Alright finally got this to prose, sorry for delay. I didn't see the new announcement until after I did the overview, sorry about that too. Its been a while since I've written up an analysis, I apologize in advance for any stupid mistakes.
This goes for all the sub-headings (except, [SET]), not just Overview.[Overview]
<p>Walrein's niche in UU lies in its decent bulk and access to great passive recovery in Hail via Ice Body. With Snow Warning support, Walrein restores 1/8th of its health every turn and can use Protect to gain 1/4th of its health before the opposing Pokemon can even land a hit. Its good bulk allows it to force out weak attackers and set up a Substitute. Once it is behind a Substitute, it can use Protect to recover health wasted by Substitute so that Walrein can rack up Hail damage. Its Special Attack is decent and a STAB Blizzard can deal decent damage. However, Water/Ice typing leaves it weak to two common UU attack types, Electric- and Fighting-type attacks. It also has a weakness to Stealth Rock and all hazards. Even so, Walrein can pull its weight on Hail teams due to its good bulk and great passive recovery.</p>
Now that this has gone through its first two QC approvals, I don't think it's needed here.move 3: Blizzard / Super Fang(i personally doubt super fang's usefulness)
Ace Emerald said:[Overview]
<p>Walrein's niche in UU lies in its decent bulk and access to great passive recovery inHhail via Ice Body.WiThanks to the support given from Snow Warningsupport, Walrein restores 1/8thof its health every turn and can use Protect to gain 1/4thof its health before the opposing Pokemon can even land a hit.ItWalrein's good bulk allows it to force out weak attackers and set up a Substitute. Once it is behind a Substitute, it can use Protect towhile easily recoveringhealthwasted by Sube HP lostitute so that Walrein can rack up Hail damage. Its Special Attack is decentandenough to make use of, and itsaSTAB Blizzard can dealdecea fair amount of damage. However, its Water / Ice typing leaves itweak tovulnerable two common UU attack types,Electric- and Fighting-type attacks, (AC) both of which are common in UU. It also has a weakness toStealth Rock and alll forms of entry hazards, (AC) specifically Stealth Rock. Even so, Walreincanhas the potential to pull its weight onHhail teamsdue to its good bulk and great passive recovery.</p>(Alot of re-wording in there; the main issue is that you already go in-depth of Substitute and Protect in the set comments where they belong, and the Overview is the breath, not depth, so you don't need to repeat it throughout the entire thing. Also, no 'th' for fractions.)
[SET]
(No space between [SET] and the name.)
name: Stallrein
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Protect
move 3: Blizzard
move 4: Roar / Toxic
item: Leftovers
ability: Ice Body
nature: Bold
evs: 232 HP / 108 Def /168 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
<p>This set aims to take advantage of Walrein's good defenses and decent Special Attack to become a bulky threat. WalreihenutilizesProtect and Substitute are combined with passive recovery from Leftovers and Ice Bodyto, (AC) Walrein can almost always take no net damage while the opponentsloses health to hail damage.The process workHere is how Walrein's rolike plays outhis:Walreiit can forcesasswitchwithbecause of its good bulk and powerful STAB Blizzard. It then uses Substitute as the opponent switches and recovers a total of 12.5% of it's health due to Leftovers and Ice Body. Then, (AC) Walrein uses Protect, gaining another 12.5% health and fully recovering the 25% health used to construct a Substitue.The next turn wIf then youropponent succeds in breaksing the Substitute the following turn, Walrein just constructs a new one, and(RC) while waitsing for the passive damage from hail to build. Blizzard deals heavy damage to many Pokemon immune to Toxic Spikes,includingsuch as Crobat, Nidoqueen, Nidoking, Roserade, and Zapdos. Roar allows Walrein to phaze set up attackers and deal more passive damage in the form of entry hazards, while Toxic eases reliance on Toxic Spikes support by allowing Walrein to poison opponents itself.</p>(Remember, unless you are specifically talking about the move Hail, hail (as a weather) shouldn't be capitalized!)
[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>The EV spread gives Walrein enough Speed to outspeed base 85 Speed Pokemon that invest 8 Speed EVs, (AC) such as Gligar and Suicune. The HP EVs allow Walrein's Substitutes to always take a Night Shade or Seismic Toss while making sure that the Substitute/and Protectstrategycombination always fully recoversallits HP. The rest is invested in Defense as Water-types aren't often hit for super effective damage by physical attacks. However, the Defense EVs can be invested in Special Defense instead orsplitevenly divided, (AC) depending on what threats the team needs to cover. Abomasnow is a vital teammate, (AC) asHhail is crucial to this set's setuccess. Walrein enjoys Toxic Spikes supportas; its strategy involves staking passive damage. Nidoqueen can tank Fighting- and Electric-type attacks that scare Walrein, while Roserade can tank Electric- and Grass-type attacks. As Walrein is weak to all forms of entry hazards, it appreciates the help of a Rapid Spinnuser. Blastoise is the best Rapid Spinnuser in UU, but it shares two weaknesses with Walrein. Claydol, while an inferior Rapid Spinnuser, can tank Fighting- and Electric-type attacks.</p>(Rapid Spinner isn't a word. It's either Rapid Spin user or spinner.)
[Other Options]
<p>Choice Specs takes advantage of Walrein's decent Special Attack, but it is outclassed by Glaceon. Thick Fat can be used to give Walrein a resistance to Fire-type attacks, but Walrein cannot take advantage of all the passive recovery. Walrein has other interesting support moves such as Encore or Yawn, but it has a hard time fitting them into anysets.</p>
[Checks and Counters]
<p>Cinccinno and Rhyperior can use Rock Blast to break Walrein's Substitute and damage it, but both take heavy damage from Blizzard. Bisharp holding with Leftovers can set up on Walrein while avoiding poison, negating hail damage, and resisting Blizzard. Cobalion can also do this while threatening a super effective Close Combat, but it must beware of the Special Defense drops, as Blizzard can then weaken it. (Idk, the sentence alone 'beware the SpD drop' doesn't really tell me why I should fear it; it gets a drop in Defense too, right? So I just added on to it using interpretation.)No Steel-type directly fears Walrein, (AC); (semicolon) however;, (AC) they can potentially be phazed by Roar and stalled by the combination of Walrein's great bulk, Protect and Substitute, and hail damage.(Same thing here; besides the weird sentence structure, I added on for more interpretation.) Bulky Shed Skin Scrafty can set up Bulk Ups while, healingstatus conditions, and hitsWalrein for super effective damage with its Fighting-type STAB.HEntry hazards make Walrein unable to take powerful attacks such as Darmanitan's Flare Blitz or Flygon's Outrage. Defensive teams have an easier time against Walrein. Hail damage and Toxic doesn't scare Umbreon, (AC) as it can heal status and HP with Heal Bell andhealth withWish, respectively. ResttTalk Snorlax, while rare, takes little from Blizzard and can phaze with Whirlwind, butWalrein canif predictthis and phaze withed correctly, Walrein can use Roar before Snorlax.</p>
Overview said:and its STAB Blizzardcandeals a fair amount of damage.
Overview said:Even so, Walrein has the potential to pull its weigh on hail teams. Get rid of this, it's fluff
[SET]
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name: Stallrein
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Protect
move 3: Blizzard
move 4: Roar / Toxic
item: Leftovers
ability: Ice Body
nature: Bold
evs: 232 HP / 108 Def /168 Spe
SC said:Withhen Protect and Substitute are combined with passive recovery from Leftovers and Ice Body, Walreincanalmost always takes no net damage while the opponent loses health to hail damage.
SC said:Roar allows Walrein to phaze setup attackers and deal more passive damage in the form of entry hazards,whilebut Toxic is also a good option, as it eases reliance on Toxic Spikes support by allowing Walrein to poison opponents itself. Read this post for the reasoning behind this change
AC said:Nidoqueen can tank Fighting- and Electric-type attacks that scare Walrein,whileand Roserade can tank Electric- and Grass-type attacks. Same reason as above
C&C said:Cobalion can also do this while threatening it with a super effective Close Combat,
Sorry for the inconvenience, but it had to be done :pC&C said:Hail damage and Toxic don't scare Umbreon, as it can heal status and HP with Heal Bell and Wish, respectively.
^There (god pls let this be right @_@)Queen and rosy said:Both Nidoqueen and Roserade can set up Toxic Spikes, the former tankings Fighting- and Electric-type attacks, and the latter tanks Electric- and Grass-type attacks.