Kabutops QC



Kabutops

Overview
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+ Can work as a very good sweeper once set up with Swords dance
+ Gets access to priority and a set up move.
+ With AV it can work as a really good pivot due to rock and water typing (HP ice)
+ gets acces to weak amour which boosts your speed when getting hit by a physical attack.
+ It get access to swift swim which makes it a good rain sweeper
- gets killed right away by grass moves
- its speed is 284 at max and jolly
- its Spa defenses are not that great without the Assault vest

Swords Dance
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name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Stone Edge
move 3: Aqua Jet
move 4: Waterfall / Knock Off
Ability: Weak Armor / Swift Swim
item: Life Orb / Focus Sash / Lum Berry
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
nature: Jolly / Adamant

Moves
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- Swords dance lets it set up and late game sweep
- You can run knock off to smack ghosts and gives you more coverage
- stone edge and water are its greatest stabs which hit hard with +2 boost
- Aqua jet for the priority for its average speed

Set Details
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- EV spread is just standard to a sweeper
- you can run adamant for more power and use aqua jet for speed
- Jolly for more speed and to out speed more pokes and be able to stone edge/waterfall more

Usage Tips
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- since this is a sweeper, you don't really want to be using this as a pivot as kabutops will be weakened and not being able to do its late game cleaning as it can be killed by priority or by Life Orb.
- You can run sash so it will be more easy to set up
- LO is used for more power to better ensure kills


Team Options
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- Pokemon that can take grass types and can have well synergy with it. (escavaleir, durant, bravaiary,)
- If you are not running lum berry then you could carry a pivot to will-o-wisp (flethinder,moltres,)
- Kabutops could really struggle with quagsire due to amazing physical defense so rotom-M works really well as you can kill with leaf storm and it also synergies well with it. taking earthquakes and any grass moves as its bulk can benefit kabutops

Assault Vest
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Name: Assault Vest
move 1: Stone Edge
move 2: Rapid Spin
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Aqua Jet
ability: Shell Armor / Weak Armor
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
nature: Jolly / Adamant

Moves
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- aqua jet is for priority
- knock off is for ghosts and eviolite users and more coverage for bulkier pokemon
- rapid spin is for hazard removal
- stone edge is one of kabutops best stabs

Set Details
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- Assault vest allows kabutops to work as a pivot and a hazard remover while living most hits.
- since its more of a bulkier poke with AV, i recommend running shell amour for no crits and not getting your physical defense lowered.
- You could also run weak amour just for the speed boost which is fine too
- max Atk and speed just for the best of kabutops potential and also allows offensive pressure as well as defensive.


Usage Tips
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- nice physical bulk and plus AV allows kabutops to be a great hazard remover
- Just because it has AV does not mean it can tank grass moves

Team Options
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- pokes that enjoy the hazard removing and synergies well are all great partners with kabutops
- moltres and flethinder really stand out to me because they can take nothing from grass attacks and kabutops can tank stone edges all day. You still will have to realize the electric weakness
- Escavaleir and durnat also are well partners because together the cover their biggest weakness, for escavaleir FIRE moves and for kautops, grass attacks

Other Options
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Checks and Counters
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-mach punch users
-faster pokemon
-grass moves
- bulky walls such as quagsire
 
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tehy

Banned deucer.
Swords Dance
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name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Stone Edge
move 3: Aqua Jet
move 4: Waterfall / Knock Off
Ability: Weak Armor / Swift Swim
item: Life Orb / Focus Sash / Lum Berry
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
nature: Jolly / Adamant

and

Assault Vest
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Name: Assault Vest
move 1: Stone Edge
move 2: Rapid Spin
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Aqua Jet
ability: Shell Armor / Weak Armor
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
nature: Jolly / Adamant


Other Options is supposed to be for other things the Pokemon can do but aren't really good enough for a main set; you seem to have misplaced yours and placed it in Checks and Counters.

Also, are Mach Punch users really a big problem? In any case, many of them are bulky Fighting-types that wall you, and you can often tank a Mach Punch.

Rapid Spin should definitely be mentioned in the overview.

Also lol, i'm not deleting a comment because it makes you look bad
 
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This analysis is not really up to standards and all sections lack in detail and overall quality. It doesn't even mention why you run av, what pokemokn let's it check, and I don't really think SD is a viable set outside of dedicated rain. It also lacks checks and counters

Reject 1/3
 
pretty sure check and counter got deleted, ill fix it
and i got approved by milk for the SD set, do u still want me to take it off?
thx for all the tips, sorry if I'm skewing this analysis up, its my first :(
 

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