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First Gen V team!!!!

Discussion in 'BW OU Teams' started by TheOctilleryKing, Dec 12, 2010.

  1. TheOctilleryKing

    TheOctilleryKing

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    Hello everyone, It's my first time making a competitive team for Gen V. Im not very familure with this meta-game bu i've tryed this team out on PO and it seems decent buti know there has to be someting big wrong. Anyways here is my team please help it will b much appreciated :)



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    Borutorosu (M) @ Life Orb
    Trait: Mischievous Heart
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
    Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
    - Taunt
    - Thunderbolt
    - Grass Knot / HP Ice
    - Volt Change



    Pretty solid lead. Hits stuff hard. With taunt, volt change can cause some trouble for some leads. Thunderbolt for a good STAB move and Grass knot to cover those ground types. I have HP ice up with grass knot because i really dont know which is better for it. Im willing to change this pokemon to a completely new Lead.






    Breloom @ Shed Shell 244HP / 252 Atk / 12 Spe
    - Mach Punch
    - Seed Bomb
    - Sword Dance
    - Spore


    Mach punch for doryuuzu. Spore is to help the lte game sweep i can do with swords dance seed bomb and mach punch. Shed shell is to get ou of shandera.


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    Scizor (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Technician
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Bullet Punch
    - Swords Dance
    - Bug Bite
    - Brick Break



    What do you not know already about this. I use this as a late game sweeper or to revenge kill. I have leftovers for some HP back every turn. Great typing which i love. Bug bite for STAB, bullet punch for priority and brick break for some coverage with out losing attack and defence.


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    Burungeru (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Water Absorb
    EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SDef
    Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
    - Surf
    - Shadow Ball
    - Recover
    - Will-O-Wisp


    SDef wall. Nuff said. I love this is takes hits gives hits and can stall if needed. I was thinking vaporeon would be nice to have but this is better due to typing and moves. Wil-o-wisp to make my defence look better and recover damage done.


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    Heatran (M) @ Choice Scarf
    Trait: Flash Fire
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
    Rash Nature (+SAtk, -SDef)
    - Earth Power
    - Fire Blast
    - Explosion
    - Dragon Pulse


    Great revenger, this with scizor work well late game for sweeping. which i do. Its a standard scarf set not very orginal but gets it done :p Dragon pulse over HP, because it hits all dragon types. Explosion to get rid of really big threat that i have nothing to deal with it.





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    Doryuuzu (M) @ Life Orb
    Trait: Sand Throw
    EVs: 16 HP / 252 Atk / 240 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Earthquake
    - Swords Dance
    - X-Scissor / Rapid Spin
    - Rock Slide


    This is to work with the ever so popular sandstorm team. With EV's to out speed the standard Doryuuzu i can knock it out and continue to sweep. Without sandstom, it still hits hard, just not as fast. Don't know about rapid spin. everything seem to be using spike now and the hit most of my team.







    So that is my team. Feel free to say anything. Changes will be in RED.

    Thanks,
    OctilleryKing
  2. Haunter

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    You need to expand most of your descriptions or I'll lock this thread under rule 3.
  3. TheOctilleryKing

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  4. Cicada

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    You're weak to Doryuuzu and it's unforgiveable on this metagame. Try out Technician Breloom in place of Tangrowth, it can fixe out this problem.

    Breloom @ Shed Shell (For Shanderaa @Shadow Tag)
    244HP / 252 Atk / 12 Spe
    -> Mach Punch
    -> Seed Bomb
    -> Sword Dance
    -> Spore

    I'll expend my rate later. Good luck.
  5. Server_Crash

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    4 hour bump, really? How has this team been doing? It's pretty ballsy to run Dory without weather support, and at this stage of the meta, to run no weather pokes. You are completely at the mercy of Ninetales/Politoed. Switching Tangrowth to Hippowdon will help remedy your weather problem and give you a physically bulky pokemon, instead of two special walls. It also can reliable heal itself, instead of having to deal with entry hazards to heal with Tangrowth. I also think that Vaporeon would be better than Pringles bc it would keep your momentum going, as this is an offensive team, while still providing defense and WISH support, which is very nice, especially with its boos this gen.
  6. TheOctilleryKing

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    Thanks, Im just not fond of how fragile it is.. it does its job but if i need it early its not so great.

    Switched burungeru with vaporeon. Works well with team.

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