For us to give you a proper rate (and for your thread to abide by the RMT rules), you'll need to include a few descriptions on why you chose the Pokemon for your team. Otherwise, all we really have to go off of is a bunch of seemingly unsynergetic Pokemon thrown together for who knows why.
From the sound of your introduction, however, asking for help in the RMT thread might not be the best place to start. Having someone giving you vague advice when you're completely new to the VGC rule set sounds like a bad idea. Instead, maybe try waiting until the next round of tutoring starts to see if you can get some better insight into the world of VGC.