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This is why I'm QC and not GP, thanks for the heads up melvni.
Governess remember to capitalize words like Attack, Defense, Special Attack, Special Defense, and Speed when referring to something's base stats. Also do the fixes melvni said to do, which includes referring to Murkrow as a setup sweeper rather than set up sweeper.
On the topic of FeatherDance I was thinking it over and I think it should be slashed before Substitute. FeatherDance gives it a lot more set up opportunities against physical attackers. You have an even distribution with the perks of FeatherDance vs Substitute so it should be fine just making the change in order by itself.
From here I feel I did the best I could to make this up to par with QC standards. From here I'll leave it up to GP to fix the grammatical errors and other mistakes of the sort. Governess try to implement these as close to my descriptions as possible and hopefully my last two pages of comments will help you out in future analyses. Keep up the good effort!
[qc]3/3[/qc]
Governess remember to capitalize words like Attack, Defense, Special Attack, Special Defense, and Speed when referring to something's base stats. Also do the fixes melvni said to do, which includes referring to Murkrow as a setup sweeper rather than set up sweeper.
There are better examples for this. Replace Probopass and Ampharos with Rotom-S and Regirock. (Also remove the etc, it shouldn't be there) You should remove the last sentence here as Golem doesn't actually check them very well without Sturdy activate.Golem can check all of Murkrow's weaknesses with the appropriate moveset, it can set up SR, and defeat Pokemon like Probopass, Specs Ampharos, etc. Though, Pokemon it checks, such as Glaceon and Beartic, can still get the last laugh with their STAB moves.
Replace Golurk for Musharna, Gardevoir, Exeggutor, and Roselia. Mention that Murkrow can beat Golurk and Zangoose in a 1v1 situation with FeatherDance.Murkrow does well against many top-tier Pokemon, like Golurk, for example.
On the topic of FeatherDance I was thinking it over and I think it should be slashed before Substitute. FeatherDance gives it a lot more set up opportunities against physical attackers. You have an even distribution with the perks of FeatherDance vs Substitute so it should be fine just making the change in order by itself.
Yeah like I said I think that FeatherDance should be slashed before Substitute so this needs to be changed a bit. Remove this whole segment here and instead talk about the advantages of having FeatherDance vs Substitute. FeatherDance allows you to set up against physical threats easier (Don't mention Fighting-types or critical hits while doing this) while Substitute allows you to avoid status and set up on Pokemon such as Alomomola (Substitute blocks Toxic and Waterfall doesn't break it) , Lickilicky, (Body Slam won't break Sub and it can't phaze you with Dragon Tail) and Tangela (without getting put to Sleep via Sleep Powder of being hit by Leech Seed). Elaborate on how it beats them as well, like I did in parenthesis. In the end mention how FeatherDance is the superior option for allowing you to set up on a bigger range of Pokemon.However, Substitute is recommended; allows Murkrow to avoid any status move thrown at it, and makes setting up Calm Mind easier. Additionally, if you use FeatherDacne, Murkrow is more vulnerable to status moves, such as Thunder Wave and Toxic. Critical hits can also ruin FeatherDance's plan. Each move solely depends on the conditions of this set; FeatherDance can make fighting types and other physical threats less threatening, and using Substitute makes it harder to set up against most physical attackers overall, but Substitute is the surperior option if you want Murkrow to be free of status effects and a higher chance to set up.
From here I feel I did the best I could to make this up to par with QC standards. From here I'll leave it up to GP to fix the grammatical errors and other mistakes of the sort. Governess try to implement these as close to my descriptions as possible and hopefully my last two pages of comments will help you out in future analyses. Keep up the good effort!
[qc]3/3[/qc]