I don't think this battle was worth being warstoried. No interesting comebacks, lousy prediction etc.
sorry man it wasnt very good. you using NU just set out the battle as something less than impressive and the comments were not very good. rich boy would have really killed you without that hax which just kind of makes it eh.
I really enjoyed this warstory. Granted, you got lucky with a rather inexperienced opponent. For example, if he had used Stealth Rock at some point, Butterfree would have fallen to Breloom's Focus Punch and the Whirlwind wouldn't have happened, effectively leaving him open for a bit of a sweep.
Nevertheless, you did a pretty good job with what you had, and I applaud you for that.