1. Welcome to Smeargle's Studio! Please be sure to review the studio rules.
  2. Want real-time art feedback? Come chat with us in the studio's IRC channel! Log onto #smeargle on SynIRC, or click this link to visit us via mibbit! You can also check out the Art Room on Pokemon Showdown!
  3. Welcome to Smogon! Check out the Smogon Info Hub for everything you need to know about starting out in the community. Don't forget to introduce yourself in the Introduction Thread, too!
  4. Welcome to Smogon Forums! Please take a minute to read the rules.

This is a cartoon I made; how is it?

Discussion in 'Smeargle's Studio' started by AqAZAr, Mar 26, 2012.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. AqAZAr

    AqAZAr

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2009
    Messages:
    20
    My friend and I wrote, directed, and animated our own cartoon starring our character, the Monocle Ape. I was wondering if I could get a little feedback on it - whether it's good, what can be improved, and what you like. Any and all criticism is welcome. Thanks!
  2. Acklow

    Acklow Straight outta Smogon
    is a Pre-Contributor

    Joined:
    Jan 7, 2010
    Messages:
    4,192
    Haha, nice. The biggest thing I felt was an issue was your guys' mic which definitely made it sound a little bad. Definitely look into getting a good one maybe?? :o
  3. AqAZAr

    AqAZAr

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2009
    Messages:
    20
    We actually have a studio grade one, the sound effect we used for the washing machines in the background was a really rushed and poor choice though so everyone things it's the mic haha.

    Glad you enjoyed it though!
  4. Nastyjungle

    Nastyjungle fat and sassy
    is an Artist Alumnusis a Forum Moderator Alumnus

    Joined:
    Sep 28, 2010
    Messages:
    1,933
    This is a lock I did, how is it?




    read the rules
  5. Fatecrashers

    Fatecrashers acta est fabula
    is a Forum Moderatoris a Site Staff Alumnusis an Artist Alumnusis a Super Moderator Alumnusis a Contributor Alumnusis a Smogon Media Contributor Alumnusis a Battle Server Moderator Alumnus
    King of Irrelevancy

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2007
    Messages:
    5,484
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)