Whims of Fate: An OU Warstory

[Head Smash]

^I was placing it according to the actual time frame during which the thought entered my mind, but I can understand how it could confuse readers (especially since so many of them are confused by it).

 

[Potential]

Oohhh... I actually get it now! Wow, that was close-minded...

Now you're even more right. Actually, I think you should leave that in there, just a bit modified, since it has a good point.

 

[_Hiruma]

good war story

 

[panamaxis]

Very nice comments turned a rather meh battle into a nice read good job.

 

[Aiklap]

one of the best ou warstories, and very close. Great to see less hax involved. A great read.

 

[VKCA]

that was a very nice warstory, I really enjoyed reading it

 

[Polis4rule]

By the way, 4/6 of your team is immune to Toxic (you forgot Breloom).

Other than that, nice read.