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Not to prod, but I'm the last post on the last page, if anyone's interested in giving me a critique.

Also, just gonna toss this in. This was the first one I ever made years ago. More a recolor than anything:

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Blazing Mewtwo said:
Well there's my Avy.

Then the previous version of it:

MT.png


Splendid! There seems to be a bit too much going on though.

Mew colored Mewtwo:

dpmfa150.png

Sure. It is a recolor, afterall. The eyes are a bit faded though. Wait, Mew has purple?

Frank from Donnie Darko:

Frank2.png

Strange, but effectiveley done!


A sin against man, god, and nature:

Slowrodactyl.png

Yes...a sin indeed (in a good way).


A bunch of Eeveelutions I made (most of them crap):

Drakeon.png

Nice, although the green is a bit bright.


Meteon.png

Looks a lot like Glaceon still. I'm assuming steel? Perhaps if you made it look shiny.


Spireon.png

Ooo! A ghost type Eevee! You might want to change the shape of the tail, seeing as it still easily resembles Leafeon.


Eeveeon2.png


The best one! Pulled off almost perfectly, if I do say so myself. Might wanna' place a dark pixel at the end of the tail to make it look complete.

Critique appreciated
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Blazing Mewtwo said:
Well there's my Avy.

Then the previous version of it:

MT.png

I like the colors, but there is far too much going on, like Tyrant said.

Mew colored Mewtwo:

dpmfa150.png

The purple part shouldn't be purple, as Mew does not have any. Otherwise it looks good.

Frank from Donnie Darko:

Frank2.png

I don't know what "Frank from Donnie Darko" is, but the mask is quite a bit darker than the rest it looks like. Maybe fix that?

A sin against man, god, and nature:

Slowrodactyl.png

Good, but the lower jaw looks very out of place, and the tail-tip could use a better transition.

A bunch of Eeveelutions I made (most of them crap):

Drakeon.png

Very, VERY bright green, the ears are somewhat out of place, and the wings' shading do not go with the rest of it. I'm also unsure of what the red on the wings is.

Meteon.png

The outline is missing in some parts, it appears, and it still very closely resembles Glaceon. I like the color scheme though.

Spireon.png

Too bright, and still resembling Leafeon very closely. It looks more like you just erased some parts of it and recolored imo.

Eeveeon2.png

Also missing some outline, I believe, and the neck fur is too small in comparison to the head. Good though.

Critique appreciated
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My monitor also blows images up and distorts them, however, so some parts might be wrong.
 
Thanks!

To ToastTyrant:

Yeah, as far as busy goes, I agre. But as I was making it I kept having to add stuff. Two wings made him look unbalanced.

No, Mew doesn't have purple, but that much pink looked odd. To me at least.

I could actually use some advice on the whole making my Metal Eeveelution look shiny, if you can spare it.

Also figuring on making that spot on its back look raised.

To chocolate-kipp:

The mask is intentionally darker than the rest, actually

http://www.eldritchinfluence.net/blogs/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/500full-donnie-darko-poster.jpg

Although, really, it should be the other way around. As well as shiny, but again, I lack that particular skill at the moment.

I have a blue version of Drakeon, but I think it has the exact opposite problem, too dark. I'll probably do some work on them, or start over. The red things below the wings are the end of its tail, but I attached the tail in an awkward position.:

DrakeonB.png


For Spireon, I'm thinking of looking at how they draw Mismagius and copy the style for her ears, tail, and heels.

Eeveeon, I actually intended for the neck fur to be small. Kinda like she grew into it, so it's more like a collar than mammalian plumage like Eevee has.

Again, thank you both.
 
You like bright colors. That blue is just as bright as the green. If it's supossed to be dragon type, try making it a faded color (faded blue is a great color scheme).

Also just posting this because I can (I think I may have posted it already but idk)
LightningSerpentRemake.png

I also have a hypercam of me doing it which can be found here
 
Server_Crash said:
I'm not a fan of randomly adding rotom/ghastly aura to sprites. It looks much cleaner without. My only real critique is that the yellow color palette on the head doesn't seem to match that of the body. Are they the same colors? I would replace the head's colors if not.
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Desumasu has some weird pattern on his head which I forgot to edit >.>

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I didn't edit out the second one coz I kinda like it ;-;
 
Hey, does anyone think , oh I don't know, 5th Gen Revamp (R/B/Y/G/G/S/C sprites revamped to 5th Gen Standards) thread would be viable?

It seems revamps haven't been spoken of often...or even seen.
 
You can just do any revamps you want to do in here. Unless you get a shit-ton of participation, like with the Pillow Spriting, then you can make a thread. But until then, just post any kind of spriting in here.

Or, unless you're willing to make it some sort of competition.
 
I've got some sprites from the past couple years, lol.

A Data Honchkrow
DataHonchkrow.png


Devamp
LickyDevamp.png


Revamped sprite
JoltRevamp.png


Some mutations
Scythios-1.png
Amphaleef2-1.png
MooperRecol.png
Shuckarill.png


My trainer sprite :)
Trainer-1.png


A couple custom XAT avatars
MewAvie2-5.png
ShuckAvie.png


Flygon suited up for that winter weather. Also commonly known as "ScarfGon"
ScarfGon2-1.png
ScarfGon2.png


Feedback and such appreciated.
 
Rolf said:
Flygon suited up for that winter weather. Also commonly known as "ScarfGon"
ScarfGon2-1.png
ScarfGon2.png
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lol, ScarfGon. Nice job. I'm no expert, but I have to admit, that is an incredibly good sprite. Your other sprites are great as well, the Lickilicky in particular was a good job. Keep up the good work.
 
thanks rodan, i worked hord on most of them
and random, the entres (entei moltres) was my first ever sprite, ill make a new version soon

ps thanks for the tip random, ill try not too

also heres a joke:

"Magikarp, use splash!"
"It was super effective!"

ps, post if u laughed
 
good job albinoloon!

random, what should i save it as besides png? im havin traouble findin one like that,
ANYONE THINK THEY CAN HELP ME WITH THAT?
 
Why are you triple posting
@UH all of them are amazing, I just don't get what's special about Kyremu P: is it supposed to be aggron?
 
Teddyman there is a thing called an edit button. Only post multiple times if you have something of worth to add, not just "hey guys, u lieka my sprite?" I think version 3'is the best as number 2 doesn't blend the wings just look stuck there. All of Unhandled's look super duper. You pulled off Sawstantarig perfectly
 
if anyone reads this, i need help with my new avy, (this is only my temporary one) i need a pokeball symbol that in paint is 24x24 pixels that is slightly tilted like this
(\)
<-white, red ->
 
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