Separate names with a comma.
Discussion in 'Locked / Outdated Analyses' started by Server_Crash, Jan 25, 2011.
All right, this looks good.
QC Approved: 1/2
The first stamp in my history of LC QC. =)
Thanks, congrats on joining the QC team.
Seems good though I'm just going to do a quick lookover for illegal moves "just in case"
EDIT: all good!
anyways, the one thing that bugged me is line in Counters:
IDK this makes it sound like Anorith is Fighting-weak (gunk doesn't commonly run Bullet Punch so...). Maybe there's a way to reword this?
preemptive stamp though.
I'll just say that it's susceptible to priority for now and see how GP wants to word it.
Please change this to the new format. Also use the English names for Pokemon and items.
Since the GP team seem to have their hands full with the OU analyses, I shall do a quick check of this:
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Scrapped Machop to resolve the issue with the Fighting weakness. Should this feel unclearly or inaccurately worded to anybody from GP or QC, feel free to do something about it. In a bout of overzealousness I also exchanged the oblique apostrophes for ASCII typewriter ones to avoid any possible confliction with the guidelines; unnecessary, MAYBE, but it's better to be safe than sorry.
On another note: I didn't take it upon myself to reformat this, so that still remains on the to-do list...
for future reference, there's no need to be complex with your checks.
just use blue for additions/edits and red for removals. you can always add comments in a different color explaining what the change was if it's unnoticable.
capitalizations go under blue editing as well - this makes it easier on the eyes and simpler to understand.
aside from this, there is one tiny error;
Aside from this, the check looks pretty good for a first check.
Badal is taking this over. Moving.