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Arceus Overview Renovation ![]() Approved by bojangles. Art by Yilx. Introduction Arceus. The Pokemon that created all. Writing His analyses took the Ubers C&C section quite a while, but something went wrong. Many users (1, 2) have complained that Arceus's overviews are just not statisfying. Most overviews do not include information about the metagame or the form.A Few Guidelines....
Overviews: What needs to be fixed?
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I put my input up. The ones I have left blank is the ones I have no comments about. I may have forgotten a few things, but I am about to leave so I'll look into them later.
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Can I reserve an Arceus form? If so, then i'd like to take Arceus Fire.
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I am just pointing out something here, not good at spicing up flows.
Arceus Bug can OHKO Mewtwo and Darkrai at +0, most forms can't. Since Arceus Bug will go all out Offensive, he can even smash Defensive Mewtwo in one hit. Arceus Bug is a good check to Darkrai and Mewtwo. ( You mentioned Psychic and Dark but maybe mention both Mewtwo and Darkrai because they are common ) With the rise of Ferrothorn, Dark Arceus might not really take out stall teams by himself anymore, or at least with the use of Refresh. Dialga, Skarmory, Tyranitar, Excadrill and Terrakion are also rising in usage, hampering his sweeping process. Mention how Dragon Arceus can hit even harder than either Dialga or Palkia after one Calm Mind on the special side. Good to say, Salamence and Rayquaza will hit harder than Dragon Arceus initially so you mention the bulk is that important, such as when tanking Lugia's Ice Beam. Quote:
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No mention of Arceus-Steel being immune to Toxic Spikes and resistant to Stealth Rock? Arceus Steel can also set up on Blissey or Chansey easily even when they have Snatch. Water Arceus is 2HKOed by Kyogre's Scarf Thunder and Specs Water Spout. You can damage it with a Thunder of your own or Grass Knot to beat Specs Kyogre but Thunder will knock you out. Scarf Kyogre is safely walled but Thunder might 2HKO you. If you bump into Calm Mind Kyogre with Thunder, Water Arceus has no chance of winning. RestTalk Kyogre will just set up on you.
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As one of the users quoted in the OP, I'm really thrilled this is happening... The Arceus forme overviews are just awful, so this will definitely be a worthwhile endeavor.
Focus on the useful competitive information. For instance: Poison Arceus: Poison may seem an odd choice for Arceus, as Poison is often regarded with incredulity over all competitive metagames for its poor offensive coverage and weakness to the ever-popular Earthquake. Despite the weaknesses generally associated with Poison-typing, Poison Arceus is able to utilize the strengths of Poison to fill a very effective support role and defensive pivot. Poison grants Arceus two important utilities: an immunity to Toxic, and the ability to absorb Toxic Spikes. Toxic Spikes is a sever problem to some of Uber's key threats, such as Groudon, Kyogre, Palkia, and the special walls Blissey and Chansey. Poison Arceus is the best, and perhaps only truly good Poison-type that can be used in Ubers to absorb Toxic Spikes (the only other Pokemon commonly considered being Tentacruel). Furthermore, His immunity to poison allows Him to set up Calm Minds easily against a variety of defensively-oriented opponents, notably Blissey and Chansey, giving Him the ability to translate defensive utility into a significant offensive threat. Poison can't match Dragon or even Normal in terms of coverage, but can be lethal with the setup opportunities granted by Poison's useful resistances and immunity to Toxic. Just like any of Arceus's forms, Poison Arceus is not to be underestimated. ^how's that? of course, if someone who plays ubers regulary can do better, go for it. Last edited by Chou Toshio; May 30th, 2012 at 11:38:09 PM. |
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To begin my comment on the Arceus overviews, I have the words of user Theorymon from this thread http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=102272:
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As clearly seen in the "after" overview, the first and last sentences are flavorful befitting the God of Pokémon. However, the sentences in between are mostly of competitive information intermixed with some flavour. It is to be noted that this is an example, more (or less) competitive information/flavor can be placed in the overview as necessary and at the discretion of Quality Control. For example, perhaps Steel types being one of the biggest threats to Arceus-Ice could be mentioned more explicitly instead of it just being at the last "flavorful" sentence. Perhaps the body of the overview could have much less mention of "guise, frosty, etc." and instead refer Arceus as "Arceus-Ice, Him, etc." Of course, there could be some factual errors that need correction such as Arceus-Ice arguably not benefiting much from hail (Main benefit is passive hail damage on opponents, Blizzard's PP is quite small). As another example, take a look at the Arceus-Water overview (Pre-upgrade):
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As clearly seen, the first few (and last) sentences are flavorful. However, the rest is quite competitive (Ignoring the fact that this overview has to be updated as indicated in the posts of users Furai and Trickroom as well as nitpicks). This is in my opinion what an ideal Arceus overview form should look like. Looking at some contrasting Arceus overviews: Arceus-Psychic:
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As previously mentioned, way too much flavor, too little competitive information. It’s also in my opinion not even good “flavor.” Now take a look at these “pure competitive” Arceus overviews: Arceus-Fighting:
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These overviews are pretty much all competitive information with virtually no flavor. It is currently out of line with the other flavorful Arceus overviews as well as having very cliché ending sentences. Take a look at “Making a Good Analysis Great” in The Smog: Issue 17 by user Ray Jay: Quote:
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In conclusion, my suggestion is that overviews at least consider making the first/last sentences of the usual “epic” flavor while the rest can be of pure competitive content. This can help make the Arceus overviews feel more distinct while still retaining the quality Smogon analyses are known for. Remember, mostly competitive information, some flavor! After all, this is the God of Pokémon! NOTE: Comments are welcome on the Arceus-Ice overview. Like it? Needs less flavor? More competitive information? Just right? Quality Control? Sound off your opinion! SECOND NOTE: I would like to if possible reserve Arceus-Ghost and Arceus-Dragon.
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I think Superimp's post is pretty much spot on, sorry Chou but you got told.
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For what it's worth, the Arceus-Ice overview was basically the only thing I've ever contributed to the site, and I totally approve of Superimp's suggestions for it and the other overviews. Nice job!
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I have updated the OP with the new reservations, trickroom's nitpicks, Chou Toshio's Poison Arceus Overview, and Superimp's Ice Arceus Overview. Fantastic work, Chou and Superimp!
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Thank you Fatecrashers and Focus for your support.
I would like to take over user Chou Toshio's Arceus-Poison overview as: Quote:
On that note, I would like to reserve all remaining Arceus overviews except Arceus-Bug if possible. I have already finished the overviews of Arceus-Dragon, Arceus-Ghost, and Arceus-Poison. These will be edited into this post later today. Arceus-Ground will also be edited in. These Arceus overviews will follow in a new post soon: Arceus-Rock, Arceus-Steel, and Arceus-Fighting. Overviews are as follows: Arceus-Dragon Before:
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- Why should Rayquaza or Salamence be mentioned in the overview over the other Dragon-types unless they are specifically important? Although they have Dragon Dance (and Swords Dance for Rayquaza), I don't feel this is enough to warrant a specific mention in the overview. Also, most of the commonly used Dragon-types in Ubers already have a higher base attack than Arceus-Dragon. I have just mentioned this along with the advantages of His initial speed and bulk. Going on this note, why should Lugia’s Ice Beam be mentioned of all things? Isn’t mentioning Arceus-Dragon's superior bulk enough? - Do you really need to know that a +1 SpA Arceus-Dragon hits harder than an unboosted Palkia or Diagla barring Choice Specs? It’s very obvious already. Remember that this is an overview. - EDIT: Lugia's Ice Beam is now mentioned along with the overview being more explicit about Swords Dance and Calm Mind Arceus-Ghost Before:
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- The Swords Dance set is now mentioned in the overview - I got rid of the useless and repetitive information in the original overview to make it more concise. Statements such as “solid base 120 stats across the board” are unneeded as they are obvious information. - In my opinion, the flavor of the original Arceus-Ghost overview wasn’t that good. It was “heavy” at the first sentence but afterwards there was virtually none. Though the last sentence had flavor, it was quite cliché and long. It also wasn't that good. To remedy this, I changed the first sentence and added a flavorful last sentence which should be both less cliché and long. Better flavor was also added in between. - Instead of just adding the Swords Dance and Calm Mind sets, I added the Lead and Support sets. This is to reinforce the fact that Arceus-Ghost is very versatile. - The unresisted coverage part was taken out as according to the analysis, the Lead and Support sets don't have perfect neutral coverage. Also, all the Arceus formes could theoretically have unresisted coverage if they choose to. - For the offensive sets, I mentioned the Great Walls Lugia and Giratina as they are seen in many Stall teams. It is quite significant that Arceus-Ghost can break through both of them as they can be a problem for offensive teams (Though Swords Dance Arceus-Ghost can have trouble with Reflect Lugia). - Perhaps STAB Ghost-type attacks could be mentioned in more detail. EDIT: Maybe making it more clear that the Calm Mind set does better against Lugia and Giratina than the Swords Dance set could be implemented. Arceus-Ground Before:
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- I had to shorten the original overview considerably as there was useless information (See Arceus-Ghost for examples) and I made it more concise. The original also had no flavor whatsoever so I fixed that. - I neglected to mention that Ground is good neutral STAB along with Him having the 100 BP Earthquake and Judgment. I think everyone already knows that Ground is a good neutral STAB (though the multitude of Flying-types in Ubers is a con). Also, the fact Judgment and Earthquake are 100 BP is just too obvious. If you really think I should mention one of the two points, please inform me. - I might have written too many "ground" puns. I should be "grounded." Please tell me if you think there is too much flavor! Arceus-Poison Before:
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Comments: Credits go to the original B/W overview for flavor and user Chou Toshio for the competitive base. - I made Chou’s overview more concise as before it was an uninteresting wall of text. It has been shortened considerably while retaining all of the correct competitive content. - Chou’s overview has virtually no flavor so it was added to the first/last sentences along with a bit in between. - Just a nitpick, Arceus-Poison doesn’t really set up with impunity against Chansey or Blissey if they have Thunder Wave. However, Thunder Wave is listed as an Other Option. I could change the sentence if Quality Control feels that this statement is significant enough to warrant a change. - Even when Arceus-Poison sets up, it is not that significant of an offensive threat. - Comment Addressed by Furai - Implemented --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Feel free to comment on these overviews. If more (or less) competitive information or flavor is required, don't hesitate to give your opinion.
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I am editting your overviews in now, Superimp. I appreciate your willingness to help, but I'm afraid I cannot allow you to reserve all of the Arceus forms. This is a community project, not a one-man task. Doing them one-by-one is okay by me though.
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People need to know Arceus has Calm Mind. None of the other Dragons, Reshiram, Palkia or Dialga has it. Although it starts of weak, it can hit even harder than them at +1 because of Draco Plate and Judgment. Dialga only has Dragon Pulse for reliability and Spacial Rend can miss at the worst times. Quote:
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Also, I have permission from CottonPuff to take over Arceus-Fire. I have already finished it. All these overviews will be be edited into my next post later today due to the current length of this post. In regards to user Trickroom: Quote:
For Salamence and Rayquaza having boosting moves, I have already mentioned why you would use Him over them because He has greater initial speed and bulk over most Dragon-types (obviously not Giratina in terms of bulk). Also, I already mentioned Salamence/Rayquaza have boosting moves in my comments! Calm Mind was already mentioned in the overview so people would know He has it unless the Calm Mind set is too implicit. However, I could make it more explicit that other Dragon-types (Except the Lati Twins and Giratina) do not have Calm Mind. For Palkia/Diagla, my point was it's obvious that after a Calm Mind, Arceus-Dragon would hit harder than an unboosted Palkia/Diagla barring Choice Specs. After this post, if you still think it's necessary to mention Palkia/Diagla and/or Salamence/Rayquaza, please tell me and I will edit the Arceus-Dragon overview accordingly. Quote:
I think I implied that the Calm Mind set does better, but again, if you think I should make it more clear, just tell me. __________________________________________________ ____________________ Note: Please take the time to read my comments on each overview as they address any competitive concerns regarding the first post. Thanks.
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I don't think mentioning Salamence and Rayquaza is a must, just mention it can take an Ice Beam from Lugia unlike other Dragons. Demonstrating +1 Dragon Arceus's power is also overview material in my opinion, because when you look at the overview you want to know why you should use the Pokemon. +1 hitting harder than Palkia and Dialga is a huge bonus, as the two are very familiar in the Ubers metagame.
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Arceus-Dragon has been updated in my second post of this thread. The overviews for Arceus-Fire, Arceus-Rock, and Arceus-Steel will follow later today. Arceus-Fighting (which I would still like to reserve) will eventually follow. If possible, I would also like to reserve Arceus-Psychic. Overviews are as follows: Arceus-Fire Before:
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Comments: I took some flavor inspiration from the D/P overview. Thanks go to CottonPuff for giving me permission to put this up! - Reshiram along with Ho-Oh is mentioned. - Sun is mentioned, unless I’m reading this wrong and you don’t want it mentioned. - Got rid of useless information, added flavorful first and last sentences with a bit in between. - Arceus-Fire is also reliant on the sun to reach His full potential, something which is quickly removed by the sea titan Kyogre who can swiftly drown Him with the use of Choice Scarf. Comment Addressed by shrang - Although some of His fiery creations such as Reshiram and Ho-Oh have dual STABs and outclass even Him in firepower, He has superior initial speed and viable access to both Recover and Calm Mind. Thoughts? Comment Addressed by Furai - Implemented - Comment Addressed by Furai - Implemented Arceus-Rock Before:
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Comments: I took some flavor inspiration from the D/P overview. - Rayquaza is now mentioned explicitly in the overview. - I got rid of all the useless information along with certain clichés. I also added flavor to the first/last sentences and a bit in between. Last sentence is a bit shaky. If you have a better suggestion please tell me. - Kept the competitive information while making it more concise. - Finished (for now...). Arceus-Steel Before:
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Great work, Superimp! Before I implement them into the OP, I'll refer to your nitpicks:
Arceus-Fire: - Yeah, you understood correctly about sun, lol - The addition of "viable" to the sentence makes it much more correct, so implement it in! - I usually like seeing the name of the plate in the overview, because searching for it in PO or PS can be a total headache. Arceus-Rock: - Last thing above! When you finish editting the overview, highlight me via a VM or PM, and I'll swiftly edit it in Arceus-Steel: - ...yeah patch up that last sentence. I'll think of it as well, and post it here when I get it. |
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Didnt notice this till today. So gonna post my comments / nitpicks about stuff.
Bug Arceus - Agree with trickroom but one thing about the overview is that the overview should reflect that Bug Arceus is the WORST Arceus forme and should never really be used except for exceptional cases or soemthing. No euphemisms please. Dark Arceus - Quote:
Electric Arceus - A thunder mention for rain seems kinda stuff for set comments or additional comments not really suitable for an overview. More relevant stuff to mention, Electric Arceus is one of the few CM Arceus which can beat Ho-Oh / Kinda difficult to fit Electric Arceus in / Ferrothorn makes it less good. Arceus Ghost: Looks good but mention how it forms the best glue for most teams which need a ghost type. Its a spinblocker / offensive pivot / tank / setup sweeper all rolled into one. Arceus Fighting - Mention that this is possibly the most anti metagame Arceus variant thanks to taking on Ferrothorn easily. Also give a mention to the fact that Arceus fighting can take on ExtremeKiller with consumate ease with a bit of bulk and wow. Ground Arceus: Heh, still a lot of flavor in this, a bit too much for my liking but w/e. But some which needs to be certainly added: instead of giving a flavor mention to his electric immunity, it'd be better to mention that Ground Arceus is a magnificent offensive pivot on Rain teams due to its Electric resist and on the whole has good synergy with the members on ubers rain offense. Steel Arceus: Quote:
Water Arceus: Mention that while it might be counter intuitive Arceus water has very good functional and type synergy on sun teams and forms one of the most reliable Kyogre checks. Since a clever Kyogre user can easily take Palkia out with repeated Thunders / hazards / blah blah, Scarf Palk weak as fuck etc etc Taking up Arceus Grass and Fighting.
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Arceus-Rock has been updated and PMed. Arceus-Steel has been updated. I just switched around the first/last sentence and tweaked it. Tell me what you think of it now! Arceus-Poison has been "updated" by Furai (Toxic Plate). Thanks! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- In reply to user barry4ever's comments: Quote:
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). The point that Arceus-Ground is a good pivot for rain teams is now added. It is to be noted that it is a little obvious that He is a good pivot on rain teams due to His electric immunity. Also, the fact He has good synergy is kind of obvious and so was not mentioned. If you still disagree, please tell me!Arceus-Ground has been updated. I have not looked at the ground puns yet though. Quote:
However, I feel this fact is explicit enough. Choice Scarf and Choice Specs Kyogre are almost a complete stop to Calm Mind Arceus-Steel lacking Thunder, as He eventually falls to its powerful Water Spouts/Surfs. Physical Arceus-Steel is destroyed by Choice Scarf Kyogre if it can switch in on a Swords Dance. Also, Ferrothorn can be a massive thorn in Arceus-Steel's side, Thunder Waving Him as well as Leech Seeding. This reduces Arceus-Steel's capability to take on stall-teams. I feel that the Blissey/Chansey mention is adequate enough for Arceus-Steel's stallbreaking capabilities. Without Will-O-Wisp, Arceus-Steel has a harder time with Extreme Killer(who may actually be Wallceus who would then wall the physical version completely). Even if He does carry Will-O-Wisp, the uncommon Jolly Life Orb Extreme Killer can win the speed tie and OHKO Him with Earthquake. Of course, Will-O-Wisp can miss. My main point is that some of your points are not significant enough to warrant a change. Still disagree? Please respond if applicable! _____________________________________ Also... :( You can have Arceus-Psychic if you want (or anyone else), I would just like to if possible take on Arceus-Fighting please.
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The OP has been updated with the new overviews and a few more guidelines with a few points spotted by Superimp.
@Donkey - Bring it on! Just reserve your Arceus Form and get to work. @Barry - lol sorry man, Superimp did reserve Arceus-Fighting before you. :( @Superimp - All has been updated! I'm afraid I cannot let you take Psychic Arceus because someone else might want it before you even get the chance to complete the ones you're already working on. Keep up the great work guys! |
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Okay, we have slacked enough, time to keep it up again! Arceus-Normal is up for grabs as Poppy quit C&C.
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