Rampardos

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[OVERVIEW]

With a gargantuan Attack stat and relatively decent Speed with a Choice Scarf, Rampardos stakes its claim in NU as one of the strongest revenge killers in the tier. To complement its impressive Attack, Rampardos also has a fantastic movepool and possesses the ability Sheer Force to boost most of its moves' power. Aside from its Attack, however, Rampardos's base stats are terrible and hinder its effectiveness. Its only relevant set is Choice Scarf, meaning that it can be locked into one move, and with its low base Speed it can also end up being outpaced by the likes of Floatzel and other relevant Choice Scarfed Pokemon such as Rotom, Jynx, and Primeape. Rampardos also possesses terrible defensive stats, which further decrease its overall offensive potential. On top of all this, Rampardos is also usually outclassed by other common offensive Rock-types such as Archeops and Barbaracle due to their better base Speed and ability to fill specific roles.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Head Smash
move 2: Rock Slide
move 3: Superpower
move 4: Zen Headbutt / Earthquake
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Sheer Force
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
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Head Smash is Rampardos's strongest attack, dealing massive damage even if it's resisted and 2HKOing defensive Pokemon like Hitmonchan and Weezing. Rock Slide is Rampardos's Rock-type, Sheer Force-boosted STAB option, with more accuracy than Head Smash and no recoil. Superpower is one of the preferred coverage options, as it allows Rampardos to hit Pokemon such as Steelix, Rhydon, and Ferroseed that would otherwise be able to shrug off one of its STAB moves. Lastly, Zen Headbutt is a Sheer Force-boosted move used to nail defensive Poison-types and Fighting-types such as Weezing, Garbodor, and Hariyama. Earthquake is a more accurate option than Zen Headbutt, but it provides less power, and most of the things that Earthquake hits are already covered by Superpower and Rampardos's STAB moves. Using Earthquake also means being locked into a Ground-type move, which prevents Rampardos from hitting Flying-types or Levitate users.

Set Details
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Choice Scarf is the item of choice, as it allows Rampardos to outspeed as many Pokemon as possible—specifically very common Pokemon such as Tauros and Archeops. Sheer Force is Rampardos's ability for this set, as it grants a boost to moves like Rock Slide and Zen Headbutt. A Jolly nature and maximum investment in Attack and Speed allow Rampardos to hit as hard and fast as possible.

Usage Tips
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Rampardos's main draw in NU is the fact that it's one of the tier's most powerful wallbreakers, so it should stick to being just that. Never try to pivot into Rampardos, as its frailty can lead to it being easily KOed on the switch. Instead, use Rampardos as a revenge killer. Try to bring it in early- and mid-game so teammates that can clean late-game have an easier time doing their job. It might not always be best to use STAB moves, especially when using a Choice Scarf. Playing with Rampardos may take some prediction, as choosing a move that's super effective against a Rhydon or Steelix switch-in can be crucial.

Team Options
========

Late-game sweepers or cleaners such as Combusken or Swellow greatly appreciate Rampardos's ability to break down physical walls for them. Faster Pokemon such as Rotom and Tauros can pick up the slack against more offensive or balanced teams to make up for Rampardos's low Speed. Entry hazard setters such as Omastar, Garbodor, and Ferroseed make for great teammates, as they can wear down some of Rampardos's common checks, such as Steelix and Rhydon, which can allow it to spam one of its STAB moves. U-turn or Volt Switch users such as Scyther and Rotom have the ability to bring Rampardos in safely if the opponent decides to switch out on either of the aforementioned Pokemon. Healing Wish users such as Mesprit are also decent teammates for Rampardos, as they can bring it back to full health if it whittles itself down with Head Smash.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

A Choice Band or Life Orb can be used on Rampardos to further increase its already gigantic Attack stat, but it loses out on the Speed needed to outspeed many of the Pokemon it actually wants to outspeed, such as Lilligant, Charizard, and Tauros. A mixed set containing Surf or Fire Blast can be useful for surprising physical walls such as Rhydon and Steelix, but most physical sets can already hit those Pokemon. A Sheer Force-boosted Fire Punch is also an option to hit Steel-types such as Ferroseed and Klinklang. A Rock Polish set is decent, but Rampardos usually just wants to use attacking moves to get heavy hits off. Rampardos can also run a Mold Breaker set with Stealth Rock and Endeavor, but it's usually outclassed by Pinsir as a Mold Breaker Stealth Rock setter due to its low Speed stat, which also means that KOing itself with Head Smash recoil is relatively easy to do, since most Rapid Spinners are faster. With the Mold Breaker set, it can also be used on a Sunny Day-based team as a suicide lead to set up Stealth Rock and sun.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Bulky Ground-types**: Bulky Ground-types such as Rhydon, Torterra, and Steelix can wall most of Rampardos's attacks, barring Superpower, so playing around these Pokemon might require some prediction.

**Priority Moves**: Pokemon with priority moves, such as Hariyama, Hitmonchan, Shiftry, and Samurott, can easily take out Rampardos with some prior damage.

**Faster Pokemon**: Pokemon that are faster than Rampardos, such as Floatzel and other Choice Scarf users like Kabutops, Primeape, and Barbaracle, can outspeed Rampardos and KO it with a super effective attack.
 
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Overview:
  • Mention some specific relevant Choice Scarfers that outspeed Ramparados such as Rotom, Jynx, and Primeape.
Moves:
  • Add Ferroseed to Superpower targets.
  • Also mention that locking yourself into Earthquake can leave you in a vulnerable position especially if your opponent has Flying types or pokemon with Levitate.
Usage Tips:
  • Expand upon the last point, in what situation would it be advisable not to just spam Rock STAB?
Team Options:
  • Add hazard support from the likes of Omastar, Garbodor, and Ferroseed because Ramparados' checks (Steelix and Rhydon) despise Spikes, and weakening these checks allows Ramparados to spam Head Smash.
Checks and Counters:
  • Add Torterra to the bulky Ground section.
  • The faster pokemon section is a little vague, again mention specific choice scarf users that can outspeed and KO Ramparados with a super effective attack. (probably kabutops, primeape, and barbaracle).
Also be sure to remove any mentions of Sceptile left in the analysis. Most of my comments were fairly nitpicky because this is well done, QC 1/3 when implemented.
 
Mention Ice Punch in OO. It's not great but Torterra is a hard stop otherwise. Also mention that a Mold Breaker set with Stealth Rock and Endeavor can be used but it's mostly outclassed by Pinsir due to lower Speed. It's also too slow to use Head Smash recoil to block Rapid Spin effectively, as most spinners are faster than it.

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Mention Ice Punch in OO. It's not great but Torterra is a hard stop otherwise.
I believe you mean Ice Beam (which I think you don't), because Rampardos does not actually learn Ice Punch.

I also don't know what Fire Punch hits, considering Rampardos already carries Superpower.
 
Wait, really? That's embarrassing. For some reason I thought it got it, must have been thinking of Rhydon. Well definitely don't mention it then. Outside of Steel-types, Fire Punch hits Grasses I guess but Vileplume already gets nailed by Zen Headbutt so idk how notable that is.
 
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Mentions specific examples of Pokémon that Rampardos outspeeds with Jolly Choice Scarf (namely Tauros and Archeops) in Set Details. Also mention that the SR + Endeavor set in Other Options uses Mold Breaker to get Rocks up vs Xatu; it's pretty obvious from the comparison to Pinsir but this should be explicit.
 
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GP: ? / ?
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[OVERVIEW]

With a gargantuan attack stat, Rampardos makes its place in NU as one of the best wallbreakers in the tier. With this attack stat, Rampardos also has a fantastic movepool along with a great abilitiy in Sheer Force to boost the power of most of these moves. But of course Rampardos does have a few flaws. First off, its relatively slow, meaning that even when equipped with a Choice Scarf, it can end up being outpaced by the likes of Floatzel and other relevant Choice Scarfed Pokemon like Rotom, Jynx, and Primeape. Rampardos also comes equipped with terrible defense stats, which further decreases its overall offensive potential. Aside from this, Rampardos is also usually outclassed by other common offensive Rock-types such as Arcehops and Barbaracle.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Head Smash
move 2: Rock Slide
move 3: Superpower
move 4: Zen Headbutt / Earthquake
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Sheer Force
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

Head Smash is Rampardos' strongest attack move, doing a huge amount of damage to everything backed by that monstrous Attack stat, even if its resisted mention a few things it can 2hko imo. Rock Slide is Rampardos' other Rock-type, Sheer Force boosted STAB move option, with more accuracy and no recoil as well. Superpower is one of the preferred coverage options, as it allows Rampardos to hit Pokemon such as Steelix, Rhydon and Ferroseed that would be able to shrug off one of Rampardos' STAB moves. Lastly, Zen Headbutt is a Sheer Force boosted move used to nail Defensive Poison-types such as Weezing and Garbodor. mention zhb can also hit fighting types that resist rock slide like hariyama / primeape / hitmonchan Earthquake is a more accurate option over Zen Headbutt but it provides less power and most of the things that Earthquake hits is already covered by Superpower and its STAB moves. It also means being locked into a Ground-type move prevents it from hitting Flying-types or Levitate Users

Set Details
========

Choice Scarf is the item of choice, as it allows Rampardos to outspeed as many Pokemon as possible, specifically very common Pokemon like Tauros and Archeops.. Sheer Force is Rampardos' ability for this set, as it gives a boost to moves like Rock Slide and Zen Headbutt, further increasing their power. A Jolly nature and maximum investment in Attack and Speed allows Rampardos to hit has hard as possible while outspeeding as many Pokemon as possible.

Usage Tips
========

Rampardos' mainstay in NU is to be one of the most powerful wallbreakers, so it should do just that. Never try to pivot into Rampardos, as its frailty can have it easily being KO'd on the switch in. Instead, use Rampardos as a revenge killer. Try to bring it in early- to mid-game so teammates that can clean late-game have an easier time doing their job. It might not be the best to click STABs 100% of the time, especially when Choice Scarfed. Playing with Rampardos may take predictions sometimes, as choosing a move that's super effective against a Rhydon or Steelix that are in the back might be best.

Team Options
========

Late-game sweepers or cleaners such as Combusken or Swellow really appreciate Rampardos' ability to break down physical walls for them to have an easier time sweeping/cleaning late game. Faster Pokemon such as Rotom and Tauros can pick up the slack on more offensive or balanced teams for Rampardos' slow Speed stat. Entry hazard users such as Omastar, Garbodor, and Ferroseed make for great teammates with Rampardos as they wear down some of its common checks such as Steelix and Rhydon, which can allow it to spam one of its STABs. U-turn or Volt Switch users such as Scyther and Rotom have the ability to bring in Rampardos safely if the opponent decides to switch out on either of the aforementioned Pokemon. mention a healing wish user like mesprit here as well as it can bring ramp back to life after its spammed head smash

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

A Choice Band or Life Orb can be used on Rampardos to further increase its already gigantic Attack stat, but it loses out on Speed to outspeed a plethora of Pokemon it actually wants to outspeed. A mixed set containing Surf or Fire Blast can be useful to surprise Physical walls such as Rhydon and Steelix, but most physical sets can already hit those. A Sheer Force boosted Fire Punch is also an option to hit Steel-types such as Ferroseed and Klinklang. Rampardos can also run a Mold Breaker Stealth Rock and Endeavor set, but it's usually outclassed by Pinsir as a Mold Breaker Stealth Rocker due to its low Speed stat, which also means that KO'ing itself with Head Smash recoil is relatively hard to do since most Rapid Spinners are faster. mention rock polish here as well, but also say that its hard to set it up and would rather just attack w/ its hard hitting moves. also mention a set that can set up sun and kill itself with head smash after getting up sun / rocks in order to get sun sweepers in faster :o

Checks and Counters
===================

**Bulky Ground-types**: Bulky Ground-types such as Rhydon, Torterra and Steelix can wall most of Rampardos' attacks barring Superpower, so playing around these Pokemon might have to take some predictions instead of clicking STAB moves.

**Super Effective Priority**: Pokemon with Super Effective priority such as Hariyama (Bullet Punch), Hitmonchan (Mach Punch), and Samurott (Aqua Jet) can take out Rampardos with some prior damage. i think most priority is pretty threatening, as even moves like sucker punch from shiftry can deal a lot of damage to it

**Faster Pokemon**: Faster Pokemon than Rampardos, Floatzel and other Choice Scarfed Pokemon like Kabutops, Primeape, and Barbaracle can outspeed Rampardos and KO it with a super effective attack.
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I might looks this over more later but this one line stands out to me:
With a gargantuan attack stat, Rampardos makes its place in NU as one of the best wallbreakers in the tier.
This statement simply is not true. The set on the analysis is Choice Scarf yet you introduce it as if its a Life Orb set, which is not the case. While it is true that Rampardos can break down defensive Pokemon, it is not Rampardos's primarily role on a team, which is mainly being a revenge killer to offensive threats and the first sentence should be changed to reflect this.
 
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[OVERVIEW]

With a gargantuan Attack stat and relatively decent Speed with a Choice Scarf, Rampardos makes its place in NU as one of the strongest revenge killers in the tier. Along with this Attack stat, Rampardos also has a fantastic movepool along with a great and abilitiy ability in Sheer Force to boost the power of most of these moves. But of course Rampardos does have a few flaws. (Fluff. I'd consider writing something like "Aside from its Attack, Rampardos's base stats are terrible and hinder its effectiveness.") First off, Its only relevant set is Choice Scarf, meaning that it can be locked into one move and with its relatively slow Speed (You said it was a relatively decent Speed earlier with a Choice Scarf. Maybe write as "low base Speed" here to emphasize that it's only decent after the Choice Scarf modifier), it can also end up being outpaced by the likes of Floatzel and other relevant Choice Scarfed Pokemon like such as Rotom, Jynx, and Primeape. Rampardos also comes equipped with terrible defense defensive stats, which further decreases its overall offensive potential. Aside from this, Rampardos is also usually outclassed by other common offensive Rock-types such as Arcehops Archeops and Barbaracle.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Head Smash
move 2: Rock Slide
move 3: Superpower
move 4: Zen Headbutt / Earthquake
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Sheer Force
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

Head Smash is Rampardos's strongest attack move, doing a huge amount of damage to everything backed by that monstrous Attack stat, (RC) even if its resisted, 2HKOing things like Hitmonchan and Weezing. Rock Slide is Rampardos's other Rock-type, Sheer Force boosted STAB move option, with more accuracy than Head Smash and no recoil as well. Superpower is one of the preferred coverage options, as it allows Rampardos to hit Pokemon such as Steelix, Rhydon and Ferroseed that would be able to shrug off one of Rampardos' its STAB moves. Lastly, Zen Headbutt is a Sheer Force boosted move used to nail defensive Poison-types and Fighting-types such as Weezing, Garbodor, and Hariyama. Earthquake is a more accurate option over Zen Headbutt, (AC) but it provides less power and most of the things that Earthquake hits is are already covered by Superpower and its STAB moves. It Using Earthquake also means being locked into a Ground-type move, (AC) which prevents it from hitting Flying-types or Levitate users. (Add period)

Set Details
========

Choice Scarf is the item of choice, as it allows Rampardos to outspeed as many Pokemon as possible, specifically very common Pokemon like Tauros and Archeops.. (Duplicate period. Remove one, keep the other.) Sheer Force is Rampardos's ability for this set, as it gives a boost to moves like such as Rock Slide and Zen Headbutt, further increasing their power. A Jolly nature and maximum investment in Attack and Speed allows Rampardos to hit has hard and fast as possible while outspeeding as many Pokemon as possible.

Usage Tips
========

Rampardos's mainstay in NU is to be one of the most powerful wallbreakers, so it should do just that. Never try to pivot into Rampardos, as its frailty can have it easily being KO'd KOed on the switch in. Instead, use Rampardos as a revenge killer. Try to bring it in early- to mid-game so teammates that can clean late-game have an easier time doing their job. It might not be the best to click always use STABs 100% of the time STAB moves, especially when using a Choice Scarfed. Playing with Rampardos may take predictions sometimes, as choosing a move that's super effective against a Rhydon or Steelix that are in the back might be best.

Team Options
========

Late-game sweepers or cleaners such as Combusken or Swellow really appreciate Rampardos's ability to break down physical walls for them to have an easier time sweeping/cleaning late game (Repeated from the beginning of the sentence. Should be implied). Faster Pokemon such as Rotom and Tauros can pick up the slack on more offensive or balanced teams for Rampardos's slow Speed stat. Entry hazard users such as Omastar, Garbodor, and Ferroseed make for great teammates with Rampardos as they wear down some of its common checks such as Steelix and Rhydon, which can allow it to spam one of its STABs moves. U-turn or Volt Switch users such as Scyther and Rotom have the ability to bring in Rampardos safely if the opponent decides to switch out on either of the aforementioned Pokemon. Healing Wish users such as Mesprit are also decent teammates with Rampardos as it can bring it back to full health if it wittles itself down with Head Smash. (Insert period)

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

A Choice Band or Life Orb can be used on Rampardos to further increase its already gigantic Attack stat, but it loses out on the Speed needed to outspeed a plethora of many Pokemon it actually wants to outspeed. A mixed set containing Surf or Fire Blast can be useful to surprise physical walls such as Rhydon and Steelix, but most physical sets can already hit those. A Sheer Force boosted Fire Punch is also an option to hit Steel-types such as Ferroseed and Klinklang. A Rock Polish set is decent, but it (If "it" refers to Rampardos, replace "it" with "Rampardos" for clarity.) usually just wants to use attacking moves to get heavy hits off. Rampardos can also run a Mold Breaker set with Stealth Rock and Endeavor set, but it's usually outclassed by Pinsir as a Mold Breaker Stealth Rocker setter due to its low Speed stat, which also means that KO'ing KOing itself with Head Smash recoil is relatively hard to do since most Rapid Spinners are faster. With the Mold Breaker set, it can also be used on a Sunny Day based team as a suicide lead to get up Stealth Rock and sun.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Bulky Ground-types**: Bulky Ground-types such as Rhydon, Torterra and Steelix can wall most of Rampardos's attacks, (AC) barring Superpower, so playing around these Pokemon might have to take require some predictions instead of clicking STAB moves.

**Priority**: Pokemon with priority moves such as Hariyama (Bullet Punch), Hitmonchan (Mach Punch), Shiftry (Sucker Punch), and Samurott (Aqua Jet) can easily take out Rampardos with some prior damage. (It's not necessary to note the move, as it's implied with "Pokemon with priority moves")

**Faster Pokemon**: Faster Pokemon than Rampardos, such as Floatzel and other Choice Scarfed Pokemon users like Kabutops, Primeape, and Barbaracle, (AC) can outspeed Rampardos and KO it with a super effective attack.
 
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[OVERVIEW]

With a gargantuan Attack stat and relatively decent Speed with a Choice Scarf, Rampardos makes its place in NU as one of the strongest revenge killers in the tier. Along with this Attack stat, Rampardos also has a fantastic movepool along with a great and abilitiy ability in Sheer Force to boost the power of most of these moves. But of course Rampardos does have a few flaws. (Fluff. I'd consider writing something like "Aside from its Attack, Rampardos's base stats are terrible and hinder its effectiveness.") First off, Its only relevant set is Choice Scarf, meaning that it can be locked into one move and with its relatively slow Speed (You said it was a relatively decent Speed earlier with a Choice Scarf. Maybe write as "low base Speed" here to emphasize that it's only decent after the Choice Scarf modifier), it can also end up being outpaced by the likes of Floatzel and other relevant Choice Scarfed Pokemon like such as Rotom, Jynx, and Primeape. Rampardos also comes equipped with terrible defense defensive stats, which further decreases its overall offensive potential. Aside from this, Rampardos is also usually outclassed by other common offensive Rock-types such as Arcehops Archeops and Barbaracle. So what makes it worth using? This doesn't explain any purpose or use for Rampardos OVER Archeops and such

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Head Smash
move 2: Rock Slide
move 3: Superpower
move 4: Zen Headbutt / Earthquake
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Sheer Force
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

Head Smash is Rampardos's strongest attack move, doing a huge amount of damage to everything backed by that monstrous Attack stat, (RC) even if it's resisted, 2HKOing things like defensive Pokemon like Hitmonchan and Weezing. Rock Slide is Rampardos's other Rock-type, Sheer Force-boosted STAB move option, with more accuracy than Head Smash and no recoil as well. Superpower is one of the preferred coverage options, as it allows Rampardos to hit Pokemon such as Steelix, Rhydon, (AC) and Ferroseed that would be able to shrug off one of Rampardos' its STAB moves. Lastly, Zen Headbutt is a Sheer Force-boosted move used to nail defensive Poison-types and Fighting-types such as Weezing, Garbodor, and Hariyama. Earthquake is a more accurate option over Zen Headbutt, (AC) but it provides less power and most of the things that Earthquake hits is are already covered by Superpower and its Rampardos's STAB moves. It Using Earthquake also means being locked into a Ground-type move, (AC) which prevents it Rampardos from hitting Flying-types or Levitate users. (Add period)

Set Details
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Choice Scarf is the item of choice, as it allows Rampardos to outspeed as many Pokemon as possible, specifically very common Pokemon like such as Tauros and Archeops.. (Duplicate period. Remove one, keep the other.) Sheer Force is Rampardos's ability for this set, as it gives a boost to moves like such as "like" would be a better choice here, due to the plethora of moves that can be boosted by SF Rock Slide and Zen Headbutt, further increasing their power. "it gives a boost, further increasing their power". Fluff! A Jolly nature and maximum investment in Attack and Speed allows Rampardos to hit has hard and fast as possible while outspeeding as many Pokemon as possible.

Usage Tips
========

Rampardos's mainstay main draw in NU is to be the fact that it's one of the most powerful wallbreakers, so it should do just that. Never try to pivot into Rampardos, as its frailty can have it easily being KO'd KOed on the switch in. Instead, use Rampardos as a revenge killer. Try to bring it in early- to and mid-game so teammates that can clean late-game have an easier time doing their job. It might not be the best to click always use STABs 100% of the time STAB moves, especially when using a Choice Scarfed. Playing with Rampardos may take predictions sometimes, as choosing a move that's super effective against a Rhydon or Steelix switch-in can be crucial that are in the back might be best.

Team Options
========

Late-game sweepers or cleaners such as Combusken or Swellow really appreciate Rampardos's ability to break down physical walls for them to have an easier time sweeping/cleaning late game (Repeated from the beginning of the sentence. Should be implied). Faster Pokemon such as Rotom and Tauros can pick up the slack on against i assume this is what's meant here. more offensive or balanced teams for Rampardos's slow Speed stat. Entry hazard users such as Omastar, Garbodor, and Ferroseed make for great teammates with Rampardos as they wear down some of its common checks such as Steelix and Rhydon, which can allow it to spam one of its STABs moves. U-turn or Volt Switch users such as Scyther and Rotom have the ability to bring in Rampardos safely if the opponent decides to switch out on either of the aforementioned Pokemon. Healing Wish users such as Mesprit are also decent teammates with Rampardos as it they can bring it back to full health if it whittles itself down with Head Smash. (Insert period)

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

A Choice Band or Life Orb can be used on Rampardos to further increase its already gigantic Attack stat, but it loses out on the Speed needed to outspeed a plethora of many Pokemon it actually wants to outspeed. Like what? Not many examples were given in the analysis! Add them there too A mixed set containing Surf or Fire Blast can be useful to surprise physical walls such as Rhydon and Steelix, but most physical sets can already hit those Pokemon. A Sheer Force-boosted Fire Punch is also an option to hit Steel-types such as Ferroseed and Klinklang. A Rock Polish set is decent, but it (If "it" refers to Rampardos, replace "it" with "Rampardos" for clarity.) usually just wants to use attacking moves to get heavy hits off. Rampardos can also run a Mold Breaker set with Stealth Rock and Endeavor set, but it's usually outclassed by Pinsir as a Mold Breaker Stealth Rocker setter due to its low Speed stat, which also means that KO'ing KOing itself with Head Smash recoil is relatively hard to do, (AC) since most Rapid Spinners are faster. With the Mold Breaker set, it can also be used on a Sunny Day-based team as a suicide lead to get up Stealth Rock and sun.

Checks and Counters
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**Bulky Ground-types**: Bulky Ground-types such as Rhydon, Torterra, (AC) and Steelix can wall most of Rampardos's attacks, (AC) barring Superpower, so playing around these Pokemon might have to take require some predictions instead of clicking STAB moves.

**Priority Moves**: Pokemon with priority moves such as Hariyama (Bullet Punch), Hitmonchan (Mach Punch), Shiftry (Sucker Punch), and Samurott (Aqua Jet) can easily take out Rampardos with some prior damage. (It's not necessary to note the move, as it's implied with "Pokemon with priority moves")

**Faster Pokemon**: Faster Pokemon than Rampardos, such as Floatzel and other Choice Scarfed Pokemon users like Kabutops, Primeape, and Barbaracle, (AC) can outspeed Rampardos and KO it with a super effective attack.
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[OVERVIEW]

With a gargantuan Attack stat and relatively decent Speed with a Choice Scarf, Rampardos makes its place stakes its claim in NU as one of the strongest revenge killers in the tier. Along with this To complement its impressive Attack stat, Rampardos also has a fantastic movepool and possesses the ability in Sheer Force to boost the most of its moves' power of most of these moves. Aside from its Attack, however, (could also stick this at the beginning of the sentence; just helps show the transition between talking about pros and talking about cons) Rampardos's base stats are terrible and hinder its effectivemess effectiveness. Its only relevant set is Choice Scarf, meaning that it can be locked into one move, (AC) and with its low base speed, (RC) it can also end up being outpaced by the likes of Floatzel and other relevant Choice Scarfed Pokemon like such as Rotom, Jynx, and Primeape. Rampardos also comes with possesses terrible defensive stats, which further decreases its overall offensive potential. Aside from On top of all this, Rampardos is also usually outclassed by other common offensive Rock-types such as Archeops and Barbaracle due to their better base Speed and specific roles.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Head Smash
move 2: Rock Slide
move 3: Superpower
move 4: Zen Headbutt / Earthquake
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Sheer Force
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
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Head Smash is Rampardos's strongest attack, doing a huge amount of dealing massive damage even if it's resisted, (RC) and 2HKOing defensive Pokemon like Hitmonchan and Weezing. Rock Slide is Rampardos's Rock-type, Sheer Force-boosted STAB option, with more accuracy than Head Smash and no recoil as well. Superpower is one of the preferred coverage options, as it allows Rampardos to hit Pokemon such as Steelix, Rhydon, and Ferroseed that would otherwise be able to shrug off one of its STAB moves. Lastly, Zen Headbutt is a Sheer Force-boosted move used to nail defensive Poison-types and Fighting-types such as Weezing, Garbodor, and Hariyama. Earthquake is a more accurate option over than Zen Headbutt, but it provides less power, (AC) and most of the things that Earthquake hits are already covered by Superpower and Rampardos's STAB moves. Using Earthquake also means being locked into a Ground-type move, which prevents Rampardos from hitting Flying-types or Levitate users.

Set Details
========

Choice Scarf is the item of choice, as it allows Rampardos to outspeed as many Pokemon as possible, (RC)—(AH)specifically very common Pokemon such as Tauros and Archeops. Sheer Force is Rampardos's ability for this set, as it gives grants a boost to moves like Rock Slide and Zen Headbutt. A Jolly nature and maximum investment in Attack and Speed allows Rampardos to hit as hard and fast as possible.

Usage Tips
========

Rampardos's main draw in NU is the fact that it's one of the tier's most powerful wallbreakers, so it should do stick to being just that. Never try to pivot into Rampardos, as its frailty can have lead to it easily being easily KOed on the switch. Instead, use Rampardos as a revenge killer. Try to bring it in early- and mid-game so teammates that can clean late-game have an easier time doing their job. It might not be the best to always be best to use STAB moves, especially when using a Choice Scarfed. Playing with Rampardos may take some prediction sometimes, as choosing a move that's super effective against a Rhydon or Steelix switch-in can be crucial.

Team Options
========

Late-game sweepers or cleaners such as Combusken or Swellow really greatly appreciate Rampardos's ability to break down physical walls for them. Faster Pokemon such as Rotom and Tauros can pick up the slack against. (RP) more offensive or balanced teams to make up for Rampardos's slow low Speed stat. Entry hazard users setters such as Omastar, Garbodor, and Ferroseed make for great teammates, (AC) with Rampardos as they can wear down some of its Rampardos's common checks—(AH)such as Steelix and Rhydon, (RC)—(AH)which can and thus allow it to spam one of its STAB moves. U-turn or Volt Switch users such as Scyther and Rotom have the ability to bring in Rampardos in safely if the opponent decides to switch out on either of the aforementioned Pokemon. Healing Wish users such as Mesprit are also decent teammates with for Rampardos, (AC) as they can bring it back to full health if it whittles itself down with Head Smash.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

A Choice Band or Life Orb can be used on Rampardos to further increase its already gigantic Attack stat, but it loses out on the Speed needed to outspeed many of the Pokemon it actually wants to outspeed, (AC) such as Lilligant, Charizard, and Tauros. A mixed set containing Surf or Fire Blast can be useful to surprise for surprising physical walls such as Rhydon and Steelix, but most physical sets can already hit those Pokemon. A Sheer Force-boosted Fire Punch is also an option to hit Steel-types such as Ferroseed and Klinklang. A Rock Polish set is decent, but Rampardos usually just wants to use attacking moves to get heavy hits off. Rampardos can also run a Mold Breaker set with Stealth Rock and Endeavor, but it's usually outclassed by Pinsir as a Mold Breaker Stealth Rock setter due to its low Speed stat, which also means that KOing itself with Head Smash recoil is relatively hard easy (I assume that's what you meant because it doesn't make much sense the other way) to do, since most Rapid Spinners are faster. With the Mold Breaker set, it can also be used on a Sunny Day-based team as a suicide lead to get set up Stealth Rock and sun.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Bulky Ground-types**: Bulky Ground-types such as Rhydon, Torterra, and Steelix can wall most of Rampardos's attacks, barring Superpower, so playing around these Pokemon might require some prediction.

**Priority Moves**: Pokemon with priority moves, (AC) such as Hariyama, Hitmonchan, Shiftry, and Samurott, (AC) can easily take out Rampardos with some prior damage. (like eien said, "with some prior damage" is already implied by the fact that these are priority users, so it's probably redundant)

**Faster Pokemon**: Faster Pokemon Pokemon that are faster than Rampardos, such as Floatzel and other Choice Scarf users like Kabutops, Primeape, and Barbaracle, can outspeed Rampardos and KO it with a super effective attack.
 
amcheck: add (AC = add comma, AH = add hyphen) remove (RC = remove comma, RP = remove period) comments
winry: add remove comments [mostly for Sobi]
[OVERVIEW]

With a gargantuan Attack stat and relatively decent Speed with a Choice Scarf, Rampardos makes its place stakes its claim in NU as one of the strongest revenge killers in the tier. Along with this To complement its impressive Attack stat, Rampardos also has a fantastic movepool and possesses the ability in Sheer Force to boost the most of its moves' power of most of these moves. Aside from its Attack, however, (could also stick this at the beginning of the sentence; just helps show the transition between talking about pros and talking about cons) Rampardos's base stats are terrible and hinder its effectivemess effectiveness. Its only relevant set is Choice Scarf, meaning that it can be locked into one move, (AC) and with its low base Speed [capitalize stat names], (RC) it can also end up being outpaced by the likes of Floatzel and other relevant Choice Scarfed Pokemon like such as Rotom, Jynx, and Primeape. Rampardos also comes with possesses terrible defensive stats, which further decrease [stats is plural] its overall offensive potential. Aside from On top of all this, Rampardos is also usually outclassed by other common offensive Rock-types such as Archeops and Barbaracle due to their better base Speed and ability to fill specific roles.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Head Smash
move 2: Rock Slide
move 3: Superpower
move 4: Zen Headbutt / Earthquake
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Sheer Force
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

Head Smash is Rampardos's strongest attack, doing a huge amount of dealing massive damage even if it's resisted, (RC) and 2HKOing defensive Pokemon like Hitmonchan and Weezing. Rock Slide is Rampardos's Rock-type, Sheer Force-boosted STAB option, with more accuracy than Head Smash and no recoil as well. Superpower is one of the preferred coverage options, as it allows Rampardos to hit Pokemon such as Steelix, Rhydon, and Ferroseed that would otherwise be able to shrug off one of its STAB moves. Lastly, Zen Headbutt is a Sheer Force-boosted move used to nail defensive Poison-types and Fighting-types such as Weezing, Garbodor, and Hariyama. Earthquake is a more accurate option over than [can use either "over" or "than"] Zen Headbutt, but it provides less power, (AC) and most of the things that Earthquake hits are already covered by Superpower and Rampardos's STAB moves. Using Earthquake also means being locked into a Ground-type move, which prevents Rampardos from hitting Flying-types or Levitate users.

Set Details
========

Choice Scarf is the item of choice, as it allows Rampardos to outspeed as many Pokemon as possible, (RC)—(AH) [either] specifically very common Pokemon such as Tauros and Archeops. Sheer Force is Rampardos's ability for this set, as it gives grants [either is ok] a boost to moves like Rock Slide and Zen Headbutt. A Jolly nature and maximum investment in Attack and Speed allow Rampardos to hit as hard and fast as possible.

Usage Tips
========

Rampardos's main draw in NU is the fact that it's one of the tier's most powerful wallbreakers, so it should do stick to being just that. Never try to pivot into Rampardos, as its frailty can have lead to it easily being easily KOed on the switch. Instead, use Rampardos as a revenge killer. Try to bring it in early- and mid-game so teammates that can clean late-game have an easier time doing their job. It might not be the best to always be best to use STAB moves, especially when using a Choice Scarfed. Playing with Rampardos may take some prediction sometimes, as choosing a move that's super effective against a Rhydon or Steelix switch-in can be crucial.

Team Options
========

Late-game sweepers or cleaners such as Combusken or Swellow really greatly appreciate Rampardos's ability to break down physical walls for them. Faster Pokemon such as Rotom and Tauros can pick up the slack against. (RP) more offensive or balanced teams to make up for Rampardos's slow low Speed stat. Entry hazard users setters such as Omastar, Garbodor, and Ferroseed make for great teammates, (AC) with Rampardos as they can wear down some of its Rampardos's common checks—(AH),[ac]such as Steelix and Rhydon, [ac]—(AH)which can and thus allow it to spam one of its STAB moves. U-turn or Volt Switch users such as Scyther and Rotom have the ability to bring in Rampardos in safely if the opponent decides to switch out on either of the aforementioned Pokemon. Healing Wish users such as Mesprit are also decent teammates with for Rampardos, (AC) as they can bring it back to full health if it whittles itself down with Head Smash.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

A Choice Band or Life Orb can be used on Rampardos to further increase its already gigantic Attack stat, but it loses out on the Speed needed to outspeed many of the Pokemon it actually wants to outspeed, (AC) such as Lilligant, Charizard, and Tauros. A mixed set containing Surf or Fire Blast can be useful to surprise for surprising physical walls such as Rhydon and Steelix, but most physical sets can already hit those Pokemon. A Sheer Force-boosted Fire Punch is also an option to hit Steel-types such as Ferroseed and Klinklang. A Rock Polish set is decent, but Rampardos usually just wants to use attacking moves to get heavy hits off. Rampardos can also run a Mold Breaker set with Stealth Rock and Endeavor, but it's usually outclassed by Pinsir as a Mold Breaker Stealth Rock setter due to its low Speed stat, which also means that KOing itself with Head Smash recoil is relatively hard easy (I assume that's what you meant because it doesn't make much sense the other way) to do, since most Rapid Spinners are faster. With the Mold Breaker set, it can also be used on a Sunny Day-based team as a suicide lead to get set up Stealth Rock and sun.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Bulky Ground-types**: Bulky Ground-types such as Rhydon, Torterra, and Steelix can wall most of Rampardos's attacks, barring Superpower, so playing around these Pokemon might require some prediction.

**Priority Moves**: Pokemon with priority moves, (AC) such as Hariyama, Hitmonchan, Shiftry, and Samurott, (AC) can easily take out Rampardos with some prior damage. (like eien said, "with some prior damage" is already implied by the fact that these are priority users, so it's probably redundant)

**Faster Pokemon**: Faster Pokemon Pokemon that are faster than Rampardos, such as Floatzel and other Choice Scarf users like Kabutops, Primeape, and Barbaracle, can outspeed Rampardos and KO it with a super effective attack.
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