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Hey people my first post in smogon and RMT
Sorry for no photos' i just thought it wasn't really needed :p

Jungle Saviour (Sceptile-Mega) (M) @ Sceptilite
Ability: Lightning Rod
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Giga Drain
- Hidden Power [Fire]
- Dragon Pulse
- Substitute
-Sceptile IS my all-time favourite pokemonand i gets a mega...So i made this set- excellent for late game sweeping. Giga drain for STAB and some health dpulse for STAB hp fire for common threats like scizor ferrothorn and other steel types. Heatran WALLs this set ( i know that )

AzuLady (Azumarill) (F) @ Choice Band
Ability: Huge Power
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 236 HP / 252 Atk / 20 Def
Adamant Nature
- Aqua Jet
- Play Rough
- Waterfall
- Superpower
- Classic powerfull banded huge power AZU set first three moves are for STAB and aqua jet as priority
superpower for steel types so i aint walled

Firetran (Heatran) (F) @ Air Balloon
Ability: Flash Fire
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 248 HP / 208 Def / 48 SpA / 4 Spe
Bold Nature
- Roar
- Stealth Rock
- Lava Plume
- Taunt
- A rocker heatran with roar and taunt. Lava plume for STAB and raised burn chance
pretty basic and straight forward

STABulouz (Greninja) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Protean
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 44 Atk / 212 SpA / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Gunk Shot
- Ice Beam
- Extrasensory
- Surf
-A mixed attacking greninja now this is a powerfull set. Gunk shot for Fairy coverage ice beam for dragons grass types etc extrasesory for poison ofc, not sure if surf is the right choice though.

Japanese Pornstar (Tentacruel) @ Black Sludge
Ability: Liquid Ooze
EVs: 232 HP / 252 Def / 24 SpA
Bold Nature
- Toxic Spikes
- Rapid Spin
- Scald
- Haze
- This japanese pornstar is made for T-spiking and removing hazards scald for STAB and just love that
30% burn chance and haze for the trollz

My house keys (Klefki) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Prankster
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
- Reflect
- Light Screen
- Torment
- Foul Play
- Oh klefki klefki this one for screening and torment - torment is usefull- i must say great against choice mons foul play for obvious reasons

THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME :]
 
Hi! Welcome to Smogon, but please make sure to read the RMT Rules! You need at least a brief 3-4 sentences describing each of your Pokemon. If this task is not followed, your post may get locked by a moderator. Onto the rate!

I like this team, but it surely could use some changes to it.
First of all, I would change Hidden Power Fire on Sceptile to Hidden Power Rock, so you can deal with BirdSpam. I would also switch out Substitute for Focus Blast for better coverage.
I would use Timid > Modest too.
Since you're running a banded Azumarill, run Knock Off > Superpower, because being locked into Superpower can lead you to dangerous revenge killers or just fast Pokemon in general.
Your EV Spread on Heatran confuses me, A lot. Since you only have on Attacking move, 48 Sp Atk EVs aren't necessary. I would run this EV Spread for a Heatran to set up. 252 HP / 168 Def / 88 Sp Def.
I recommend using Dark Pulse instead of Surf/Extrasensory so you can deal with Rotom-Wash.
I wouldn't make Tentacruel Physically defensive, since its Defense stat isn't the best. Change this to Sp Defense or even try Rotom-Wash if you truly want a physical wall.

Rotom-Wash @ Leftovers/Chesto Berry
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP / 212 Def / 44 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Bold Nature
- Hydro Pump
- Volt Switch
- Will-O-Wisp
- Pain Split/Rest

This would help your team a bit more.
Instead of Torment on Klefki, run Spikes/Thunder Wave. I would replace Foul Play with Draining Kiss or Magnet Rise since Swagger was banned. Also, run Light Clay, it's better on DualScreens.

EDIT: Make sure to run 0 Atk Ivs on each of your Special Pokemon. You take less from foul play and Confusion this way.

Hope it helps.
 
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Thanks that really did help :) exxtrasensory was for dealing with mega venusaur and other poison types but ill try dark pulse as well i guess
Super power ALSO is for steel types you know for not gettin walled
HP rock ehh alright yeah that bird is annoying :P
but i just hate that 70% acc on focus blast :(
And lastly ill change that klefki too
Thanks again :)
 
I'd be inclined to keep HP Fire on your Sceptile. HP Rock sounds good on paper, but using it to check bird spam isn't that great of an idea - Talon's priority BB will OHKO you before you can even touch it. Talonflame, M-Pinsir, Charizard, its mega variants, and M-Beedrill are all x4 weak to SR, which you already have on your team, so there's no need to run a coverage move specifically for them - Dragon Pulse will OHKO each of those if they're switching into rocks. Dragon Pulse and Giga Drain, along with HP Rock, leave you completely walled by Ferro and friends - HP Fire will cover steels for you, which grass/dragon/rock are all not very effective against. Even if you run Focus Blast to cover steel types, HP Rock is still largely useless, providing you're able to maintain your SR on the field.

Not trying to discredit Spark's rate, just throwing in my two cents!
 
ShaunXD said:
Thanks that really did help :) exxtrasensory was for dealing with mega venusaur and other poison types but ill try dark pulse as well i guess
Super power ALSO is for steel types you know for not gettin walled
HP rock ehh alright yeah that bird is annoying :P
but i just hate that 70% acc on focus blast :(
And lastly ill change that klefki too
Thanks again :)
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Yeah on the band set Super power is generally better imo.
Hp rock is also kinda bad as Talonflame shouldn't be switching into Mega Sceptile as stated above dragon pulse OHKOs any flying type that switches in after rocks

Thunder wave> Torment imo because thunder wave helps you against set up sweepers

On Greninja I would get rid of either Extrasensory and replace it with dark pulse or replace surf with dark pulse.
Hydropump>Surf because Greninja needs the power, and Scald is still usually better than surf for the burn chance.
Just my thoughts on this
 
I don't ever like choice band into superpower (unless contrary which no one on your team can have) so maybe brick break/power-up punch/bulldoze on azumarill.
 
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