Monotype Togekiss [Fairy]

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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Fairy)
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Air Slash
move 3: Roost
move 4: Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Serene Grace
nature: Timid
evs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Togekiss serves as a powerful stallbreaker for Fairy-type teams. Nasty Plot is the primary tool for that purpose, allowing Togekiss to handle slow defensive Pokemon such as Toxapex, Galarian Corsola, and Mandibuzz much more consistently and easily. Air Slash is Togekiss's only way of attacking, allowing Togekiss to potentially beat the aforementioned defensive Pokemon. Roost helps Togekiss remain healthy through the match, allowing it to sustain Stealth Rock damage and attacks from specially offensive Pokemon such as Hatterene and Dragapult. Thunder Wave allows Togekiss to cripple Choice Scarf Pokemon such as Duraludon, Drapion, Gengar, and Jirachi on the switch, as well as other fast Pokemon such as Dragapult, Charizard, and Hydreigon. Serene Grace complements Air Slash as it doubles the flinch chance, making Togekiss much more dangerous to face in conjunction with Nasty Plot and Thunder Wave. Togekiss should seek setup opportunities against defensive Pokemon that can't ditch out significant amounts of damage, such as Toxapex, Galarian Corsola, Clefable, and Mandibuzz. Togekiss should be wary of status effects such as poison and paralysis from foes such as Toxapex, defensive Seismitoad, and Celebi, though Togekiss can comfortably take on these Pokemon after one Nasty Plot.

Ribombee is one of Togekiss's best teammates, as it can provide Sticky Web support. Thanks to it, Togekiss's good Speed tier is enhanced even further, allowing Togekiss to outspeed foes such as Mimikyu and Salazzle. Furthermore, Ribombee's Stun Spore allows it to paralyze fast Ground-types such as Excadrill on the switch, which greatly helps Togekiss. Mimikyu is another decent partner that forms a solid offensive core with Togekiss, taking out problematic Ghost-types that pose a threat to Togekiss, such as Aegislash and Gengar, thanks to its Ghost typing and ability in Disguise. In return, Togekiss beats bulky Pokemon that Mimikyu struggles against, such as Snorlax, Toxapex, and Avalugg. Clefable provides Stealth Rock for Togekiss, thus allowing Togekiss to break types such as Ice and Fire more consistently. Clefable can opt for utility options such as Thunder Wave and Knock Off, which can be used to cripple foes even further. Furthermore, offensive Clefable variants form offensive cores with Togekiss, and Clefable's access to Flamethrower lets it handle certain Steel-types such as Ferrothorn and Corviknight. Hatterene can be used to take out Poison-types that pose a threat to Togekiss, most notably Salazzle. Furthermore, the combination of Trick Room and Mystical Fire allows Hatterene to handle Steel-types, most notably Excadrill, and take out Choice Scarf Duraludon. Its access to Magic Bounce allows Hatterene to bounce back Stealth Rock for Togekiss as well as status conditions such as Toxic and Thunder Wave. Gardevoir is another good offensive partner that can take out the aforementioned Poison-types. Furthermore, Gardevoir can chip down Steel-type foes with Focus Blast and heal Togekiss with Healing Wish if necessary. With Trace, Gardevoir also acts as a solid wincon against teams that rely on weather sweepers by copying their ability, such as rain Water and sun Grass. Finally, Alolan Ninetales provides Aurora Veil support for Togekiss, which makes Togekiss much more difficult to face.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Perish Song, 419696]]
- Fairy analysis by: [[Perish Song, 419696]]
- Quality checked by: [[Harpp, 320110], [maroon, 305839]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Estronic, 240732]]
 
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[SET COMMENTS]
* 'Togekiss serves as a powerful breaker to Fairy-type teams. ' Please mention the word stallbreaker. Nasty Plot with Roost is essentially a stallbreaker and the examples of Pokemon which it beats further cements this.

* When you talk about Air Slash, mention what it beats and how defensive Pokemon cannot take repeated Air slashes combined with Nasty Plot, give examples.

* 'Thunder Wave allows Togekiss to cripple Choice Scarf Pokemon such as Indeedee, Gengar, and Jirachi on the switch, and other fast Pokemon such as Dragapult, Noivern, and Hydreigon. ' Add Drapion in the first set of examples, as Scarf Drapion is a threat to Fairy-teams and Togekiss can help neutralize it. You could remove Indeedee from the list. Remove Noivern as example and add Charizard, more threatening. Also reword the line in my opinion so that it reads better.

* 'Roost helps Togekiss remain healthy through the match. ' Think you can expand this a bit more, talking about how roost helps against Stealth Rock damage and its special bulk which when combined with roost lets it even shrug off some special attackers like Hatterene, and specs Dragapult too!
252 SpA Choice Specs Dragapult Thunderbolt vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Togekiss: 218-258 (58.2 - 68.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery
Scarf Dragapult, the most common set for it, does a lot less than this.

* Mention how Togekiss should be wary of status like Toxic and Thunder Wave and should be cautious against Pokemon that can carry it like Toxapex, Celebi, Gastrodon, defensive seimitoad etc, but how once boosted togekiss can proceed to beat them.

* 'Ribombee is one of Togekiss's best teammates, with its access to Sticky Web. Thanks to it, Togekiss's good speed tier is enhanced even further, allowing it to outspeed the aforementioned faster foes. ' Aforementioned faster foes which you have mentioned are Dragapult, Noivern and Hydreigon and almost all 3 of them [Scarf pult being common so clear body ability] are not affected by webs so rephrase this please.

* 'Most importantly, the slow Speed drop from Sticky Web prevents Choice Scarf Duraludon from sweeping the team. '

* Mention Alolan Ninetales and its veil support which makes Togekiss more annoying to face.

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note: this read a bit weird in different areas, please read this over before sending it into gp

- switch the places of thunder wave & roost, roost is more important to the set. so it should go above.

Nasty Plot is the primary tool for that purpose, allowing Togekiss to break more easily by boosting Togekiss's Special Attack by two stages.
- give examples of what nasty plot allows it to break easier

It comes with a good secondary effect in a 30% flinch chance as well, preventing these defensive Pokemon from soaking up hits consistently.
- take this line out, its dex info

Furthermore, Ribombee contributes to Togekiss with Stun Spore, allowing it to paralyze fast Ground-types such as Excadrill on the switch. Most importantly, the Speed drop from Sticky Web prevents Choice Scarf Duraludon from sweeping the team.
- while yes webs does make it harder for duraludon to sweep, you want to focus on what ribombee does for togekiss, which thunder wave is what would allow togekiss to outpace scarf duraludon, not sticky web. remove this part.

Clefable provides Stealth Rock for Togekiss, thus allowing Togekiss to break more consistently.
- give examples of what sr allows it to break more easily

Hatterene can be used to take out Poison-types that pose a threat to Togekiss, most notably Salazzle. Furthermore, the combination of Trick Room and Mystical Fire allows Hatterene to handle Steel-type Pokemon, most notably Excadrill, and take out Choice Scarf Duraludon.
- mention hatterenes ability to deflect hazards away from your field, notably sr for togekiss as well as any status moves

Gardevoir is another good offensive partner that can take out the aforementioned Poison-types. Furthermore, its Focus Blast chips Steel-type foes. With Healing Wish, Gardevoir can also heal Togekiss if necessary.
- also mention its ability to beat down weather abusers

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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Fairy)
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Air Slash
move 3: Roost
move 4: Thunder Wave
item: Leftovers
ability: Serene Grace
nature: Timid
evs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Togekiss serves as a powerful stallbreaker to for Fairy-type teams. Nasty Plot is the primary tool for that purpose, allowing Togekiss to break more easily by boosting Togekiss's Special Attack by two stages, allowing Togekiss (dex info is usually considered fluff when presented like this, no real reason to explain what moves like nasty plot do) to handle slow defensive Pokemon such as Toxapex, Galarian Corsola, and Mandibuzz much more consistently and easily. Air Slash is Togekiss's only way of attacking, with it Togekiss can allowing Togekiss to potentially beat the aforementioned defensive Pokemon. Roost helps Togekiss remain healthy through the match, by allowing it to sustain Stealth Rock damage and attacks from specially offensive Pokemon such as Hatterene and Dragapult. Thunder Wave allows Togekiss to cripple Choice Scarf Pokemon such as Duraludon, Drapion, Gengar, and Jirachi on the switch, and as well as other fast Pokemon such as Dragapult, Charizard, and Hydreigon. Leftovers gives Togekiss a passive recovery. (common knowledge not really needed) Serene Grace complements Air Slash, (AC) as it doubles the flinch chance, making Togekiss much more dangerous to face with the in conjunction of with Nasty Plot and Thunder Wave. Togekiss should seek setup opportunities against defensive Pokemon that can't (add apostrophe) ditch out significant amounts of damage, such as Toxapex, Galarian Corsola, Clefable, and Mandibuzz. Togekiss should be wary of status effects such as poison and paralysis from foes such as Toxapex, defensive Seismitoad, and Celebi, but after one Nasty Plot though Togekiss can comfortably take on these Pokemon after one Nasty Plot.

Ribombee is one of Togekiss's best teammates, with its access to as it can provide Sticky Web support. Thanks to it, Togekiss's good speed Speed tier is enhanced even further, allowing Togekiss to outspeed foes such as Mimikyu and Salazzle. Furthermore, Ribombee contributes to Togekiss with Stun Spore, allowing Ribombee's Stun Spore allows it to paralyze fast Ground-types such as Excadrill on the switch, (AC) which greatly helps Togekiss. Mimikyu is another decent partner that forms a solid offensive core with Togekiss. With its ability Disguise and Ghost-typing, Mimikyu can take, (AC) taking out problematic Ghost-types that pose a threat to Togekiss, such as Aegislash and Gengar, (AC) thanks to its Ghost typing and ability in Disguise. In return, Togekiss beats bulky Pokemon that Mimikyu struggles against, such as Snorlax, Toxapex, and Avalugg. Clefable provides Stealth Rock for Togekiss, thus allowing Togekiss to break types such as Ice and Fire more consistently. Clefable can opt for utility options such as Thunder Wave and Knock Off, (AC) which can be used to cripple foes even further. Furthermore, offensive Clefable variants form offensive cores with Togekiss, (period -> comma) and Clefable's access to Flamethrower lets it handle certain Steel-types such as Ferrothorn and Corviknight. Hatterene can be used to take out Poison-types that pose a threat to Togekiss, most notably Salazzle. Furthermore, the combination of Trick Room and Mystical Fire allows Hatterene to handle Steel-types Pokemon (consistency), most notably Excadrill, and take out Choice Scarf Duraludon. Its access to Magic Bounce allows Hatterene to bounce back entry hazards, most notably Stealth Rock for Togekiss (it's the only hazard that it's affected by), and as well as status conditions such as Toxic and Thunder Wave. Gardevoir is another good offensive partner that can take out the aforementioned Poison-types. Furthermore, its Focus Blast chips Gardevoir can chip down Steel-type foes With Healing Wish, Gardevoir can also with Focus Blast and heal Togekiss with Healing Wish if necessary. With Trace, Gardevoir also acts as a solid win condition wincon (wincon refers to the pokemon that will win you the game, win condition refers to the situation you need in order to win the game) against teams that rely on weather abusers sweepers (assuming you're referring to stuff like swift swim users) by copying their ability, such as Rain rain Water and Sun sun Grass. Finally, (AC) (optional) Alolan Ninetales provides Aurora Veil support for Togekiss, which makes Togekiss much more difficult to face.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Perish Song, 419696]]
- Fairy analysis by: [[Perish Song, 419696]]
- Quality checked by: [[Harpp, 320110], [maroon, 305839]]
- Grammar checked by: [[, ]]
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