Mono-Colour-Team Brown

[Skorgrokalypse]

Hi guys,
I´m german, so sorry, if my english isn´t not soooo good.

I´m playing at a Mono-Colour-Tournament. The colour blue and Uber pokemon aren´t allowed.Here the list of pokemon by colour:http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/List_of_Pokemon_by_color
It will start at the 12th of January. The following clauses are activated:

-Sleep Clause
-Evasion Clause
-Species Clause
-OHKO Clause
-Selk-KO Clause

Now, here is my team:

Mamoswine@Focus-Sash
EVs:252 Atk/4 Def/252 Speed
Jolly nature
Abillity:Snow Cloak
-SR
-EQ
-Ice Shard
-Endeavor

Synergy:
-Fire goes to Hariyama/Heatran
-Ground goes to Dragonite
-Grass goes to Heatran/Dragonite
-Water goes to Dragonite
-Fight goes to Alakazam/Dragonite
-Steel goes to Heatran
-Stone goes to Dugtrio

but the most times i will stand in with Mamo, in hope to activate The Endeavor+ Priority combo.I will only switch in case of a Fake Off Infernape or things like that


Standard MamoLead

Hariyama@Leftovers
EVs:80 HP/172 Atk/252 Def/4 Speed
Impish nature
Abillity:Thick Fat
-Substitute
-Focus-Punch
-Ice Puch
-Payback

Synergy
-Psych goes to:Alakazam
-Fly goes to: Heatran

Switch in a physical sweeper without a very effective attack , sub and then attack

Dugtrio@Choice Band
EVs:4 HP/252 Atk/252 Speed
Jolly nature
Abillity:Arena Trap
-EQ
-SE
-Sucker Punch
-Aerial Ace

Synergy:
-Ice goes to Hariyama/Heatran
-Water goes to Dragonite
-Grass goes to Dragonite/Heatran

Trapps the foe and kills him.For sure i will only switch in pokemon, who are killed by dugtrio and lacks of levitate/flying type

Alakazam@Life Orb
Evs:4 HP/252 SpAtk/252 Speed
Abillity:Synchronize
Timid nature
-Substitute
-Psychic
-Focus Blast
-Signal Beam

Synergy:
-Dark goes to Hariyama/Heatran
-Bug goes to Hariyama/Heatran
-Ghost goes to Heatran

Special Sweeeper. Outspeeds all base 115s with max speed EVs and positive Speednature

Heatran@Shuca Berry
EVs:252 SpAtk/4 SpDef/252 Speed
Timid nature
Abillity:Flash Fire
-Dragon Pulse
-Earth Power
-Fire Blast
-Hidden Power Grass

Synergy:
-Ground goes to Dragonite, but for one Groundmove I can stay in, because of the berry
-Fight goes to Alakazam/Dragonite
-Water goes to Dragonite

A selfcreated set.It should have the best possible coverage, which is given by this 4 moves (anyway I think this)

Dragonite@ Life Orb
EVs:116 Atk/200 SpAtk/192 Speed
Mild nature
Abillity:Inner Focus
-Superpower
-Draco Meteor
-Flamethrower
-Roost

Synergy:
-Ice goes to Heatran
-Stone goes to Dugtrio
-Dragon goes to Heatran

Outspeedsmax Speed/positive speed nature Ttar. The mosteffective sweeper in this time, till now.

Yeah, what do you say about my team?What would you advance?For sure you can also make complete teamoffers.You can make them also with another colour, if you want to.How I said it is forbidden to use blue.

Yours sincerly,
Skorgrokalypse

P.S.: Sorry, if my english isn´t good

Edit:I forgot to write, that its played in the 4th Gen OU tier.So 5th gen is totally forbidden

 

[DarthChocoboz]

After looking at Brown's pokemon i think you are using completly the wrong stuff.

You're english was very good.

Infernape is a great lead.Hippo is too. Your choice i would advice Hippo as this gives you room for a mix ape so go with

Hippowdon @ Leftovers
Impish 252 HP 152 DEF 104 SP DEF
Stealth Rock
Earthquake
Roar
Slack Off

I think a little more Sp Def because in mono-color Leads might be random

other hippo sets http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/hippowdon

Next is Heatran

Scarf-tran is good although You do have mix-ape, entei and possibly dragonite there to be speciel and even alakazam.Specially defensive heatran works really well with Hippo but you also have noctowl for Sp Def wall although he is not the best.Hitmontop may also be a special wall although again not the best. Life orb tran might be the best your choice though.

more heatran sets here http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/heatran

The next few pokemon i would advise are Alakazam Dragonite [special wall dragonite works with heal bell btw] Infernape Regirock Mamoswine Lopunney entei hariyama starapador and dugtrio

Arcanine,Marowak,Primeape,Noctowl,Pinsir,Shedinja and The Hitmons all deserve their chance though.

Definatly Use Hippo and heatran however

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.

Also note that this is an OU team, having OU Pokemon.