[Paint Work] Ho-Oh

Hey guys o/ I'm no good with Photoshop, but I'm very good drawing with Paint. See this:

Put it into Spoilers because the image is too big. What do you think??? And yes, I've made this in Paint. When I have other pics, I will post here ^^
Quite nice work there, especially for Paint. IMO the wings and tail are a bit jagged, it would be nicer if they were more rounded. And I'm interested to see what would happen with shading =D
Just mah two cents, hope they helped
What RitterCat said. Also if you make any more art, just add it to this thread, don't make multiple art threads. But you should definitely try shading it