Haha, man you hit the nail on the head here. I noticed most of these things while drawing, but if you haven't already noticed, I lack motivation at times. :PAs you said that the girl was a warm up the neck is unporportional and is too long and stretched out so is the chin a little, but pretty good other wise.
As for the guy GO ASIANS!!! other than that i can't really find any thing wrong except for the hand/fingers which are too rigid and a little unpoportional (fingers) the position is also a little akward it should be more towards the body the palm (especially the edge) needs to be rotated a bit.
Hey i try my best :) also to give you some motivation if you can draw a togekiss (yes it's my fave pokemon) you'll get a cookie!Haha, man you hit the nail on the head here. I noticed most of these things while drawing, but if you haven't already noticed, I lack motivation at times. :P
Thanks a lot though! Your critique was like, right on the freakin' dot haha.
I am quite famished. I shall give it a shot.Hey i try my best :) also to give you some motivation if you can draw a togekiss (yes it's my fave pokemon) you'll get a cookie!