taste the rainbow (ou)

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PURPLE
gliscor@leftovers
sand veil
jolly
252 hp / 40 def / 216 spe
-earthquake
-taunt
-roost
-stealth rock
sets up stealth rocks and breaks down walls. also best opener i think for this team


YELLOW
jolteon@leftovers
volt absorb
timid
252 spe / 252 sp.att / 4 hp
-yawn
-thunderbolt
-wish
-shadow ball
jolteon is perfect to come in on a lightning attack and sets up a yawn or wish depends on the situation. if im baton passed a calm mind or two i come in and start sweeping.


GREEN
celebi@leftovers
natural cure
timid
252 hp / 80 def / 176 spe
-calm mind
-baton pass
-recover
-grass knot
baton passer to jolteon/suicune/heatran. grass knot for stab grass damage ok


BLUE
suicune@leftovers
pressure
bold
252 hp / 252 def / 4 spe
-surf
-rest
-sleep talk
-roar
basic sleep talker/wall. does decent damage with surf. roar works with stealth rock, yo


RED
heatran@choice scarf
flash fire
naive
152 sp.att / 100 att / 252 spe / 4 hp
-flamethrower
-earth power
-explosion
-dragon pulse
fire damage and revenge killer explosion for wtf moments


ORANGE
dragonite@light clay
inner focus
adamant
248 hp / 216 sp.def / 44 spe
-dragon dance
-roost
-light screen
-dragon claw
bulky dancer who light screens yay. roost to heal its self



team strategy
get a sweeper out and kill things. i use jolteon most of the time because it's good. baton pass to heatran is good for kills too but i mostly use him as a revenge killer. suicune is a staller mostly but can sweep fine. the pokemon are there because they are all good on their own, and they go with the rainbow color theme. they all cover each other's weaknesses and can pretty much do all types of damage to every pokemon.



threat list
-really good physical sweepers i guess
-special walls are a pain if gliscor and dragonite are dead



maybe i should replace heatran with scizor and then make dragonite special sweeper. hmm idk
 
It might help if there were more comments on why you chose a certain pokemon and your teams strategy and maybe an improved threatlist?

Nice theme though...
 
You need to fix up your descriptions.

I know this is a theme team, but there are many colorful pokemon, why choose these six, what purpose do they serve as a team? How does pokemon A work with pokemon B who works with the team? This is information we need to know

http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=19179

The Dreaded Rule #3 said:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
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These descriptions aren't good enough by a long shot, PM me something a little more in-depth and I'll reopen this thread. And what is with the spam here? Bright and Fantasy/Nightmare, if you don't have anything constructive to post, don't bother.
 
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