Hi, welcome to the studio! And are Kirlia and Gallade Normal/Psychic?
First off I must say I really like your style of using hatching for highlights and shading; I find that really unique and I think you should continue doing this! Also, your fusions are well executed too!
For advice, maybe try cross hatching for shading? I think with cross hatching, it will give your shading a little more depth. You don't have to take this advice if you don't want to through.
Keep up the great work and since you are taking requests, a Houndoom/Mightyena fusion?