Azumarill (BW2 Revamp)

[alexwolf]

Am check implemented, thx Nutrix!

 

[Nutrix]

Oh whoops, I missed something. In the Checks and Counter paragraph:

and can KO it or setup on it.

should be "and can KO or set up on it."

EDIT: Hang on, I missed another thing; in the Set Comments paragraph:

Aqua Jet is an amazing revenge killing tool that OHKOes many offensive Pokemon

"OKHOes" should probably be "OHKOs."

 

[tehy]

Yo just a quick idea I had

You've got 2 long lists. Why not sort them, start with those that are Ohko'd by superpower and then end with those that are 2hitko'd by Superpower;then say that the first (Say, 3), are ohko'd, while the last (say,4) or just the rest are OHKO'D.

As for the second, same but with Ice punch, lead with OHKO and end with OHKO after Sr. Just say the last (say, 2) need SR.

 

[Redew]

gonna check that amcheck

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edit: wait

in OO the sentence that says

Water + Fighting moves provide really good coverage, (AC) and Azumarill has the ability to get a free Substitute against a Pokemon that can't deal more than 75% damage or more to it while if Azumarill can OHKO back with Aqua Jet.

Such Pokemon are include Tentacruel, Bbulky Dragon Dance Gyarados, Amoonguss, Rotom-W, Venusaur, offensive Kyurem-B, Kyurem, Dragon Dance Dragonite with Roost, Breloom, Calm Mind Latias, and Starmie.

i added my additions in green so this is good to go!

 

[alexwolf]

Thx, this is ready!

 

[PK Gaming]

3, 2, 1

uploading