Munchlax (QC 3/3) (GP 2/2)

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<p>Munchlax has great special bulk with Eviolite, allowing it to take hits from many special attackers in the tier. Thick Fat is also a great ability, and patches up Munchlax's lack of resistances; along with its special bulk, it can wall both Charizard and Jynx, two prominent threats in NU. It also has a usable 85 Attack, along with a decent offensive movepool, which means it can deliver decent blows to the opposition. However, Munchlax must rely on RestTalk for recovery, and with the fifth generation sleep mechanics, this can often lead to Munchlax being a deadweight without cleric support. Munchlax also has a weakness to Fighting-type moves, which can make it bait for threats such as Primeape and Sawk. In addition, while 85 Attack is decent, it is not always going to deal sufficient damage to bulkier opponents. Lastly, Munchlax is the slowest Pokemon in NU, which means it will always have to take damage in order to deal damage.</p>
 

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[Overview]

<p>Munchlax has great special bulk with Eviolite, allowing it to take hits from many special attackers in the tier. Thick Fat is also a great ability [removed ,] that and patches up Munchlax's lack of resistances. [changed ; to .] along with its special bulk In addition, it can wall both Charizard and Jynx, two prominent threats in NU. It Munchlax also has a usable base 85 Attack, along with a decent offensive movepool, which means it can be decently threatening to opposing Pokemon deliver decent blows to the opposition. However, Munchlax must rely on RestTalk for recovery, and with the fifth generation sleep mechanics, this can often lead to Munchlax being a deadweight without cleric support. Munchlax also has a weakness to Fighting-type moves, which can make it bait for threats such as Primeape and Sawk. While base 85 Attack is decent, it is not always going to deal sufficient damage. Lastly, Munchlax is the slowest Pokemon in NU, which means it will always have to take damage in order to deal some back damage.</p>

[SET]
name: RestTalk
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Body Slam
move 4: Whirlwind
item: Eviolite
ability: Thick Fat
nature: Careful
evs: 136 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>With great bulk from Eviolite, Munchlax makes for a very solid special wall [removed ,] and is capable of walling the majority of special attackers in the tier. Thick Fat also makes Munchlax one of the best answers to Charizard and Jynx in the tier, and allows it to stand out from its main competition, Lickilicky. This set is excellent on stall teams, but it is usually a hindrance on other kinds of teams due to it often causing its team to lose losing momentum. Rest serves as Munchlax's sole form of recovery, and while Rest is often a poor form of recovery with the sleep counter being reset upon switching the fifth generation sleep mechanics, Munchlax has enough bulk to survive until it awakens the sleep turns. Sleep Talk is useful, [comma] as it allows to allow Munchlax to be able to accomplish something while it is asleep [removed ,] and along with Thick Fat, makes Munchlax makes an excellent Jynx counter. Body Slam is used for a decently powerful STAB move that , and can also spread paralysis, [comma] which is useful against faster teams. Whirlwind prevents Munchlax from being becoming setup fodder [removed ,] and also racks up entry hazard damage.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EV spread gives Munchlax enough special bulk to take repeated Focus Blasts from Munchlax [wrong Pokemon?] after Stealth Rock, while also giving it enough physical bulk to withstand Psyshock. Munchlax's high HP stat makes maximum investment unnecessary. A Careful nature and Eviolite are chosen to further enhance Munchlax's special bulk. Thick Fat is chosen so that for Munchlax can to effectively beat Charizard and Jynx. Return is a usable option over Body Slam, as because although the power difference is not significant, it's lack of a paralysis effect can be useful for the lack of paralysis, as fully defensive teams may require being poisoned or burned instead prefer poison and burn over the paralysis.</p>

<p>Hazard support is advisable for Whirlwind to be utilized to its full effect; Garbodor, Roselia, and Scolipede are all ideal choices for this. Munchlax appreciates Heal Bell support in the event that it gets forced out of the battle while asleep in Rest; Misdreavus and Musharna are both excellent choices, and both have great synergy with Munchlax. The former is also very useful to spinblock the entry hazards that Munchlax appreciates so much. Alomomola is a great teammate for Munchlax as well, because it is being able to pass massive Wishes for it, while also walling physical attackers for Munchlax. Mandibuzz can also be useful as a secondary special wall that can also phaze to be a secondary special wall for Munchlax, and be able to phaze as well. Finally, Munchlax appreciates Rapid Spin support from Pokemon such as Torkoal and Wartortle to prevent it from being worn down easily; Torkoal and Wartortle are both great choices for this.</p>

[SET]
name: Offensive Tank
move 1: Body Slam / Return
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Pursuit
move 4: Toxic / Sleep Talk / Curse
item: Eviolite
ability: Thick Fat
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 120 Def / 136 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>This set takes on a more offensive approach with Munchlax [removed ,] and aims to not only take hits, but also hit decently hard in return. This variant of Munchlax fits on more offensive teams that are looking for Munchlax's unique defensive qualities, but also do not want to lose momentum with the standard RestTalk set. Body Slam serves as a strong and reliable STAB move, and the paralysis chance can be especially helpful for slower teams. Return, however, packs more power than Body Slam at the cost of the paralysis chance. Earthquake serves as a great coverage move, hitting Golem and Bastiodon for good damage. Pursuit is a useful move since Munchlax can trap Jynx [removed ,] and also take any attack anything from it with Thick Fat and solid special bulk. The last moveslot all depends on what role you need fulfilled you are looking for. Toxic wears down bulkier targets such as Tangela and Alomomola, making them easier to deal with later on. Sleep Talk, however, allows Munchlax to absorb Lovely Kiss from Jynx. Curse is a great boosting move to boost increase Munchlax's usable Attack stat to formidable levels, while also giving it great physical bulk as well.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EV spread gives Munchlax all of the needed power for it to be effective, while also giving it enough special bulk to withstand two Life Orb Hydro Pumps from Samurott, [comma] even after Stealth Rock. An Adamant nature is chosen to further enhance Munchlax's Attack, while Thick Fat allows it to endure hits from Charizard and Jynx. Garbodor and Scolipede can endure Fighting-type moves for Munchlax, while also providing entry hazard support. Misdreavus and Musharna can make a good core with Munchlax, [comma] while also being able to heal healing status with Heal Bell. Primeape is also a great teammate to remove Pokemon such as Probopass, while attracting Psychic-types and then using U-turn to effectively send Munchlax in. Finally, Alomomola can pass Wishes to Munchlax to keep it healthy so that it can to repeatedly check special threats.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>There aren't many viable options for Munchlax to consider aside from the ones listed. The elemental punches can be used as coverage options, but they don't provide much for Munchlax in general aside from Ice Punch's capacity to maim maiming Golurk. Zen Headbutt can be useful to pummel incoming Gurdurr and Sawk [removed ,] but has little utility otherwise. There are other offensive options such as Double-Edge, Rock Slide, Gunk Shot, Seed Bomb, and Last Resort, but Munchlax can't put any of these moves to good use. Amnesia and Defense Curl could be used to raise Munchlax's defensive stats; [changed , to ;] however, these are more often than not a waste of a moveslot. Finally, Munchlax can use Counter to absorb physical hits and hit back hard with its high HP stat.</p>

[Checks and Counters]

<p>Fighting-types such as Gurdurr, Primeape, and Sawk make great answers to Munchlax, as they are being able to remove it quickly, [comma] while Gurdurr also has enough bulk to take anything that Munchlax can throw at it the former has enough bulk to take anything from Munchlax. Golurk can also take most of what Munchlax has to offer and retaliate with heavy damage. Trick users Users of Trick, such as Rotom-S, can remove Munchlax's Eviolite to make it much less of a threat. Because of Munchlax has a middling Defense stat even with Eviolite, strong physical attackers such as Carracosta can deal heavy amounts of damage to it. Finally, wearing down Munchlax with constant entry hazard pressure will weaken it to the point where it cannot check any special threats.</p>
 
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[Overview]

<p>Munchlax has great special bulk with Eviolite, allowing it to take hits from many special attackers in the tier. Thick Fat is also a great ability that patches up Munchlax's lack of resistances. In addition, it can wall both Charizard and Jynx, two of the most prominent special threats in NU. Munchlax also has a usable base 85 Attack, (remove comma) along with a decent offensive movepool, which means it can be decently threatening to opposing Pokemon. However, Munchlax must rely on RestTalk for recovery, and with the fifth generation sleep mechanics, this can often lead to Munchlax being a deadweight without cleric support. Munchlax also has a weakness to Fighting-type moves, which can make it bait for threats such as Primeape and Sawk. While its base 85 Attack is decent, it is also not always going to deal sufficient damage. Lastly, Munchlax is the slowest Pokemon in NU, which means it will always have to take damage in order to deal some back.</p>

[SET]
name: RestTalk
move 1: Rest
move 2: Sleep Talk
move 3: Body Slam
move 4: Whirlwind
item: Eviolite
ability: Thick Fat
nature: Careful
evs: 136 HP / 120 Def / 252 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>With great bulk from Eviolite, Munchlax makes for a very solid special wall capable of walling the majority of special attackers in the tier. Thick Fat also makes Munchlax one of the best answers to Charizard and Jynx and allows it to stand out from its main competition, Lickilicky. This set is excellent on stall teams, but it is usually a hindrance on other kinds of teams due to it often causing its team to lose momentum. Rest serves as Munchlax's sole form of recovery, and while Rest it is often a poor form of recovery with the sleep counter being reset upon switching, Munchlax has enough bulk to survive until it awakens. Sleep Talk is useful, as it allows Munchlax to be able to accomplish something while asleep and (add comment) along with Thick Fat, makes Munchlax an excellent Jynx counter. Body Slam is used for a decently powerful STAB move that can also spread paralysis, which is useful against faster teams. Whirlwind prevents Munchlax from becoming setup fodder and also racks up entry hazard damage.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EV spread gives Munchlax enough special bulk to take repeated Focus Blasts from Jynx after Stealth Rock, while also giving it enough physical bulk to withstand Psyshock. Munchlax's high HP stat makes maximum investment unnecessary. A Careful nature and Eviolite are chosen to further enhance Munchlax's special bulk. Thick Fat is chosen so that Munchlax can effectively beat Charizard and Jynx. (you said this in set comments already) Return is a usable option over Body Slam, (remove comma) because (add comma) although the power difference is not significant, its lack of a paralysis effect chance can be useful, as fully defensive teams may might prefer to spread poison and burn instead.</p>

<p>Hazard Entry hazard support is advisable for Whirlwind to be utilized to its full effect; Garbodor, Roselia, and Scolipede are all ideal choices for this. Munchlax appreciates Heal Bell support in the event that it gets forced out of the battle while asleep; Misdreavus and Musharna are both excellent choices, and both have great synergy with Munchlax. The former is also very useful to spinblock the entry hazards that Munchlax appreciates so much. Alomomola is a great teammate for Munchlax as well, since as it is able to pass massive Wishes for it, (remove comma) while also walling and also wall physical attackers. Mandibuzz can also be useful as a secondary wall that can also phaze. Finally, Munchlax appreciates Rapid Spin support from Torkoal and Wartortle to prevent it from being worn down easily.</p>

[SET]
name: Offensive Tank
move 1: Body Slam / Return
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Pursuit
move 4: Toxic / Sleep Talk / Curse
item: Eviolite
ability: Thick Fat
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 Atk / 120 Def / 136 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>This set takes on a more offensive approach with Munchlax and aims to not only to (either move the to here or add one between 'also' and 'hit' for parallel structure) take hits, (remove comma) but also hit decently hard in return. This variant of Munchlax fits on more offensive teams that are looking for Munchlax's unique defensive qualities, but also do not want to lose momentum with the standard RestTalk set. Body Slam serves as a strong and reliable STAB move, and the paralysis chance can be especially helpful for slower teams. Return, however, packs more power than Body Slam at the cost of the paralysis chance. Earthquake serves as a great coverage move, hitting Golem and Bastiodon for good damage. Pursuit is a useful move since as Munchlax can trap Jynx with it and also take any attack from it of its attacks with Thick Fat and solid special bulk. The last moveslot all depends on what role you need fulfille fulfilled. Toxic wears down bulkier targets such as Tangela and Alomomola, making them easier to deal with later on. Sleep Talk, however, allows Munchlax to absorb Lovely Kiss from Jynx. Curse is a great boosting move to increase Munchlax's usable Attack stat to formidable levels, while giving it great physical bulk as well.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EV spread gives Munchlax all of the needed power needed for it to be effective, while also giving it enough special bulk to withstand two Life Orb Hydro Pumps from Samurott, even after Stealth Rock. An Adamant nature is chosen to further enhance Munchlax's Attack, while and Thick Fat allows it to endure hits from Charizard and Jynx. Garbodor and Scolipede can endure Fighting-type moves for Munchlax, while also providing and can also provide entry hazard support. Misdreavus and Musharna can make a good core with Munchlax, while also being able to status and can also heal status with Heal Bell. Primeape is also a great teammate to remove Pokemon such as Probopass, (remove comma) while attracting and attract Psychic-types and then using to use U-turn to on and send Munchlax in. Finally, Alomomola can pass Wishes to Munchlax to keep it healthy so that it can repeatedly check special threats.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>There aren't many viable options for Munchlax to consider aside from the ones listed. The elemental punches can be used as coverage options, but they don't provide much for Munchlax in general aside from Ice Punch being able to maim Golurk. Zen Headbutt can be useful to pummel incoming Gurdurr and Sawk but has little utility otherwise. There are Munchlax has other offensive options such as Double-Edge, Rock Slide, Gunk Shot, Seed Bomb, and Last Resort, but Munchlax it can't put any of these moves to good use. Amnesia and Defense Curl could be used to raise Munchlax's defensive stats; however, these are more often than not a waste of a moveslot. Finally, Munchlax can use Counter to absorb physical hits and hit back hard with its high HP stat.</p>

[Checks and Counters]

<p>Fighting-types such as Gurdurr, Primeape, and Sawk make great answers to Munchlax, as they are able to remove it quickly while and Gurdurr also has enough bulk to take anything that Munchlax has to offer. Golurk can also take most of what Munchlax has to offer and retaliate with for heavy damage. Trick users, such as Rotom-S, can remove Munchlax's Eviolite to make it much less of a threat. Because Munchlax has a middling Defense stat even with Eviolite, strong physical attackers such as Carracosta can deal heavy amounts of damage to it. Finally, wearing down Munchlax with constant entry hazard pressure will weaken it to the point where it cannot check any special threats.</p>


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