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Gen 8 Whirlpool Trapper Tapu Fini [QC 2/2] [GP 0/1]

[SET]
name: Whirlpool Trapper
move 1: Whirlpool
move 2: Nature's Madness
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Taunt
item: Leftovers
ability: Misty Terrain
nature: Bold
evs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 64 SpD / 64 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Description
=========

By utilizing the combination of Whirlpool, Nature's Madness, and Taunt, Tapu Fini becomes an incredibly dangerous stallbreaker that can trap bulky Pokemon like Toxapex, Blissey, Clefable, Slowbro, and Slowking, stop them from healing, and force their removal from the game. Nature's Madness also has the benefit of punishing checks like Melmetal and Ferrothorn with heavy chip damage should they attempt to come in and force Tapu Fini out. Moonblast rounds out the moveset, allowing Tapu Fini to finish off these bulky Pokemon after putting them within KO range and check Dragapult, Garchomp, and Urshifu-R. The given EV spread allows Tapu Fini to avoid a 2HKO from Modest Choice Specs Dragapult's Shadow Ball after Stealth Rock and outpace Adamant Tyranitar, while the rest of its EVs are dumped into HP and Defense. Leftovers is necessary to extend Tapu Fini's longevity, allowing it to continue sticking around to handle the aforementioned targets.

Team Options
========

This Tapu Fini set is a valuable asset on offense and bulky offense teams, where it is tasked with breaking holes open and forcibly removing bulky targets for the benefit of its wallbreaking and sweeping teammates. Blacephalon and Volcarona greatly benefit from the removal of Blissey and Toxapex and forcing out Dragapult and Urshifu-R; the former becomes a much more menacing wallbreaking threat, while the latter sweeps through and cleans up the opposition without much standing in its way. A multitude of grounded physical attackers like Blaziken, Kartana, Weavile, and Garchomp synergize very well with Tapu Fini's Misty Terrain support, protecting them from status ailments like paralysis from Zapdos's Static and burns from Heatran's Flame Body and Toxapex and Slowbro's Scald. Much like Volcarona, they, except for Kartana, are also protected from Toxic from all of these Pokemon. Additionally, they can set up on targets weakened by Nature's Madness, such as Swords Dance Kartana taking advantage of the setup opportunities provided against a weakened Ferrothorn, while Ferrothorn cannot do much back in return. These physical attackers also benefit from Tapu Fini applying pressure to and removing their answers like Slowbro and Toxapex for Blaziken, Fire-types for Kartana, Buzzwole and Urshifu-R for Weavile, and Corviknight and Weavile for Garchomp. Weavile also appreciates Tapu Fini weakening shared checks like Melmetal and Ferrothorn for it to clean up later in the game. In return, Blaziken takes on Grass-types that give Tapu Fini major trouble, like Rillaboom and Kartana, while Garchomp handles Electric-types like Zapdos and Tapu Koko. Dragonite also forms a strong partnership with Tapu Fini; while it can't take advantage of Misty Terrain due to its Flying typing, it makes up for this by easily handling the likes of Rillaboom and Kartana, and in return, Tapu Fini takes on Corviknight, Weavile, and Dragapult. Handling the latter also allows Dragonite to more easily run an Adamant nature over Jolly. Pivots like Tornadus-T, Landorus-T, Zeraora, and Zapdos are also beneficial, as they grant Tapu Fini free entry with U-turn and Volt Switch. Additionally, Tornadus-T and Zapdos check Rillaboom and Kartana and keep entry hazards off the field with Defog, while Landorus-T and Zeraora handle Electric-types like Tapu Koko and Zapdos and block Volt Switch thanks to their Electric immunity. Heatran sets up Stealth Rock, utilizes its solid special bulk to check Tapu Koko and Tapu Lele and make progress against them, aids Tapu Fini in pressuring Blissey and Toxapex, and benefits from Tapu Fini handling offensive Water-types like Urshifu-R, Barraskewda, and Crawdaunt.

[SET CREDITS]
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Good work, please tag me after implementing this check so I can give you the 1/2 :sphearical:

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[SET]
name: Whirlpool Trapper
move 1: Whirlpool
move 2: Nature's Madness
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Taunt
item: Leftovers
ability: Misty Terrain
nature: Bold
evs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 64 SpD / 64 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Description
=========

By utilizing the combination of Whirlpool, Nature's Madness, and Taunt, Tapu Fini becomes an incredibly dangerous stallbreaker that can trap bulky Pokemon like Toxapex, Blissey, and Clefable (the Slowtwins are also relevant here even though they aren't stall staples, perhaps mention them in another sentence since some teams really appreciate the trapping and removal of slow pivots), stop them from healing, and force their removal from the game. Mention how Nature's Madness helps chunk switch-ins like Melmetal and Ferrothorn that Tapu Fini would prefer not to stay in on. Moonblast rounds out the moveset, allowing Tapu Fini to finish off these bulky Pokemon after putting them within KO range and check Dragapult, Garchomp, and Urshifu-R. The given EV spread allows Tapu Fini to avoid a 2HKO from Modest Choice Specs Dragapult's Shadow Ball after Stealth Rock and outpace Adamant Tyranitar, while the rest of its EVs are dumped into HP and Defense. Leftovers is necessary to extend Tapu Fini's longevity, allowing it to continue sticking around to handle the aforementioned targets.

Team Options
========

This Tapu Fini set is a valuable asset on offense and bulky offense teams, where it is tasked with breaking holes open and forcibly removing bulky targets for the benefit of its wallbreaking and sweeping teammates. Blacephalon and Volcarona greatly benefit from the removal of Blissey and forcing out Dragapult and Urshifu-R; the former becomes a much more menacing wallbreaking threat, while the latter sweeps through and cleans up the opposition without much standing in its way. Kartana benefits from Tapu Fini's Misty Terrain shielding it from Scald burns from Toxapex and Slowbro and paralysis from Zapdos's Static ability, letting it pressure these Pokemon without much fear (mention how weakening Ferrothorn allows Kartana to set up on it more easily). Physical setup sweepers like Blaziken, Garchomp, and Dragonite also form a strong partnership with Tapu Fini, as they benefit from Tapu Fini applying pressure to and removing their answers like Slowbro and Toxapex for Blaziken, and Weavile and Corviknight for Garchomp and Dragonite. In return, Blaziken and Dragonite take on Grass-types that give Tapu Fini major trouble, like Rillaboom and Kartana, while Garchomp handles Electric-types like Zeraora and Magnezone (Zapdos and Tapu Koko are honestly more relevant here since Zeraora and Magnezone dislike taking Nature's Madness due to their lack of reliable recovery). Additionally, Blaziken and Garchomp, much like Volcarona, enjoy the presence of Tapu Fini's Misty Terrain, allowing them to safely set up without being threatened by status ailments. Weavile is another strong partner for Tapu Fini, as it benefits from Tapu Fini handling Buzzwole and Urshifu-R, and weakening shared checks like Melmetal and Ferrothorn for it to clean up later in the game (Weavile enjoys Misty Terrain support the most out of the aforementioned Pokemon due to Triple Axel and the prevalence of Static and Flame Body). Pivots like Tornadus-T, Landorus-T, Zeraora, and Zapdos are also beneficial, as they grant Tapu Fini a free entry with U-turn and Volt Switch. Additionally, Tornadus-T and Zapdos check Rillaboom and Kartana and keep entry hazards off the field with Defog, while Landorus-T and Zeraora handle Electric-types like Tapu Koko and Zapdos and block Volt Switch thanks to their Electric immunity. Heatran sets up Stealth Rock, aids Tapu Fini in pressuring Blissey and Toxapex, and benefits from Tapu Fini handling offensive Water-types like Urshifu-R, Barraskewda, and Crawdaunt. (Mention how Heatran helps check the likes of Tapu Koko and Tapu Lele that can overwhelm Tapu Fini)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/favmon-garchomp.653095/
Quality checked by:
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[SET]
name: Whirlpool Trapper
move 1: Whirlpool
move 2: Nature's Madness
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Taunt
item: Leftovers
ability: Misty Terrain
nature: Bold
evs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 64 SpD / 64 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Description
=========

By utilizing the combination of Whirlpool, Nature's Madness, and Taunt, Tapu Fini becomes an incredibly dangerous stallbreaker that can trap bulky Pokemon like Toxapex, Blissey, Clefable, Slowbro, and Slowking, stop them from healing, and force their removal from the game. Nature's Madness also has the benefit of punishing checks like Melmetal and Ferrothorn with heavy chip damage should they attempt to come in and force Tapu Fini out. Moonblast rounds out the moveset, allowing Tapu Fini to finish off these bulky Pokemon after putting them within KO range and check Dragapult, Garchomp, and Urshifu-R. The given EV spread allows Tapu Fini to avoid a 2HKO from Modest Choice Specs Dragapult's Shadow Ball after Stealth Rock and outpace Adamant Tyranitar, while the rest of its EVs are dumped into HP and Defense. Leftovers is necessary to extend Tapu Fini's longevity, allowing it to continue sticking around to handle the aforementioned targets.

Team Options
========

This Tapu Fini set is a valuable asset on offense and bulky offense teams, where it is tasked with breaking holes open and forcibly removing bulky targets for the benefit of its wallbreaking and sweeping teammates. Blacephalon and Volcarona greatly benefit from the removal of Blissey (can mention pex with this as well) and forcing out Dragapult and Urshifu-R; the former becomes a much more menacing wallbreaking threat, while the latter sweeps through and cleans up the opposition without much standing in its way. Kartana benefits from Tapu Fini's Misty Terrain shielding it from Scald burns from Toxapex and Slowbro and paralysis from Zapdos's Static ability, letting it pressure these Pokemon without much fear. Swords Dance Kartana is a notable case, as Tapu Fini weakening Ferrothorn with Nature's Madness allows it to take advantage of the setup opportunities provided, while Ferrothorn cannot do much back in return. Physical setup sweepers like Blaziken, Garchomp, and Dragonite also form a strong partnership with Tapu Fini, as they benefit from Tapu Fini applying pressure to and removing their answers like Slowbro and Toxapex for Blaziken, and Weavile and Corviknight for Garchomp and Dragonite. In return, Blaziken and Dragonite take on Grass-types that give Tapu Fini major trouble, like Rillaboom and Kartana, while Garchomp handles Electric-types like Zapdos and Tapu Koko. Additionally, Blaziken and Garchomp, much like Volcarona, enjoy the presence of Tapu Fini's Misty Terrain, allowing them to safely set up without being threatened by status ailments. Weavile is another strong partner for Tapu Fini, as it benefits from Tapu Fini handling Buzzwole and Urshifu-R, and weakening shared checks like Melmetal and Ferrothorn for it to clean up later in the game. Weavile is also the physical attacker that enjoys Misty Terrain support the most because of its reliance on contact moves like Triple Axel and Knock Off, allowing it to threaten Zapdos and punish Heatran without fear of being afflicted with status by Static and Flame Body. Pivots like Tornadus-T, Landorus-T, Zeraora, and Zapdos are also beneficial, as they grant Tapu Fini free entry with U-turn and Volt Switch. Additionally, Tornadus-T and Zapdos check Rillaboom and Kartana and keep entry hazards off the field with Defog, while Landorus-T and Zeraora handle Electric-types like Tapu Koko and Zapdos and block Volt Switch thanks to their Electric immunity. Heatran sets up Stealth Rock, utilizes its solid special bulk to check Tapu Koko and Tapu Lele and make progress against them, aids Tapu Fini in pressuring Blissey and Toxapex, and benefits from Tapu Fini handling offensive Water-types like Urshifu-R, Barraskewda, and Crawdaunt. (something you can mention in the beginning is how physical attackers compliment well with misty terrain, rather then having to repeat it with each mention of it)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/favmon-garchomp.653095/
Quality checked by:
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this is a great write up just tone down the repetition that I mentioned QC 2/2 once implemented
 
[SET]
name: Whirlpool Trapper
move 1: Whirlpool
move 2: Nature's Madness
move 3: Moonblast
move 4: Taunt
item: Leftovers
ability: Misty Terrain
nature: Bold
evs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 64 SpD / 64 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Description
=========

By utilizing the combination of Whirlpool, Nature's Madness, and Taunt, Tapu Fini becomes an incredibly dangerous stallbreaker that can trap bulky Pokemon like Toxapex, Blissey, Clefable, Slowbro, and Slowking, stop them from healing, and force their removal from the game. The export, the word 'stallbreaker', the utilization, and the description of its effects are all the same thing said four times. Its Nature's Madness also has the benefit of punishing checks like Melmetal and Ferrothorn with heavy chip damage should they attempt to come in and force Tapu Fini it out. 'Check' and "attempt to force out" are the same thing. Moonblast rounds out the its moveset, allowing Tapu Fini it to finish off these bulky Pokemon after putting them within KO range and check Dragapult, Garchomp, and Urshifu-R. You can just say "also" instead of "finish off...KO range and". The Its given EV spread allows Tapu Fini it to avoid a 2HKO from Modest Choice Specs Dragapult's Shadow Ball after Stealth Rock and outpace Adamant Tyranitar, while the rest of its EVs are dumped into HP and Defense. Do you mean just Defense? Leftovers is necessary to extend Tapu Fini's its longevity, allowing it to continue sticking around to handle the aforementioned targets. If you are not required to describe Leftovers, you can drop this sentence. Otherwise, consider something like "With Leftovers, it better sticks around...." "Continue" and "stick around" are the same thing.

Team Options
========

This Tapu Fini set is a valuable asset on offense and bulky offense teams, where it is tasked with breaking holes open and forcibly removing bulky targets for the benefit of its wallbreaking and sweeping teammates. Blacephalon and Volcarona greatly benefit From the removal of Blissey and Toxapex and forcing out Dragapult and Urshifu-R, punc Blacephalon and Volcarona greatly benefit; the former becomes a much more menacing wallbreaking threat, while the latter sweeps through and cleans up the opposition without much standing in its way. Without changes, this reads as a description of Dragapult and Urshifu-R. A multitude of other grounded physical attackers like Blaziken, Kartana, Weavile, and Garchomp synergize very well with Tapu Fini's its Misty Terrain support, protecting them from status ailments like paralysis from Zapdos, punc 's Static and burns from Heatran, punc 's Flame Body and Toxapex, punc and Slowbro's Scald. Much like Volcarona, they, except for Kartana, are also protected from Toxic from all of these Pokemon. Leave such details for both basic experience and the hyperlinked analyses. Additionally, they can set up on targets weakened by Nature's Madness, such as Swords Dance Kartana taking advantage of the setup opportunities provided against a weakened Ferrothorn while Ferrothorn cannot do much back in return. These physical attackers also benefit from Tapu Fini its applying pressure to and or removing their answers like Slowbro and Toxapex for Blaziken, Fire-types for Kartana, Buzzwole and Urshifu-R for Weavile, and Corviknight and Weavile for Garchomp, punc and Buzzwole and Urshifu-R for Weavile; punc Weavile that last also appreciates Tapu Fini it weakening shared checks like Melmetal and Ferrothorn for it to clean up later in the game. Without changes, the next sentence reads as if Blaziken is returning the favor to Weavile. Leave details about Weavile to its hyperlink. In return, it benefits from Blaziken taking on Grass-types that give Tapu Fini it major trouble, like Rillaboom and Kartana, while and from Garchomp handling Electric-types like Zapdos and Tapu Koko. Focusing on its teammates is warping the referents. Dragonite It also forms a strong partnership with Tapu Fini Dragonite, punc while it can't take advantage of Misty Terrain due to its Flying typing, it makes up for this by which easily handles the likes of Rillaboom and Kartana, punc and in return, Tapu Fini takes on in return for it taking on Corviknight, Weavile, and Dragapult; punc Handling the latter also by handling that last, it also allows Dragonite to more easily run an Adamant nature (over Jolly). punc Pivots like Tornadus-T, Landorus-T, Zeraora, and Zapdos are also beneficial, as they grant Tapu Fini free entry with U-turn and Volt Switch. This applies to all Pokémon. Additionally, In addition to their U-turn or Volt Switch, Tornadus-T and Zapdos check Rillaboom and Kartana and keep entry hazards off the field with can use Defog, while Landorus-T and Zeraora handle Electric-types like Tapu Koko and Zapdos and block Volt Switch thanks to their Electric immunity. (Lastly,) Heatran sets up Stealth Rock, utilizes its solid special bulk to checks Tapu Koko and Tapu Lele and make (while making progress against them), aids Tapu Fini in pressuring Blissey and Toxapex, and benefits from Tapu Fini handling the check to offensive Water-types like Urshifu-R, Barraskewda, and Crawdaunt. Note the yellow parentheses: cut them if keeping "Lastly" (which helps the reader).

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Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user6.105/
Hi.
My axe to grind is with C&C, not with you personally! Hopefully, this atones for that.
Regards
Edit: I was informed that this check is not really in line with the current standards. How tragic!
 
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