As an aside, I'm not really rooting for him, but is anyone else noticing how badly the Avery article on NHL.com in particular are spun? Just the wording that is used... using the most recent article as an example, even though it isn't the best example they've posted:
except when they quote Sather later in the article, he says
Didn't really sound like he broke down and agreed to it the way "eventually" implies, don't you think?
This one is a little less objectionable since the author is right on this one, but there's still some strong implication there (abundantly, controversial, even the way the sentence is set up).
I like the use of "refused" here. Have you seen the numbers on his contract? But the point is, players go through waivers every day, normally going unclaimed, it makes it sound like the other teams were obligated to pick him up...
This part mostly speaks for itself. I like how there's no evidence supporting that last sentence, even though it was mostly true from other things I've read. I like the turnabout in "cementing as perhaps", either make the claim or don't... same thing with "reinforces the notion" when he is clearly talking about conjecture.
This particular article didn't fit what I was saying spectacularly so I kind of look like I'm grasping at threads I think, but the spin on most of the articles on him is definitely there - keep an eye out. It isn't really surprising after seeing him get the treatment he did after some comments that wouldn't have landed him any games in any other major sports league got him tossed for months, essentially, since that makes the NHL's stance on him pretty obvious... but biased journalism really irritates me.
Glen Sather, the general manager of the New York Rangers, eventually agreed to let Avery be assigned the Wolf Pack,
except when they quote Sather later in the article, he says
"Sean and the Dallas Stars approached me looking for an American Hockey League team for him to resume playing, and I am happy to provide him with the opportunity to continue his career
Didn't really sound like he broke down and agreed to it the way "eventually" implies, don't you think?
Avery was cleared by doctors to resume his hockey career last week; but, by then, the Stars had made it abundantly clear that they were ready to part ways with the controversial figure.
This one is a little less objectionable since the author is right on this one, but there's still some strong implication there (abundantly, controversial, even the way the sentence is set up).
He was placed on waivers Saturday and cleared Monday when all 29 NHL teams refused to make a claim.
I like the use of "refused" here. Have you seen the numbers on his contract? But the point is, players go through waivers every day, normally going unclaimed, it makes it sound like the other teams were obligated to pick him up...
The fact the Stars have a record of 12-7-3 (27 points) since Avery's suspension only reinforces the notion that the club is eager to shed itself of Avery. Dallas was just 8-11-4 with 20 points in the 23 games in which Avery appeared, cementing its status as perhaps the most under-performing club in the season's first half.
Avery had three goals, seven assists and what was then a league-high 77 penalty minutes in his 23 appearances with the Stars. He never meshed with his new teammates.
This part mostly speaks for itself. I like how there's no evidence supporting that last sentence, even though it was mostly true from other things I've read. I like the turnabout in "cementing as perhaps", either make the claim or don't... same thing with "reinforces the notion" when he is clearly talking about conjecture.
This particular article didn't fit what I was saying spectacularly so I kind of look like I'm grasping at threads I think, but the spin on most of the articles on him is definitely there - keep an eye out. It isn't really surprising after seeing him get the treatment he did after some comments that wouldn't have landed him any games in any other major sports league got him tossed for months, essentially, since that makes the NHL's stance on him pretty obvious... but biased journalism really irritates me.










