Xerneas (Geomancy) [QC: too many/2] [GP: 0/1]

[Bella]

[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid stat spread, great ability, and Geomancy.
• Thunderbolt should be ran with Tera Electric and provides coverage for Ho-Oh as well as dealing good damage to Steel-types like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C, although if Ho-Oh is a particular issue Hidden Power Rock can be opted for instead to specifically target it, as it allows Xerneas to OHKO Ho-Oh without Tera. Thunder is another viable option, OHKOing Ho-Oh and Necrozma-DM with minimal chip damage, but its accuracy means that Tera Electric Thunderbolt is more consistent.
• Substitute blocks status that are crippling to it like bad poisoning from Toxic and paralysis from Thunder Wave and Glare and allows it to tank hits from Pokemon like Chansey's Seismic Toss and stop status like. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn that can resist most of Xerneas's hits and is extremely important to run if Xerneas is running Hidden Power Rock if not running Electric-type coverage.
• The given HP EVs allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute which help against Chansey and Blissey's Seismic Toss, while the speed EVs allows it to outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Rock Tomb, with the rest being invested into giving Xerneas max Special Attack and making it as physically bulky as possible. An alternative EV spread of 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe can be opted for instead, giving more physical bulk if Xerneas is not running Substitute, helping it have an easier time to set up against physical attackers like Zygarde-C and Marshadow.
• Tera Electric can be ran to boost the power of Thunderbolt, allowing Xerneas to reach key damage thresholds like confirming a OHKO on Ho-Oh, while also providing a nifty Steel-type resistance, allowing it to tank a hit against Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C as well as giving Xerneas an immunity to Glare from Zygarde. Tera Fighting is to boost the power of Focus Blast, letting it OHKO Defensive Primal Groudon after Stealth Rock and 2HKO Necrozma-DM while removing all of its weaknesses, or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves, letting it achieve OHKOs on Defensive Eternatus with Moonblast and Ho-Oh with Hidden Power Rok.
• Xerneas should typically be saved until the endgame to act as best of a sweeper it can be and allow its checks like Ho-Oh and Primal Groudon to be chipped down. Attempting to take on Pokemon like Necrozma-DM and Ho-Oh on its own is not advised as both of these Pokemon have favorable typings against Xerneas.
• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures, primarily acting as a cleaner but also operating as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offensive structures.
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C and Arceus-Ground can make excellent partners. Calm Mind Primal Kyogre also makes an excellent teammate, as it directly forces out and OHKOes Primal Groudon, which is Xerneas's most common check.
• Entry hazards from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn, with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas's checks like Primal Groudon and Ho-Oh, making it a much more threatening setup sweeper.

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[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast / Psyshock
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweper sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid statspread, great ability, and Geomancy. Fairy Aura makes Xerneas's Moonblast hit so much harder
• Thunderbolt provides Coverage into Primal Kyogre and Arceus-Water, although Hidden Power Rock can be opted for to specifically target Ho-Oh. Neutral Moonblast does more damage without Tera Electric than super effective Thunderbolt thanks to Fairy Aura. Its primary use is hitting Ho-Oh and certain Steel-types in Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C. Then go into how you can hyperfocus on the Ho-Oh MU with HP Rock
• Substitute blocks status which are crippling to it Like? and can potentially allow it to tank a hit. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn who that can otherwise sponge resist most of Xerneas' Xerneas's Pokemon names have s's, like Latios's hits moves, Mention how its coverage against Steel-types if Xerneas drops TBolt and finally Psyshock is an opted to allow Xerneas to beat Specially Defensive specific specially defensive walls like Chansey. Mention Sub's ability to help against Chansey, and how Psyshock also deals with it, including Confide variants
• The given EV spread allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute Explain that this helps against Chansey and outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Romb Rock Tomb, with the rest being invested into making Xerneas as strong and Physically Defensive physically bulky as possible. Mention the other spread, which has more physical bulk since the HP investment isn't needed if Xerneas isn't running Sub
• Tera Electric can be ran to give Xerneas an immunity to Thunder Wave and boost the power of Thunderbolt. Give XHKO tresholds about how this helps. It also provides a resistance to Steel, giving Xerneas one extra turn against foes like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C Tera Fighting to boost the power of Focus Blast Again give examples where this helps and remove all of its weaknesses or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves. Once again, give examples
• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures. Mention its role as a cleaner that can act as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offenses
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon who that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C can make excellent partners. Go more in depth in how these teammates can help Xerneas beat these foes and give more examples of teammates. Mention offensive CM Pogre as a teammate, as it forces damage on Primal Groudon.
• Entry hazards from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas' Xerneas's checks, Give examples making it a much more threatening setup sweeper.

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[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast / Psyshock
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweper sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid statspread, great ability, and Geomancy. Fairy Aura makes Xerneas's Moonblast hit so much harder
• Thunderbolt provides Coverage into Primal Kyogre and Arceus-Water, although Hidden Power Rock can be opted for to specifically target Ho-Oh. Neutral Moonblast does more damage without Tera Electric than super effective Thunderbolt thanks to Fairy Aura. Its primary use is hitting Ho-Oh and certain Steel-types in Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C. Then go into how you can hyperfocus on the Ho-Oh MU with HP Rock
• Substitute blocks status which are crippling to it Like? and can potentially allow it to tank a hit. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn who that can otherwise sponge resist most of Xerneas' Xerneas's Pokemon names have s's, like Latios's hits moves, Mention how its coverage against Steel-types if Xerneas drops TBolt and finally Psyshock is an opted to allow Xerneas to beat Specially Defensive specific specially defensive walls like Chansey. Mention Sub's ability to help against Chansey, and how Psyshock also deals with it, including Confide variants
• The given EV spread allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute Explain that this helps against Chansey and outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Romb Rock Tomb, with the rest being invested into making Xerneas as strong and Physically Defensive physically bulky as possible. Mention the other spread, which has more physical bulk since the HP investment isn't needed if Xerneas isn't running Sub
• Tera Electric can be ran to give Xerneas an immunity to Thunder Wave and boost the power of Thunderbolt. Give XHKO tresholds about how this helps. It also provides a resistance to Steel, giving Xerneas one extra turn against foes like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C Tera Fighting to boost the power of Focus Blast Again give examples where this helps and remove all of its weaknesses or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves. Once again, give examples
• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures. Mention its role as a cleaner that can act as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offenses
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon who that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C can make excellent partners. Go more in depth in how these teammates can help Xerneas beat these foes and give more examples of teammates. Mention offensive CM Pogre as a teammate, as it forces damage on Primal Groudon.
• Entry hazards from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas' Xerneas's checks, Give examples making it a much more threatening setup sweeper.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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think i did all of this? you can check again now!

 

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[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast / Psyshock
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid statspread, great ability, (Comma) and Geomancy.
• Thunderbolt provides coverage to Ho-Oh as well as being a solid midground into dealing good damage to Steel-types like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C, although if Ho-Oh is a particular issue Hidden Power Rock can be opted for instead to specifically target it.
• Substitute blocks status which that are crippling to it like Toxic and paralysis and can potentially allow it to tank a hit from Pokemon like Chansey. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn that can resist most of Xerneas's hits, Mention that Focus Blast is important to hit Steel-types if Xerneas is running HP Rock and finally Psyshock is an opted to allow Xerneas to beat specfic specific specially defensive walls like Confide Chansey.
• The given EV spread allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute which can help against Chansey and Blissey and outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Rock Tomb, with the rest being invested into making Xerneas as strong and physically bulky as possible. Mention that it maximizes Special Attack An alternative EV spread of 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe can be opted for instead, giving more physical bulk if Xerneas is not running Substitute.
• Tera Electric can be ran to give Xerneas an immunity to Thunder Wave and boost the power of Thunderbolt, allowing Xerneas to reach key damage thresholds like comfirming the OHKO on Defensive Calm Mind Primal Kyogre and Ho-Oh, while also providing a nifty Steel-type resisting resistance allowing it to tank a hit against Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C. Tera Fighting is to boost the power of Focus Blast, letting it OHKO Defensive Primal Groudon after Stealth Rock and 2HKO Necrozma-DM while removing and all of its weaknesses or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves, letting it achieve OHKOs on Defensive Eternatus and Defensive Arceus-Ground.
• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures, primarily acting as a cleaner but also operating as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offensive structures.
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C can make excellent partners. Give more examples of teammates here
• Calm Mind Primal Kyogre makes an excellent teammate, as it directly forces out and deals damage to Primaal Primal Groudon, who which is Xerneas's most common check. You could add this bullet point to the previous bullet point
• Entry hazards from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas's checks like Necrozma-DM and Ho-Oh, making it a much more threatening setup sweeper.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast / Psyshock
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid statspread, great ability, (Comma) and Geomancy.
• Thunderbolt provides coverage to Ho-Oh as well as being a solid midground into dealing good damage to Steel-types like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C, although if Ho-Oh is a particular issue Hidden Power Rock can be opted for instead to specifically target it.
• Substitute blocks status which that are crippling to it like Toxic and paralysis and can potentially allow it to tank a hit from Pokemon like Chansey. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn that can resist most of Xerneas's hits, Mention that Focus Blast is important to hit Steel-types if Xerneas is running HP Rock and finally Psyshock is an opted to allow Xerneas to beat specfic specific specially defensive walls like Confide Chansey.
• The given EV spread allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute which can help against Chansey and Blissey and outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Rock Tomb, with the rest being invested into making Xerneas as strong and physically bulky as possible. Mention that it maximizes Special Attack An alternative EV spread of 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe can be opted for instead, giving more physical bulk if Xerneas is not running Substitute.
• Tera Electric can be ran to give Xerneas an immunity to Thunder Wave and boost the power of Thunderbolt, allowing Xerneas to reach key damage thresholds like comfirming the OHKO on Defensive Calm Mind Primal Kyogre and Ho-Oh, while also providing a nifty Steel-type resisting resistance allowing it to tank a hit against Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C. Tera Fighting is to boost the power of Focus Blast, letting it OHKO Defensive Primal Groudon after Stealth Rock and 2HKO Necrozma-DM while removing and all of its weaknesses or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves, letting it achieve OHKOs on Defensive Eternatus and Defensive Arceus-Ground.
• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures, primarily acting as a cleaner but also operating as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offensive structures.
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C can make excellent partners. Give more examples of teammates here
• Calm Mind Primal Kyogre makes an excellent teammate, as it directly forces out and deals damage to Primaal Primal Groudon, who which is Xerneas's most common check. You could add this bullet point to the previous bullet point
• Entry hazards from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas's checks like Necrozma-DM and Ho-Oh, making it a much more threatening setup sweeper.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
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done ready for qc 2

 

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[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast / Psyshock
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid stat spread add space to "statspread", great ability, and Geomancy. Expand on what Geomancy does for it, namely becoming a fast hard hitting Pokemon that's also difficult to revenge kill out of the gained bulk and innate typing.
• Thunderbolt provides coverage to for Ho-Oh as well as dealing good damage to into Steel-types like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C, although if Ho-Oh is a particular issue, add comma Hidden Power Rock can be opted for instead to specifically target it.
• Substitute blocks status that are crippling to it like Toxic bad poisoning from Toxic Toxic is the name of the move, not the status condition and paralysis from what moves?, add comma after that and can potentially allow allows it to tank a hit hits Seismic Toss requires hitting twice to break it as you know from Pokemon like Chansey. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn that can resist most of Xerneas's hits and is extremely important to run if Xerneas is running Hidden Power Rock, and finally Psyshock is an opted option to allow Xerneas to beat specific specially defensive walls like Confide Chansey.
• The given EV spread allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute which can help against Chansey and Blissey's Seismic Toss and to outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Rock Tomb, with the rest being invested into giving Xerneas max Special Attack and making it as physically bulky as possible. An alternative EV spread of 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe can be opted for instead, giving more physical bulk if Xerneas is not running Substitute.
• Tera Electric can be ran to give Xerneas an immunity to Thunder Wave From what foes? Please mention some and boost the power of Thunderbolt, allowing Xerneas to reach key damage thresholds like comfirming the a OHKO on Defensive Calm Mind Primal Kyogre and Ho-Oh, while also providing a nifty Steel-type resistance, add comma allowing it to tank a hit against Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C. Tera Fighting is to boost the power of Focus Blast, letting it OHKO Defensive Primal Groudon after Stealth Rock and 2HKO Necrozma-DM while removing all of its weaknesses, add comma or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves, letting it achieve OHKOs on Defensive Eternatus and Defensive Arceus-Ground. Both of these are hit as hard by Tera Fairy while also retaining the boost for the rest of the match, justify more the niche Tera Stellar has over other options

Add a bullet point or two over usage tips for this set of Xerneas

• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures, primarily acting as a cleaner but also operating as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offensive structures.
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C and Arceus-Ground can make excellent partners. Calm Mind Primal Kyogre also makes an excellent teammate, as it directly forces out and deals damage to OHKOes Primal Groudon, whicch which is Xerneas's most common check.
• Entry hazards setters from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn, add comma with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas's checks like Necrozma-DM and Ho-Oh, making it a much more threatening setup sweeper.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast / Psyshock
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid stat spread add space to "statspread", great ability, and Geomancy. Expand on what Geomancy does for it, namely becoming a fast hard hitting Pokemon that's also difficult to revenge kill out of the gained bulk and innate typing. original is fine, can maybe add a line on how geo helps it vs certain notable calcs if any tho
• Thunderbolt provides coverage to for Ho-Oh as well as dealing good damage to into Steel-types like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C, although if Ho-Oh is a particular issue, add comma Hidden Power Rock can be opted for instead to specifically target it. tbolt is a tera-only think cuz mb hits harder w/o. add a line on thunder even tho its unslashed. can maybe say thund koes hooh & necro w minimum chip but tera elecric tbolt is more consistent
• Substitute blocks status that are crippling to it like Toxic bad poisoning from Toxic Toxic is the name of the move, not the status condition and paralysis from what moves?, add comma after that and can potentially allow allows it to tank a hit hits Seismic Toss requires hitting twice to break it as you know mention stoss ye from Pokemon like Chansey. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn that can resist most of Xerneas's hits and is extremely important to run if Xerneas is running Hidden Power Rock (if not running telectric / electric coverage), and finally Psyshock is an opted option to allow Xerneas to beat specific specially defensive walls like Confide Chansey.
• The given EV spread allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute which can help against Chansey and Blissey's Seismic Toss and to outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Rock Tomb, with the rest being invested into giving Xerneas max Special Attack and making it as physically bulky as possible. An alternative EV spread of 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe can be opted for instead, giving more physical bulk if Xerneas is not running Substitute. why does it need phys bulk? mention physoffensive threats probs
• Tera Electric can be ran to give Xerneas an immunity to Thunder Wave From what foes? Please mention some and boost the power of Thunderbolt, allowing Xerneas to reach key damage thresholds like comfirming the a OHKO on Defensive Calm Mind Primal Kyogre and Ho-Oh, while also providing a nifty Steel-type resistance, add comma allowing it to tank a hit against Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C its main purpose is koing ho-oh and the steels move this up. Tera Fighting is to boost the power of Focus Blast, letting it OHKO Defensive Primal Groudon after Stealth Rock and 2HKO Necrozma-DM while removing all of its weaknesses, add comma or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves, letting it achieve OHKOs on Defensive Eternatus and Defensive Arceus-Ground. Both of these are hit as hard by Tera Fairy while also retaining the boost for the rest of the match, justify more the niche Tera Stellar has over other options ye tera stellar hp rock ohkoes hooh etc. etern is somewhat ok but groundy id not mention cuz what does it do back

Add a bullet point or two over usage tips for this set of Xerneas could mention that u should try to save it for endgame or not 1v1 vs ho-oh etc

• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures, primarily acting as a cleaner but also operating as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offensive structures. why specifically midgame?
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C and Arceus-Ground can make excellent partners. Calm Mind Primal Kyogre also makes an excellent teammate, as it directly forces out and deals damage to OHKOes Primal Groudon, whicch which is Xerneas's most common check.
• Entry hazards (revert) from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn, add comma with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas's checks like Necrozma-DM and Ho-Oh, making it a much more threatening setup sweeper.

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kinda messy so i wanna read it once more after implementation. not 2/2 yet but still credit bobsican.

Notes / feedback for Trial QC

Expand on what Geomancy does for it, namely becoming a fast hard hitting Pokemon that's also difficult to revenge kill out of the gained bulk and innate typing.

the first line was fine as-is, it effectively conveys xern is a great setup sweeper thanks to its <traits>. no need to elaborate on everything, expanding on geomancy is dex info-y anyway. if there are any notable examples/calcs though, yeah they should be added.

Thunderbolt provides coverage to for Ho-Oh as well as dealing good damage to into Steel-types like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C, although if Ho-Oh is a particular issue, add comma Hidden Power Rock can be opted for instead to specifically target it.

even unslashed, notable moves can be mentioned in an analysis in brief. thunder should be an OO here.

Entry hazards setters from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn

do not feel obligated to do gp changes in qc, its not encouraged. here, u have introduced an error while fixing. "Entry hazards setters from the likes of Deoxys-S" doesnt make sense, the original "entry hazards from the likes of x" was fine.

Add a bullet point or two over usage tips for this set of Xerneas

this point is rly vague, u should try giving the writer some idea to work with

Psyshock is an opted option to allow Xerneas to beat specific specially defensive walls like Confide Chansey.

make sure to check the relevancy of everything, i removed psyshock but even if it had been kept confide chans just isnt beat by it. similarly, ogre just doesnt beat xern.

Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures, primarily acting as a cleaner but also operating as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offensive structures.

this point is rly vague and needs a comment asking for expansion

 

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[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast / Psyshock
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid stat spread add space to "statspread", great ability, and Geomancy. Expand on what Geomancy does for it, namely becoming a fast hard hitting Pokemon that's also difficult to revenge kill out of the gained bulk and innate typing. original is fine, can maybe add a line on how geo helps it vs certain notable calcs if any tho
• Thunderbolt provides coverage to for Ho-Oh as well as dealing good damage to into Steel-types like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C, although if Ho-Oh is a particular issue, add comma Hidden Power Rock can be opted for instead to specifically target it. tbolt is a tera-only think cuz mb hits harder w/o. add a line on thunder even tho its unslashed. can maybe say thund koes hooh & necro w minimum chip but tera elecric tbolt is more consistent
• Substitute blocks status that are crippling to it like Toxic bad poisoning from Toxic Toxic is the name of the move, not the status condition and paralysis from what moves?, add comma after that and can potentially allow allows it to tank a hit hits Seismic Toss requires hitting twice to break it as you know mention stoss ye from Pokemon like Chansey. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn that can resist most of Xerneas's hits and is extremely important to run if Xerneas is running Hidden Power Rock (if not running telectric / electric coverage), and finally Psyshock is an opted option to allow Xerneas to beat specific specially defensive walls like Confide Chansey.
• The given EV spread allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute which can help against Chansey and Blissey's Seismic Toss and to outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Rock Tomb, with the rest being invested into giving Xerneas max Special Attack and making it as physically bulky as possible. An alternative EV spread of 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe can be opted for instead, giving more physical bulk if Xerneas is not running Substitute. why does it need phys bulk? mention physoffensive threats probs
• Tera Electric can be ran to give Xerneas an immunity to Thunder Wave From what foes? Please mention some and boost the power of Thunderbolt, allowing Xerneas to reach key damage thresholds like comfirming the a OHKO on Defensive Calm Mind Primal Kyogre and Ho-Oh, while also providing a nifty Steel-type resistance, add comma allowing it to tank a hit against Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C its main purpose is koing ho-oh and the steels move this up. Tera Fighting is to boost the power of Focus Blast, letting it OHKO Defensive Primal Groudon after Stealth Rock and 2HKO Necrozma-DM while removing all of its weaknesses, add comma or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves, letting it achieve OHKOs on Defensive Eternatus and Defensive Arceus-Ground. Both of these are hit as hard by Tera Fairy while also retaining the boost for the rest of the match, justify more the niche Tera Stellar has over other options ye tera stellar hp rock ohkoes hooh etc. etern is somewhat ok but groundy id not mention cuz what does it do back

Add a bullet point or two over usage tips for this set of Xerneas could mention that u should try to save it for endgame or not 1v1 vs ho-oh etc

• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures, primarily acting as a cleaner but also operating as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offensive structures. why specifically midgame?
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C and Arceus-Ground can make excellent partners. Calm Mind Primal Kyogre also makes an excellent teammate, as it directly forces out and deals damage to OHKOes Primal Groudon, whicch which is Xerneas's most common check.
• Entry hazards (revert) from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn, add comma with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas's checks like Necrozma-DM and Ho-Oh, making it a much more threatening setup sweeper.

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kinda messy so i wanna read it once more after implementation. not 2/2 yet but still credit bobsican.

Notes / feedback for Trial QC

the first line was fine as-is, it effectively conveys xern is a great setup sweeper thanks to its <traits>. no need to elaborate on everything, expanding on geomancy is dex info-y anyway. if there are any notable examples/calcs though, yeah they should be added.

even unslashed, notable moves can be mentioned in an analysis in brief. thunder should be an OO here.

do not feel obligated to do gp changes in qc, its not encouraged. here, u have introduced an error while fixing. "Entry hazards setters from the likes of Deoxys-S" doesnt make sense, the original "entry hazards from the likes of x" was fine.

this point is rly vague, u should try giving the writer some idea to work with

make sure to check the relevancy of everything, i removed psyshock but even if it had been kept confide chans just isnt beat by it. similarly, ogre just doesnt beat xern.

this point is rly vague and needs a comment asking for expansion

did both, ty!

 

[Weirdhamster]

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[SET]
name: Geomancy
move 1: Geomancy
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt / Hidden Power Rock
move 4: Substitute / Focus Blast
item: Power Herb
ability: Fairy Aura
nature: Modest
evs: 48 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe or 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
tera type: Electric / Fighting / Stellar

[SET COMMENTS]

• Xerneas is arguably the best setup sweeper in National Dex Ubers thanks to its varied coverage options, solid stat spread, great ability, and Geomancy.
• Thunderbolt should be ran with Tera Electric and provides coverage for Ho-Oh as well as dealing good damage to Steel-types like Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C, although if Ho-Oh is a particular issue Hidden Power Rock can be opted for instead to specifically target it. Mention hp rock not needing tera to OHKO Thunder is another viable option, OHKOing Ho-Oh and Necrozma-DM with minimal chip damage, but its accuracy means that Tera Electric Thunderbolt is more consistent.
• Substitute blocks status that are crippling to it like bad poisoning from Toxic and paralysis from Thunder Wave and allows it to tank hits from Pokemon like Chansey's Seismic Toss. Mention sub stopping glare from zygarde too. Focus Blast can be opted for to target Pokemon like Primal Groudon and Ferrothorn that can resist most of Xerneas's hits and is extremely important to run if Xerneas is running Hidden Power Rock if not running Electric-type coverage.
• The given EV spread allows Xerneas to create a 101 HP Substitute which help against Chansey and Blissey's Seismic Toss and to outspeed Marshadow after Sticky Web or Rock Tomb, Maybe you could reword this a bit? Right now it sounds like that the 101 hp substitute is what helps vs marshadow with the rest being invested into giving Xerneas max Special Attack and making it as physically bulky as possible. Mention the bulk helping vs priority from marsh and arceus An alternative EV spread of 168 Def / 252 SpA / 88 Spe can be opted for instead, giving more physical bulk if Xerneas is not running Substitute, helping it have an easier time to set up against physical attackers like Zygarde-C and Marshadow.
• Tera Electric can be ran to boost the power of Thunderbolt, allowing Xerneas to reach key damage thresholds like confirming a OHKO on Ho-Oh, while also providing a nifty Steel-type resistance, allowing it to tank a hit against Necrozma-DM and Zacian-C as well as giving Xerneas an immunity to Thunder Wave from Pokemon like Giratina-O and Ferrothorn Glare from Zygarde. The thunder wave immunity is very niche and won’t come up very often. The glare immunity from zygarde is much more common and noteworthy. Tera Fighting is to boost the power of Focus Blast, letting it OHKO Defensive Primal Groudon after Stealth Rock and 2HKO Necrozma-DM while removing all of its weaknesses, or Tera Stellar to give Xerneas a one time boost on any of its moves, letting it achieve OHKOs on Defensive Eternatus with Moonblast and Ho-Oh with Hidden Power Rok.
• Xerneas should typically be saved until the endgame to act as best of a sweeper it can be. Mention this being due to checks like Ho-Oh and Primal Groudon being chipped down. Attempting to take on Pokemon like Necrozma-DM and Ho-Oh on its own is not advised as both of these Pokemon have favorable typings against Xerneas.
• Xerneas fits on a variety of teams, from hyper offense to bulkier balance structures, primarily acting as a cleaner but also operating as a mid-game wallbreaker on some offensive structures that typically struggle to break through stall and semistall teams. Most semi stall and stall structures usually have more than enough counterplay for Xerneas, and its job isn’t really to threaten stall teams in the first place.
• Xerneas oftentimes can struggle with Pokemon that resist Moonblast like Ho-Oh, Primal Groudon, and Necrozma-DM, so Pokemon who take these threats on like Zygarde-C and Arceus-Ground can make excellent partners. Calm Mind Primal Kyogre also makes an excellent teammate, as it directly forces out and OHKOes Primal Groudon, which is Xerneas's most common check.
• Entry hazards from the likes of Deoxys-S and Ferrothorn, with Knock Off support from Pokemon like Yveltal can chip away at Xerneas's checks like Necrozma-DM and Ho-Oh, making it a much more threatening setup sweeper. Necrozma often does lose to Xerneas 1v1, I would replace necrozma with primal groudon here.

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2/2 when implemented

 

[Bella]

GP Team

 

[Bobsican]

Please remove the credit to Weirdhamster as he's banned, note that the QC check provided by him is still valid and no further changes are required.

 

[Gangsta Spongebob]

I would recommend calling the "Grammar Team"

She did in this post

GP Team

That put the analysis in the GP queue

https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/grammar-prose-team-queue-the-world-is-yours.3712791/

 

[Bobsican]

Xerneas got banned, so this is being shelved, thanks for the effort to everyone involved!

 

[Bobsican]

GP Team Done