking @ choice band? mabey scarf
adamant
252att/252speed/4hp

-return

-earthquake

-fire punch

-pursuit
synergy

-gyarados/anyone

this guy is soo good some of the highest stats of the game but one of the worst abilities i have never had him out for more that one turn, thats bacicaly the trick to using him. Hes gotin alot of vital kos for me
(also please dont say replace him he sucks for no good reason especaly if you have never tryed him)

gyarados @ leftovers
adamant
156hp/72att/96def/184spe

-dragon dance

-waterfall

-stone edge

-bounce
synerge

-jolteon,swampert

-swampert

he gose great with jolteon, swampert, and takes fighting aimed at slaking i chiose bounce over earthquake because it is now the only flying move on my team.

:naughty:thats the team thanks for reading:naughty:

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one more time please no "slaking sucks" I only use him for one turn at a time.​

i will concider all sugestions / tips

also i keep trying to copy the chart on http://pokemon.marriland.com/diamond_pearl/team_builder/
and nothing happens if some one could help me there that would be awsome = )​

one last thing i keep having problems with a threat list if some one made me one i would be there best friend in the world! (you want that)​

 

[Shizzle]

Swampert run Surf or Ice Beam over Stone Edge, simply because Stone Edge does, well nothing to anything, where Ice Beam or Surf gives better coverage/STAB.

Scizor should be 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 Spe, I believe so you take minimal damage from SR as a percentage.

On Kingdra, I recommend running the Mixed Sweeper set, which I find to be incredible in raw power:
Kingdra @ Life orb
Naughty - Swift Swim
252 Atk / 240 SpA / 16 Spe
~ Rain Dance
~ Waterfall
~ Hydro Pump
~ Draco Meteor

On Gyarados, Stone Edge is doing nothing if you have Bounce, so use Earthquake over Stone Edge, to take care of Metagross/Jirachi who can threaten your sweep, Bounce deals with opposing Gyarados, Dragonite etc, although does leave you open to Zapdos, but it shouldn't be a problem.

For the problem with the type chart, not sure what you are trying to do, but basically you just need to print screen, then open the image in paint or something, crop to what you need and save it as an image, then upload to photobucket or whatever and do the IMG URL thingy, [like with all the other pictures you used]

Slaking is a horrible pokemon for just about any team, especially in this case where you have no reliable Choice Scarfer. Slaking leaves the game wide open for Lucario to SD, Infernape to SD and others to set up. Infernape would not be as bad thanks to Starmie and Gyarados, but Lucario can be threatening if Gyarados has already switched in before. And it doesn't matter if I have not tried him, its plain and simple to see why he is terrible, giving your opponents free turns isn't exactly something I would like to do...

 

[Pharaoh]

Slaking sucks remove it(gives no good reason)

Anyway the reason as specified above is because it allows shit to set up... DDNite, DDGyara, DDKingdra, SDLuke and NP/SDNape can screw your shit up if you allow them to set up like that.

I'd reccomend running Scarf Heatran for two reasons... Your team lacks a revenge killer besides scizor whose bullet punch can't kill everything. and it has wonderful synergy with your team, Scizor helps him a lot by giving him flash fires, and Gyarados resists Water, Fighting moves and is immune to grounds.

By the way, Scizor can't have Close Combat... I honestly hope you meant superpower.

You don't need bounce I think because it leaves you wide open to be set up on by other DDGyaras that can then proceed to rape yours with Stone Edge. Also CM Jirachi comes in on your bounce and can get a turn of setup. To remedy this I recommend Waterfall, Dragon Dance, Earthquake and Stone Edge. why? Because That gives you an answer to other Gyarados, Agiligross, and Jirachi at the same time.

Good luck with your team.

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which means you are violating the above quoted RMT rule. If you wish to remedy this problem, explain your reasoning behind each Pokemon and why they work on your team more thoroughly. I recommend lurking through the RMT Archive in order to see prime examples of what we're looking for in an RMT! If you improve your explanations for your Pokémon, please private message me indicating that you've done so by showing me your new descriptions. Once you've done that, I will re-open this thread. Thanks.