Heyya Volty!
Texas told me to do this, so here I am. Looks like a good start, but there are a few mistakes you'll want to fix.
In general, you don't need to list the old rank before your nature changes stats. For example, your Kairyu could have SpD listed as Rank 1 with a (-) sign next to it. Check out some other profiles to see how to visually stylize this. Should make things a bit easier for all involved parties.
Don't forget to list Dratini's BST (13). Speed is also calculated with a x 1.15 modifier rounded up, so Dratini hits 58 Speed. The accuracy boost to accompany the nature is +12%, which you can find in the New Data Audit thread (
here) or learn to calculate with the ASB Handbook stickied in the main forum. Although not wrong, note that Dratini learns Dragon Dance as a level up move, which would only cost 1 MC. You could perhaps save those counters by replacing it with Aqua Jet, no? Something to consider.
Shinx has a BST of 13. Natural Gift is a Gen IV TM, meaning that it is ineligible for claiming as a fresh Pokemon. Consider a different Gen VI TM such as Substitute?
Honedge has a BST of 15. Only moves learned at Level 25 and below can be claimed; Retaliate (26) will need to be removed for now.
You get two Cheri Berries to begin, not two Leppa Berries.
Once you've got these fixed, send a message to
Texas Cloverleaf that you'd like to be approved. You're almost there; great work so far!
