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UU Nasty Plot Thundurus-Therian [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

Ayatou

Ayatou

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Agility
move 4: Tera Blast / Focus Blast
nature: Modest
item: Sitrus Berry
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 244 HP / 152 SpA / 12 SpD / 100 Spe
Tera Type: Flying / Steel

[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T's extremely high Special Attack is elevated to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot, such as OHKOing offensive Heatran after Stealth Rock. Agility complements this by letting Thundurus-T outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Tera Blast Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude, whereas Focus Blast can be used to hit and remove Excadrill, as well as OHKO specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a Nasty Plot. 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios and Ogerpon-C after an Agility. The HP and Special Defense EVs let it survive Soul Dew Latios's Draco Meteor from full HP, with the remaining the EVs invested into Special Attack. Together with Sitrus Berry’s crucial recovery, the bulk investments also enhance Thundurus-T's survivability, ensuring it can safely reach the ideal sweeping position and begin breaking through the opponent’s team. Tera Steel is an alternative to Tera Flying that prevents threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting Thundurus-T's sweep.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of hyper offense teams, which specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreak havoc on foes. Thundurus-T is greatly complemented by entry hazard setters, such as Excadrill, which help weaken foes that would tank a +2 Thunderbolt such as bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti. Excadrill and Donphan provide Rapid Spin support, which prevents Thundurus-T from taking Stealth Rock damage. Taunt users such as Heatran and Grimmsnarl pair well with Thundurus-T, as they can also prevent Stealth Rock. Additionally, Grimmsnarl can set up dual screens to provide easier boosting opportunities. Thundurus-T has excellent synergy with fast offensive threats such as Greninja, which can help overwhelm common checks like Latios, Clodsire, and Tinkaton while appreciating Thundurus-T’s ability to pressure bulky Water-type Pokemon like Toxapex. Physical attackers such as Azumarill, Ogerpon, and Ogerpon-C help overpower Ground-types such as Excadrill and Sandy Shocks as well as Unaware users such as Clodsire. Alternatively, setup sweepers like Take Heart Manaphy and Air Balloon Revavroom can capitalize on Clodsire.

[SET CREDITS]
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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Agility
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Focus Blast / Sludge Bomb / Tera Blast
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Modest
evs: 144 HP / 176 SpA / 188 Spe
tera type: Water / Steel / Flying

[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T boasts the highest Special Attack stat in the tier, a wide variety of offensive moves and the ability to OHKO prevalent mainstays in the metagame after a diabolical Nasty Plot. Thundurus-T, with his extremely high Special Attack, elevates that to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot. (there was nothing wrong here, just rewriting it a bit). Focus Blast is used as coverage to counter the Ground-type immunity to Electric-type moves, and ensuring an OHKO on Excadrill, that otherwise can stay on Thundurus-T. Focus Blast is used to hit and remove Exacdrill, as well as cleaning OHKOing specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a a Nasty Plot. Other alternatives are Sludge Bomb to hit Latios neutrally or damage Fairy-types and Tera Fairy users, (not really significant I feel like, the Fairy types in UU are either weak to Thunderbolt or get OHKOed after a Nasty Plot anyway. No Hydrapple mention either is strange) and Tera Blast Flying or Water to grant him amplified Flying STAB or another way to OHKO Ground-types with Tera Water. Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum. The EV spread is optimized as 188 Spe ensures Thundurus-T outspeeds every common threat in the metagame at +2 Speed. With Tera Water, Thundurus-T can tank Surf from Battle Bond Greninja, increase its speed to outspeed it, and OHKO back with Thunderbolt. 176 SpA are to guarantee an OHKO on Metagross, and the rest are invested into HP to ensure enough longevity to setup both Agility and Nasty Plot successfully and rampage through the opponent's team. Sitrus Berry amplifies said longevity, as the berry's recovery is crucial on ensuring Thundurus-T can reach the ideal sweeping position without fainting.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of Hyper Offensive teams, that specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreck havoc on the foe. Thundurus-T is greatly complemented by hazard setters, such as Excadrill to help weaken foes that otherwise can tank a +2 Thunderbolt, and cause it to OHKO. for example against bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti sets. (You already mentioned hyper offense, i dont think you need this). Excadrill and other users of Rapid Spin help Thundurus-T not take 25% from Stealth Rock and stay healthy in the setup process. (You could mention Taunt leads as well). Thundurus-T has checks that boast high SpD or a Thunderbolt resistance, such as Latios and Tyranitar, (Both can be shaky checks depending on what coverage move you are running, so probably just remove this). they are greatly pressured by fast, offensive threats like Greninja and Lokix, (Expand on this point, Greninja and Thundy together overwhelm Tinkaton, and in general they punch holes for each other. Also I'm not sure if Lokix is the best example)that prove to be crucial partners for Thundurus-T. Physical threats such as Azumarill, Ogerpon and Ogerpon-C help at overpowering Ground-types such as Excadrill and Sandy Shocks, and Unaware users such as Clodsire and Skeledirge, that prove to be incredible counters to Nasty Plot Thundurus-T. (Clodsire is so extremely bad for Thundurus-T, I would probably mention something like Take Heart Manaphy or Air Balloon Revavroom that can freely switch into it)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
Ayatou
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AMQC again!
 
OceanicGamer said:
[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Agility
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Focus Blast / Sludge Bomb / Tera Blast
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Modest
evs: 144 HP / 176 SpA / 188 Spe
tera type: Water / Steel / Flying

[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T boasts the highest Special Attack stat in the tier, a wide variety of offensive moves and the ability to OHKO prevalent mainstays in the metagame after a diabolical Nasty Plot. Thundurus-T, with his extremely high Special Attack, elevates that to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot. (there was nothing wrong here, just rewriting it a bit). Focus Blast is used as coverage to counter the Ground-type immunity to Electric-type moves, and ensuring an OHKO on Excadrill, that otherwise can stay on Thundurus-T. Focus Blast is used to hit and remove Exacdrill, as well as cleaning OHKOing specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a a Nasty Plot. Other alternatives are Sludge Bomb to hit Latios neutrally or damage Fairy-types and Tera Fairy users, (not really significant I feel like, the Fairy types in UU are either weak to Thunderbolt or get OHKOed after a Nasty Plot anyway. No Hydrapple mention either is strange) and Tera Blast Flying or Water to grant him amplified Flying STAB or another way to OHKO Ground-types with Tera Water. Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum. The EV spread is optimized as 188 Spe ensures Thundurus-T outspeeds every common threat in the metagame at +2 Speed. With Tera Water, Thundurus-T can tank Surf from Battle Bond Greninja, increase its speed to outspeed it, and OHKO back with Thunderbolt. 176 SpA are to guarantee an OHKO on Metagross, and the rest are invested into HP to ensure enough longevity to setup both Agility and Nasty Plot successfully and rampage through the opponent's team. Sitrus Berry amplifies said longevity, as the berry's recovery is crucial on ensuring Thundurus-T can reach the ideal sweeping position without fainting.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of Hyper Offensive teams, that specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreck havoc on the foe. Thundurus-T is greatly complemented by hazard setters, such as Excadrill to help weaken foes that otherwise can tank a +2 Thunderbolt, and cause it to OHKO. for example against bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti sets. (You already mentioned hyper offense, i dont think you need this). Excadrill and other users of Rapid Spin help Thundurus-T not take 25% from Stealth Rock and stay healthy in the setup process. (You could mention Taunt leads as well). Thundurus-T has checks that boast high SpD or a Thunderbolt resistance, such as Latios and Tyranitar, (Both can be shaky checks depending on what coverage move you are running, so probably just reword this). they are greatly pressured by fast, offensive threats like Greninja and Lokix, (Expand on this point, Greninja and Thundy together overwhelm Tinkaton, and in general they punch holes for each other. Also I'm not sure if Lokix is the best example)that prove to be crucial partners for Thundurus-T. Physical threats such as Azumarill, Ogerpon and Ogerpon-C help at overpowering Ground-types such as Excadrill and Sandy Shocks, and Unaware users such as Clodsire and Skeledirge, that prove to be incredible counters to Nasty Plot Thundurus-T. (Clodsire is so extremely bad for Thundurus-T, I would probably mention something like Take Heart Manaphy or Air Balloon Revavroom that can freely switch into it)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
Ayatou
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AMQC again!
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thanks again, will edit soon. added you as a credit again since i know those comments will help me a lot
 
Hello, im gonna add on to this since I think there's some good stuff in here

Since it's a lot cause there's like two people commenting and the set needs fixing, im gonna hold off on giving the check until this is completed so I can make a follow up. For future reference you don't add the AM QC as a credit, only add actual QC members

Additionally, when you talk about the EV spreads, just be aware despite the short hand on the sets themselves, we still call refer to them by their full name: Speed instead of Spe, Special Attack instead of SpA, etc.

for any changes I made, just look out for the parts in BOLD. Anything else regarding my own comments will be made with THIS COLOR

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Agility
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Focus Blast / Sludge Bomb / Tera Blast
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Modest
evs: 144 HP / 176 SpA / 188 Spe
tera type: Water / Steel / Flying

name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
- Thunderbolt
- Tera Blast / Focus Blast
- Agility
- Nasty Plot
item: Sitrus Berry
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 244 HP / 152 SpA / 12 SpD / 100 Spe
Tera Type: Flying / Steel

Mystras: for the sake of making things easier with the set we have on the damage calc currently, we are pushing what we have on the on-site analysis. Since the breakpoints are somewhat different for the EV Spread, I will mention when they are relevant to help out.


[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T boasts the highest Special Attack stat in the tier, a wide variety of offensive moves and the ability to OHKO prevalent mainstays in the metagame after a diabolical Nasty Plot. Thundurus-T, with his extremely high Special Attack, elevates that to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot. (there was nothing wrong here, just rewriting it a bit). Focus Blast is used as coverage to counter the Ground-type immunity to Electric-type moves, and ensuring an OHKO on Excadrill, that otherwise can stay on Thundurus-T. Focus Blast is used to hit and remove Exacdrill, as well as cleaning OHKOing specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a a Nasty Plot. Other alternatives are Sludge Bomb to hit Latios neutrally or damage Fairy-types and Tera Fairy users, and Mystras: as sludge bomb is not part of the on site set, so I've removed this part Tera Blast Flying or Water to grant him amplified Flying STAB or another way to OHKO Ground-types with Tera Water. Mystras: just remove the tera water mention and state that Tera Flying is a good removal tool for hydrapple and Zarude. Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum. The EV spread is optimized as 188 Spe ensures Thundurus-T outspeeds every common threat in the metagame at +2 Speed. 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios or Ogerpon after an Agility. Mystras: changed to match what the onsite EV spread does With Tera Water, Thundurus-T can tank Surf from Battle Bond Greninja, increase its speed to outspeed it, and OHKO back with Thunderbolt. 176 SpA 144 Special Attack EVs are to guarantee an OHKO on Metagross offensive Heatran after a Nasty Plot and Stealth Rocks, and the rest are invested into HP to ensure enough longevity to setup both Agility and Nasty Plot successfully and rampage through the opponent's team. Sitrus Berry amplifies said longevity, as the berry's recovery is crucial on ensuring Thundurus-T can reach the ideal sweeping position without fainting.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of Hyper Offensive teams, that specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreck havoc on the foe. Thundurus-T is greatly complemented by hazard setters, such as Excadrill to help weaken foes that otherwise can tank a +2 Thunderbolt, and cause it to OHKO. for example against such as bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti sets. (You already mentioned hyper offense, i dont think you need this). Mystras: I believe this is fine to keep as it does let new players understand what mons are relevant here Excadrill and other users of Rapid Spin help Thundurus-T not take 25% from Stealth Rock and stay healthy in the setup process. (You could mention Taunt leads as well). Thundurus-T has checks that boast high SpD Special Defense or a Thunderbolt resistance, such as Latios and Tyranitar, (Both can be shaky checks depending on coverage, so probably just remove this). Mystras: instead of removing, changing Tyranitar is probably better. Latios is fine to keep as it is rather difficult to handle unless tera steel. Tyranitar change to something like Clodsire works better. they are greatly pressured by fast, offensive threats like Greninja and Lokix, that prove to be crucial partners for Thundurus-T. (Expand on this point, Greninja and Thundy together overwhelm Tinkaton, and in general they punch holes for each other. Also I'm not sure if Lokix is the best example) Physical threats such as Azumarill, Ogerpon and Ogerpon-C help at overpowering Ground-types such as Excadrill and Sandy Shocks, and Unaware users such as Clodsire and Skeledirge, that prove to be incredible counters to Nasty Plot Thundurus-T. (Clodsire is so extremely bad for Thundurus-T, I would probably mention something like Take Heart Manaphy or Air Balloon Revavroom that can freely switch into it)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
Ayatou
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user2.102/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.103/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.104/

Nice work on the AM check Oceanic, just be careful with adding rewrites like at the beginning cause it is more of a GP thing, which is out of our jurisdiction. You are allowed to make comments regarding whether or not a sentence is clear and make suggestions on how to improve it, but we mostly do not actually mess with the sentence structure unless absolutely necessary.

Also you could be a little more specific regarding potential Pokemon when making suggestions
ie; you mentioned taunt users, such as what? Grimmsnarl? Tornadus-T?
also you mentioned Lokix might not being the best example, what are some alternatives? furthermore, Lokix does have some value as a revenge killer so you could make an additional point about that.
 
OceanicGamer said:
[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Agility
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Focus Blast / Sludge Bomb / Tera Blast
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Modest
evs: 144 HP / 176 SpA / 188 Spe
tera type: Water / Steel / Flying

[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T boasts the highest Special Attack stat in the tier, a wide variety of offensive moves and the ability to OHKO prevalent mainstays in the metagame after a diabolical Nasty Plot. Thundurus-T, with his extremely high Special Attack, elevates that to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot. (there was nothing wrong here, just rewriting it a bit). Focus Blast is used as coverage to counter the Ground-type immunity to Electric-type moves, and ensuring an OHKO on Excadrill, that otherwise can stay on Thundurus-T. Focus Blast is used to hit and remove Exacdrill, as well as cleaning OHKOing specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a a Nasty Plot. Other alternatives are Sludge Bomb to hit Latios neutrally or damage Fairy-types and Tera Fairy users, (not really significant I feel like, the Fairy types in UU are either weak to Thunderbolt or get OHKOed after a Nasty Plot anyway. No Hydrapple mention either is strange) and Tera Blast Flying or Water to grant him amplified Flying STAB or another way to OHKO Ground-types with Tera Water. Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum. The EV spread is optimized as 188 Spe ensures Thundurus-T outspeeds every common threat in the metagame at +2 Speed. With Tera Water, Thundurus-T can tank Surf from Battle Bond Greninja, increase its speed to outspeed it, and OHKO back with Thunderbolt. 176 SpA are to guarantee an OHKO on Metagross, and the rest are invested into HP to ensure enough longevity to setup both Agility and Nasty Plot successfully and rampage through the opponent's team. Sitrus Berry amplifies said longevity, as the berry's recovery is crucial on ensuring Thundurus-T can reach the ideal sweeping position without fainting.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of Hyper Offensive teams, that specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreck havoc on the foe. Thundurus-T is greatly complemented by hazard setters, such as Excadrill to help weaken foes that otherwise can tank a +2 Thunderbolt, and cause it to OHKO. for example against bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti sets. (You already mentioned hyper offense, i dont think you need this). Excadrill and other users of Rapid Spin help Thundurus-T not take 25% from Stealth Rock and stay healthy in the setup process. (You could mention Taunt leads as well). Thundurus-T has checks that boast high SpD or a Thunderbolt resistance, such as Latios and Tyranitar, (Both can be shaky checks depending on what coverage move you are running, so probably just remove this). they are greatly pressured by fast, offensive threats like Greninja and Lokix, (Expand on this point, Greninja and Thundy together overwhelm Tinkaton, and in general they punch holes for each other. Also I'm not sure if Lokix is the best example)that prove to be crucial partners for Thundurus-T. Physical threats such as Azumarill, Ogerpon and Ogerpon-C help at overpowering Ground-types such as Excadrill and Sandy Shocks, and Unaware users such as Clodsire and Skeledirge, that prove to be incredible counters to Nasty Plot Thundurus-T. (Clodsire is so extremely bad for Thundurus-T, I would probably mention something like Take Heart Manaphy or Air Balloon Revavroom that can freely switch into it)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
Ayatou
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user2.102/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.103/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.104/

AMQC again!
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This can count as qc 1 now, I got permission
 
Mystras said:
Hello, im gonna add on to this since I think there's some good stuff in here

Since it's a lot cause there's like two people commenting and the set needs fixing, im gonna hold off on giving the check until this is completed so I can make a follow up. For future reference you don't add the AM QC as a credit, only add actual QC members

Additionally, when you talk about the EV spreads, just be aware despite the short hand on the sets themselves, we still call refer to them by their full name: Speed instead of Spe, Special Attack instead of SpA, etc.

for any changes I made, just look out for the parts in BOLD. Anything else regarding my own comments will be made with THIS COLOR

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Agility
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Focus Blast / Sludge Bomb / Tera Blast
item: Sitrus Berry
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Modest
evs: 144 HP / 176 SpA / 188 Spe
tera type: Water / Steel / Flying

name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
- Thunderbolt
- Tera Blast / Focus Blast
- Agility
- Nasty Plot
item: Sitrus Berry
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 244 HP / 152 SpA / 12 SpD / 100 Spe
Tera Type: Flying / Steel

Mystras: for the sake of making things easier with the set we have on the damage calc currently, we are pushing what we have on the on-site analysis. Since the breakpoints are somewhat different for the EV Spread, I will mention when they are relevant to help out.


[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T boasts the highest Special Attack stat in the tier, a wide variety of offensive moves and the ability to OHKO prevalent mainstays in the metagame after a diabolical Nasty Plot. Thundurus-T, with his extremely high Special Attack, elevates that to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot. (there was nothing wrong here, just rewriting it a bit). Focus Blast is used as coverage to counter the Ground-type immunity to Electric-type moves, and ensuring an OHKO on Excadrill, that otherwise can stay on Thundurus-T. Focus Blast is used to hit and remove Exacdrill, as well as cleaning OHKOing specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a a Nasty Plot. Other alternatives are Sludge Bomb to hit Latios neutrally or damage Fairy-types and Tera Fairy users, and Mystras: as sludge bomb is not part of the on site set, so I've removed this part Tera Blast Flying or Water to grant him amplified Flying STAB or another way to OHKO Ground-types with Tera Water. Mystras: just remove the tera water mention and state that Tera Flying is a good removal tool for hydrapple and Zarude. Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum. The EV spread is optimized as 188 Spe ensures Thundurus-T outspeeds every common threat in the metagame at +2 Speed. 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios or Ogerpon after an Agility. Mystras: changed to match what the onsite EV spread does With Tera Water, Thundurus-T can tank Surf from Battle Bond Greninja, increase its speed to outspeed it, and OHKO back with Thunderbolt. 176 SpA 144 Special Attack EVs are to guarantee an OHKO on Metagross offensive Heatran after a Nasty Plot and Stealth Rocks, and the rest are invested into HP to ensure enough longevity to setup both Agility and Nasty Plot successfully and rampage through the opponent's team. Sitrus Berry amplifies said longevity, as the berry's recovery is crucial on ensuring Thundurus-T can reach the ideal sweeping position without fainting.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of Hyper Offensive teams, that specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreck havoc on the foe. Thundurus-T is greatly complemented by hazard setters, such as Excadrill to help weaken foes that otherwise can tank a +2 Thunderbolt, and cause it to OHKO. for example against such as bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti sets. (You already mentioned hyper offense, i dont think you need this). Mystras: I believe this is fine to keep as it does let new players understand what mons are relevant here Excadrill and other users of Rapid Spin help Thundurus-T not take 25% from Stealth Rock and stay healthy in the setup process. (You could mention Taunt leads as well). Thundurus-T has checks that boast high SpD Special Defense or a Thunderbolt resistance, such as Latios and Tyranitar, (Both can be shaky checks depending on coverage, so probably just remove this). Mystras: instead of removing, changing Tyranitar is probably better. Latios is fine to keep as it is rather difficult to handle unless tera steel. Tyranitar change to something like Clodsire works better. they are greatly pressured by fast, offensive threats like Greninja and Lokix, that prove to be crucial partners for Thundurus-T. (Expand on this point, Greninja and Thundy together overwhelm Tinkaton, and in general they punch holes for each other. Also I'm not sure if Lokix is the best example) Physical threats such as Azumarill, Ogerpon and Ogerpon-C help at overpowering Ground-types such as Excadrill and Sandy Shocks, and Unaware users such as Clodsire and Skeledirge, that prove to be incredible counters to Nasty Plot Thundurus-T. (Clodsire is so extremely bad for Thundurus-T, I would probably mention something like Take Heart Manaphy or Air Balloon Revavroom that can freely switch into it)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
Ayatou
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user2.102/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.103/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.104/

Nice work on the AM check Oceanic, just be careful with adding rewrites like at the beginning cause it is more of a GP thing, which is out of our jurisdiction. You are allowed to make comments regarding whether or not a sentence is clear and make suggestions on how to improve it, but we mostly do not actually mess with the sentence structure unless absolutely necessary.

Also you could be a little more specific regarding potential Pokemon when making suggestions
ie; you mentioned taunt users, such as what? Grimmsnarl? Tornadus-T?
also you mentioned Lokix might not being the best example, what are some alternatives? furthermore, Lokix does have some value as a revenge killer so you could make an additional point about that.
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some points in your feedbacks that I wanted to fix include:
1. 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios or Ogerpon after an Agility.
I changed ogerpon to Ogerpon-C, Ogerpon-C is a much bigger threat than Ogerpon Teal, so it's just more reasonable to put it instead.
2. 144 Special Attack EVs
The onsite spread has 152 SpA evs and thats the set i am required to include now, I changed 144 here to 152 although both OHKO after a nasty plot because thats what the set has:
+2 144+ SpA Thundurus-Therian Thunderbolt vs. 0 HP / 4 SpD Heatran: 309-364 (95.6 - 112.6%) -- guaranteed OHKO after Stealth Rock
+2 152+ SpA Thundurus-Therian Thunderbolt vs. 0 HP / 4 SpD Heatran: 310-366 (95.9 - 113.3%) -- guaranteed OHKO after Stealth Rock

thats all, now im ready for qc2 and further instructions.
 
2/2 seems good by this point.

If you see any specific parts of sentences you made that I put in uncolored bold, those are part I’m referring to in the comments.

As a couple bits of advice about writing, try to keep language more concise so you’re able to fit more information without making sentences longer than they should. You also don’t need to explain things like Thund taking 25 percent damage as that should be a fundamental thing readers should know by default.

ADD REMOVE COMMENT
[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: - Tera Blast / Focus Blast
move 3: - Agility
move 4: - Nasty Plot
item: Sitrus Berry
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 244 HP / 152 SpA / 12 SpD / 100 Spe
Tera Type: Flying / Steel

[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T, with his extremely high Special Attack, elevates that to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot. Agility complements this by letting Thundurus-T outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Focus Blast is used to hit and remove Exacdrill, as well as OHKOing specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a Nasty Plot. Tera Blast Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude, while Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum. 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios or Ogerpon-C after an Agility. 152 Special Attack EVs secure OHKOs on offensive Heatran after Stealth Rock chip damage & Nasty Plot, and the rest are invested into HP to ensure enough longevity to setup both Agility and Nasty Plot successfully and rampage through the opponent's team. Sitrus Berry amplifies said longevity, as the berry's recovery is crucial on ensuring Thundurus-T can reach the ideal sweeping position without fainting. Make the defensive spread its own sentence and combine your sitrus berry alongside it mention as they together provide Thundurus’s longevity. Something like how the HP investment alongside sitrus berry helps Thund’s survivability to safely set up and start breaking the opponent’s defenses.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of Hyper Offensive teams, that specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreck havoc on the foe. Thundurus-T is greatly complemented by hazard setters, such as Excadrill to help weaken foes that otherwise tank a +2 Special Attack Thunderbolt such as bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti sets. Excadrill and Donphan provide Rapid Spin support to prevent other users of Rapid Spin help while what you put was not wrong, I specify put Donphan as the main other rapid spinner actually worth running. Technically Cyclizar works also, but it’s a lot more niche and while I would say to mention it by explain its problem, this paragraph is already getting very long so I elected not to include it Thundurus-T taking Stealth Rock damage not take 25% from Stealth Rock and stay healthy in the setup process. Common Taunt users such as Heatran and Fezandipiti Don’t think this is quite ideal for the kinds of teams you want to run with Thund-T, Grimmsnarl is the better choice. Additionally mention the screen support it provides easier boosting opportunities pair well with Thundurus-T as they can also prevent Stealth Rock set. Thundurus-T has checks that boast high Special Defense or a Thunderbolt resistance, such as Latios and most notably Clodsire. As such, Thundurus-T has excellent synergy with fast offensive threats such as Greninja, which also helps overwhelms common checks like Tinkaton while appreciating Thundurus-T’s ability to pressure bulky Water-type Pokemon like Toxapex. assuming you meant to setup gren’s synergy in the previous sentence so I added a couple of bits to emphasize that part. Physical threats such as Azumarill, Ogerpon and Ogerpon-C help at overpowering Ground-types such as Excadrill and Sandy Shocks, and Unaware users such as Clodsire, that prove to be incredible counters to Nasty Plot Thundurus-T. Alternatively, setup sweepers like Take Heart Manaphy or Air Balloon Revavroom can capitalize on Clodsire, which otherwise walls Thundurus-T completely. You iterated Clodsire a few times, The additional mentions are needed by this point

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Mystras said:
2/2 seems good by this point.

If you see any specific parts of sentences you made that I put in uncolored bold, those are part I’m referring to in the comments.

As a couple bits of advice about writing, try to keep language more concise so you’re able to fit more information without making sentences longer than they should. You also don’t need to explain things like Thund taking 25 percent damage as that should be a fundamental thing readers should know by default.

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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: - Tera Blast / Focus Blast
move 3: - Agility
move 4: - Nasty Plot
item: Sitrus Berry
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 244 HP / 152 SpA / 12 SpD / 100 Spe
Tera Type: Flying / Steel

[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T, with his extremely high Special Attack, elevates that to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot. Agility complements this by letting Thundurus-T outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Focus Blast is used to hit and remove Exacdrill, as well as OHKOing specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a Nasty Plot. Tera Blast Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude, while Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum. 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios or Ogerpon-C after an Agility. 152 Special Attack EVs secure OHKOs on offensive Heatran after Stealth Rock chip damage & Nasty Plot, and the rest are invested into HP to ensure enough longevity to setup both Agility and Nasty Plot successfully and rampage through the opponent's team. Sitrus Berry amplifies said longevity, as the berry's recovery is crucial on ensuring Thundurus-T can reach the ideal sweeping position without fainting. Make the defensive spread its own sentence and combine your sitrus berry alongside it mention as they together provide Thundurus’s longevity. Something like how the HP investment alongside sitrus berry helps Thund’s survivability to safely set up and start breaking the opponent’s defenses.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of Hyper Offensive teams, that specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreck havoc on the foe. Thundurus-T is greatly complemented by hazard setters, such as Excadrill to help weaken foes that otherwise tank a +2 Special Attack Thunderbolt such as bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti sets. Excadrill and Donphan provide Rapid Spin support to prevent other users of Rapid Spin help while what you put was not wrong, I specify put Donphan as the main other rapid spinner actually worth running. Technically Cyclizar works also, but it’s a lot more niche and while I would say to mention it by explain its problem, this paragraph is already getting very long so I elected not to include it Thundurus-T taking Stealth Rock damage not take 25% from Stealth Rock and stay healthy in the setup process. Common Taunt users such as Heatran and Fezandipiti Don’t think this is quite ideal for the kinds of teams you want to run with Thund-T, Grimmsnarl is the better choice. Additionally mention the screen support it provides easier boosting opportunities pair well with Thundurus-T as they can also prevent Stealth Rock set. Thundurus-T has checks that boast high Special Defense or a Thunderbolt resistance, such as Latios and most notably Clodsire. As such, Thundurus-T has excellent synergy with fast offensive threats such as Greninja, which also helps overwhelms common checks like Tinkaton while appreciating Thundurus-T’s ability to pressure bulky Water-type Pokemon like Toxapex. assuming you meant to setup gren’s synergy in the previous sentence so I added a couple of bits to emphasize that part. Physical threats such as Azumarill, Ogerpon and Ogerpon-C help at overpowering Ground-types such as Excadrill and Sandy Shocks, and Unaware users such as Clodsire, that prove to be incredible counters to Nasty Plot Thundurus-T. Alternatively, setup sweepers like Take Heart Manaphy or Air Balloon Revavroom can capitalize on Clodsire, which otherwise walls Thundurus-T completely. You iterated Clodsire a few times, The additional mentions are needed by this point

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alright, made the edits exactly like you said, ready for GP then, who do I contact for that?
 
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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Thundurus-T) @ Sitrus Berry <- there's parantheses around Thundurus-T
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: - Tera Blast / Focus Blast <- kill hyphens
move 3: - Agility
move 4: - Nasty Plot
item: Sitrus Berry Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 244 HP / 152 SpA / 12 SpD / 100 Spe
Modest Nature according to dex at least? read later comments
Tera Type: Flying / Steel

[SET COMMENTS]

Thundurus-T, with his Thundurus-T's extremely high Special Attack (RC) elevates that is elevated to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot which lets it do what?. Agility complements this by letting Thundurus-T outspeed the entire unboosted metagame Tera Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude with Tera Blast, while Tera Steel prevents revenge killers such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting Thundurus-T's sweep. Alternatively, (AC)Focus Blast is can be used to hit and remove Exacdrill Excadrill, as well as OHKOing OHKO specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a Nasty Plot. Tera Blast Flying allows Agility lets Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude outspeed the entire unboosted metagame after a boost, and while Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum (RP) 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios or and Ogerpon-C after an Agility when boosted. Reordered sentences to match set order 152 Special Attack EVs secure OHKOs an OHKO on offensive Heatran with +2 Thunderbolt after Stealth Rock chip damage & Nasty Plot Thundurus-T can OHKO offensive Heatran with 8 SpA EVs and a Modest nature, so this point is only valid with a Timid nature. The set has a Modest nature on-site, and a Timid nature would ruin the +2 Speed EV'ing, so I'd consult QC on the set and whether it needs changes., and the rest of the pointsare EVs are invested into HP and Special Defense to bolster longevity bulk Longevity has a different meaning., allowing Thundurus-T to set up both Agility and Nasty Plot reliably. Together with Sitrus Berry’s crucial recovery, the HP investment enhances Thundurus-T’s survivability, ensuring it can safely reach the ideal sweeping position and or begin breaking through the opponent’s defenses team.
Side note: What does the 244 HP do? Is the SpD a dump stat? Is the even HP stat so Thundurus-T can trigger Sitrus Berry on its' second switchin on Stealth Rock? I would consult QC on this, it's less of an obvious optimization than things like Gliscor's Poison Heal so I feel like it should be mentioned in the set. Might not be necessary though, wait for official GP to ask.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of hyper Offensive offense teams, that which specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreck wreak havoc on the foe opponent's team. Does GP have dex info for team archetypes? Thundurus-T is greatly complemented complimented by entry hazard setters (RC) such as Excadrill, (AC) which to help weaken foes that would otherwise tank a +2 Thunderbolt such as bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti sets. Excadrill and Donphan provide Rapid Spin support, (AC) which prevents to prevent Thundurus-T from taking Stealth Rock damage. Common Taunt users such as Heatran and Grimmsnarl pair well with Thundurus-T, (AC) as they can also prevent Stealth Rock. Additionally, Grimmsnarl can set up screens to provide easier boosting opportunities. Thundurus-T has checks that boast high Special Defense or a Thunderbolt resistance, such as Latios and most notably Clodsire. As such, Thundurus-T has Killed the entire sentence and combined with checks sentence, Gren mention lacked clarity excellent synergy with fast offensive threats such as Greninja, which also helps overwhelms can help overwhelm common checks like Latios, Clodsire, and Tinkaton while appreciating Thundurus-T’s ability to pressure bulky Water-type Pokemon like Toxapex. Physical threats attackers threat is usually for foes, they're not "threats" if they're helping out such as Azumarill, Ogerpon, (AC) and Ogerpon-C help at overpowering overpower Ground-types such as Excadrill, (AC) and Sandy Shocks, and Unaware users such as Clodsire. Alternatively, setup set up sweepers like Take Heart Manaphy or and Air Balloon Revavroom can capitalize on Clodsire.

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Side note: What does the 244 HP do? Is the SpD a dump stat? Is the even HP stat so Thundurus-T can trigger Sitrus Berry on its' second switchin on Stealth Rock? I would consult QC on this, it's less of an obvious optimization than things like Gliscor's Poison Heal so I feel like it should be mentioned in the set. Might not be necessary though, wait for official GP to ask.

The defensive EVs helps Thundurus-T avoid getting OHKOed by soul dew latios Draco Meteor from full.

252 SpA Soul Dew Latios Draco Meteor vs. 244 HP / 12 SpD Thundurus-Therian: 303-357 (84.1 - 99.1%) -- guaranteed 2HKO

Furthermore, yes the set is supposed to be modest nature. The points regarding Heatran being 2HKOed after a boost can be shifted to the initial sentence with Nasty Plot if the spread itself makes no difference.

The remaining SpA EVs are a dump to help thundurus KO Pokemon at higher health ranges.
 
Mystras said:
Side note: What does the 244 HP do? Is the SpD a dump stat? Is the even HP stat so Thundurus-T can trigger Sitrus Berry on its' second switchin on Stealth Rock? I would consult QC on this, it's less of an obvious optimization than things like Gliscor's Poison Heal so I feel like it should be mentioned in the set. Might not be necessary though, wait for official GP to ask.

The defensive EVs helps Thundurus-T avoid getting OHKOed by soul dew latios Draco Meteor from full.

252 SpA Soul Dew Latios Draco Meteor vs. 244 HP / 12 SpD Thundurus-Therian: 303-357 (84.1 - 99.1%) -- guaranteed 2HKO

Furthermore, yes the set is supposed to be modest nature. The points regarding Heatran being 2HKOed after a boost can be shifted to the initial sentence with Nasty Plot if the spread itself makes no difference.

The remaining SpA EVs are a dump to help thundurus KO Pokemon at higher health ranges.
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Do you think it's necessary to add it to my analysis? or leave as is and wait for GP
 
Mentioning the Latios part is warranted and then try shifting that point regarding Heatran into the initial line and some other stalwart pokemon you could think of like metagross like you had before to drive the point home.
Ayatou said:
Do you think it's necessary to add it to my analysis? or leave as is and wait for GP
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1/1 GP Team done, credit both me and earthfromthefuture, made the changes as mentioned above
[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Agility
move 4: Tera Blast / Focus Blast
nature: Modest as mentioned in mystras post
item: Sitrus Berry
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 244 HP / 152 SpA / 12 SpD / 100 Spe
Tera Type: Flying / Steel

[SET COMMENTS]
Thundurus-T's extremely high Special Attack is elevated to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot, (AC) such as OHKOing offensive Heatran after Stealth Rock. as mentioned in mystras post Agility complements this by letting Thundurus-T outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Tera Blast Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude, whereas Focus Blast can be used to hit and remove Exacdrill (RC) as well as OHKO specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a Nasty Plot. Tera Blast Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude, while Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum tera blast is slashed first here, so I moved the explanation before focus blast to match. tera steel is also moved down to later because that's not relevant to any moves on the set, so the explanation comes later 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios or and Ogerpon-C after an Agility. 152 Special Attack EVs secure an OHKO on offensive Heatran with +2 Thunderbolt after Stealth Rock. The rest of The HP and Special Defense EVs let it survive Soul Dew Latios's Draco Meteor from full HP, with the remaining EVs are invested into HP and Special Defense to bolster bulk, allowing Thundurus-T to set up both Agility and Nasty Plot reliably Attack. as mentioned in mystras post Together with Sitrus Berry’s crucial recovery, the bulky bulk investments also enhance Thundurus-T’s Thundurus-T's survivability, ensuring it can safely reach the ideal sweeping position and begin breaking through the opponent’s team. Tera Steel is an alternative to Tera Flying that prevents threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting Thundurus-T's sweep.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of hyper offense teams, which specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreak havoc on the opponent's team foes. avoids repetition with opponent's resources above Thundurus-T is greatly complimented complemented by entry hazard setters, such as Excadrill, which help weaken foes that would tank a +2 Thunderbolt such as bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti. Excadrill and Donphan provide Rapid Spin support, which prevents Thundurus-T from taking Stealth Rock damage. Taunt users such as Heatran and Grimmsnarl pair well with Thundurus-T, as they can also prevent Stealth Rock. Additionally, Grimmsnarl can set up dual screens to provide easier boosting opportunities. Thundurus-T has excellent synergy with fast offensive threats such as Greninja, which can help overwhelms common checks like Latios, Clodsire, and Tinkaton while appreciating Thundurus-T’s ability to pressure bulky Water-type Pokemon like Toxapex. Physical attackers such as Azumarill, Ogerpon, and Ogerpon-C help overpower Ground-types such as Excadrill (RC) and Sandy Shocks (RC) and as well as Unaware users such as Clodsire. Alternatively, set up setup sweepers like Take Heart Manaphy and Air Balloon Revavroom can capitalize on Clodsire.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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autumn said:
1/1 GP Team done, credit both me and earthfromthefuture, made the changes as mentioned above
[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Thundurus-T
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Agility
move 4: Tera Blast / Focus Blast
nature: Modest as mentioned in mystras post
item: Sitrus Berry
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 244 HP / 152 SpA / 12 SpD / 100 Spe
Tera Type: Flying / Steel

[SET COMMENTS]
Thundurus-T's extremely high Special Attack is elevated to terrifying levels using Nasty Plot, (AC) such as OHKOing offensive Heatran after Stealth Rock. as mentioned in mystras post Agility complements this by letting Thundurus-T outspeed the entire unboosted metagame. Tera Blast Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude, whereas Focus Blast can be used to hit and remove Exacdrill (RC) as well as OHKO specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a Nasty Plot. Tera Blast Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude, while Tera Steel is to prevent threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting the offensive momentum tera blast is slashed first here, so I moved the explanation before focus blast to match. tera steel is also moved down to later because that's not relevant to any moves on the set, so the explanation comes later 100 Speed EVs allow Thundurus-T to avoid being revenge killed by threats like Choice Scarf Latios or and Ogerpon-C after an Agility. 152 Special Attack EVs secure an OHKO on offensive Heatran with +2 Thunderbolt after Stealth Rock. The rest of The HP and Special Defense EVs let it survive Soul Dew Latios's Draco Meteor from full HP, with the remaining EVs are invested into HP and Special Defense to bolster bulk, allowing Thundurus-T to set up both Agility and Nasty Plot reliably Attack. as mentioned in mystras post Together with Sitrus Berry’s crucial recovery, the bulky bulk investments also enhance Thundurus-T’s Thundurus-T's survivability, ensuring it can safely reach the ideal sweeping position and begin breaking through the opponent’s team. Tera Steel is an alternative to Tera Flying that prevents threats such as Ogerpon-C and Latios from interrupting Thundurus-T's sweep.

Nasty Plot Thundurus-T is a staple of hyper offense teams, which specialize in pressuring the opponent's resources into opening an opportunity for Thundurus-T and other threats to wreak havoc on the opponent's team foes. avoids repetition with opponent's resources above Thundurus-T is greatly complimented complemented by entry hazard setters, such as Excadrill, which help weaken foes that would tank a +2 Thunderbolt such as bulky Heatran and Fezandipiti. Excadrill and Donphan provide Rapid Spin support, which prevents Thundurus-T from taking Stealth Rock damage. Taunt users such as Heatran and Grimmsnarl pair well with Thundurus-T, as they can also prevent Stealth Rock. Additionally, Grimmsnarl can set up dual screens to provide easier boosting opportunities. Thundurus-T has excellent synergy with fast offensive threats such as Greninja, which can help overwhelms common checks like Latios, Clodsire, and Tinkaton while appreciating Thundurus-T’s ability to pressure bulky Water-type Pokemon like Toxapex. Physical attackers such as Azumarill, Ogerpon, and Ogerpon-C help overpower Ground-types such as Excadrill (RC) and Sandy Shocks (RC) and as well as Unaware users such as Clodsire. Alternatively, set up setup sweepers like Take Heart Manaphy and Air Balloon Revavroom can capitalize on Clodsire.

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thanks to the both of you.
implemented the changes.
im done!
 
missed a change but i think it's good after that
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Tera Blast Flying allows Thundurus-T to break past Grass-types like Hydrapple and Zarude, whereas Focus Blast can be used to hit and remove Exacdrill Excadrill, as well as OHKO specially defensive Heatran and Tyranitar after a Nasty Plot.
 
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