The Seals!

[Deco F.]

The Seals is a USA Special Team.

Dragonite @ Inner Focus
Item: Life Orb
Nature: Quiet
EV's: 252 Atk / 252 SpA / 4 Spe
Moves:
Draco Meteor
Fire Blast
ExtremeSpeed
Earthquake

This nice boy is my Lead, no not Lead, Anti-Lead, he hates Leads.
Thats why he want to have the roll for Anti-Lead.

Cresselia @ Levitate
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Calm
EV's: 252 HP / 200 Def / 56 SpD
Moves:
Moonlight
Calm Mind
Ice Beam
Icy Wind

Own made Cresselia, never tested out but i realy know it is a bitch!
A lot of better then Blissey or any other OU wall!

Shaymin @ Nature Cure
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Bold
EV's: 252 HP / 220 Def / 36 Spe
Moves:
Aromatherapy
Seed Flare
Rest
GrassWhistle

Dont need comment, standart support Shaymin.

Starmie @ Nature Cure
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Timid
EV's: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Moves:
Ice Beam
Surf
Thunderbolt
Rapid Spin

Standart spinner, no comment.

Magnezone @ Magnet Pull
Item: Leftovers
Nature: Naive
EV's: 40 Atk / 252 SpA / 216 Spe
Moves:
Thunderbolt
Hidden Power Fire
Magnet Rise
Explosion

Steel Pokemons switch in on Dragonite / Kingdra and i switch to Magnezone, further no comments.

Kingdra @ Swift Swim
Item: Life Orb
Nature: Naugthy
EV's: 252 Atk / 240 SpA / 16 Spe
Moves:
Rain Dance
Waterfall
Surf
Draco Meteor


Rate and Comment.​

 

[jchen]

put some effort in please? ie tell us why you chose these guys and how they work together or the general purpose of your team/strat you use to win. all i see are a bunch of random pokes stuck together.

cant really help if we dont know what you want.
the one thing i see immediately is Cress, drop either icy beam or icy wind, having both is retarded and redundant. keep the one you like, change the other to t-bolt/t-wave/psychic/charge beam/whatever. if you want to slow shit down t-wave works better than icy wind. if you want to counter more stuff add an attack that gives more coverage. or if you have a good reason for having both and it covers some huge flaw on your team that i cant see, explain it.

 

[GtM]

And here I was thinking that this would be a team composed entirely of Dewgongs and Walreins... ;_;

First of all, add justification, or people won't provide feedback, or worse, they'll suggest adding really generic pokémon that do nothing for the team. Second, /please/ test all of your pokémon before making an RMT; as the rules state, we are not obliged to do the menial labour required to make a functional team. Cresselia does not need two ice moves, and like jchen has said, running thunder wave would be much more efficient at slowing pokémon down.

Third, providing no justification makes it very easy to pick holes in your team, and to not look past those holes. Why the hell do you have a pokémon with rapid spin on your team if you aren't setting up any entry hazards? Why bother having rain dance on Kingdra if it severely hinders your switch in to steel types (even having Kingdra at all on a non-rain dance team requires some justification)? Why does that Kingdra have both Surf and Waterfall, when it could have Outrage instead of Surf? Please ask yourself these types of questions and answer them yourself before you post an RMT.

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which means you are violating the above quoted RMT rule. If you wish to remedy this problem, lengthen your descriptions by including more information. By adding more information, the individuals that decide to rate your team will be able to help you more effectively. I recommend lurking through the RMT Archive in order to see prime examples of what we're looking for in an RMT! If you improve your explanations for your Pokémon, please private message me indicating that you've done so by showing me your new descriptions. Once you've done that, I will re-open this thread.