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Toxicroak (Analysis)

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[Overview]

<p>Toxicroak is a very diverse Pokemon. It has a plethora of boosting moves and can allowing for it to choose from a powerful Swords Dance set, a Bulk Up sweeper, a Subpuncher, or even a Nasty Plot set. Toxicroak also has access to one of the strongest priority moves, in Sucker Punch and has also obtained a powered-up Drain Punch, giving it a more reliable alternative to Cross Chop. Toxicroak also has a great ability in Dry Skin. With Drizzle present this generation Toxicroak can as well, allowing it to heal 12.5% per turn with Dry Skin in rain. Compounded wWith its useful resistances to Grass-, Water-, Fighting-, Bug-, and Dark-type moves plus Dry Skin, this makes it is relatively easy for Toxicroak to set up. By virtue of its Poison-typing and its ability Dry Skin, Toxicroak can wall nearly every single Bbulky Water-type in the game. The Bulk Up set can make Toxicroak very tough to take down, especially with investment in HP. It also helps heal Toxicroak a lot more when combined with Dry Skin and Leftovers. Toxicroak's Ground, and rather uncommon Psychic and Flying weaknesses can be easily dealt with through a careful selection of teammates. Toxicroak has improved drastically this generation not only because of his new Drain Punch, but also because of the introduction of an certain OU Pokemon with access to Drizzle.</p>

[SET]
Name: Swords Dance
Move 1: Swords Dance
Move 2: Sucker Punch
Move 3: Drain Punch / Low Kick
Move 4: Ice Punch / Substitute
Item: Leftovers / Life Orb
Ability: Dry Skin
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p> A respectable base 106 Attack stat coupled with Swords Dance and Sucker Punch makes Toxicroak a very potent sweeper. After a Swords Dance Toxicroak hits a massive 684 Attack which can dent almost anything that puts a dent in almost anything with Sucker Punch or STAB Drain Punch. Substitute is the main option for the fourth slot on this set. as Iit allows Toxicroak to block status, and set up Swords Dance. Ice Punch is an option over Substitute to defeat Gliscor but Substitute provides relinquishes the protection against priority and allows for an easier time of setting up. It is fairly easy to set up a Swords Dance with Toxicroak by coming in on a predicted Water attack or other weak moves that it resists, and the health that you lose is negligible since it will be healed back by Dry Skin in the rain. This set allows Toxicroak to be one of the most dangerous Pokemon behind a Substitute. After two Swords Dances not even neither dedicated physical walls and nor true counters can stop it. </p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EVs on this set are pretty straightforward, with 252 invested in Attack to maximize the offensive prowess of Toxicroak. and 252 in Speed helps to help outspeed slower Pokemon and set up faster Substitutes. The Adamant nature gives Toxicroak max Attack, and with Leftovers + Dry Skin Toxicroak heals a massive 18.5% of its health per turn in rain. That's more than Poison Heal Gliscor and Breloom. With that this combination you only lose 6.5% of your health after you use make a Substitute. Life Orb is another option as it greatly augments Toxicroak's power output and since Dry Skin virtually cancels out recoil. </p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Vacuum Wave
move 3: Dark Pulse
move 4: Slime Wave / Hidden Power Ice
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
nature: Modest
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Toxicroak can also utilize Nasty Plot to hit hard despite its lower Special Attack. Toxicroak still retains priority in an arguably better form of, STAB Vacuum Wave. Dark Pulse helps hit Psychic- and Ghost-types that resist its fighting STAB and Slime Wave / Hidden Power Ice rounds out the already phenomenal coverage Toxicroak attains with just two moves. Max Special Attack and Speed EVs with a Modest nature provides the most attacking power. This set Toxicroak surprises its Toxicroak's normal counters with strong special attacks after a Nasty Plot boost despite its underwhelming Special Attack stat. The choice between Slime Wave and Hidden Power Ice depends on what your team needs: STAB Slime Wave destroys Grass-types and Hidden Power Ice wrecks the common Garchomp, Landorus, and Gliscor switch-ins. </p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Life Orb is the preferred item as Toxicroak's Special Attack isn't stellar, and it still cancels its recoil damage is canceled out in the rain due to Dry Skin, but Leftovers. However, Leftovers heals a remarkable amount of health in conjunction with Dry Skin. Substitute is an option over the third coverage move to block status and enable an easier time setting up, but Nasty Plot Toxicroak doesn't really suffer from any status like the physical sets do such as with burn. Even paralysis doesn’t particularly matter cripple it due to Toxicroak’s access to STAB priority in the form of Vacuum Wave. Unfortunately, like most special attackers, Blissey and Chansey completely wall it bar a +6 Vacuum Wave. Focus Blast can be used over Hidden Power Ice or Slime Wave for a stronger STAB move but the coverage is usually needed to take out things like Gliscor. An alternative ev EV spread of 244 HP / 252 SpA / 12 Spe is viable but Nasty Plot Toxicroak likes outspeeding things rather than staying around longer trading hits.</p>

[SET]
name: Bulk Up
move 1: Bulk Up
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Drain Punch
move 4: Payback / Sucker Punch
item: Leftovers
nature: Adamant
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Def

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea is to come in on something that you can set up on, ideally a Water- or Bug-type move, and use sSubstitute on the switch. Substitute provides protection from status but leaves you vulnerable to phazing, however . However, most things that can phaze such as most of the common OU phazers, such as Hippowdon and Skarmory, are more likely to KO with their STAB Ground- and Flying-type moves, respectively. However, Nevertheless, once this Toxicroak is set up, it can essentially be more destructive than the Swords Dance set. After a few Bulk Ups the defense boost allows him it to take an Earthquake from even Hippowdon and heal his its health back with Drain Punch, leaving Hippowdon in the conundrum of using either Slack Off to heal or another Earthquake. 244 evs EVs in HP keeps Toxicroak as bulky as possible without taking away attacking power. Speed investment isn't worth much since Toxicroak is plodding at best anyway.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Substitute allows gives Toxicroak many more opportunities to set up, and with a few Bulk Ups under its belt, Toxicroak becomes a decent physical wall bar supereffective super effective STAB Earthquakes. Toxicroak becomes so physically bulky after one Bulk Up that even Choice Band Scizor will not be able to 2HKO with Bullet Punch after a Bulk Up, while —plus Toxicroak naturally resists Scizor’s other common moves such as Bug Bite, U-turn, and Superpower. Low Kick is an option over Drain Punch to hit heavy foes, but this set usually needs the healing from Drain Punch as it is meant to be bulky and the healing allows Toxicroak to stay around longer. Toxicroak can also utilize Taunt to prevent Pphazers like Skarmory from ruining its day, but Toxicroak is rather frail and will be KOed by something like Brave Bird anyway.</p>

[Set]
name: SubPunch
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Focus Punch
move 3: Sucker Punch / Payback
move 4: Ice Punch
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
ability: Dry Skin
nature: Adamant
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea of this set is to come in on something you can force out or wall, and either use Substitute or Focus Punch on the switch, to do some with the latter doing serious damage, even when resisted. Sucker Punch is used to beat faster threats who are immune to Focus Punch such as Gengar, but Payback can be used if the Sucker Punch feels too unreliable. Ice Punch destroys Gliscor on the switch and also hits other Flying-types, who can then usually be finished off with a Sucker Punch. The evs EVs provide reasonable bulk as this set doesn't need Speed. With Sucker Punch, Toxicroak can scare faster threats like Latios and Latias with Sucker Punch to force a switch, however, —however, if they use Substitute is used by them, Toxicroak will always lose. Leftovers could be used over Life Orb but isn't recommended as Toxicroak needs the extra power since it doesn't have it provides in absence of Swords Dance or Bulk Up.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>An alternative EV spread of 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Speed allows Toxicroak to outspeed most Gliscor and other threats hovering around the Base 80 range, but this set is focused on using Substitute to avoid direct hits so sSpeed investment isn't as necessary as proper switching. Unlike the other sets which have a means of boosting, this set may sometimes miss out on OHKOs and therefore it is important to remove physical walls before attempting to sweep. This set is meant to hit hard early game and also functions as a late game sweeper. With the proper support, SubPunch Toxicroak can pose a serious threat. Because of its ability, it is always recommended to have Politoed as a teammate to provide permanent rain and also as a buffer against Ninetales with Drought. With regards to moves, Toxicroak doesn't really have that many more options other than perhaps Stone Edge over Ice Punch, but the only notable coverage you lose with Ice Punch over Stone Edge is on Gyarados, and Toxicroak walls Gyarados without lacking Earthquake or Bounce.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>Toxicroak is best paired with Politoed to abuse its Dry Skin ability. Skarmory, Zapdos, and Scizor are all great teammates for Toxicroak, as they cover his weaknesses to Psychic, Flying, and Ground. In addition, Zapdos and Scizor directly benefit from permanent rain as well due to a perfectly accurate Thunder and halved Fire weakness, respectively. Skarmory deserves a special mention for its ability to set up entry hazards as well as and phasze, to both of which help Toxicroak get KO's much easier more easily. Substitute is essential for every physical set as it provides Toxicroak with many more opportunities to set up and attack, but the loss of Ice Punch is notable and leaves you unable to defeat Gliscor barring a critical hit. A Choice Band set with Drain Punch or Cross Chop / Sucker Punch / Stone Edge / Ice Punch could work although it is mostly outclassed by the Swords Dance set.</p>

[Checks and Counters]

<p>Most physical walls can beat physical Toxicroak due to his frailty, but must watch out for Nasty Plot variants. Skarmory resists Dark-type moves, is neutral to Fighting-type moves, is immune to Poison-type moves, and can KO with STAB Brave Bird or phaze him out with Whirlwind. Hippowdon also works well to phaze Toxicroak out with roar or KO with Earthquake as it phazes Toxicroak out with Roar or KOes with Earthquake, but a +2 Life Orb Drain Punch from Toxicroak can 2HKO, and a Nasty Plot boosted Hidden Power Ice will usually OHKO most of the time. Gliscor can wall all of Toxicroak’s sets, bar the Nasty Plot set with Hidden Power Ice and the physical sets with Ice Punch, and in return KOes with Earthquake or Acrobatics. Gliscor is generally the best counter due to its enormous defense and resistance to Fighting-type moves. Faster Flying-types will usually beat Toxicroak,especially Tornadus, as the rain will give it a 100% accurate Hurricane. Because Toxicroak’s defenses are nothing to write home about, even strong neutral hits have a large chance to 2HKO,such as Thundurus’ Life Orb boosted Thunderbolt. Ghost-types with substitute can work around a Toxicroak utilizing Sucker Punch and can to outstall and eventually KO it. SubDisable Gengar works especially well as once Sucker Punch or Dark Pulse is Disabled, Toxicroak is completely walled by Gengar bar Ice Punch or Hidden Power Ice.</p>

[Dream World]

<p>Toxicroak’s Dream World ability is Poison Touch, which gives a 30% chance of normal poison to all of his contact moves. This ability is nearly as useless as Anticipation and should not be used over Dry Skin under any circumstances. Dry Skin is the primary reason that Toxicroak is viable in OU, otherwise, Toxicroak is a very average Pokemon.</p>
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[Overview]

<p>Toxicroak is a very diverse Pokemon. It has a plethora of boosting moves and can choose from a powerful Swords Dance set, a Bulk Up sweeper, a Subpuncher, and even a Nasty Plot set. It has a wide variety of offensive options as well, including strong priority in Sucker Punch and and the new-and-improved Drain Punch, a far more reliable STAB option than Cross Chop. Toxicroak also has a great ability in Dry Skin, which grants it 12.5% recovery each turn as long as it's raining. With its unique Poison/Fighting typing granting useful resistances to Grass-, Water-, Fighting-, Bug-, and Dark-type moves plus Dry Skin it is relatively easy for Toxicroak to set up. Furthermore, that same typing and ability combination grants Toxicroak the ability to wall very nearly every bulky Water in the game. A Bulk Up set can make Toxicroak very tough to take down given some HP investment; it also dramatically increases Toxicroak's HP recovery through Drain Punch, particularly when combined with Dry Skin and Leftovers. Toxicroak's fairly few weaknesses are easily dealt with by the typings of its teammates. Toxicroak has improved drastically this generation due in equal parts to the introduction of Drizzle Politoed and to a vastly improved Drain Punch.</p>

[SET]
Name: Swords Dance
Move 1: Swords Dance
Move 2: Sucker Punch
Move 3: Drain Punch / Low Kick
Move 4: Ice Punch / Substitute
Item: Leftovers / Life Orb
Ability: Dry Skin
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p> A respectable base 106 Attack stat coupled with Swords Dance and Sucker Punch makes Toxicroak a very potent sweeper. After a Swords Dance Toxicroak hits a massive 684 Attack which can dent almost anything with Sucker Punch or its STAB Drain Punch. Substitute is the main option for the fourth slot on this set. It allows Toxicroak to block status, and set up Swords Dance. Ice Punch is an option over Substitute to defeat Gliscor, but Substitute provides protection against priority and allows for an easier time setting up. It is fairly easy to set up a Swords Dance with Toxicroak by coming in on either a predicted Water attack or a weaker attack which Toxicroak resists resists; the health that you lose is negligible due to Dry Skin healing. This set allows Toxicroak to be one of the most dangerous Pokemon in the game once behind a Substitute. After two Swords Dances, not even dedicated physical walls and true counters can stop it. </p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EVs on this set are pretty straightforward, 252 Attack to maximize Toxicroak's offensive prowess. 252 Speed helps outspeed slower Pokemon and set up faster Substitutes. The Adamant nature gives Toxicroak max Attack and with Leftovers + Dry Skin Toxicroak heals a massive 18.5% of its health per turn. That's more than Poison Heal Gliscor and Breloom. With that combination you only lose 6.5% of your health after using Substitute. Life Orb is another option as it greatly augments Toxicroak's damage output and since Dry Skin cancels out recoil. </p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Vacuum Wave
move 3: Dark Pulse
move 4: Slime Wave / Hidden Power Ice
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
nature: Modest
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Toxicroak can also utilize Nasty Plot to hit hard, despite its lower Special Attack. Toxicroak still retains priority in the arguably better form of STAB Vacuum Wave, while Dark Pulse and Slime Wave or Hidden Power Ice round out the already phenomenal coverage Toxicroak attains with just two moves. Maximum Special Attack and Speed with a Modest nature provides the most attacking power. Toxicroak surprises its normal counters with strong special attacks after a Nasty Plot boost, despite its underwhelming Special Attack stat. The choice between Slime Wave and Hidden Power Ice depends on what your team needs: Slime Wave destroys Grass-types and Hidden Power Ice wrecks Garchomp, Landorus, and Gliscor switch-ins.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Life Orb is the preferred item as Toxicroak's Special Attack isn't stellar, and it still cancels recoil damage in the rain due to Dry Skin, but Leftovers heals a remarkable amount of health in conjunction with Dry Skin. Substitute is an option over the third coverage move to block status and enable an easier time setting up, but Nasty Plot Toxicroak doesn't really suffer from any status like the physical sets do such as burn. Even paralysis doesn’t particularly matter due to Toxicroak’s access to STAB priority in the form of Vacuum Wave. Unfortunately, like most special attackers, Blissey and Chansey completely wall it bar a +6 Vacuum Wave. Focus Blast can be used over Hidden Power Ice or Slime Wave for a stronger STAB move but the coverage is usually needed to take out things like Gliscor. An alternative EV spread of 244 HP / 252 SpA / 12 Spe is viable, but Nasty Plot Toxicroak likes outspeeding things, rather than staying around longer.</p>

[SET]
name: Bulk Up
move 1: Bulk Up
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Drain Punch
move 4: Payback / Sucker Punch
item: Leftovers
nature: Adamant
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Def

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea is to come in on something that you can set up on, ideally a Water- or Bug-type move, and use Substitute on the switch. Substitute provides protection from status, though it leaves you vulnerable to phazing. However, most things that are likely to carry Roar, Whirlwind, or Dragon Tail, such as Skarmory and Hippowdon, are more likely to attack with their super-effective STAB attacks. Once Toxicroak is set up, though, it can be even more destructive than the Swords Dance set. After a few Bulk Ups, the Defense boosts allow him to take Earthquakes from things as powerful as Hippowdon, survive, and recover lost health with Drain Punch, leaving Hippowdon in the conundrum of using either Slack Off to heal or another Earthquake. 244 EVs in HP keep Toxicroak as bulky as possible without taking away attack power. Speed investment isn't worth much since Toxicroak is plodding at best anyway.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Substitute allows Toxicroak many more opportunities to set up, and with a few Bulk Ups under its belt, Toxicroak becomes a decent physical wall bar super-effective STAB Earthquakes. Toxicroak becomes so physically bulky that even Choice Band Scizor will not be able to 2HKO with Bullet Punch after a Bulk Up, while Toxicroak naturally resists Scizor’s other moves such as Bug Bite, U-turn, and Superpower. Low Kick is an option over Drain Punch to hit heavy foes, but this set usually needs the healing from Drain Punch to stay around as long as possible. Toxicroak can also utilize Taunt to prevent Phazers like Skarmory from ruining its day, but Toxicroak is rather frail and will be KO’ed by something like Brave Bird anyway.</p>

[Set]
name: SubPunch
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Focus Punch
move 3: Sucker Punch / Payback
move 4: Ice Punch
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
ability: Dry Skin
nature: Adamant
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea of this set is to come in on something you can force out or wall, and either use Substitute or Focus Punch on the switch to do some serious damage, even when resisted. Sucker Punch is to beat faster threats who are immune to Focus Punch such as Gengar, but Payback can be used if the Sucker Punch feels too unreliable. Ice Punch destroys Gliscor on the switch and also hits other Flying-types, who can then usually be finished off with a Sucker Punch. The EVs provide reasonable bulk; this set doesn't need Speed. With Sucker Punch, Toxicroak can scare faster threats like Latios and Latias to force a switch, however, if Substitute is used by them, Toxicroak will always lose. Leftovers could be used over Life Orb. but it isn't recommended. Toxicroak needs the extra power, since it doesn't have Swords Dance or Bulk Up.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>An alternative EV spread of 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Speed allows Toxicroak to outspeed most Gliscor and other threats hovering around the Base 80 range, but this set is focused on using Substitute to avoid direct hits so speed isn't as necessary as proper switching. Unlike the other sets which have a means of boosting, this set may sometimes miss out on OHKOs; therefore, it is important to remove physical walls before attempting to sweep. This set is meant to hit hard early game and also functions as a late game sweeper. With the proper support, SubPunch Toxicroak can pose a serious threat. Because of its ability, it is always recommended to have Politoed as a teammate to provide permanent rain and also as a buffer against Ninetales with Drought. With regards to moves, Toxicroak doesn't really have that many more options other than perhaps Stone Edge over Ice Punch, but the only notable coverage you lose with Ice Punch over Stone Edge is Gyarados, and Toxicroak walls Gyarados without Earthquake or Bounce.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>Toxicroak is best paired with Politoed to abuse its Dry Skin ability. Skarmory, Zapdos, and Scizor are all great teammates for Toxicroak, as they cover his weaknesses to Psychic, Flying, and Ground. In addition, Zapdos and Scizor directly benefit from permanent rain as well due to a perfectly accurate Thunder and halved Fire weakness respectively. Skarmory deserves special mention for its ability to set up entry hazards as well as phaze to help Toxicroak get KO’s much easier. Substitute is essential for every physical set as it provides Toxicroak with many more opportunities to set up and attack, but the loss of Ice Punch is notable and leaves you unable to defeat Gliscor barring a critical hit. A Choice Band set with Drain Punch or Cross Chop / Sucker Punch / Stone Edge / Ice Punch could work although it is mostly outclassed by the Swords Dance set.</p>

[Checks and Counters]

<p>Most physical walls can beat physical Toxicroak due to his frailty, but must watch out for Nasty Plot variants. Skarmory resists Dark-type moves, is neutral to Fighting-type moves, is immune to Poison-type moves, and can KO with STAB Brave Bird or phaze him out with Whirlwind. Hippowdon also works well to phaze Toxicroak out with roar or KO with Earthquake, but a +2 Life Orb Drain Punch can 2HKO, and a Nasty Plot boosted Hidden Power Ice will OHKO most of the time. Gliscor can wall all of Toxicroak’s sets bar the Nasty Plot set with Hidden Power Ice and the physical sets with Ice Punch and KO with Earthquake or Acrobatics. Gliscor is generally the best counter due to its enormous defense and resistance to Fighting-type moves. Faster Flying-types will usually beat Toxicroak, especially Tornadus as the rain will give it a 100% accurate Hurricane. Because Toxicroak’s defenses are nothing to write home about, even strong neutral hits have a large chance to 2HKO, such as Thundurus’ Life Orb boosted Thunderbolt. Ghost-types with substitute can work around Toxicroak utilizing Sucker Punch and can outstall and eventually KO. SubDisable Gengar works especially well as once Sucker Punch or Dark Pulse is Disabled, Toxicroak is completely walled by Gengar bar Ice Punch or Hidden Power Ice.</p>

[Dream World]

<p>Toxicroak’s Dream World ability is Poison Touch, which gives a 30% chance of causing Poison to all of his contact moves. This ability is nearly as useless as Anticipation and should not be used over Dry Skin under any circumstances. Dry Skin is the primary reason that Toxicroak is viable in OU; without it, Toxicroak is a very average Pokemon.</p>

[Overview]

<p>Toxicroak is a very diverse Pokemon. It has a plethora of boosting moves and can choose from a powerful Swords Dance set, a Bulk Up sweeper, a Subpuncher, and even a Nasty Plot set. Toxicroak has access to one of the strongest priority moves, Sucker Punch and has also obtained a powered-up Drain Punch, a more reliable alternative to Cross Chop It has a wide variety of offensive options as well, including strong priority in Sucker Punch and and the new-and-improved Drain Punch, a far more reliable STAB option than Cross Chop. Toxicroak also has a great ability in Dry Skin, which grants it 12.5% recovery each turn as long as it's raining. With Drizzle present this generation Toxicroak can heal 12.5% per turn with Dry Skin. With its unique Poison/Fighting typing granting useful resistances to Grass-, Water-, Fighting-, Bug-, and Dark-type moves plus Dry Skin it is relatively easy for Toxicroak to set up. Furthermore, that same typing and ability combination grants Toxicroak the ability to wall very nearly every bulky Water in the game. By virtue of its Poison-typing and its ability Dry Skin, Toxicroak can wall nearly every single Bulky Water-type in the game. The A Bulk Up set can make Toxicroak very tough to take down, especially with investment in HP given some HP investment; it also helps heal Toxicroak a lot more dramatically increases Toxicroak's HP recovery through Drain Punch, particularly when combined with Dry Skin and Leftovers. Toxicroak's Ground, and rather uncommon Psychic and Flying weaknesses can be fairly few weaknesses are easily dealt with through a careful selection of by the typings of its teammates. Toxicroak has improved drastically this generation not only because of his new Drain Punch, but also because of the introduction of an OU Pokemon with access to Drizzle due in equal parts to the introduction of Drizzle Politoed and to a vastly improved Drain Punch.</p>

[SET]
Name: Swords Dance
Move 1: Swords Dance
Move 2: Sucker Punch
Move 3: Drain Punch / Low Kick
Move 4: Ice Punch / Substitute
Item: Leftovers / Life Orb
Ability: Dry Skin
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p> A respectable base 106 Attack stat coupled with Swords Dance and Sucker Punch makes Toxicroak a very potent sweeper. After a Swords Dance Toxicroak hits a massive 684 Attack which can dent almost anything with Sucker Punch or its STAB Drain Punch. Substitute is the main option for the fourth slot on this set. It allows Toxicroak to block status, and set up Swords Dance. Ice Punch is an option over Substitute to defeat Gliscor, but Substitute provides protection against priority and allows for an easier time of setting up. It is fairly easy to set up a Swords Dance with Toxicroak by coming in on either a predicted Water attack or other weak moves a weaker attack which Toxicroak resists that it resists; and the health that you lose is negligible since it will be healed back by Dry Skin in the rain due to Dry Skin healing. This set allows Toxicroak to be one of the most dangerous Pokemon in the game once behind a Substitute. After two Swords Dances, not even dedicated physical walls and true counters can stop it. </p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EVs on this set are pretty straightforward, 252 Attack to maximize the Toxicroak's offensive prowess of Toxicroak. 252 Speed helps outspeed slower Pokemon and set up faster Substitutes. The Adamant nature gives Toxicroak max Attack and with Leftovers + Dry Skin Toxicroak heals a massive 18.5% of its health per turn. That's more than Poison Heal Gliscor and Breloom. With that combination you only lose 6.5% of your health after you use a using Substitute. Life Orb is another option as it greatly augments Toxicroak's power damage output and since Dry Skin cancels out recoil. </p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Vacuum Wave
move 3: Dark Pulse
move 4: Slime Wave / Hidden Power Ice
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
nature: Modest
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Toxicroak can also utilize Nasty Plot to hit hard, despite its lower Special Attack. Toxicroak still retains priority in an the arguably better form of STAB Vacuum Wave, while Dark Pulse and Slime Wave / or Hidden Power Ice round out the already phenomenal coverage Toxicroak attains with just two moves. Maximum Special Attack and Speed with a Modest nature provides the most attacking power. Toxicroak surprises its normal counters with strong special attacks after a Nasty Plot boost, despite its underwhelming Special Attack stat. The choice between Slime Wave and Hidden Power Ice depends on what your team needs: Slime Wave destroys Grass-types and Hidden Power Ice wrecks Garchomp, Landorus, and Gliscor switch-ins.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Life Orb is the preferred item as Toxicroak's Special Attack isn't stellar, and it still cancels recoil damage in the rain due to Dry Skin, but Leftovers heals a remarkable amount of health in conjunction with Dry Skin. Substitute is an option over the third coverage move to block status and enable an easier time setting up, but Nasty Plot Toxicroak doesn't really suffer from any status like the physical sets do such as burn. Even paralysis doesn’t particularly matter due to Toxicroak’s access to STAB priority in the form of Vacuum Wave. Unfortunately, like most special attackers, Blissey and Chansey completely wall it bar a +6 Vacuum Wave. Focus Blast can be used over Hidden Power Ice or Slime Wave for a stronger STAB move but the coverage is usually needed to take out things like Gliscor. An alternative EV spread of 244 HP / 252 SpA / 12 Spe is viable, but Nasty Plot Toxicroak likes outspeeding things, rather than staying around longer.</p>

[SET]
name: Bulk Up
move 1: Bulk Up
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Drain Punch
move 4: Payback / Sucker Punch
item: Leftovers
nature: Adamant
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Def

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea is to come in on something that you can set up on, ideally a Water- or Bug-type move, and use Substitute on the switch. Substitute provides protection from status, though it leaves you vulnerable to phazing. However, most things that can phaze are likely to carry Roar, Whirlwind, or Dragon Tail, such as Skarmory and Hippowdon, are more likely to KO attack with their STAB Ground and Flying-type moves super-effective STAB attacks. However, Once Toxicroak is set up, though, it can essentially be even more destructive than the Swords Dance set. After a few Bulk Ups, the Defense boosts allows him to take an Earthquakes from even things as powerful as Hippowdon, survive, and heal his health back recover lost health with Drain Punch, leaving Hippowdon in the conundrum of using either Slack Off to heal or another Earthquake. 244 EVs in HP keeps Toxicroak as bulky as possible without taking away attack power. Speed investment isn't worth much since Toxicroak is plodding at best anyway.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Substitute allows Toxicroak many more opportunities to set up, and with a few Bulk Ups under its belt, Toxicroak becomes a decent physical wall bar super-effective STAB Earthquakes. Toxicroak becomes so physically bulky that even Choice Band Scizor will not be able to 2HKO with Bullet Punch after a Bulk Up, while Toxicroak naturally resists Scizor’s other moves such as Bug Bite, U-turn, and Superpower. Low Kick is an option over Drain Punch to hit heavy foes, but this set usually needs the healing from Drain Punch as it is meant to be bulky and the healing allows Toxicroak to stay around longer as long as possible. Toxicroak can also utilize Taunt to prevent Phazers like Skarmory from ruining its day, but Toxicroak is rather frail and will be KO’ed by something like Brave Bird anyway.</p>

[Set]
name: SubPunch
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Focus Punch
move 3: Sucker Punch / Payback
move 4: Ice Punch
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
ability: Dry Skin
nature: Adamant
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea of this set is to come in on something you can force out or wall, and either use Substitute or Focus Punch on the switch to do some serious damage, even when resisted. Sucker Punch is to beat faster threats who are immune to Focus Punch such as Gengar, but Payback can be used if the Sucker Punch feels too unreliable. Ice Punch destroys Gliscor on the switch and also hits other Flying-types, who can then usually be finished off with a Sucker Punch. The EVs provide reasonable bulk; as this set doesn't need Speed. With Sucker Punch, Toxicroak can scare faster threats like Latios and Latias to force a switch, however, if Substitute is used by them, Toxicroak will always lose. Leftovers could be used over Life Orb. but it isn't recommended. as Toxicroak needs the extra power, since it doesn't have Swords Dance or Bulk Up.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>An alternative EV spread of 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Speed allows Toxicroak to outspeed most Gliscor and other threats hovering around the Base 80 range, but this set is focused on using Substitute to avoid direct hits so speed isn't as necessary as proper switching. Unlike the other sets which have a means of boosting, this set may sometimes miss out on OHKOs; therefore, it is important to remove physical walls before attempting to sweep. This set is meant to hit hard early game and also functions as a late game sweeper. With the proper support, SubPunch Toxicroak can pose a serious threat. Because of its ability, it is always recommended to have Politoed as a teammate to provide permanent rain and also as a buffer against Ninetales with Drought. With regards to moves, Toxicroak doesn't really have that many more options other than perhaps Stone Edge over Ice Punch, but the only notable coverage you lose with Ice Punch over Stone Edge is Gyarados, and Toxicroak walls Gyarados without Earthquake or Bounce.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>Toxicroak is best paired with Politoed to abuse its Dry Skin ability. Skarmory, Zapdos, and Scizor are all great teammates for Toxicroak, as they cover his weaknesses to Psychic, Flying, and Ground. In addition, Zapdos and Scizor directly benefit from permanent rain as well due to a perfectly accurate Thunder and halved Fire weakness respectively. Skarmory deserves special mention for its ability to set up entry hazards as well as phaze to help Toxicroak get KO’s much easier. Substitute is essential for every physical set as it provides Toxicroak with many more opportunities to set up and attack, but the loss of Ice Punch is notable and leaves you unable to defeat Gliscor barring a critical hit. A Choice Band set with Drain Punch or Cross Chop / Sucker Punch / Stone Edge / Ice Punch could work although it is mostly outclassed by the Swords Dance set.</p>

[Checks and Counters]

<p>Most physical walls can beat physical Toxicroak due to his frailty, but must watch out for Nasty Plot variants. Skarmory resists Dark-type moves, is neutral to Fighting-type moves, is immune to Poison-type moves, and can KO with STAB Brave Bird or phaze him out with Whirlwind. Hippowdon also works well to phaze Toxicroak out with roar or KO with Earthquake, but a +2 Life Orb Drain Punch can 2HKO, and a Nasty Plot boosted Hidden Power Ice will OHKO most of the time. Gliscor can wall all of Toxicroak’s sets bar the Nasty Plot set with Hidden Power Ice and the physical sets with Ice Punch and KO with Earthquake or Acrobatics. Gliscor is generally the best counter due to its enormous defense and resistance to Fighting-type moves. Faster Flying-types will usually beat Toxicroak, especially Tornadus as the rain will give it a 100% accurate Hurricane. Because Toxicroak’s defenses are nothing to write home about, even strong neutral hits have a large chance to 2HKO, such as Thundurus’ Life Orb boosted Thunderbolt. Ghost-types with substitute can work around Toxicroak utilizing Sucker Punch and can outstall and eventually KO. SubDisable Gengar works especially well as once Sucker Punch or Dark Pulse is Disabled, Toxicroak is completely walled by Gengar bar Ice Punch or Hidden Power Ice.</p>

[Dream World]

<p>Toxicroak’s Dream World ability is Poison Touch, which gives a 30% chance of normal causing Poison to all of his contact moves. This ability is nearly as useless as Anticipation and should not be used over Dry Skin under any circumstances. Dry Skin is the primary reason that Toxicroak is viable in OU; , otherwise without it, Toxicroak is a very average Pokemon.</p>


Made it read a bit better, fixed some of the awkward phrasing.

(Also swapped Ice Punch and Substitute, since
 
I don't think Drain Punch and Ice Punch can be on the same set. Ice punch is only available through move tutor in Gen IV and Drain Punch is an egg move in Gen V. Even though it was a TM in Gen IV, Toxicroak couldn't learn it or have it as an egg move so that is an illegal moveset.
 
[Overview]

<p>Toxicroak is a very diverse Pokemon. It has a plethora of many boosting moves and can choose from run a powerful Swords Dance set, a Bulk Up sweeper, a Subpuncher, and even a Nasty Plot set. Toxicroak has access to one of the strongest priority moves, Sucker Punch, and has also obtained now has a powered-up Drain Punch, a more reliable alternative to Cross Chop.Toxicroak also has a great ability in Dry Skin., which allows it to heal 12.5% of its HP with Drizzle active. With Drizzle present this generation Toxicroak can heal 12.5% per turn with Dry Skin. With its useful resistances to Grass-, Water-, Fighting-, Bug-, and Dark-type moves plus Dry skin it is relatively easy for Toxicroak to set up. By virtue Because of of its Poison-typing and its ability Dry Skin, Toxicroak can wall nearly every single bulky Water-type in the game. The Bulk Up set can make makes Toxicroak very tough to take down, especially with investment in HP. It also helps heal Toxicroak a lot more when combined with Dry Skin and Leftovers.
Toxicroak's Ground, and rather uncommon Psychic, and Flying weaknesses can be easily dealt with through a careful selection of teammates. Toxicroak has improved drastically this generation not only because of his new Drain Punch, but also and because of the introduction of an OU Pokemon with access to Drizzle.</p>

[SET]
Name: Swords Dance
Move 1: Swords Dance
Move 2: Sucker Punch
Move 3: Drain Punch / Low Kick
Move 4: Ice Punch / Substitute
Item: Leftovers / Life Orb
Ability: Dry Skin
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p> A respectable base 106 Attack stat coupled with Swords Dance and Sucker Punch makes Toxicroak a very potent sweeper. After a Swords Dance Toxicroak hits a massive 684 Attack which can dent almost anything with Sucker Punch or STAB Drain Punch. Substitute is the main option for the fourth slot on this set. It allows Toxicroak to block status, and set up Swords Dance. Ice Punch is an option over Substitute to defeat Gliscor but Substitute provides protection against priority and allows for an easier time of setting up. It is fairly easy to set up a Swords Dance with Toxicroak by coming in on a predicted Water attack or other weak moves. that it resists and The health that you lose it loses is negligible since because it will be healed back by Dry Skin in the rain. This set allows Toxicroak to be one of the most dangerous Pokemon behind a Substitute. After two Swords Dances not even dedicated physical walls and true counters can stop it. </p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EVs on this set are pretty straightforward, 252 Attack to maximize the offensive prowess of Toxicroak Toxicroak's offensive prowess. 252 Speed helps outspeed slower Pokemon and set up faster Substitutes quickly set up a Substitute. The Adamant nature gives Toxicroak max Attack and with Leftovers + Dry Skin Toxicroak heals a massive 18.5% of its health per turn, which is more than Poison Heal Gliscor and Breloom. With that combination you it only loses 6.5% of your its health after you use a using Substitute. Life Orb is another option as it greatly augments Toxicroak's power output and since Dry Skin cancels out recoil. </p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Vacuum Wave
move 3: Dark Pulse
move 4: Slime Wave / Hidden Power Ice
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
nature: Modest
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Toxicroak can also utilize use Nasty Plot to hit hard despite its lower Special Attack. Toxicroak still retains priority in an arguably better form of STAB Vacuum Wave. Dark Pulse and either Slime Wave / or Hidden Power Ice round out the already phenomenal coverage Toxicroak attains obtains with just two moves its two STABs. Max Special Attack and Speed with a Modest nature provides the most attacking power. Toxicroak surprises its normal counters with strong special attacks after a Nasty Plot boost despite its underwhelming Special Attack stat. The choice between Slime Wave and Hidden Power Ice depends on what your team needs: Slime Wave destroys Grass-types and Hidden Power Ice wrecks Garchomp, Landorus, and Gliscor switch-ins.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Life Orb is the preferred item as Toxicroak's Special Attack isn't stellar, and it still cancels recoil damage in the rain due to Dry Skin, but Leftovers heals a remarkable amount of health in conjunction with Dry Skin. Substitute is an option over the third coverage move to block status and enable an easier time setting up, but Nasty Plot Toxicroak doesn't really suffer from any status like the physical sets do such as burn. Even paralysis doesn't particularly matter due to Toxicroak’s access to STAB priority in the form of Vacuum Wave. Unfortunately, like most special attackers, Blissey and Chansey completely wall it bar a +6 Vacuum Wave. Focus Blast can be used over Hidden Power Ice or Slime Wave for a stronger STAB move but the coverage is usually needed to take out things like Pokemon such as Gliscor. An alternative ev EV spread of 244 HP / 252 SpA / 12 Spe is viable but Nasty Plot Toxicroak likes prefers outspeeding things rather than to staying around longer.</p>

[SET]
name: Bulk Up
move 1: Bulk Up
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Drain Punch
move 4: Payback / Sucker Punch
item: Leftovers
nature: Adamant
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Def

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea of this set is to come in on something that you it can set up on, ideally a Water- or Bug-type move, and use Substitute on the switch. Substitute provides protection from status but leaves you vulnerable to phazing, however, most things that can phaze such as Skarmory and Hippowdon are more likely to KO with their STAB Ground and Flying-type moves. However, once Toxicroak is set up, it can essentially be more destructive than the Swords Dance set. After a few Bulk Ups the defense boost allows him to take an Earthquake from even Hippowdon and heal his health back with Drain Punch, leaving giving Hippowdon in the conundrum the dilemma of using either Slack Off to heal or another Earthquake. 244 EVs in HP keeps Toxicroak as bulky as possible without taking away attack power. Speed investment isn't worth much since Toxicroak is plodding has average Speed at best anyway.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Substitute allows Toxicroak many more opportunities to set up and with a few Bulk Ups under its belt, Toxicroak becomes a decent physical wall bar supereffective STAB Earthquakes. Toxicroak becomes so physically bulky that even Choice Band Scizor will not be able to 2HKO with Bullet Punch after a Bulk Up, while Toxicroak naturally resists Scizor’s other moves such as Bug Bite, U-turn, and Superpower. Low Kick is an option over Drain Punch to hit heavy foes, but this set usually needs the healing from Drain Punch as it is meant to be bulky and the healing allows Toxicroak to stay around longer. Toxicroak can also utilize Taunt to prevent Phazers like Skarmory from ruining its daysweep, but Toxicroak is rather frail and will be KO’ed by something like Brave Bird anyway.</p>

[Set]
name: SubPunch
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Focus Punch
move 3: Sucker Punch / Payback
move 4: Ice Punch
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
ability: Dry Skin
nature: Adamant
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea of this set is to come in on something you can force out or wall, and either use Substitute or Focus Punch on the switch to do some serious damage, even when resisted. Sucker Punch is to beat faster threats who are immune to Focus Punch such as Gengar, but Payback can be used if the Sucker Punch feels too unreliable. Ice Punch destroys Gliscor on the switch and also hits other Flying-types, who can then usually be finished off with a Sucker Punch. The EVs provide reasonable bulk as this set doesn't need Speed. With Sucker Punch, Toxicroak can scare off[/b faster threats such as Latios and Latias and force a switch. However, if Substitute is used by them one of them uses Substitute, Toxicroak will always lose. Leftovers could can be used over Life Orb but isn't recommended as Toxicroak needs the extra power since it doesn't have Swords Dance or Bulk Up.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>An alternative EV spread of 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Speed allows Toxicroak to outspeed most Gliscor and other threats hovering around the Base 80 range, but this set is focused on using Substitute to avoid direct hits so Speed isn't as necessary as proper switching necessary. Unlike the other sets which have a means of boosting, this set may sometimes miss out on OHKOs, therefore it is important to remove physical walls before attempting to sweepwith this set. This set is meant to hit hard early game and also functions as a late game sweeper. With the proper support, SubPunch Toxicroak can pose a serious threat. Because of its ability, it is always recommended to have Politoed as a teammate to provide permanent rain and also as a buffer against Ninetales with Drought. With regards to moves, Toxicroak doesn't really have that many more options other than perhaps Stone Edge over Ice Punch, but the only notable coverage you lose with Ice Punch over Stone Edge is Gyarados, and Toxicroak already walls Gyarados without Earthquake or Bounce.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>Toxicroak is best paired with Politoed to abuse its Dry Skin ability. Skarmory, Zapdos, and Scizor are all great teammates for Toxicroak, as because they cover his weaknesses to Psychic, Flying, and Ground. In addition, Zapdos and Scizor directly benefit from permanent rain as well due to because of a perfectly accurate Thunder and halved Fire weakness respectively. Skarmory deserves special mention for its ability to set up entry hazards as well as phaze to help Toxicroak get KO’s much easier. Substitute is essential for every physical set as it provides Toxicroak with many more opportunities to set up and attack, but the loss of Ice Punch is notable and leaves you it unable to defeat Gliscor barring a critical hit. A Choice Band set with Drain Punch or Cross Chop / Sucker Punch / Stone Edge / Ice Punch could work although it is mostly outclassed by the Swords Dance set.</p>

[Checks and Counters]

<p>Most physical walls can beat physical Toxicroak due to his frailty, but must watch out for Nasty Plot variants. Skarmory resists Dark-type moves, is neutral to Fighting-type moves, is immune to Poison-type moves, and can KO with STAB Brave Bird or phaze him out with Whirlwind. Hippowdon also works well to phaze Toxicroak out with Roar or KO with Earthquake, but a +2 Life Orb Drain Punch can 2HKO, and a Nasty Plot boosted Hidden Power Ice will OHKO most of the time. Gliscor can wall all of Toxicroak’s sets bar the Nasty Plot set with Hidden Power Ice and the physical sets with Ice Punch and KO with Earthquake or Acrobatics. Gliscor is generally the best counter due to its enormous defense and resistance to Fighting-type moves. Faster Flying-types will usually beat Toxicroak, especially Tornadus as the rain will give it a 100% accurate Hurricane. Because Toxicroak’s defenses are nothing to write home about, even strong neutral hits have a large chance to 2HKO, such as Thundurus’ Life Orb boosted Thunderbolt. Ghost-types with substitute Substitute can work around Toxicroak utilizing Sucker Punch and can outstall and eventually KO. SubDisable Gengar works especially well as once Sucker Punch or Dark Pulse is Disabled, Toxicroak is completely walled by Gengar bar Ice Punch or Hidden Power Ice.</p>

[Dream World]

<p>Toxicroak’s Dream World ability is Poison Touch, which gives a 30% chance of normal poison to all of his contact moves. This ability is nearly as useless as Anticipation and should not be used over Dry Skin under any circumstances. Dry Skin is the primary reason that Toxicroak is viable in OU, otherwise, Toxicroak is a very merely average Pokemon.</p>




Nice analysis. Mostly nitpicking and wordiness.
 
Can you guys wait until the OP has a chance to update the analysis with the latest proofread before doing a proofread? guddagudda's proofread looks like it wasn't implemented yet, and with Afti's and Detroitlolcat's here, there's 3 somewhat different proofreads (because I do see some stuff in common). This makes things a bit confusing as to what should be implemented when the OP comes through here.

I'll stamp this though, once the 3 proofreads are cleared up and/or merged together nicely somehow.

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[Overview]

<p>Toxicroak is a very diverse Pokemon. It has a plethora of boosting moves allowing it choose from a powerful Swords Dance, Bulk Up, Subpunch, or a Nasty Plot sets. It has a wide variety of offensive options as well, including strong priority in Sucker Punch and and the new-and-improved Drain Punch, a far more reliable STAB option than Cross Chop. Toxicroak also has a great ability in Dry Skin, which grants it 12.5% recovery each turn during rain. Compounded with its useful resistances to Abusing its resistances to Grass-, Water-, Fighting-, Bug-, and Dark-type moves, this makes it it is relatively easy for Toxicroak to set up. By virtue of its Poison-typing and ability, Toxicroak can wall nearly every single bulky Water-type in the game. A Bulk Up set can make Toxicroak very tough to take down, given investment in HP; it also dramatically increases Toxicroak's HP recovery through Drain Punch, particularly when combined with Dry Skin and Leftovers. Toxicroak's Ground-, and rather uncommon Psychic- and Flying-type weaknesses can be easily dealt with by the typings of its teammates are easy to cover with any number of potential OU teammates. Toxicroak has improved drastically this generation especially because of the introduction of Drizzle Politoed and a vastly improved Drain Punch.</p>

[SET]
Name: Swords Dance
Move 1: Swords Dance
Move 2: Sucker Punch
Move 3: Drain Punch / Low Kick
Move 4: Ice Punch / Substitute
Item: Leftovers / Life Orb
Ability: Dry Skin
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p> A respectable base 106 Attack stat coupled with Swords Dance and Sucker Punch makes Toxicroak a very potent sweeper. After a Swords Dance Toxicroak hits a massive 684 Attack that puts a dent in almost anything with Sucker Punch or STAB Drain Punch. Substitute is the main option for the fourth slot on this set, as it allows Toxicroak to block status, and set up Swords Dance. Ice Punch is an option over Substitute to defeat Gliscor but Substitute relinquishes generally one will not want to forego the protection against priority and easier time setting up aid in set up provided by Substitute. It is fairly easy to set up a Swords Dance with Toxicroak by coming in on either a predicted Water attack or a weaker attack it resists; the health that you lose is negligible due to Dry Skin healing can be greatly softened by Dry Skin healing. This set allows Toxicroak to be one of the most dangerous Pokemon in the game once behind a Substitute. After two Swords Dances neither dedicated physical walls nor true counters can stop it standard Toxicroak checks can stop it. </p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>The EVs on this set are pretty straightforward with 252 invested in Attack to maximize Toxicroak's offensive prowess power and 252 in Speed to help outspeed slower Pokemon and set up faster Substitutes. The Adamant nature gives Toxicroak max Attack. With Leftovers + Dry Skin Toxicroak heals a massive 18.5% of its health per turn in rain. That's more than what Poison Heal Gliscor and Breloom heal per turn. With this combination you only lose 6.5% of your health after using Substitute. Life Orb is another option as it greatly augments Toxicroak's damage output and Dry Skin virtually essentially cancels out recoil. </p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Vacuum Wave
move 3: Dark Pulse
move 4: Sludge Wave / Hidden Power Ice
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
nature: Modest
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Toxicroak can also utilize Nasty Plot to hit hard despite its lower Special Attack. Toxicroak retains priority in the arguably better form of STAB Vacuum Wave. Dark Pulse helps hit the Psychic- and Ghost-types that resist its Fighting STAB, with and Sludge Wave or Hidden Power Ice round out mixing in to compliment the phenomenal coverage Toxicroak attains with just two moves the Dark- and Fighting-type attack combination. Maximum Special Attack and Speed EVs with a Modest nature provides the most attacking power. This set surprises Swords Dance Toxicroak's normal counters with strong special attacks after a Nasty Plot boost despite its underwhelming Special Attack stat. The choice between Slime Wave and Hidden Power Ice depends on what your team needs: STAB Slime Wave destroys Grass-types, while and Hidden Power Ice wrecks the common Garchomp, Landorus, and Gliscor switch-ins. Sludge Wave is also your most powerful attack against neutral targets.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Life Orb is the preferred item as Toxicroak's Special Attack isn't stellar and recoil damage is canceled out in the rain due to Dry Skin. However, Leftovers heals a remarkable amount of health in conjunction with Dry Skin. Substitute is an option over the third coverage move to block status and enable an easier time setting up, but Nasty Plot Toxicroak's indifference to the Attack drop from burn makes it much vulnerable to status doesn't really suffer from any status like the physical sets do with burn. Even paralysis doesn’t particularly matter due to isn't particularly worrisome thanks to Toxicroak's access to STAB priority in the form of Vacuum Wave. Unfortunately, like most special attackers, Blissey and Chansey completely wall it bar a +6 Vacuum Wave or Sludge Wave. Focus Blast can be used over Hidden Power Ice or Slime Wave for a stronger STAB move but the coverage is usually needed to take out specific targets things like Gliscor. An alternative EV spread of 244 HP / 252 SpA / 12 Spe is viable but Nasty Plot Toxicroak likes outspeeding things as many enemies as possible, rather than trading hits.</p>

[SET]
name: Bulk Up
move 1: Bulk Up
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Drain Punch
move 4: Payback / Sucker Punch
item: Leftovers
nature: Adamant
ability: Dry Skin
evs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Def

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea is to come in on something that you can set up on, ideally a Water- or Bug-type move, and use Substitute on the switch. Substitute provides protection from status but leaves you vulnerable to phazing. However, most of the common OU phazers, such as the common OU phazers Skarmory and Hippowdon are more likely to attack with their STAB Ground and Flying-type moves, respectively. Nevertheless, once Toxicroak is set up, it can essentially be more destructive than the Swords Dance set. After a few Bulk Ups the Defense boosts allows it to take Earthquakes from the likes of Hippowdon, survive, and recover lost health back with Drain Punch, leaving Hippowdon in the conundrum of using either Slack Off to heal or another Earthquake scrambling in futility with Slack Off and Earthquake, as long as it lacks Roar. 244 EVs in HP keeps Toxicroak as bulky as possible without taking away attack power. Speed investment isn't worth much, considering Toxicroak's low base Speed and the set's need for heavy investment in bulk since Toxicroak is plodding at best anyway.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Substitute gives Toxicroak many more opportunities to set up, and with a few Bulk Ups under its belt, Toxicroak becomes a decent physical wall achieves bulk on par with physical walls, holding up to many powerful attacks bar super effective STAB Earthquakes. Toxicroak becomes so physically bulky after one Bulk Up that even Choice Band Scizor will not be able to 2HKO with Bullet Punchplus Toxicroak naturally resists Scizor's other common moves, such as Bug Bite, U-turn, and Superpower. Low Kick is an option over Drain Punch to hit heavy foes, but this set usually needs the healing from Drain Punch to stay around as long as possible. Toxicroak can also utilize Taunt to prevent phazers like Skarmory from ruining its sweep, but Toxicroak is rather frail and will be KO'ed by something like Brave Bird anyway Skarmory's Brave Bird or Hippowdon's Earthquake unless it can get its boosts.</p>

[Set]
name: SubPunch
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Focus Punch
move 3: Sucker Punch / Payback
move 4: Ice Punch
item: Life Orb / Leftovers
ability: Dry Skin
nature: Adamant
EVs: 244 HP / 252 Atk / 12 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>The idea of this set is to come in on something you can force out or wall, and either use Substitute or Focus Punch on the switch, with the latter doing serious damage even when resisted. Sucker Punch is used to beat faster threats who that are immune to Focus Punch such as Gengar, but Payback can be used if Sucker Punch feels too unreliable. Ice Punch destroys Gliscor on the switch and also hits other Flying-types, who which are often KO'd by a follow up Sucker Punch can then usually be finished off with a Sucker Punch. The EVs provide reasonable bulk; this set doesn't need Speed. Toxicroak can scare faster threats like Latios and Latias with Sucker Punch to force a switchhowever, if they use Substitute, Toxicroak will always lose. Leftovers could be used over Life Orb but it isn't recommended as Toxicroak needs the extra power it provides in the absence of Swords Dance or Bulk Up.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>An alternative EV spread of 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Speed allows Toxicroak to outspeed most Gliscor and other threats hovering around the Base 80 range, but this set is focused on using Substitute to avoid direct hits so Speed investment isn't as necessary as proper smart switching. Unlike the other sets which have a means of boosting, this set may sometimes miss out on OHKOs and therefore it is important to remove physical walls before attempting to sweep will not be able to sweep without properly removing enemy checks and physical walls. This set is meant to hit hard abuse Focus Punch to break walls in the early game and also functions as a late game sweeper while also having some potential to clean up late game thanks to Sucker Punch. With the proper support, SubPunch Toxicroak can pose a serious threat. Because of its ability it is always recommended to have Politoed as a teammate to provide permanent rain and also as a buffer against Ninetales with Drought counteract Ninetales' Drought. With regards to other moves, Toxicroak doesn't really have that many more alternative options other than potentially using Stone Edge over Ice Punch, but the only notable coverage you lose with Ice Punch over Stone Edge is on Gyarados, and Toxicroak walls Gyarados lacking Earthquake or Bounce. Stone Edge brings no notable benefits other than helping against Gyarados, but Toxicroak walls Gyarados should it lack Earthquake or Bounce.</p>

[Other Options]

<p>Toxicroak is best paired with Politoed to abuse its Dry Skin ability. Skarmory, Zapdos, and Scizor are all great teammates for Toxicroak since they cover its weaknesses to Psychic, Flying, and Ground. In addition, Zapdos and Scizor directly benefit from permanent rain, with the former gaining a perfectly accurate Thunder and the later gaining some welcome protection from Fire attacks. due to a perfectly accurate Thunder and halved Fire weakness respectively Skarmory deserves special mention for its abilities to set up entry hazards and phaze, both of which help Toxicroak get KO's more easily. Substitute is essential for every physical set as it provides Toxicroak with many more opportunities to set up and attack, but the loss of Ice Punch is notable and leaves you unable to defeat Gliscor barring a critical hit. A Choice Band set with Drain Punch or Cross Chop / Sucker Punch / Stone Edge / Ice Punch could work although it is mostly outclassed by the Swords Dance set.</p>

[Checks and Counters]

<p>Most physical walls can beat physical Toxicroak due to his frailty, but must watch out for Nasty Plot variants. Skarmory resists Dark-type moves, is neutral to Fighting-type moves, is immune to Poison-type moves, and can KO with STAB Brave Bird or phaze him out with Whirlwind. Hippowdon also works well as it phazes Toxicroak out with Roar or KOes with Earthquake, but a +2 Life Orb Drain Punch can 2HKO, and a Nasty Plot boosted Hidden Power Ice will usually OHKO. Gliscor can wall all of Toxicroak's sets bar the Nasty Plot set with Hidden Power Ice and the physical sets with Ice Punch, and in return KOes with Earthquake or Acrobatics. Gliscor is generally the best counter due to its enormous defense and resistance to Fighting-type moves. Faster Flying-types will usually beat Toxicroak—Tornadus is particularly worrisome with its 100% accurate Hurricane in rain. especially Tornadus as the rain will give it a 100% accurate Hurricane. Because Toxicroak's defenses are nothing to write home about Possessing decidedly mediocre defensive stats, even Toxicroak will usually fall to even strong neutral hits have a large chance to like Thundurus' Life Orb Thunderbolt. 2HKO, such as Thundurus’ Life Orb boosted Thunderbolt Ghost-types with substitute can work around a Toxicroak utilizing Sucker Punch to outstall and eventually KO it. SubDisable Gengar works especially well as once Sucker Punch or Dark Pulse is Disabled, Toxicroak is completely walled by Gengar bar Ice Punch or Hidden Power Ice.</p>

[Dream World]

<p>Toxicroak's Dream World ability is Poison Touch, which gives a 30% chance of causing poison to all of his contact moves. This ability is nearly as useless as Anticipation and should not be used over Dry Skin under any circumstances. Dry Skin is the primary reason that Toxicroak is viable in OU; without it, Toxicroak is just an average Pokemon.</p>

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^The general consensus is that Black Sludge is inferior to Leftovers (except when playing under Item Clause). The only reason why you would need Black Sludge is to hurt Trick users....but Toxicroak is destroyed by every Trick user anyways. So if you manage to trick the Black Sludge onto your opponent, they'll just re-Trick it onto one of your pokemon when they force Toxicroak out.
 
Skarmory, Zapdos, and Scizor are all great teammates for Toxicroak since they cover its weaknesses to Psychic, Flying, and Ground. In addition, Zapdos and Scizor directly benefit from permanent rain, with the former gaining a perfectly accurate Thunder and the latter gaining some welcome protection from Fire attacks.
Small nitpick, but Skarmory also appreciates the neutrality to Fire attacks in Rain, so it might be worth rewording this section for clarity.
 
the only thing toxicroak have to outspeed is timid heatran which you can do with 192 ev and a jolly nature , some ev in bulk wouldn't hurt him ^^ and an adamnt nature doesn't really matter when you'r boosting your attack anyway .

so well , maybe a 252 att / 192 spd / 60 ev hp jolly nature could be an alternative ^^
 
I know this Pokémon is labeled as &quot;Done&quot;, but there are two things I'd like to add to this:
1. Nitpick: Poison Touch only has a 20% chance of poisoning on contact
2. Possible Moveset: Working with Work Up

[SET]
name: Work Up
move 1: Work Up
move 2: Sucker Punch
move 3: Vacuum Wave
move 4: Substitute/Ice Punch/HP Ice/Sludge Wave
item: Life Orb/Leftovers
ability: Dry Skin
nature: Rash
evs: 148 Atk / 204 SpA / 156 Spe

Set Comments

Basically, switch into a Water type attack and Work Up (or Sub if you have Substitute) on the foe's switch. Then choose the correct Priority Move and commence Sweeping. With these EVs, Toxicroak stats would be 427 Attack (555 w/LO), 426 Sp. Attack (553 w/LO) and 245 Speed.

Sucker Punch and STAB Vacuum Wave rips through many Pokémon that have a weakness to the Dark/Fighting Combination. Ice Punch/HP Ice is there to take out Gliscor, and with proper prediction one can catch one on the switch. And in case that is on the case, 245 Speed es enough to outspeed a neutral speed natured Gliscor with 72 Speed EVs. Substitute is also viable, as said in a quite a few movesets made by chanazn. Sludge Wave is just there for some extra Power. Life Orb is preferred over Leftovers, as it helps Toxicroak net some OHKOs (or OHKOs with Spikes/SR support), but Leftovers helps Toxicroak's recovery during the rain.

Sadly, there are many pokemon that can switch into this and sweep back/phaze/stall. Metagross takes neutral (and low) Damage from everything and can easily KO Toxicroak. Skarmory can switch in, take very little damage and Roar Toxicroak out. Therefor, this set of Toxicroak is best left for mid/late-game.

I hope this helps in something, and I sort of felt the need to post this since I hadn't seen anyone else post about Work Up+[Dark/STAB Fighting] Priority Sweeping.
 
Not seeing that having enough power. The Bulk Up set works because it doesn't have to OHKO things, but that's going to take a turn to set up, then hit fairly weak compared to other sets- SD/NP raise your offenses faster, and BU actually gets multiple boosts in if played by someone at least half-awake.
 
First line:

Toxicroak is a very diverse Pokemon. It has a plethora of boosting moves allowing it choose from powerful Swords Dance, Bulk Up, Subpunch SubPunch,
 
I've been using the Sub Bulk Up set on my rain team, and I'll tell you, its godly. You can mention that he can set up on Ferrothorn (if the opponent stays in you can up to +6 EASILY) and walls the standard Conkeldurr without Stone Edge (you resist his STABs and can Bulk Up with him). He does, however, fall to a Guts Flame Orb using Facade. I do like Toxicroak's surprise factor too. Nobody I known has really seen him before and if I remember, if you can pressure ghost and psychic switch-ins at or +1, you can do at least 50% minimum with Sucker Punch and play mind games to get another free sub. Latios falls to a +1 Sucker Punch and chomp falls to a +1 Drain Punch followed by a Sucker Punch,
 
Man, what do you think to use leftovers instead of black sludge?

Toxicroak is a poison type Pokémon, so black sludge will be better than leftovers!

Fix that xD
 
Drain Punch is illegal with Ice Punch, yet both are the first options of the first sets. Fix this, please.

Also, Black Sludge is superior to Leftovers (it punishes every Tricksters bar Gengar). Fix this as well.
 
Minor nitpick - shouldn't the first line read, "Toxicroak is a very diverse Pokemon. It has a plethora of boosting moves allowing it to choose from powerful Swords Dance, Bulk Up..."
 
I don't know why, but apparently Drain Punch and Ice Punch (One is an egg move, and one is a move tutor move) aren't allowed together.
Ice punch is important for specific checks, dragons and gliscor, etc... so the alternative for drain punch as your main STAB attack becomes low kick
 
<p>Toxicroak is a very diverse Pokemon. It has a plethora of boosting moves allowing it to choose from powerful Swords Dance, Bulk Up, SubPunch, or Nasty Plot sets. It has a wide variety of offensive options as well, including strong priority in Sucker Punch and and the new-and-improved Drain Punch, a far more reliable STAB option than Cross Chop. Toxicroak also has a great ability in Dry Skin, which grants it 12.5% recovery each turn during rain. Abusing its resistances to Grass-, Water-, Fighting-, Bug-, and Dark-type moves, it is relatively easy for Toxicroak to set up. By virtue of its Poison-typing and ability, Toxicroak can wall nearly every single bulky Water-type in the game. A Bulk Up set can make Toxicroak very tough to take down, given investment in HP; it also dramatically increases Toxicroak's HP recovery through Drain Punch, particularly when combined with Dry Skin and Leftovers. Toxicroak's Ground-, and rather uncommon Psychic- and Flying-type weaknesses are easy to cover with any number of potential teammates. Toxicroak has improved drastically this generation because of the introduction of Drizzle Politoed and a vastly improved Drain Punch.</p>

Extra 'and' in the first paragraph.

With regards to other moves, Toxicroak doesn't really have that many alternative options other than potentially using Stone Edge over Ice Punch, but Stone Edge brings no notable benefits other than helping against Gyarados, but Toxicroak walls Gyarados should it lack Earthquake or Bounce.

Does anyone else find the final sentence under AC for the SubPunch set a bit strange? Mostly the length and the use of 'but' twice.

[Other Options]

<p>Toxicroak is best paired with Politoed to abuse his Dry Skin ability. Skarmory, Zapdos, and Scizor are all great teammates for Toxicroak since they cover its weaknesses to Psychic, Flying, and Ground. In addition, Zapdos and Scizor directly benefit from permanent rain, with the former gaining a perfectly accurate Thunder and the latter gaining some welcome protection from Fire attacks. Skarmory deserves special mention for its abilities to set up entry hazards and phaze, both of which help Toxicroak get KO’s more easily. Substitute is essential for every physical set as it provides Toxicroak with many more opportunities to set up and attack, but the loss of Ice Punch is notable and leaves you unable to defeat Gliscor barring a critical hit. A Choice Band set with Drain Punch or Cross Chop / Sucker Punch / Stone Edge / Ice Punch could work although it is mostly outclassed by the Swords Dance set.</p>

Added 'his'.

[Checks and Counters]

<p>Most physical walls can beat physical Toxicroak due to his frailty, but must watch out for Nasty Plot variants. Skarmory resists Dark-type moves, is neutral to Fighting-type moves, is immune to Poison-type moves, and can KO with STAB Brave Bird or phaze him out with Whirlwind. Hippowdon also works well as it phazes Toxicroak out with Roar or KOes with Earthquake, but a +2 Life Orb Drain Punch can 2HKO, and a Nasty Plot boosted Hidden Power Ice will usually OHKO. Gliscor can wall all of Toxicroak’s sets bar the Nasty Plot set with Hidden Power Ice and the physical sets with Ice Punch, and in return KOes with Earthquake or Acrobatics. Gliscor is generally the best counter due to its enormous defense and resistance to Fighting-type moves. Faster Flying-types will usually beat Toxicroak - Tornadus is particularly worrisome with its 100% accurate Hurricane in rain. Possessing decidedly mediocre defensive stats, Toxicroak will usually fall to even strong neutral hits like Thundurus’ Life Orb Thunderbolt. Ghost-types with Substitute can work around a Toxicroak utilizing Sucker Punch to outstall and eventually KO it. SubDisable Gengar works especially well as once Sucker Punch or Dark Pulse is Disabled, Toxicroak is completely walled by Gengar bar Ice Punch or Hidden Power Ice.</p>

Accurate incorrectly spelt, capitalised Substitute. I also feel like you can remove the second 'is' when listing why Skarmory counters Toxicroak, it reads better to me.
 

Extra 'and' in the first paragraph.


Does anyone else find the final sentence under AC for the SubPunch set a bit strange? Mostly the length and the use of 'but' twice.


Added 'his'.


Accurate incorrectly spelt, capitalised Substitute. I also feel like you can remove the second 'is' when listing why Skarmory counters Toxicroak, it reads better to me.

Thanks for the nitpicks, fixed
 
This is completely false. As long as you aren't using any other egg moves only available in Gen 5, Toxicroak can get Drain Punch from TM in Gen 4 and Ice Punch from move tutor. Drain Punch does receive the boost when transfered over, allowing Toxicroak to have both the boosted Drain Punch and Ice Punch.

Never mind... apparently it doesn't learn Drain Punch as a TM in Gen 4... learned this post-writing-this-post.
 
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