UU team, really needs some help

[Sora247_2008]

hey, this is like my third uu team and i really want this one to be good. so, here goes...


first, my lead, obviously...


(btw, my pics dont work so itll just be names)

claydol @ lum berry
careful nature
252hp,200SpD,58spe
reflect
light screen
stealth rock
ice beam? (im not sure here)

Claydol. i used to really hate this guy, but then i used him in emerald. wow. anyway, he sets up screens first, and then, if hes still alive, he can set up stealth rock and dent whatever hes facing with ice beam. not sure about the last move or the item.

next its...

hitmonlee @ choice band
adamant nature
252 atk, 252 spe, 6 sp.def
close combat
stone edge
blaze kick
earthquake

hitmonlee here is my phsyical sweeper. im sure your aware of the mass sweeping power of a choice hitmonlee, and, with his respectable special defense and the screens, those super effective psychic attacks are not going to be doing much. he usually comes in when my opponent has been weakened by my...

granbull @ lefties
adamant nature
252 atk, 200 def, 58spe
bulk up
earthquake
return/crunch(not sure here)
stone edge

granbull. my second physical sweeper. this guy plays a little more defensively, using bulk up to boost both his offense and his defense. he isnt meant to sweep entire teams, he's meant to weaken my opponent so my primary sweeper (hitmonlee) can finish them off quickly.

next up, its...

steelix @ leftovers
adamant (i know this sounds weird but im not changing it)
252def, 200hp,58atk
stealth rock
gyro ball
earthquake
explosion/toxic

steelix. my offensive phsyical wall. sounds weird right? thats probably because it is weird. i went with adamant because he already has great defenses and with an adamant nature at least he can do some damage without having to blow up in a flurry of steel with explosion. this guy only adds to my water weakness,so the next one i want to change since hes even worse...

probopass @ lefties(again)
calm nature
252hp,156sp,def,100sp.atk
t-wave
flash cannon
gravity (thats why i think probopass is like issac newton)
earth power

this guy i wont say to much about because i want to change him. there are a few things i can say though. probopass make a decent special wall and can do some damage with those special attack evs. however, he again adds to my water weakness so i would like to change him to a different special wall with a water resistance, if possible.

last but not least...

sceptile @ choice specs
modest nature
252 sp.atk, 252spe, 6hp
energy ball
dragon pulse
focus blast
giga drain

sceptile. my special sweeper.i know from personal experience that this guy can be a complete beast when he wants to be. i went with a modest nature for 2 reasons. 1, sceptile are naturally fast, and with those evs, he will be out running alot of pogeymans in UU. the second reason is that modest hatched first. i went with giga drain over leaf storm because the special attack drop is never welcome, and giga drain could provide some much needed healing in a tight spot.

so thats it. please RMT accordingly,but dont be too harsh, im a begginer.

 

[TAY]

This thread is being locked under Rule 15:

15. As a site dedicated to competitive battling, we request that your team is as competitive as possible within its given metagame. In-game teams, gimmick teams and teams that demonstrate a lack of understanding of the metagame will be closed. Battle Tower teams are permitted. "Theme Teams" are also OK as long as they demonstrate an understanding of the competitive metagame they are to be used in. This is completely up to the discretion of the mods.

If you know you have a water weakness then you should be addressing it yourself, not bringing it here and saying "fix my problems that I know about but am too lazy to fix!" Saying "I used modest because it hatched first" is also not OK.

Probably the most important thing is that you seem to have no idea about the process currently being applied to UU. I suggest you take a look.