I Feel like Dying..My first Warstory (Venom vs StrikeJP)

Venom

red eyes no visine
is a Team Rater Alumnus
My first Warstory. I really didn't know what to expect from this, but shit, ill try to do my best doing this warstory. My Shoddy name is "90Kilos", but ill make it Venom, so theres no Confusion.

Venom



StrikeJP



Rules:
Evasion Clause
Extended Game
OHKO Clause
Sleep Clause
Species Clause
Timed Battle

6 - 6

StrikeJP sent out Bronzomg (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Venom sent out Gyarados (lvl 100 Gyarados ).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Bronzomg's attack!
StrikeJP switched in Vaporeon (lvl 100 Vaporeon ).
Gyarados used Taunt.
Vaporeon fell for the taunt!
---
I don't know, maybe it has Hidden Power Electric, maybe not...
Venom switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ).
Vaporeon used Hidden Power.
Blissey lost 7% of its health.
Blissey 's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Ok, now i know what that Vaporeon does. So ill keep that in mind for later.
StrikeJP switched in Bronzomg (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Blissey used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Bronzomg lost 7% of its health.
Bronzomg was frozen solid!
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---

Guess lady luck is a little early today. Although it's frozen, im not gonna get that Confident.

Venom switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ).
Bronzomg was defrosted!
Bronzomg used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
---
Lol. Like i said, don't get too confident..

StrikeJP switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Heracross used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
Zapdos lost 37% of its health.
Zapdos's leftovers restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.
---
Well, this can't be good, this is my first time facing a Zapdos. I really don't know what to do.

Venom switched in
Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ).
Pointed stones dug into
Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Zapdos used Thunderbolt.
Blissey lost 15% of its health.
Blissey is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Zapdos's leftovers restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
I expected it to use something like this...Now is he going to switch or not?

StrikeJP switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
Blissey used Aromatherapy.
The sandstorm rages.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Just to be safe, i used Aromatherapy. Now i got a T-Tar..great. What to do now? Alot of things were happening through my Mind right now. Is it a CB T-tar? A Tyraboah? Is that why he wants me to switch?

Venom switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Pointed stones dug into Bronzong.
Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
Tyranitar used Stone Edge.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 31% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
CB T-tar. I guess i should stick with Bronzong either to kill it, or lure it away.

StrikeJP switched in Bronzomg (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Bronzomg fell asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
Ok, i got one of his Pokemon asleep. Now to set-up while i can.

Bronzong used Stealth Rock.
Bronzomg is fast asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
I guess this is a good chance to bring something that can hurt Bronzong, i think..

Venom switched in Gyarados (lvl 100 Gyarados ).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Bronzomg's attack!
Pointed stones dug into Gyarados.
Gyarados lost 25% of its health.
Bronzomg is fast asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Gyarados is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health.
Gyarados's leftovers restored its health a little!
Gyarados restored 6% of its health.
---
Bronzong is sure like to sleep. Now here, i though of that Vaporeon he had. I really didn't want to waterfall, in case that Vaporeon comes out and get's a Free heal, so i might as well Dragon Dance and see what happens..

StrikeJP switched in Vaporeon (lvl 100 Vaporeon ).
Pointed stones dug into Vaporeon.
Vaporeon lost 12% of its health.
Gyarados used Dragon Dance.
Gyarados's attack was raised.
Gyarados's speed was raised.
The sandstorm rages.
Gyarados is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health.
Vaporeon is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Vaporeon lost 6% of its health.
Gyarados's leftovers restored its health a little!
Gyarados restored 6% of its health.
Vaporeon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Vaporeon restored 6% of its health.
---
Yeah, just like i predicted. Im not sure why, but im gonna use Return, i think my Gyarados can survive the Hidden Power IIRC from my last encounter with one of those.

Gyarados used Return.
A critical hit!
Vaporeon lost 71% of its health.
Vaporeon used Hidden Power.
It's super effective!
Gyarados lost 68% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Gyarados is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health.
Vaporeon is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Vaporeon lost 6% of its health.
Gyarados's leftovers restored its health a little!
Gyarados restored 6% of its health.
Vaporeon's leftovers restored its health a little!
Vaporeon restored 6% of its health.
---
I knew my badass Gyrados could take it! Now if im gonna Return again, in case he decides to leave his Vaporeon in, because i don't wanna give him a heal with waterfall.

StrikeJP switched in Bronzomg (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Pointed stones dug into Bronzomg.
Bronzomg lost 6% of its health.
Gyarados used Return.
It's not very effective...
Bronzomg lost 22% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Gyarados is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health.
Gyarados's leftovers restored its health a little!
Gyarados restored 6% of its health.
---
Well, it's Bronzong again. Im gonna waterfall this time, to see if i can make some Damage.

Gyarados used Waterfall.
Bronzomg lost 49% of its health.
Bronzomg is fast asleep!
The sandstorm rages.
Gyarados is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health.
Gyarados's leftovers restored its health a little!
Gyarados restored 6% of its health.
---
Guess that did some hurting. His probably gonna expect another waterfall, so im gonna return, fuck this.

StrikeJP switched in Vaporeon (lvl 100 Vaporeon ).
Pointed stones dug into Vaporeon.
Vaporeon lost 12% of its health.
Gyarados used Return.
Vaporeon lost 36% of its health.
StrikeJP's Vaporeon fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Gyarados is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Gyarados lost 6% of its health.
Gyarados's leftovers restored its health a little!
Gyarados restored 6% of its health.
---
6-5

Yeah! Just as i had predicted! Now my gyarados threat is gone. Although i don't think it's gonna live for much longer.

StrikeJP switched in Garchomp (lvl 100 Garchomp ).
Pointed stones dug into Garchomp.
Garchomp lost 6% of its health.
Garchomp used Crunch.
Gyarados lost 33% of its health.
Venom's Gyarados fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
---
5 - 5

Well, know that i know it's Scarfed, i know what to do. Good Job gyarados, you really showed me your a Venom Proud pokemon.

Venom switched in Swampert (lvl 100 Swampert ).
Pointed stones dug into Swampert.
Swampert lost 6% of its health.
StrikeJP switched in Bronzomg (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Pointed stones dug into Bronzomg.
Bronzomg lost 6% of its health.
Swampert used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Bronzomg lost 8% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Swampert's leftovers restored its health a little!
Swampert restored 6% of its health.
---
I expected for the Garchomp to stay in, but i guess not. m gonna Ice Beam again, either way Garchomp comes, or Bronzong dies.

Swampert used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Bronzomg lost 8% of its health.
StrikeJP's Bronzomg fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
---
5 - 4

Well, the garchomp didn't come. Now that bronzong is dead, i really don't know what else he has, im sure he has a CB T-Tar, which my cresselia is in great danger.

StrikeJP switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ).
Pointed stones dug into Infernape.
Infernape lost 12% of its health.
Venom switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ).
Pointed stones dug into Cresselia.
Cresselia lost 12% of its health.
Infernape used Grass Knot.
Cresselia lost 19% of its health.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Infernape is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Infernape lost 6% of its health.
Cresselia is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Cresselia lost 6% of its health.
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
---
Aight, good good. Now for the Phychic, which in that time, i totally forgot about the t-tar.

StrikeJP switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Pointed stones dug into Tyranitar.
Tyranitar lost 12% of its health.
Cresselia used Psychic.
It doesn't affect Tyranitar...
The sandstorm rages.
Cresselia is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Cresselia lost 6% of its health.
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
---
Well, this is bad, very bad. Now that his here, i know 2 things, either stay and ger raped, or Switch out although cress is going to take a Huge hit anyways, switch i guess.

Tyranitar used Pursuit.
It's super effective!
Cresselia lost 68% of its health.
Venom switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Pointed stones dug into Bronzong.
Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
There goes the pursuit. It really hurt cresselia, but bronzong should take care of T-Tar...atleast for now.

StrikeJP switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Zapdos.
Zapdos lost 25% of its health.
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Bronzong's attack missed!
The sandstorm rages.
Zapdos is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Zapdos lost 6% of its health.
Zapdos's leftovers restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
Haha...shit. It missed. Lady Luck, why are you so fucking cruel?

Venom switched in
Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ).
Pointed stones dug into
Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Zapdos used Roost.
Zapdos restored 50% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Zapdos is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Zapdos lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Zapdos's leftovers restored its health a little!
Zapdos restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Well, i guess i should send out Infernape, since Blissey can take any of Zapdos hits.

StrikeJP switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ).
Pointed stones dug into Infernape.
Infernape lost 12% of its health.
Blissey used Softboiled.
Blissey restored 50% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Infernape is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Infernape lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
I guess he hates Blissey and Cresselia. He sure has 2 good counters for both.


Venom switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ).
Pointed stones dug into Heracross.
Heracross lost 12% of its health.
Infernape used Close Combat.
It's not very effective...
Heracross lost 43% of its health.
Infernape's defence was lowered.
Infernape's special defence was lowered.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Infernape is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Infernape lost 6% of its health.
Heracross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Heracross lost 6% of its health.
---
I might be able to scare it off, thinking it's a Choice Scarf. If he switched into Zapdos, i have a surprise for it.

StrikeJP switched in Zapdos (lvl 100 Zapdos).
Zapdos is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Zapdos.
Zapdos lost 25% of its health.
Heracross used Stone Edge.
It's super effective!
Zapdos lost 90% of its health.
StrikeJP's Zapdos fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Heracross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Heracross lost 6% of its health.
---
5 - 3

Oh shit! I predicted right!

StrikeJP switched in Garchomp (lvl 100 Garchomp ).
Pointed stones dug into Garchomp.
Garchomp lost 6% of its health.
Venom switched in Swampert (lvl 100 Swampert ).
Pointed stones dug into Swampert.
Swampert lost 6% of its health.
Garchomp used Outrage.
Garchomp went on a rampage!
A critical hit!
Swampert lost 94% of its health.
Venom's Swampert fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
---
4 - 3

It's the scarfed chomp. I really need to switch here, because heracross is really not in the shape take any hits from him. I switch, and Lady Luck hates me again, making a Crit the Outrage, Killing my Swampert. Fucking Lady Luck, had you had enough yet!?

Venom switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Pointed stones dug into Bronzong.
Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
Garchomp used Outrage.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 23% of its health.
Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
Garchomp lost 44% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
Bronzong should take it from here right now, possibly killing garchomp with several Gyro Balls.

Garchomp used Outrage.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 27% of its health.
Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
Garchomp lost 43% of its health.
Garchomp's rampage ended.
Garchomp became confused!
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
Ok, now that it's confused, this shouldn't be a problem...
Garchomp is confused!
Garchomp used Outrage.
Garchomp went on a rampage!
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 24% of its health.
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Bronzong's attack missed!
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
What the fuck?! Outrage again and my Hypnosis missed? I was really pissed off right here, although idk why i didn't Gyro Ball instead of Hypnosis.

Garchomp is confused!
Garchomp used Outrage.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 26% of its health.
Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
Garchomp lost 43% of its health.
StrikeJP's Garchomp fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Bronzong's leftovers restored its health a little!
Bronzong restored 6% of its health.
---
4 - 2

Ok, Garchomp is down, good. Now to wait for something else, either to die or Kill, prolly die.

StrikeJP switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Pointed stones dug into Tyranitar.
Tyranitar lost 12% of its health.
Tyranitar used Crunch.
Bronzong lost 56% of its health.
Venom's Bronzong fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
---
3 - 2

Yeah, either way it was going to die. Good Job Bronzong.


Venom switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ).
Pointed stones dug into Heracross.
Heracross lost 12% of its health.
Heracross used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Tyranitar lost 769% of its health.
StrikeJP's Tyranitar fainted.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
The sandstorm rages.
Heracross is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Heracross lost 6% of its health.
---
3 - 1

Wow lol, "Tyranitar lost 769% of its health."

StrikeJP switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ).
Pointed stones dug into Infernape.
Infernape lost 12% of its health.
Infernape used Flamethrower.
It's super effective!
Heracross lost 302% of its health.
Venom's Heracross fainted.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Infernape is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Infernape lost 6% of its health.
---
2 - 1

Well, it's over. I could not trick him, cuz i was Choice Banded. Now he is gonna finish me off.
Venom switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ).
Pointed stones dug into Cresselia.
Cresselia lost 12% of its health.
Venom's Cresselia fainted.
Venom switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ).
Pointed stones dug into
Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Infernape used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
Strip4Food lost 99% of its health.
Venom's Strip4Food fainted.
StrikeJP wins!

0 - 1

Good Game StrikeJP! Gah, his infernape had 6-10% HP Left. This was a very good match for me, one of the Best matched i have done in Months.

Props
  • Gyarados surviving the Vaporeon's Hidden Power Electric.
  • Blissey for taking care of Zapdos, a pokemon i had never faced before.
  • I thought this was a good battle.
  • Bronzong for getting frozen.
  • A very good predicting of me Stone Edge'ing Zapdos in a switch
  • JP for giving me a awesome match.
Slops

  • Cresselia for not doing anything in the battle, besides getting raped by T-Tar.
  • Garchomp for hitting when it was Confused for 2 times in a row.
  • Some more things i can't remember.
 
I think one thing that would really help, in addition to the nick names, would be to put down the score every time something gets KO'd. Other than that, there were a few mistakes, but this was a good battle. That Hera predicting the Zapdos and Stone Edging was pretty cool.
 

Taylor

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Yeah, the story was good, but a score on the remaining Pokemon would've been easier to follow. None the less, good battle.
 
it was a pretty good battle. Better to post a warstory now than as your first post (we all apreciate it).

There wasn't crazy prediction, but there weren't any major/costly mistakes either.

I didn't know how close it was until you told us though (you should put the scores, I would have thought you lost badly).

Nicknames weren't so bad

Those are my only suggestions.
Nice warstory
 

Venom

red eyes no visine
is a Team Rater Alumnus
I really suck at making warstorys..but Thanks for the comments, and ill be editing the nicknames and adding the scores.
 
Blissey's nicknamed Strip4food are pretty common now.
The story looks a lot better now that you Bolded the battle and added in the scores. Great match as well, sometimes running Band>Scarf on Hera costs me the game as well.
 

Venom

red eyes no visine
is a Team Rater Alumnus
Blissey's nicknamed Strip4food are pretty common now.
The story looks a lot better now that you Bolded the battle and added in the scores. Great match as well, sometimes running Band>Scarf on Hera costs me the game as well.
I think he had a good prediction, but when you switch a heracross into a Infernape, and you know Ape is faster, that's when you think it's scarfed, and it's really choice banded.
 
Yup, that was a good game. A couple of instances were luck on my part, the battle could have really gone anyway.

This battle wasn't a super-prediction war, but more of a just really intense and close battle, which are always the best.
 

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