My first RMT (On Smogon)!

[N818]

~Team Overview~

Porygon2
Trace
Leftovers
Modest
240 HP / 164 Def / 12 SpA / 92 SpD
~ Ice Beam
~ Discharge
~ Magic Coat
~ Recover

An Anti-lead of sorts. Counters Hypnosis/any status with Magic Coat, Gyarados with Discharge, Ice Beam for those Dragons... Recover is an amazing recovery move making P2 incredibly durable. Lets not forget Trace, just an incredible ability, making this pokemon one of my favorites.

Mismagius
Levitate
Leftovers
Timid
116 HP / 140 SpA / 252 Spe
~ Calm Mind
~ Shadow Ball
~ Hidden Power Fighting
~ Substitute
My anti-spinner, and Calm Mind sweeper. Obviousily comes in on any of it 3 immunities and sets up a speedy Calm Mind sweep. Not much else to say here.

Lucario
Inner Focus
Life Orb
Adamant
4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
~ Close Combat
~ ExtremeSpeed
~ Swords Dance
~ Bullet Punch
Standard really. Except for the fact that I opted Bullet Punch over Crunch...Im pretty sure a stabed SD Bullet Punch can take out Gengar >.>, I really put this guy on my team for his awesome typing, Im really trying to replace, although hes always been an awesome team player.

Tentacruel
Liquid Ooze
Black Sludge
Clam
204 HP / 52 SpA / 252 SpD
~ Surf
~ Mirror Coat
~ Rapid Spin
~ Toxic Spikes
My special wall, T spiker, Rapid spinner, and status(toxic) absorber. He's great. I really love this guy, comes in on most every Special attack and sets up quickily. Mirror coat is something unusual for a Tentacruel but Its worked great for me. Since unstabbed moves thats super effective against this guy 3HKO him, hes able to easily counter back and threaten to OHKO all opposing forces. Lets not forget his pair, Gliscor, these two work wonders together.

Gliscor
Sand Veil
Leftovers
Impish
252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
~ Earthquake
~ Ice Fang
~ Stealth Rock
~ Roost
Physical Wall, SD luke/ Hera counter, and SR support. Stealth Rock in case my opponent has any Flying/ Levitating pokemon that dont mind coming in on T spikes. I chose Ice Fang for better type coverage. Not much else to say except and amazing physical wall and partners up well with Tentacruel.

Dugtrio
Arena Trap
Choice Band
Jolly
252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
~ Earthquake
~ Aerial Ace
~ Rock Slide
~ Sucker Punch
Revenge killer. I dont see whats so special about Weavile, Dugtrio has a much better ability. Regardless, Sucker Punch for that occasional foe I cant outspeed, I may change Rock Slide up with Stone Edge.

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My only one weakness that isnt covered by a resistance/immunity is psychic. Which Im not to worried about.

So, how did I do?
Be as critical as you want...Rate away!

 

[tennisace]

Well, from what I can see, a ScarfGar running Shadow Ball/Tbolt/HP Ice/Focus Blast rips through your team. Your only hope from what I can see is SD Bullet Punch from Lucario or a Sucker Punch from Dugtrio. However, since Gengar isn't trapped by Arena Trap, it can switch to something that kills Dugtrio, and THEN sweep. I'd recommend replacing Dugtrio with a CB Weavile to help with the weakness.

 

[N818]

Well, from what I can see, a ScarfGar running Shadow Ball/Tbolt/HP Ice/Focus Blast rips through your team. Your only hope from what I can see is SD Bullet Punch from Lucario or a Sucker Punch from Dugtrio. However, since Gengar isn't trapped by Arena Trap, it can switch to something that kills Dugtrio, and THEN sweep. I'd recommend replacing Dugtrio with a CB Weavile to help with the weakness.

I dont really see it ripping through my team at all...I mean, if its scarfed after it deals out one blow, I pretty much can switch to any of my mons. Gliscor is immune to T-bolt and resists Focus Blast, P2 is immune to Shadow ball and could hopefully cripple it with para hax from Discharge, and Tenta. resists Hp Ice and Focus Blast. but thanks for the suggestion on Weavile, Ill seriousily consider it, but Im pretty much in love with Dugtrio.
Edit: A focus Blast from scarf gar is a perfect opportunity for mismagius to come in and set up a calm mind sweep.

 

[adits]

I like your team but they seem to be underused pokes who dont have much potenial...your porygon has to be more sweeper oriented. I like your gliscor ^^. i think it would be better if you swapped your bullet punch with crunch because you dont need 2 "quick moves". Dugtrio and tentacruel do their jobs...mismaguius is a wall not a sweeper. thats my opinion

 

[N818]

I like your team but they seem to be underused pokes who dont have much potenial...your porygon has to be more sweeper oriented. I like your gliscor ^^. i think it would be better if you swapped your bullet punch with crunch because you dont need 2 "quick moves". Dugtrio and tentacruel do their jobs...mismaguius is a wall not a sweeper. thats my opinion

Mismagius walling O.o
Porygon2 sweeping O.o

 

[N818]

-sigh- bump'd...

 

[Lee]

We can see deleted posts y'know. The rules are quite clear; no stealth bumping. I'll leave it open but no more bumps please.