Primal, you mind if I'm in on the story? I've got a very strong writing bachground and I think I'd be able to help a lot. Also, should I do art direction, I believe it'll help me a lot.
Okay, I could show you the old manuscript of the story I wrote last year. The present story is loosely based on it although it will end up very different. The story is 82,000 words in length and took me 3 months to write<last summer.> Although, it's not that great which is why I wanted to re-write it.
Many "roles" have been reversed and altered in my present story, well, the old characters don't exist, but new characters that look vaguely similar. The series of events and the villain types are some thing it has in common<other than it being a story about animals>. I think this new story is actually exciting since I get to use story elements that weren't possible in the previous story. Something the previous story lacked was any strong character conflicts and it was kind of cheesy in some parts while there is none of that in this new story. Do you want to be let in on the new story too? Despite spoilers? :X
It's not finished but I can give you a summary of it.