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[SET]
Focus Sash (Sneasler) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Unburden / Poison Touch
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar / Ghost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Dire Claw
- Close Combat
- Fake Out
- Coaching / Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
- Focus Sash Sneasler aims to eliminate key threats in the metagame such as Kingambit and Rillaboom with powerful STAB options while also outspeeding most Pokemon on the field. Additionally, it provides a supportive role with options like Fake Out and Coaching.
- Dire Claw and Close Combat are Sneasler's main STAB options, hitting key meta threats such as Whimsicott and Tyranitar for huge damage, respectively. Fake Out creates openings for allies such as Gholdengo to set up while also breaking Focus Sash on opposing Sneasler before they can move if they do not tread carefully. Coaching boosts the power of physical-attacking allies such as Baxcalibur while also boosting their defense, allowing them to take more hits from the likes of Incineroar and Garchomp. Protect, on the other hand, can be run to aid Sneasler against opposing Fake Out to keep its Focus Sash in tact and help stall out Trick Room turns, so Sneasler can continue to be the fastest on the field.
- Focus Sash helps combat Sneasler's frail stature, letting it survive attacks such as Expanding Force from Indeedee-M and retaliate with Close Combat or Dire Claw.
- Tera Stellar is preferred on Sneasler to let it achieve OHKOs on Rillaboom and Assault Vest Archaludon with Dire Claw and Close Combat, respectively. Tera Ghost is recommended on sets without Protect to avoid Fake Out from foes such as Incineroar and Rillaboom.
- Jolly is the most common nature on Focus Sash Sneasler, letting it outspeed and OHKO fast Pokemon such as Maushold and Whimsicott. Adamant Sneasler, on the other hand, is able to get the guaranteed OHKO with Dire Claw on Tera Grass or Fairy Volcarona and Primarina.
- Although Focus Sash allows for more flexibility, Focus Sash Sneasler struggles heavily against Ghost-types like Gholdengo, notably having little to hit them. Focus Sash Sneasler also falls victim to four moveslot syndrome, oftentimes warranting need for both Coaching and Protect.

Unburden Sweeper (Sneasler) @ Psychic Seed / Grassy Seed / White Herb
Ability: Unburden
Level: 50
Tera Type: Dark / Flying / Ghost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Close Combat
- Dire Claw / Acrobatics
- Throat Chop / Swords Dance / Coaching
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
- Psychic Seed, Grassy Seed, or White Herb in conjunction with Unburden makes Sneasler the fastest Pokemon in the entire format, outspeeding and KOing top threats such as Maushold and Ursaluna-B, even when they are under Tailwind.
- On Grassy Seed sets in particular, Acrobatics is commonly run alongside Swords Dance thanks to the opportunities created by an ally Rillaboom's Fake Out, which is a necessary teammate for Grassy Seed Sneasler to activate Grassy Seed itself; Acrobatics notably hits Grass- and Fighting-types such as Amoonguss, opposing Sneasler, and Annihilape, respectively. On Psychic Seed and White Herb sets, however, Dire Claw is always the preferred option as they typically already have partners that threaten Fighting-types such as Indeedee.
- Throat Chop is commonly run on Psychic Seed sets so that Sneasler can threaten huge damage onto the Ghost-types of the format like Gholdengo and Dragapult, and also Tera Ghost Pokemon like Incineroar or opposing Sneasler, notably removing Gholdengo for ally Indeedee to use Expanding Force more freely..
- White Herb sets tend to carry Coaching instead of Swords Dance or Throat Chop since they do better into Incineroar, nullifying Intimidate with White Herb and thus being able to better threaten Incineroar with Close Combat, providing as more support for physical attackers that appreciate Coaching like Ursaluna's. With the speed boost from Unburden, it is even possible to use Coaching on allies that are naturally faster than Sneasler like a boosted Dragonite or Dragapult.
- Psychic Seed and Grassy Seed both provide Sneasler with defensive buffs when in their respective terrain. With the Special Defense buff from Psychic Seed, Sneasler is now able to survive Hurricane from Timid Pelipper and Tera Stellar Draco Meteor from Power Herb Archaludon. Grassy Seed helps leverage Sneasler's Defense stat, letting it take Scale Shot from Dragonite and a +2 Tera Dark Kowtow Cleave from Black Glasses Kingambit. Finally, White Herb is used on Sneasler sets that do not particularly abuse terrain but still want an Unburden speed boost. White Herb has the added benefit of negating attack drops from Intimidate as well as denying speed drops from Icy Wind and Electroweb from Alolan Ninetales and Electabuzz, respectively.
- Tera Dark, commonly run on Psychic Seed sets, provides a immunity to Psychic-type attacks and boosts the power of Throat Chop, allowing Sneasler to OHKO Basculegion and frailer Gholdengo.
- Tera Flying, run on Grassy Seed sets, boosts the power of Acrobatics, letting it pick off Rillaboom, whilst also providing a crucial immunity to Ground-type attacks like Earth Power and Stomping Tantrum from Ursaluna-B and Garchomp, respectively.
- Tera Ghost is run on both Grassy Seed and White Herb sets, providing a notable immunity to Fake Out from the likes of Incineroar, while also providing an immunity to Fighting-type attacks such as Final Gambit and Close Combat from Annihilape and Sneasler, respectively.
- Because Unburden already make Sneasler fast enough, Adamant is run to boost the attack stat of Sneasler even further, OHKOing low-invested Ursaluna-B.
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler is far less flexible than Focus Sash, with the Psychic and Grassy Seed sets in particular requiring necessary support in setting up either Psychic or Grassy Terrain. Even with the defensive boosts from the Seeds, Sneasler still ends up missing its Focus Sash due to its naturally poor bulk, getting OHKOed by common super effective attacks. Sneasler also finds itself wanting to stay in a lot despite its frail stature because it would otherwise lose its speed boosts from Unburden.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
============
- Focus Sash Sneasler is generally used as a supportive Pokemon, using Fake Out to help allies such as Volcarona set up or to protect partners lime Ursaluna to give them opportunities to deal loads of damage.
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler sets that carry either Grassy Seed or Psychic Seed tend to take a more offensive approach, with enablers of their items being a must on each team. Additionally, partners that can properly take advantage of Sneasler's coverage, such as Indeedee-M, can form a strong and solid offensive core.
- Rillaboom is an amazing partner for Sneasler, forming a double Fake Out core that can easily overwhelm common team structures such as Dozogiri while also threatening Ground-types that would otherwise heavily threaten Sneasler, notably the Ursaluna formes. In return, Sneasler threatens Pokemon such as Incineroar and Archaludon, Pokemon that Rillaboom struggles to break through.
- Kingambit is another great partner for almost any Sneasler set. Kingambit is able to threaten Gholdengo, one of the top checks to Sneasler, and can also take out Pokemon naturally faster than Sneasler with Sucker Punch, most importantly Dragapult. Kingambit, due to its low speed, can also abuse opposing Trick Room that may be used to nullify Sneasler's presence. Kingambit does struggle with Fighting-types such as opposing Sneasler, which Sneasler can not directly remove unless it is carrying Acrobatics, so it can instead use Fake Out and Coaching to support Kingambit.
- Sneasler is very susceptible to multi-hit moves such as Population Bomb from Maushold or Scale Shot from Dragonite and Baxcalibur. For this, partners such as Alolan Ninetales or Incineroar are recommended threaten the most common multi-hit move users or, in Incineroar's case, can weaken the damage instead. Additionally, Sneasler struggles against Ghost-types like Gholdengo and Annihilape when without Throat Chop or Acrobatics; because of this, allies like Incineroar and Pelipper are recommended to scare away Gholdengo and Annihilape, respectively.



Strategy Comments
============
- Sneasler's objective is to support its team or deal heavy damage but overall be a nuisance to the opposing team with moves such as Dire Claw, which has the chance to apply game-ending status conditions. Because of this, Sneasler thrives in board states where Dire Claw is easy to use and sometimes spam.
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler that use either Psychic Seed or Grassy Seed need their terrain setter to be alive, so they tend to play towards the early game to break through. Focus Sash and White Herb sets have more versatility and can be brought in the front or in the back instead. Sneasler is advised to not be brought in general against Trick Room teams as, when under the impairment of Trick Room, Sneasler is far more susceptible to getting KOed due to its high speed.
- Gholdengo is the largest thorn in the side for Sneasler, as it is immune to both of Sneasler's STABs and is only threatened by Throat Chop. Allies like Kingambit or Incineroar can easily take care of Gholdengo with Kowtow Cleave and Knock Off, respectively. Annihilape and Dragonite can be an even bigger struggle when not careful, as Annihilape is only threatened by Acrobatics and Dragonite can use Scale Shot to OHKO Sneasler, even through Focus Sash. Alolan Ninetales threatens both of these Pokemon with Moonblast, while also having access to Aurora Veil to allow Sneasler to live hits such as Scale Shot from Dragonite.

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I started QCing this then I had to run so I'll need to recheck this later soz

[SET]
Focus Sash (Sneasler) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Unburden / Poison Touch
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar / Ghost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Dire Claw
- Close Combat
- Fake Out
- Coaching / Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
- Focus Sash Sneasler aims to eliminate key threats in the metagame such as Kingambit and Rillaboom with powerful STAB options while also outspeeding most Pokemon on the field. Additionally, it provides a supportive role with options like Fake Out and Coaching.
- Dire Claw and Close Combat are Sneasler's main STAB options. Going into more detail by providing other examples of foes weak to them or mentioning how strong Poison and Fighting-type attacks are into the metagame would be good here Fake Out creates openings for allies such as Gholdengo to set up while also breaking Focus Sash on opposing Sneasler if they do not tread carefully. Coaching boasts boosts the power of physical-attacking allies such as Baxcalibur, I would mention that Coaching increases the bulk of Baxcalibur too letting it take physical hits better while Protect can be run to aid Sneasler against opposing Fake Out and help stall out Trick Room turns.
- Focus Sash helps combat Sneasler's frail stature, letting it survive attacks such as Expanding Force from Indeedee-M and retaliate with Close Combat or Dire Claw.
- Tera Stellar is preferred on Sneasler to let it achieve OHKOs on Rillaboom and Assault Vest Archaludon with Dire Claw and Close Combat, respectively. Tera Ghost is recommended on sets without Protect to avoid Fake Out from foes such as Incineroar and opposing Sneasler Rillaboom Fake Out isn't always ran on Sneasler whereas it always is on Rillaboom.
- Jolly is the most common nature on Focus Sash Sneasler, letting it outspeed a majority of the meta and potentially speed tie other Sneasler I don't really like this generalisation into talking about speed tieing, better to mention a specific example like Maushold. Adamant Sneasler, on the other hand, is able to get the guaranteed OHKO with Dire Claw on Tera Grass or Fairy Volcarona, among others.
- Although Focus Sash allows for more flexibility, Focus Sash Sneasler struggles heavily against Ghost-types like Gholdengo, notably having nothing to hit them unlike other Sneasler sets. Focus Sash Sneasler also falls victim to four moveslot syndrome, as it wants both Coaching and Protect oftentimes but can only pick one.

Unburden Sweeper (Sneasler) @ Psychic Seed / Grassy Seed / White Herb
Ability: Unburden
Level: 50
Tera Type: Dark / Flying / Ghost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Close Combat
- Dire Claw / Acrobatics
- Throat Chop / Swords Dance / Coaching
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
- Psychic Seed, Grassy Seed, or White Herb in conjunction with Unburden makes Sneasler the fastest Pokemon in the entire format, outspeeding and KOing top threats such as Maushold and Ursaluna-B, even when they are under Tailwind.
- On Grassy Seed sets in particular, Acrobatics is commonly run alongside Swords Dance thanks to the opportunities created by an ally Rillaboom's Fake Out, which is a necessary teammate for Grassy Seed Sneasler to activate Grassy Seed itself; Acrobatics notably hits Grass- and Fighting-types such as Amoonguss and Annihilape, respectively. On Psychic Seed and White Herb sets, however, Dire Claw is always the preferred option.
- Throat Chop is commonly run on Psychic Seed sets that can't run Fake Out due to Psychic Terrain. With a newfound Dark-type attack, Sneasler is now able to threaten huge damage onto the Ghost-types of the format like Gholdengo and Dragapult, and also Tera Ghost Pokemon like Incineroar or opposing Sneasler.
- White Herb sets tend to carry Coaching instead of Swords Dance or Throat Chop since they tend to lend towards a more supportive role, using Close Combat to get a speed boost and bolster allies like Ursaluna's capabilities even further. I would like to see a mention of Intimidate activating White Herb for Unburden here too With the speed boost from Unburden, it is even possible to use Coaching on allies that are naturally faster than Sneasler like a boosted Dragonite or Dragapult.
- Psychic Seed and Grassy Seed both provide Sneasler with defensive buffs when in their respective terrain. With the Special Defense buff from Psychic Seed, Sneasler is now able to survive Hurricane from Timid Pelipper, and Tera Stellar Draco Meteor from Power Herb Archaludon, and more You should just mention a few examples rather than leaving this open-ended. Grassy Seed helps leverage Sneasler's Defense stat, letting it take Scale Shot from Dragonite and a +2 Tera Dark Kowtow Cleave from Kingambit. Finally, White Herb is used on Sneasler sets that do not particularly abuse terrain but still want an Unburden speed boost. I'll let you decide where to put the Intimidate mention for White Herb but it would work well here too or you could mention negating speed drops from Alolan Ninetales's Icy Wind
- Tera Dark, commonly run on Psychic Seed sets, provides a immunity to Psychic-type attacks and boosts the power of Throat Chop, allowing Sneasler to OHKO Basculegion and frailer Gholdengo.
- Tera Flying, run on Grassy Seed sets, boosts the power of Acrobatics, letting it pick off Rillaboom, whilst also providing a crucial immunity to Ground-type attacks like Earth Power and Stomping Tantrum from Ursaluna-B and Garchomp, respectively.
- Tera Ghost is run on both Grassy Seed and White Herb sets, providing a notable immunity to Fake Out from the likes of Incineroar, while also providing a less simple tent but albeit good immunity to Fighting-type attacks such as Final Gambit and Close Combat from Annihilape and Sneasler, respectively.
- Because Unburden already make Sneasler fast enough, Adamant is run to boost the attack stat of Sneasler even further. The EVs are used to boost both Sneasler's attack and speed.
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler is far less flexible than Focus Sash, with the Psychic and Grassy Seed sets in particular requiring necessary support in setting up either Psychic or Grassy Terrain. Even with the defensive boosts from the Seeds, Sneasler still ends up missing its Focus Sash due to its naturally poor bulk, getting OHKOd OHKOed by common supereffecitve super effective attacks.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
============
- Focus Sash Sneasler is generally considered not to be the one to take advantage of an enabler; it is typically the enabler itself. Allies that can properly abuse Fake Out support such as setup Pokemon like Gholdengo will always appreciate Sneasler.
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler sets tend to take a more offensive approach, with enablers of their items being a must on each team. Additionally, partners that can properly take advantage of Sneasler's coverage, such as Indeedee-M, can form a strong and solid offensive core.
- Rillaboom is an amazing partner for Sneasler, forming a double Fake Out core that can easily overwhelm common team structures such as Dozogiri while also threatening Ground-types that would otherwise heavily threaten Sneasler, notably the Ursaluna formes. In return, Sneasler scares off some of the most common Fire-types in Regulation H, being Incineroar and Arcanine-H, I don't like this because it's untrue, yes Sneasler does a lot to Incineroar and Hisuian Arcanine but it isn't a threat at all to Volcarona, Magmar, and Charizard which are common enough Fire-types while also threatening Archaludon, a Pokemon Rillaboom struggles to break through.
- Kingambit is another great partner for almost any Sneasler set. Kingambit is able to threaten Gholdengo, one of the top checks to Sneasler, and can also take out Pokemon naturally faster than Sneasler with Sucker Punch, most importantly Talonflame and Dragapult. Kingambit, due to its low speed, can also abuse opposing Trick Room that may be used to nullify Sneasler's presence. Kingambit does, however, struggle with Fighting-types such as opposing Sneasler among other issues. Sneasler can not directly remove most Fighting-type Pokemon unless it is carrying Acrobatics, so it can instead use Fake Out and Coaching to support Kingambit.
- Sneasler is very susceptible to multi-hit moves such as Dual-Wingbeat from Talonflame and Flamigo or Scale Shot from Dragonite and Baxcalibur. Additionally, Sneasler struggles against Ghost-types like Gholdengo and Annihilape when without Throat Chop or Acrobatics, as it struggles to deal any meaningful damage to them. Partners such as Ninetales-A or Incineroar can threaten the most common multi-hit move users or, in Incineroar's case, can weaken the damage instead. Ghost-types can be handled with partners like Kingambit or the aforementioned Incineroar, as well as Normal-types like Ursaluna-B or even Ghost-types like Sneasler's own ally Gholdengo.



Strategy Comments
============
- Sneasler's objective is to support its team or deal heavy damage but overall be a nuisance to the opposing team. Sneasler shows its true value when in situations where Dire Claw is a good option, as the RNG provided by it is undeniably strong. Sneasler also thrives in environments where it can move first, which tends to be the case most of the time.
- Sneasler, being the top-tier Pokemon it is, can be brought either early game or late game, thanks to its versatility. This, however, is far easier to pull off with Focus Sash Sneasler sets; Unburden Sweeper Sneasler that use either Psychic Seed or Grassy Seed need their terrain setter to be alive, so they tend to play towards the early game to break through. Sneasler is advised to not be brought in general against Trick Room teams as, when under the impairment of Trick Room, Sneasler can't do anything.
- Gholdengo is the largest thorn in the side for Sneasler, as it is immune to both of Sneasler's STABs and is only threatened by Throat Chop. Allies like Kingambit or Incineroar can easily take care of Gholdengo with Kowtow Cleave and Knock Off, respectively. Annihilape and Dragonite can be an even bigger struggle when not careful, as Annihilape is only threatened by Acrobatics and Dragonite can use Scale Shot to OHKO Sneasler, even through Focus Sash. Ninetales-A threatens both of these Pokemon with Moonblast, while also having access to Aurora Veil to allow Sneasler to live hits such as Scale Shot from Dragonite.

[CREDITS]
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Looks good to me, make these changes and then you may mark as 1/2.

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[SET]
Focus Sash (Sneasler) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Unburden / Poison Touch
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar / Ghost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Dire Claw
- Close Combat
- Fake Out
- Coaching / Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
- Focus Sash Sneasler aims to eliminate key threats in the metagame such as Kingambit and Rillaboom with powerful STAB options while also outspeeding most Pokemon on the field. Additionally, it provides a supportive role with options like Fake Out and Coaching.
- Dire Claw and Close Combat are Sneasler's main STAB options, hitting key meta threats such as Rillaboom and Kingambit for huge damage. Fake Out creates openings for allies such as Gholdengo to set up while also breaking Focus Sash on opposing Sneasler if they do not tread carefully. Coaching boosts the power of physical-attacking allies such as Baxcalibur while also boosting their defense, allowing them to take more hits from the likes of Incineroar and Garchomp. Protect, on the other hand, can be run to aid Sneasler against opposing Fake Out and help stall out Trick Room turns.
- Focus Sash helps combat Sneasler's frail stature, letting it survive attacks such as Expanding Force from Indeedee-M and retaliate with Close Combat or Dire Claw.
- Tera Stellar is preferred on Sneasler to let it achieve OHKOs on Rillaboom and Assault Vest Archaludon with Dire Claw and Close Combat, respectively. Tera Ghost is recommended on sets without Protect to avoid Fake Out from foes such as Incineroar and Rillaboom.
- Jolly is the most common nature on Focus Sash Sneasler, letting it outspeed fast threats such as Maushold. Adamant Sneasler, on the other hand, is able to get the guaranteed OHKO with Dire Claw on Tera Grass or Fairy Volcarona, among others.
- Although Focus Sash allows for more flexibility, Focus Sash Sneasler struggles heavily against Ghost-types like Gholdengo, notably having nothing to hit them unlike other Sneasler sets. Focus Sash Sneasler also falls victim to four moveslot syndrome, as it wants both Coaching and Protect oftentimes but can only pick one.

Unburden Sweeper (Sneasler) @ Psychic Seed / Grassy Seed / White Herb
Ability: Unburden
Level: 50
Tera Type: Dark / Flying / Ghost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Close Combat
- Dire Claw / Acrobatics
- Throat Chop / Swords Dance / Coaching
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
- Psychic Seed, Grassy Seed, or White Herb in conjunction with Unburden makes Sneasler the fastest Pokemon in the entire format, outspeeding and KOing top threats such as Maushold and Ursaluna-B, even when they are under Tailwind.
- On Grassy Seed sets in particular, Acrobatics is commonly run alongside Swords Dance thanks to the opportunities created by an ally Rillaboom's Fake Out, which is a necessary teammate for Grassy Seed Sneasler to activate Grassy Seed itself; Acrobatics notably hits Grass- and Fighting-types such as Amoonguss and Annihilape, respectively. On Psychic Seed and White Herb sets, however, Dire Claw is always the preferred option.
- Throat Chop is commonly run on Psychic Seed sets that can't run Fake Out due to Psychic Terrain. With a newfound Dark-type attack, Sneasler is now able to threaten huge damage onto the Ghost-types of the format like Gholdengo and Dragapult, and also Tera Ghost Pokemon like Incineroar or opposing Sneasler.
- White Herb sets tend to carry Coaching instead of Swords Dance or Throat Chop since they tend to lend towards a more supportive role, using Close Combat to get a speed boost and bolster allies like Ursaluna's capabilities even further. With the speed boost from Unburden, it is even possible to use Coaching on allies that are naturally faster than Sneasler like a boosted Dragonite or Dragapult.
- Psychic Seed and Grassy Seed both provide Sneasler with defensive buffs when in their respective terrain. With the Special Defense buff from Psychic Seed, Sneasler is now able to survive Hurricane from Timid Pelipper and Tera Stellar Draco Meteor from Power Herb Archaludon. Grassy Seed helps leverage Sneasler's Defense stat, letting it take Scale Shot from Dragonite and a +2 Tera Dark Kowtow Cleave from Kingambit. Finally, White Herb is used on Sneasler sets that do not particularly abuse terrain but still want an Unburden speed boost. White Herb has the added benefit of negating attack drops from Intimidate as well as denying speed drops from Icy Wind and Electroweb from Alolan Ninetales and Electabuzz, respectively.
- Tera Dark, commonly run on Psychic Seed sets, provides a immunity to Psychic-type attacks and boosts the power of Throat Chop, allowing Sneasler to OHKO Basculegion and frailer Gholdengo.
- Tera Flying, run on Grassy Seed sets, boosts the power of Acrobatics, letting it pick off Rillaboom, whilst also providing a crucial immunity to Ground-type attacks like Earth Power and Stomping Tantrum from Ursaluna-B and Garchomp, respectively.
- Tera Ghost is run on both Grassy Seed and White Herb sets, providing a notable immunity to Fake Out from the likes of Incineroar, while also providing a less simple tent but albeit good immunity to Fighting-type attacks such as Final Gambit and Close Combat from Annihilape and Sneasler, respectively.
- Because Unburden already make Sneasler fast enough, Adamant is run to boost the attack stat of Sneasler even further.
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler is far less flexible than Focus Sash, with the Psychic and Grassy Seed sets in particular requiring necessary support in setting up either Psychic or Grassy Terrain. Even with the defensive boosts from the Seeds, Sneasler still ends up missing its Focus Sash due to its naturally poor bulk, getting OHKOed by common super effective attacks.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
============
- Focus Sash Sneasler is generally considered not to be the one to take advantage of an enabler; it is typically the enabler itself. Allies that can properly abuse Fake Out support such as setup Pokemon like Gholdengo will always appreciate Sneasler.
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler sets tend to take a more offensive approach, with enablers of their items being a must on each team. Additionally, partners that can properly take advantage of Sneasler's coverage, such as Indeedee-M, can form a strong and solid offensive core.
- Rillaboom is an amazing partner for Sneasler, forming a double Fake Out core that can easily overwhelm common team structures such as Dozogiri while also threatening Ground-types that would otherwise heavily threaten Sneasler, notably the Ursaluna formes. In return, Sneasler threatens Pokemon such as Incineroar and Archaludon, Pokemon that Rillaboom struggles to break through.
- Kingambit is another great partner for almost any Sneasler set. Kingambit is able to threaten Gholdengo, one of the top checks to Sneasler, and can also take out Pokemon naturally faster than Sneasler with Sucker Punch, most importantly Talonflame and Dragapult. Kingambit, due to its low speed, can also abuse opposing Trick Room that may be used to nullify Sneasler's presence. Kingambit does, however, struggle with Fighting-types such as opposing Sneasler among other issues. Sneasler can not directly remove most Fighting-type Pokemon unless it is carrying Acrobatics, so it can instead use Fake Out and Coaching to support Kingambit.
- Sneasler is very susceptible to multi-hit moves such as Dual-Wingbeat from Talonflame and Flamigo or Brave Bird sees higher usage on both so I wouldn't mention Dual-Wingbeat but if you want to keep it then Scyther is fine to mention instead of them Scale Shot from Dragonite and Baxcalibur. Additionally, Sneasler struggles against Ghost-types like Gholdengo and Annihilape when without Throat Chop or Acrobatics, as it struggles to deal any meaningful damage to them. Partners such as Ninetales-A Alolan Ninetales or Incineroar can threaten the most common multi-hit move users or, in Incineroar's case, can weaken the damage instead. Ghost-types can be handled with partners like Kingambit or the aforementioned Incineroar, as well as Normal-types like Ursaluna-B or even Ghost-types like Sneasler's own ally Gholdengo. These examples are fine for Gholdengo but they don't really help much against Annihilape, maybe make a seperate point for Annihilape or mention a specific partner



Strategy Comments
============
- Sneasler's objective is to support its team or deal heavy damage but overall be a nuisance to the opposing team. Sneasler shows its true value when in situations where Dire Claw is a good option, as the RNG I would prefer to see this written out rather than just mentioned as RNG so say something like the chance to apply a helpful status condition provided by it is undeniably strong. Sneasler also thrives in environments where it can move first, which tends to be the case most of the time.
- Sneasler, being the top-tier Pokemon it is, can be brought either early game or late game, thanks to its versatility. This, however, is far easier to pull off with Focus Sash Sneasler sets; Unburden Sweeper Sneasler that use either Psychic Seed or Grassy Seed need their terrain setter to be alive, so they tend to play towards the early game to break through. Sneasler is advised to not be brought in general against Trick Room teams as, when under the impairment of Trick Room, Sneasler can't do anything I mean if it is ignored while Trick Room is active it can still get off a powerful attack so probably say it is a lot less effective instead.
- Gholdengo is the largest thorn in the side for Sneasler, as it is immune to both of Sneasler's STABs and is only threatened by Throat Chop. Allies like Kingambit or Incineroar can easily take care of Gholdengo with Kowtow Cleave and Knock Off, respectively. Annihilape and Dragonite can be an even bigger struggle when not careful, as Annihilape is only threatened by Acrobatics and Dragonite can use Scale Shot to OHKO Sneasler, even through Focus Sash. Ninetales-A Alolan Ninetales threatens both of these Pokemon with Moonblast, while also having access to Aurora Veil to allow Sneasler to live hits such as Scale Shot from Dragonite.

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let me know when you have implemented and i will recheck
please be wary of repeating yourself in later sections, there are multiple points at which you rip something word-for-word from what you said in the earlier sections
also ensure that you are providing sufficient detail and not just yapping— especially in the last few parts of the analysis you meander around making any real points with some of your sentences.

feel free to ping me if you have any questions!

[SET]
Focus Sash (Sneasler) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Unburden / Poison Touch
Level: 50
Tera Type: Stellar / Ghost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly / Adamant Nature
- Dire Claw
- Close Combat
- Fake Out
- Coaching / Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
- Focus Sash Sneasler aims to eliminate key threats in the metagame such as Kingambit and Rillaboom with powerful STAB options while also outspeeding most Pokemon on the field. Additionally, it provides a supportive role with options like Fake Out and Coaching.
- Dire Claw and Close Combat are Sneasler's main STAB options, hitting key meta threats such as Rillaboom and Kingambit (vary your examples in the highlighted bits, you're repeating yourself) for huge damage. Fake Out creates openings for allies such as Gholdengo to set up while also breaking Focus Sash on opposing Sneasler if they do not tread carefully (how is this aspect unique to fake out?). Coaching boosts the power of physical-attacking allies such as Baxcalibur while also boosting their defense, allowing them to take more hits from the likes of Incineroar and Garchomp. Protect, on the other hand, can be run to aid Sneasler against opposing Fake Out and help stall out Trick Room turns. (protect can be used this way by any mon, why is it notable on Sneasler specifically?)
- Focus Sash helps combat Sneasler's frail stature, letting it survive attacks such as Expanding Force from Indeedee-M and retaliate with Close Combat or Dire Claw.
- Tera Stellar is preferred on Sneasler to let it achieve OHKOs on Rillaboom and Assault Vest Archaludon with Dire Claw and Close Combat, respectively. Tera Ghost is recommended on sets without Protect to avoid Fake Out from foes such as Incineroar and Rillaboom.
- Jolly is the most common nature on Focus Sash Sneasler, letting it outspeed fast threats such as Maushold (anything else...? if nothing else it's worth noting that outspeeding maushold is important due to pop bomb bypassing sash) . Adamant Sneasler, on the other hand, is able to get the guaranteed OHKO with Dire Claw on Tera Grass or Fairy Volcarona, among others (like what— is there a particular reason you're being vague here?).
- Although Focus Sash allows for more flexibility, Focus Sash Sneasler struggles heavily against Ghost-types like Gholdengo, notably having nothing to hit (untrue, focus sash sneasler definitely still has access to throat chop even if the dex set doesn't have it. reword this) them unlike other Sneasler sets. Focus Sash Sneasler also falls victim to four moveslot syndrome (ignore this if i am incorrect, but this does not seem like something GP would like, i would rephrase it a little bit), as it wants both Coaching and Protect oftentimes but can only pick one. (regardless, this last sentence reads like dex info and should be cut or edited)

Unburden Sweeper (Sneasler) @ Psychic Seed / Grassy Seed / White Herb
Ability: Unburden
Level: 50
Tera Type: Dark / Flying / Ghost
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Close Combat
- Dire Claw / Acrobatics
- Throat Chop / Swords Dance / Coaching
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
- Psychic Seed, Grassy Seed, or White Herb in conjunction with Unburden makes Sneasler the fastest Pokemon in the entire format, outspeeding and KOing top threats such as Maushold and Ursaluna-B, even when they are under Tailwind.
- On Grassy Seed sets in particular, Acrobatics is commonly run alongside Swords Dance thanks to the opportunities created by an ally Rillaboom's Fake Out, which is a necessary teammate for Grassy Seed Sneasler to activate Grassy Seed itself; Acrobatics notably hits Grass- and Fighting-types such as Amoonguss, and Annihilape, and opposing Sneasler, respectively. On Psychic Seed and White Herb sets, however, Dire Claw is always the preferred option (because...?).
- Throat Chop is commonly run on Psychic Seed sets that can't run Fake Out (irrelevant here— fake out isn't even a move on this set) due to Psychic Terrain. With a newfound Dark-type attack, Sneasler is now able to threaten huge damage onto the Ghost-types of the format like Gholdengo and Dragapult, and also Tera Ghost Pokemon like Incineroar or opposing Sneasler.
- White Herb sets tend to carry Coaching instead of Swords Dance or Throat Chop since they tend to lend towards a more supportive role (is this true? gseed sneasler definitely uses coaching & it's entirely possible for white herb to slot throat chop— this is also pretty counterintuitive considering White Herb doesn't boost your bulk like the seeds, if this is the case it would be worth addressing why), using Close Combat to get a speed boost and bolster allies like Ursaluna's capabilities even further. With the speed boost from Unburden, it is even possible to use Coaching on allies that are naturally faster than Sneasler like a boosted Dragonite or Dragapult.
- Psychic Seed and Grassy Seed both provide Sneasler with defensive buffs when in their respective terrain. With the Special Defense buff from Psychic Seed, Sneasler is now able to survive Hurricane from Timid Pelipper and Tera Stellar Draco Meteor from Power Herb Archaludon. Grassy Seed helps leverage Sneasler's Defense stat, letting it take Scale Shot from Dragonite and a +2 Tera Dark Kowtow Cleave (black glasses?) from Kingambit. Finally, White Herb is used on Sneasler sets that do not particularly abuse terrain but still want an Unburden speed boost. White Herb has the added benefit of negating attack drops from Intimidate as well as denying speed drops from Icy Wind and Electroweb from Alolan Ninetales and Electabuzz, respectively.
- Tera Dark, commonly run on Psychic Seed sets, provides a immunity to Psychic-type attacks and boosts the power of Throat Chop, allowing Sneasler to OHKO Basculegion and frailer Gholdengo.
- Tera Flying, run on Grassy Seed sets, boosts the power of Acrobatics, letting it pick off Rillaboom, whilst also providing a crucial immunity to Ground-type attacks like Earth Power and Stomping Tantrum from Ursaluna-B and Garchomp, respectively.
- Tera Ghost is run on both Grassy Seed and White Herb sets, providing a notable immunity to Fake Out from the likes of Incineroar, while also providing an less simple tent but albeit good immunity to Fighting-type attacks such as Final Gambit and Close Combat from Annihilape and Sneasler, respectively.
- Because Unburden already make Sneasler fast enough, Adamant is run to boost the attack stat of Sneasler even further. (any specific calcs hit with it?)
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler is far less flexible than Focus Sash, with the Psychic and Grassy Seed sets in particular requiring necessary support in setting up either Psychic or Grassy Terrain (worth mentioning that you aren't able to swap without giving up the unburden boost). Even with the defensive boosts from the Seeds, Sneasler still ends up missing its Focus Sash due to its naturally poor bulk, getting OHKOed by common super effective attacks.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Teambuilding
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- Focus Sash Sneasler is generally considered not to be the one to take advantage of an enabler; it is typically the enabler itself. ("Focus Sash Sneasler is a support pokemon" is all that you're saying here, too much yap) Allies that can properly abuse Fake Out support such as setup Pokemon like Gholdengo will always appreciate Sneasler. (you mentioned this earlier in the sash sneasler section, do you really need to mention it again?)
- Unburden Sweeper Sneasler sets tend to take a more offensive approach, with enablers of their items being a must on each team (this is not true in the case of white herb, reword). Additionally, partners that can properly take advantage of Sneasler's coverage, such as Indeedee-M, can form a strong and solid offensive core.
- Rillaboom is an amazing partner for Sneasler, forming a double Fake Out core that can easily overwhelm common team structures such as Dozogiri while also threatening Ground-types that would otherwise heavily threaten Sneasler, notably the Ursaluna formes. In return, Sneasler threatens Pokemon such as Incineroar and Archaludon, Pokemon that Rillaboom struggles to break through.
- Kingambit is another great partner for almost any Sneasler set. Kingambit is able to threaten Gholdengo, one of the top checks to Sneasler, and can also take out Pokemon naturally faster than Sneasler with Sucker Punch, most importantly Talonflame (this is a weird example, Kingambit doesn't really even beat Talonflame) and Dragapult. Kingambit, due to its low speed, can also abuse opposing Trick Room that may be used to nullify Sneasler's presence. Kingambit does, however, struggle with Fighting-types such as opposing Sneasler among other issues. (this first sentence is super wordy, cut it and combine it with the following sentence. there's also no reason for a full sentence in the Sneasler analysis to be dedicated to Kingambit's weakness) Sneasler can not directly remove most Fighting-type Pokemon unless it is carrying Acrobatics, so it can instead use Fake Out and Coaching to support Kingambit.
- Sneasler is very susceptible to multi-hit moves such as Dual Wingbeat from Scyther (surely talonflame and maushold are much better examples than the mon that has been on a single successful team) or Scale Shot from Dragonite and Baxcalibur. Additionally, Sneasler struggles against Ghost-types like Gholdengo and Annihilape when without Throat Chop or Acrobatics, as it struggles to deal any meaningful damage to them. (you're repeating yourself from earlier in the analysis here again, fold some of this into the next sentence & cut the fluff) Partners such as Alolan Ninetales or Incineroar can threaten the most common multi-hit move users (is this relevant?) or, in Incineroar's case, can weaken the damage instead. Ghost-types aside from Annihilape can be handled with partners like Kingambit or the aforementioned Incineroar, as well as Normal-types like Ursaluna-B or even Ghost-types like Sneasler's own ally Gholdengo. Annihilape can be taken down by allies such as Indeedee-M and Pelipper.



Strategy Comments
============
- Sneasler's objective is to support its team or deal heavy damage but overall be a nuisance to the opposing team. (nothing burger sentence) Sneasler shows its true value when in situations where Dire Claw is a good option, as the chance of applying game-ending status conditions provided by Dire Claw is undeniably strong. Sneasler also thrives in environments where it can move first, which tends to be the case most of the time. (this is true of basically every mon, reword or cut)
- Sneasler, being the top-tier Pokemon it is, can be brought either early game or late game, thanks to its versatility. This, however, is far easier to pull off with Focus Sash Sneasler sets; ("focus sash sneasler is versatile" so what? cut the yap & keep it simple) Unburden Sweeper Sneasler that use either Psychic Seed or Grassy Seed need their terrain setter to be alive, so they tend to play towards the early game to break through. Sneasler is advised to not be brought in general against Trick Room teams as, when under the impairment of Trick Room, Sneasler is far less effective than it normally is. (so what? cut or reword)
- Gholdengo is the largest thorn in the side for Sneasler, as it is immune to both of Sneasler's STABs and is only threatened by Throat Chop. Allies like Kingambit or Incineroar can easily take care of Gholdengo with Kowtow Cleave and Knock Off, respectively. Annihilape and Dragonite can be an even bigger struggle when not careful, as Annihilape is only threatened by Acrobatics and Dragonite can use Scale Shot to OHKO Sneasler, even through Focus Sash. Alolan Ninetales threatens both of these Pokemon with Moonblast, while also having access to Aurora Veil to allow Sneasler to live hits such as Scale Shot from Dragonite.

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