UU Togedemaru

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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Zing Zap
move 2: Iron Head
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Nuzzle / Toxic
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Togedemaru is a unique Choice Scarf user that takes advantage of its excellent defensive typing and access to Lightning Rod to check Pokemon such as Heliolisk, Rotom-C, and Choice Scarf Gardevoir. It is capable of revenge killing many Pokemon in the tier, like Inteleon, Ribombee, and Espeon, and its attacks, while weak, are enough to pose a threat to many common Pokemon like Sylveon and Mantine. However, against neutral targets, its attacks are quite weak and it needs significant prior damage to revenge kill the likes of Noivern, Lucario, and Darmanitan. U-turn allows Togedemaru to maintain offensive momentum on the switches it forces against Fairy- and Water-types like Galarian Weezing and Milotic. Nuzzle is used to spread paralysis on switch-ins such as Incineroar and Cobalion while also being able to halt setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Necrozma. Toxic can be used instead to pressure bulky Pokemon that Togedemaru can't beat on its own like Rhyperior and Umbreon.

There are many Pokemon that can stop Togedemaru in its tracks, like Incineroar and Doublade. For this reason, it's important to pair it with strong wallbreakers like Pangoro, Machamp, and Choice Band Haxorus that Togedemaru can bring in safely to take advantage of these Pokemon. They also appreciate the paralysis support Togedemaru provides with Nuzzle. Offensive Pokemon that appreciate Togedemaru's ability to defensively deal with Electric-types like Heliolisk are good partners; Rhyperior is noteworthy for its ability to set up Stealth Rock and its resistance to Fire, allowing it to pivot into attacks from the likes of Incineroar and Darmanitan that would threaten Togedemaru. Water-types like Milotic and Vaporeon also appreciate Togedemaru checking Electric-types and can deal with Incineroar and Doublade for it. Noivern and Togedemaru have great defensive synergy; Noivern resists Fire-type and Fighting-type attacks and is immune to Ground-type attacks, while Togedemaru resists Ice-type and Dragon-type attacks aimed at Noivern. They can also form a momentum core with U-turn. Inteleon can also perform this role while acting as a powerful wallbreaker that can weaken Pokemon that Togedemaru cannot OHKO, like Gigalith, Rhyperior and Doublade. Togedemaru is unable to revenge kill Dragon Dance Haxorus after a boost, so Sylveon is recommended as a partner. Sylveon's Wish support can also help Togedemaru with pivoting into Pokemon like Roserade and Toxtricity. Similarly, Golisopod is capable of revenge killing Haxorus lacking Protect with First Impression and resists Ground-type attacks from Pokemon such as Flygon and Choice Band Haxorus, while Togedemaru can take Electric-type attacks aimed at Golisopod from Heliolisk and Toxtricity.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Iron Head
move 2: Wish
move 3: Spiky Shield
move 4: Toxic / U-turn
item: Leftovers
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Careful
evs: 252 HP / 8 Atk / 196 SpD / 52 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
By virtue of its great typing and ability Lightning Rod, Togedemaru can run an effective defensive set that allows it to act as an excellent check to Pokemon like Gardevoir, Toxtricity, and Heliolisk. Wish and Spiky Shield combine to give Togedemaru a form of reliable recovery that it can also pass to its teammates, helping Pokemon such as Gigalith and Galarian Weezing in checking opposing Pokemon continuously. Spiky Shield also helps Togedemaru to scout Choice-locked Pokemon like Gardevoir, Sylveon, and Pangoro and gets some damage off against contact attackers. Toxic allows Togedemaru to pressure opposing Pokemon that would otherwise wall this set freely, like Milotic, Mantine, and Rhyperior. U-turn can be used instead of Toxic to allow Togedemaru to act as a slow pivot; however, it makes Togedemaru much more passive overall. 8 Attack EVs allow Togedemaru to OHKO Gardevoir with Iron Head after Stealth Rock, and 52 Speed EVs allow it to outspeed Timid Sylveon. The remaining EVs are used to maximize its special bulk.

This set fits best on balance and bulky offense teams that appreciate its defensive utility and ability to act as a pivot. However, it is also very passive and needs a lot of support to make up for it. Partners like Machamp and Pangoro appreciate Togedemaru's ability to pivot in on their checks like Gardevoir and Sylveon and can make up for its passive nature with their strong attacks. Machamp also appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support to aid in pivoting into bulky Water-types and offsetting burn damage, while Pangoro appreciates its Wish support when pivoting into Necrozma. Galarian Weezing is a good partner, resisting Fighting-type attacks and being immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Rhyperior and Flygon thanks to Levitate, and it can also provide Defog support for Togedemaru. In return, Togedemaru can take strong Psychic- and Steel-type attacks aimed at Galarian Weezing from the likes of Espeon and Duraludon, as well as providing it with Wish support. Golisopod is a helpful teammate for this set too, as it can provide a good check to the likes of Cobalion lacking Stone Edge and Doublade, both of which this set can struggle with. In return, Togedemaru acts as a solid check to Pokemon like Noivern and Mantine that would easily switch into Golisopod otherwise. Partners like Rhyperior and Gigalith can be important, as they provide strong checks to Incineroar and Chandelure, both of which this set struggles with. They also appreciate Togedemaru's Wish support. Incineroar appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support and can check threatening Fire-types like Chandelure, as well as Pokemon like Doublade and Escavalier that Togedemaru can't handle. It also pressures Psychic-types like Reuniclus, Celebi, and Necrozma.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Lilburr, 481709]]
- Quality checked by: [[Twilight, 344575], [Hilomilo, 313384]]
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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Zing Zap
move 2: Iron Head
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Nuzzle / Toxic
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Togedemaru is a unique Choice Scarf user that takes advantage of its excellent defensive typing and access to Lightning Rod to switch into Pokemon such as Heliolisk, Rotom-C. and Choice Scarf Gardevoir. (i'd remove the gardevoir mention; mystical fire's an option on scarf and even then u have to scout whether it's scarf or specs. maybe change switch to check?) It is capable of revenge killing many Pokemon in the tier after some chip damage, like Noivern, Lucario, and Darmanitan, (this is really overselling it; u dont even 2hko noivern unless u flinch / do max 60% to darm and lucario. ig it's fair to mention darm here bc it usually ends up being in range of zing zap bc it spams blitz and due to rocks but yh i'd reword this / change the mentions) and Its attacks, while weak, are enough to pose a threat to many common Pokemon like Sylveon, Mantine and Inteleon. U-turn allows Togedemaru to maintain offensive momentum on the switches it forces. (against? maybe some examples here) Nuzzle is used to spread paralysis on switch-ins such as Incineroar and Noivern, (earlier on u said toge rks noivern after some chip but now ur saying it's a switch-in, which is p confusing) while also being able to halt setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Necrozma. Toxic can be used instead for its ability to pressure bulky Pokemon that Togedemaru can't beat on its own like Rhyperior and Umbreon.

There are many Pokemon that can stop Togedemaru in its tracks, like Incineroar and Doublade. For this reason, it's important to pair it with strong wallbreakers like Pangoro and Choice Band Haxorus that can take advantage of these Pokemon. (i'd change the pangoro mention; it's not the most relevant mon when things like machamp exist - which notably appreciates toge's u-turn to trigger flame orb easier) Offensive Pokemon that appreciate Togedemaru's ability to defensive deal with Heliolisk are good partners. Rhyperior is noteworthy for its ability to set up Stealth Rock and its Fire-type resistance, allowing it to pivot into attacks that would threaten Togedemaru. also threatens many of Togedemaru's common answers, like Incineroar and Cobalion. (idk abt the coba mention; sd shuca is a common set and rhyperior loses to that 1v1 after it has taken some chips as small as spikes) Noivern and Togedemaru have great defensive synergy; Noivern resists Fire-type and Fighting-type attacks and is immune to Ground-type attacks, while Togedemaru resists Ice-type and Dragon-type attacks aimed at Noivern. They can also form a momentum core with U-turn. Inteleon can also perform this role, while acting as a powerful wallbreaker that can weaken Pokemon that Togedemaru cannot OHKO, like Gigalith, Rhyperior and Doublade. It is important to note that, while Togedemaru's Speed tier is good, it is slower than Dragon Dance Haxorus after a boost. For this reason, partners that can help with Haxorus like Sylveon are advised. (maybe some prio users too? ik tect haxorus is a thing now to deal with first impression users but goli and togedemaru work decently well together)

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Iron Head
move 2: Wish
move 3: Protect
move 4: Toxic / U-turn
item: Leftovers
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Careful
evs: 252 HP / 8 Atk / 196 SpD / 52 Spe

By virtue of its great typing and its ability, Lightning Rod, Togedemaru can run an effective defensive set that allows it to act as an excellent check to Pokemon like Gardevoir, Toxtricity and Heliolisk. It can switch into their STAB moves with ease and proceed to threaten them out (well it doesnt rlly threaten toxtricity out, i'd say force them out) or heal itself or its team with Wish. Wish and Protect combine to give Togedemaru a form of reliable recovery that it can also pass to its teammates, helping Pokemon such as Gigalith and Galarian Weezing in checking opposing Pokemon continuously. (also helps it scout against choice-locked mons like flygon and passimian / sirfetch'd) Toxic allows Togedemaru to pressure opposing Pokemon that would otherwise wall this set freely, like Milotic, Mantine and Rhyperior. U-turn can be used instead of Toxic in order to allow Togedemaru to act as a slow pivot; however, it makes Togedemaru much more passive overall.

This set is very passive and needs a lot of support to make up for it. Partners like Machamp and Togedemaru (i think u meant noivern here maybe?) appreciate Togedemaru's ability to pivot in on their checks like Gardevoir and Sylveon, and can make up for its passive nature with their strong attacks. Galarian Weezing is a good partner, resisting Fighting-type attacks and being immune to Ground-type attacks thanks to Levitate, (i'd give examples here bc i personally dont consider a levitate mon enough when it comes to answering ground-types due to haxorus' prevalence) and it can also provide Aromatherapy and Defog support for Togedemaru. In return, Togedemaru can take strong Psychic- and Steel-type attacks aimed at Galarian Weezing from the likes of Espeon and Duraludon, as well as providing it with Wish support. Golisopod is a helpful teammate for this set too, as it can provide a good check to the likes of Cobalion (non-stone edge sets) and Doublade, (goli's not rlly a reliable answer to doublade honestly. i'd change this mention for smth else maybe) both of which this set can struggle with. In return, Togedemaru acts as a solid check to Pokemon like (non-choice specs) Noivern and Mantine that would easily switch into Golisopod otherwise. Partners like Rhyperior and Gigalith can be important to pair with Togedemaru, as they provide strong checks to Incineroar and Chandelure, both of which this set struggles with. They also appreciate Togedemaru's Wish support.

maybe explain what the evs spread does? it's not rlly that obvious

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- Written by: [[Lilburr, 481709]]
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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Zing Zap
move 2: Iron Head
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Nuzzle / Toxic
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Togedemaru is a unique Choice Scarf user that takes advantage of its excellent defensive typing and access to Lightning Rod to check Pokemon such as Heliolisk, Rotom-C. , and Choice Scarf Gardevoir. It is capable of revenge killing many Pokemon in the tier when they're significantly weakened, like Noivern, Lucario, and Darmanitan, and its attacks, while weak, are enough to pose a threat to many common Pokemon like Sylveon, Mantine, and Inteleon. I'm not a fan of how this part is layed out. I would at least start with Pokemon it reliably RKs like Inteleon, Ribombee, and Espeon etc. Then lead into the downsides of its mediocre Atk stat and strength of its coverage leave it unable to revenge X without being adequately weakened. U-turn allows Togedemaru to maintain offensive momentum on the switches it forces against Fairy- and Water-types like Galarian Weezing and Milotic. Nuzzle is used to spread paralysis on switch-ins such as Incineroar and Cobalion, while also being able to halt setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Necrozma. Toxic can be used instead for its ability to pressure bulky Pokemon that Togedemaru can't beat on its own like Rhyperior and Umbreon.

There are many Pokemon that can stop Togedemaru in its tracks, like Incineroar and Doublade. For this reason, it's important to pair it with strong wallbreakers like Pangoro, Machamp, and Choice Band Haxorus that Togedemaru can bring in safely so that they can take advantage of these Pokemon. Offensive Pokemon that appreciate Togedemaru's ability to defensively deal with Electric-types like Heliolisk are good partners. Rhyperior is noteworthy for its ability to set up Stealth Rock and its Fire-type resistance, allowing it to pivot into attacks that would threaten Togedemaru. It also threatens many of Togedemaru's common answers, like Incineroar. It seems rather redundant to bring up Incin when the last thing is about Rhyp pivoting into Fire-types, just remove it or tie it into the same sentence. I would also make this point more generic and list some Water-types like Milotic here that appreciate it checking Elec-types and does the same thing you are describing for Rhyp. Noivern and Togedemaru have great defensive synergy; Noivern resists Fire-type and Fighting-type attacks and is immune to Ground-type attacks, while Togedemaru resists Ice-type and Dragon-type attacks aimed at Noivern. They can also form a momentum core with U-turn. Inteleon can also perform this role, while acting as a powerful wallbreaker that can weaken Pokemon that Togedemaru cannot OHKO, like Gigalith, Rhyperior and Doublade. It is important to note that, while Togedemaru's Speed tier is good, it is slower than Dragon Dance Haxorus after a boost. I'd reword to say 'Toge is unable to revenge kill DD Haxorus so Sylveon is a great partner for its ability to check it.' I would then elaborate on Wish support allowing it to pivot into stuff like Rose easier. For this reason, partners that can help with Haxorus like Sylveon are advised. Golisopod can help with this too, as it is capable of revenge killing Haxorus lacking Protect with First Impression. It also resists Ground-type attacks aimed at Togedemaru, while Togedemaru can take Electric- and Flying-type attacks aimed at Golisopod.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Iron Head
move 2: Wish
move 3: Spiky Shield
move 4: Toxic / U-turn
item: Leftovers
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Careful
evs: 252 HP / 8 Atk / 196 SpD / 52 Spe

By virtue of its great typing and its ability, Lightning Rod, Togedemaru can run an effective defensive set that allows it to act as an excellent check to Pokemon like Gardevoir, Toxtricity and Heliolisk. It can switch into their STAB moves with ease and proceed to force them out and heal itself or its team with Wish. Filler and you also repeat this in the next line Wish and Spiky Shield combine to give Togedemaru a form of reliable recovery that it can also pass to its teammates, helping Pokemon such as Gigalith and Galarian Weezing in checking opposing Pokemon continuously. Spiky Shield also helps Togedemaru to scout Choice-locked Pokemon like Gardevoir, Sylveon, and Sirfetch'd, and gets some damage off against contact attackers. Toxic allows Togedemaru to pressure opposing Pokemon that would otherwise wall this set freely, like Milotic, Mantine and Rhyperior. U-turn can be used instead of Toxic in order to allow Togedemaru to act as a slow pivot; however, it makes Togedemaru much more passive overall. 8 Attack EVs allow Togedemaru to OHKO Gardevoir with Iron Head after Stealth Rock, and 52 Speed EVs allow it to outspeed Timid Sylveon.

This set is very passive and needs a lot of support to make up for it. Partners like Machamp and Pangoro appreciate Togedemaru's ability to pivot in on their checks like Gardevoir and Sylveon, and can make up for its passive nature with their strong attacks. I'd mention they appreciate Wish support with Machamp able to pivot into some of the bulky waters and Pangoro pivoting into Necrozma and such that Toge can't threaten. Galarian Weezing is a good partner, resisting Fighting-type attacks and being immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Rhyperior and Flygon thanks to Levitate, and it can also provide Aromatherapy and Defog support for Togedemaru. In return, Togedemaru can take strong Psychic- and Steel-type attacks aimed at Galarian Weezing from the likes of Espeon and Duraludon, as well as providing it with Wish support. Golisopod is a helpful teammate for this set too, as it can provide a good check to the likes of Cobalion lacking Stone Edge and Doublade, both of which this set can struggle with. In return, Togedemaru acts as a solid check to Pokemon like Noivern and Mantine that would easily switch into Golisopod otherwise. Partners like Rhyperior and Gigalith can be important to pair with Togedemaru, as they provide strong checks to Incineroar and Chandelure, both of which this set struggles with. They also appreciate Togedemaru's Wish support.

Add Incineroar for its ability to beat Chandy + other fire-types, check Doub + Escav, pressures Psychic-types like Reuni and Celebi that Toge can't reliably beat (If Celebi has EP that it). Etc.

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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Zing Zap
move 2: Iron Head
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Nuzzle / Toxic
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Togedemaru is a unique Choice Scarf user that takes advantage of its excellent defensive typing and access to Lightning Rod to check Pokemon such as Heliolisk, Rotom-C. and Choice Scarf Gardevoir. It is capable of revenge killing many Pokemon in the tier, like Inteleon, Ribombee and Espeon, and its attacks, while weak, are enough to pose a threat to many common Pokemon like Sylveon and Mantine. However, against neutral targets, its attacks are quite weak; it needs significant prior damage to revenge kill the likes of Noivern, Lucario and Darmanitan. U-turn allows Togedemaru to maintain offensive momentum on the switches it forces against Fairy- and Water-types like Galarian Weezing and Milotic. Nuzzle is used to spread paralysis on switch-ins such as Incineroar and Cobalion, while also being able to halt setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Necrozma. Toxic can be used instead for its ability to pressure bulky Pokemon that Togedemaru can't beat on its own like Rhyperior and Umbreon.

There are many Pokemon that can stop Togedemaru in its tracks, like Incineroar and Doublade. For this reason, it's important to pair it with strong wallbreakers like Pangoro, Machamp, and Choice Band Haxorus that Togedemaru can bring in safely so that they can take advantage of these Pokemon consider mentioning that they can also benefit from its nuzzle support. Offensive Pokemon that appreciate Togedemaru's ability to defensively deal with Electric-types Heliolisk are good partners include some examples here. Rhyperior is noteworthy for its ability to set up Stealth Rock and its Fire-type resistance, allowing it to pivot into attacks (I'd use examples of Fire-type Pokemon it can pivot into as opposed to attacks. Incineroar and Darmanitan would work well in this case) that would threaten Togedemaru. Water-types like Milotic and Vaporeon also appreciate Togedemaru checking Electric-types and can deal with Incineroar and Doublade for it. Noivern and Togedemaru have great defensive synergy; Noivern resists Fire-type and Fighting-type attacks and is immune to Ground-type attacks, while Togedemaru resists Ice-type and Dragon-type attacks aimed at Noivern. They can also form a momentum core with U-turn. Inteleon can also perform this role, while acting as a powerful wallbreaker that can weaken Pokemon that Togedemaru cannot OHKO, like Gigalith, Rhyperior and Doublade. Togedemaru is unable to revenge kill Dragon Dance Haxorus after a boost, so Sylveon is recommended as a partner. Sylveon's Wish support can also help Togedemaru with pivoting into Pokemon like Roserade and Toxtricity. Golisopod can help with Haxorus too, as it is capable of revenge killing Haxorus lacking Protect with First Impression. It also resists Ground-type attacks aimed at Togedemaru, while Togedemaru can take Electric- and Flying-type attacks aimed at Golisopod. give specific examples of Ground-, Electric-, and Flying-type Pokemon in your sentences centered around Golis/Toge supporting each other, considering both mons can struggle reliably checking various Pokemon of the listed typings.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Iron Head
move 2: Wish
move 3: Spiky Shield
move 4: Toxic / U-turn
item: Leftovers
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Careful
evs: 252 HP / 8 Atk / 196 SpD / 52 Spe

By virtue of its great typing and its ability, Lightning Rod, Togedemaru can run an effective defensive set that allows it to act as an excellent check to Pokemon like Gardevoir, Toxtricity and Heliolisk. Wish and Spiky Shield combine to give Togedemaru a form of reliable recovery that it can also pass to its teammates, helping Pokemon such as Gigalith and Galarian Weezing in checking opposing Pokemon continuously. Spiky Shield also helps Togedemaru to scout Choice-locked Pokemon like Gardevoir, Sylveon, and Sirfetch'd maybe use Pangoro as your example here instead, and gets some damage off against contact attackers. Toxic allows Togedemaru to pressure opposing Pokemon that would otherwise wall this set freely, like Milotic, Mantine and Rhyperior. U-turn can be used instead of Toxic in order to allow Togedemaru to act as a slow pivot; however, it makes Togedemaru much more passive overall. 8 Attack EVs allow Togedemaru to OHKO Gardevoir with Iron Head after Stealth Rock, and 52 Speed EVs allow it to outspeed Timid Sylveon. Bring up dumping the remaining EVs into its special bulk. I know it's rather straightforward but it's a bit of an odd read when other investments are brought up.

Consider bringing up types of team structures this specific set fits best on.
This set is very passive and needs a lot of support to make up for it. Partners like Machamp and Pangoro appreciate Togedemaru's ability to pivot in on their checks like Gardevoir and Sylveon, and can make up for its passive nature with their strong attacks. Machamp also appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support to aid in pivoting into bulky Water-types and offsetting burn damage, while Pangoro appreciates it when pivoting into Necrozma. Galarian Weezing is a good partner, resisting Fighting-type attacks and being immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Rhyperior and Flygon thanks to Levitate, and it can also provide Defog support for Togedemaru. In return, Togedemaru can take strong Psychic- and Steel-type attacks aimed at Galarian Weezing from the likes of Espeon and Duraludon, as well as providing it with Wish support. Golisopod is a helpful teammate for this set too, as it can provide a good check to the likes of Cobalion lacking Stone Edge and Doublade, both of which this set can struggle with. In return, Togedemaru acts as a solid check to Pokemon like Noivern and Mantine that would easily switch into Golisopod otherwise. Partners like Rhyperior and Gigalith can be important to pair with Togedemaru, as they provide strong checks to Incineroar and Chandelure, both of which this set struggles with. They also appreciate Togedemaru's Wish support. Incineroar appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support and can check threatening Fire-types like Chandelure, as well as Pokemon like Doublade and Escavalier than Togedemaru can't handle. It also pressures Psychic-types like Reuniclus, Celebi and Necrozma.

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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Zing Zap
move 2: Iron Head
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Nuzzle / Toxic
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Togedemaru is a unique Choice Scarf user that takes advantage of its excellent defensive typing and access to Lightning Rod to check Pokemon such as Heliolisk, Rotom-C,(full stop -> comma) and Choice Scarf Gardevoir. It is capable of revenge killing many Pokemon in the tier, like Inteleon, Ribombee,(AC) and Espeon, and its attacks, while weak, are enough to pose a threat to many common Pokemon like Sylveon and Mantine. However, against neutral targets, its attacks are quite weak;(RSC) and (I feel like the semicolon here is unnecessary, the two sentences don't need to be separated, in fact I think that "and" slightly improves flows) it needs significant prior damage to revenge kill the likes of Noivern, Lucario,(AC) and Darmanitan. U-turn allows Togedemaru to maintain offensive momentum on the switches it forces against Fairy- and Water-types like Galarian Weezing and Milotic. Nuzzle is used to spread paralysis on switch-ins such as Incineroar and Cobalion,(RC) while also being able to halt setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Necrozma. Toxic can be used instead for its ability to pressure bulky Pokemon that Togedemaru can't beat on its own like Rhyperior and Umbreon.

There are many Pokemon that can stop Togedemaru in its tracks, like Incineroar and Doublade. For this reason, it's important to pair it with strong wallbreakers like Pangoro, Machamp, and Choice Band Haxorus that Togedemaru can bring in safely so that they can to (flows better and reduces verbosity) take advantage of these Pokemon. They also appreciate the paralysis support Togedemaru provides with Nuzzle. Offensive Pokemon that appreciate Togedemaru's ability to defensively deal with Electric-types like Heliolisk are good partners; Rhyperior is noteworthy for its ability to set up Stealth Rock and its resistance to Fire-type resistance, allowing it to pivot into attacks from the likes of Incineroar and Darmanitan that would threaten Togedemaru. Water-types like Milotic and Vaporeon also appreciate Togedemaru checking Electric-types and can deal with Incineroar and Doublade for it. Noivern and Togedemaru have great defensive synergy; Noivern resists Fire-type and Fighting-type attacks and is immune to Ground-type attacks, while Togedemaru resists Ice-type and Dragon-type attacks aimed at Noivern. They can also form a momentum core with U-turn. Inteleon can also perform this role,(RC) while acting as a powerful wallbreaker that can weaken Pokemon that Togedemaru cannot OHKO, like Gigalith, Rhyperior and Doublade. Togedemaru is unable to revenge kill Dragon Dance Haxorus after a boost, so Sylveon is recommended as a partner. Sylveon's Wish support can also help Togedemaru with pivoting into Pokemon like Roserade and Toxtricity. Golisopod can help with Haxorus too, as it is also (Again, this flows better in my opinion, as "also" pretty much covers the quite unnecessary bit you added) capable of revenge killing Haxorus lacking Protect with First Impression. It also resists Ground-type attacks aimed at Togedemaru from Pokemon such as Flygon and Choice Band Haxorus, while Togedemaru can take Electric-type attacks aimed at Golisopod from Heliolisk and Toxtricity.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Iron Head
move 2: Wish
move 3: Spiky Shield
move 4: Toxic / U-turn
item: Leftovers
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Careful
evs: 252 HP / 8 Atk / 196 SpD / 52 Spe

By virtue of its great typing and its ability, Lightning Rod, Togedemaru can run an effective defensive set that allows it to act as an excellent check to Pokemon like Gardevoir, Toxtricity,(AC) and Heliolisk. Wish and Spiky Shield combine to give Togedemaru a form of reliable recovery that it can also pass to its teammates, helping Pokemon such as Gigalith and Galarian Weezing in checking opposing Pokemon continuously. Spiky Shield also helps Togedemaru to scout Choice-locked Pokemon like Gardevoir, Sylveon, and Pangoro, and gets some damage off against contact attackers. Toxic allows Togedemaru to pressure opposing Pokemon that would otherwise wall this set freely, like Milotic, Mantine,(AC) and Rhyperior. U-turn can be used instead of Toxic in order to allow Togedemaru to act as a slow pivot; however, it makes Togedemaru much more passive overall. 8 Attack EVs allow Togedemaru to OHKO Gardevoir with Iron Head after Stealth Rock, and 52 Speed EVs allow it to outspeed Timid Sylveon. The remainder of the remaining EVs are used to maximize its special bulk.

This set fits best on balance and bulky offense teams that appreciate its defensive utility and ability to act as a pivot. However,(AC) (You're kinda making contrast here, so it's best to start a sentence with a connector that helps understand this) It is also very passive and needs a lot of support to make up for it. Partners like Machamp and Pangoro appreciate Togedemaru's ability to pivot in on their checks like Gardevoir and Sylveon, and can make up for its passive nature with their strong attacks. Machamp also appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support to aid in pivoting into bulky Water-types and offsetting burn damage, while Pangoro appreciates it when pivoting into Necrozma. Galarian Weezing is a good partner, resisting Fighting-type attacks and being immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Rhyperior and Flygon thanks to Levitate, and it can also provide Defog support for Togedemaru. In return, Togedemaru can take strong Psychic- and Steel-type attacks aimed at Galarian Weezing from the likes of Espeon and Duraludon, as well as providing it with Wish support. Golisopod is a helpful teammate for this set too, as it can provide a good check to the likes of Cobalion lacking Stone Edge and Doublade, both of which this set can struggle with. In return, Togedemaru acts as a solid check to Pokemon like Noivern and Mantine that would easily switch into Golisopod otherwise. Partners like Rhyperior and Gigalith can be important, to pair with Togedemaru (I think this could easily be removed, it doesn't add that much and sentence reads just even without it) as they provide strong checks to Incineroar and Chandelure, both of which this set struggles with. They also appreciate Togedemaru's Wish support. Incineroar appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support and can check threatening Fire-types like Chandelure, as well as Pokemon like Doublade and Escavalier than that Togedemaru can't handle. It also pressures Psychic-types like Reuniclus, Celebi and Necrozma.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Lilburr, 481709]]
- Quality checked by: [[Twilight, 344575], [Hilomilo, 313384]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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GP 1/1
[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Zing Zap
move 2: Iron Head
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Nuzzle / Toxic
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Togedemaru is a unique Choice Scarf user that takes advantage of its excellent defensive typing and access to Lightning Rod to check Pokemon such as Heliolisk, Rotom-C,(full stop -> comma) and Choice Scarf Gardevoir. It is capable of revenge killing many Pokemon in the tier, like Inteleon, Ribombee,(AC) and Espeon, and its attacks, while weak, are enough to pose a threat to many common Pokemon like Sylveon and Mantine. However, against neutral targets, its attacks are quite weak;(RSC) and (I feel like the semicolon here is unnecessary, the two sentences don't need to be separated, in fact I think that "and" slightly improves flows) (idm either) it needs significant prior damage to revenge kill the likes of Noivern, Lucario,(AC) and Darmanitan. U-turn allows Togedemaru to maintain offensive momentum on the switches it forces against Fairy- and Water-types like Galarian Weezing and Milotic. Nuzzle is used to spread paralysis on switch-ins such as Incineroar and Cobalion,(RC) while also being able to halt setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Necrozma. Toxic can be used instead for its ability to pressure bulky Pokemon that Togedemaru can't beat on its own like Rhyperior and Umbreon.

There are many Pokemon that can stop Togedemaru in its tracks, like Incineroar and Doublade. For this reason, it's important to pair it with strong wallbreakers like Pangoro, Machamp, and Choice Band Haxorus that Togedemaru can bring in safely so that they can to (flows better and reduces verbosity) take advantage of these Pokemon. They also appreciate the paralysis support Togedemaru provides with Nuzzle. Offensive Pokemon that appreciate Togedemaru's ability to defensively deal with Electric-types like Heliolisk are good partners; Rhyperior is noteworthy for its ability to set up Stealth Rock and its resistance to Fire-type resistance, (either works here) allowing it to pivot into attacks from the likes of Incineroar and Darmanitan that would threaten Togedemaru. Water-types like Milotic and Vaporeon also appreciate Togedemaru checking Electric-types and can deal with Incineroar and Doublade for it. Noivern and Togedemaru have great defensive synergy; Noivern resists Fire-type and Fighting-type attacks and is immune to Ground-type attacks, while Togedemaru resists Ice-type and Dragon-type attacks aimed at Noivern. They can also form a momentum core with U-turn. Inteleon can also perform this role,(RC) while acting as a powerful wallbreaker that can weaken Pokemon that Togedemaru cannot OHKO, like Gigalith, Rhyperior and Doublade. Togedemaru is unable to revenge kill Dragon Dance Haxorus after a boost, so Sylveon is recommended as a partner. Sylveon's Wish support can also help Togedemaru with pivoting into Pokemon like Roserade and Toxtricity. Similarly, Golisopod can help with Haxorus too, as it is also (Again, this flows better in my opinion, as "also" pretty much covers the quite unnecessary bit you added) (don't add "also", implies that Sylveon also is a FI user so) capable of revenge killing Haxorus lacking Protect with First Impression. It also and resists Ground-type attacks aimed at Togedemaru from Pokemon such as Flygon and Choice Band Haxorus, while Togedemaru can take Electric-type attacks aimed at Golisopod from Heliolisk and Toxtricity.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Iron Head
move 2: Wish
move 3: Spiky Shield
move 4: Toxic / U-turn
item: Leftovers
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Careful
evs: 252 HP / 8 Atk / 196 SpD / 52 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
By virtue of its great typing and its ability (RC) Lightning Rod, Togedemaru can run an effective defensive set that allows it to act as an excellent check to Pokemon like Gardevoir, Toxtricity,(AC) and Heliolisk. Wish and Spiky Shield combine to give Togedemaru a form of reliable recovery that it can also pass to its teammates, helping Pokemon such as Gigalith and Galarian Weezing in checking opposing Pokemon continuously. Spiky Shield also helps Togedemaru to scout Choice-locked Pokemon like Gardevoir, Sylveon, and Pangoro (RC) and gets some damage off against contact attackers. Toxic allows Togedemaru to pressure opposing Pokemon that would otherwise wall this set freely, like Milotic, Mantine,(AC) and Rhyperior. U-turn can be used instead of Toxic in order (either works) to allow Togedemaru to act as a slow pivot; however, it makes Togedemaru much more passive overall. 8 Attack EVs allow Togedemaru to OHKO Gardevoir with Iron Head after Stealth Rock, and 52 Speed EVs allow it to outspeed Timid Sylveon. The remainder of the remaining (either works) EVs are used to maximize its special bulk.

This set fits best on balance and bulky offense teams that appreciate its defensive utility and ability to act as a pivot. However,(AC) (You're kinda making contrast here, so it's best to start a sentence with a connector that helps understand this) (agree) it is also very passive and needs a lot of support to make up for it. Partners like Machamp and Pangoro appreciate Togedemaru's ability to pivot in on their checks like Gardevoir and Sylveon (RC) and can make up for its passive nature with their strong attacks. Machamp also appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support to aid in pivoting into bulky Water-types and offsetting burn damage, while Pangoro appreciates it when (probably should keep when, assuming the one pivoting = panda) pivoting into Necrozma. Galarian Weezing is a good partner, resisting Fighting-type attacks and being immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Rhyperior and Flygon thanks to Levitate, and it can also provide Defog support for Togedemaru. In return, Togedemaru can take strong Psychic- and Steel-type attacks aimed at Galarian Weezing from the likes of Espeon and Duraludon, as well as providing it with Wish support. Golisopod is a helpful teammate for this set too, as it can provide a good check to the likes of Cobalion lacking Stone Edge and Doublade, both of which this set can struggle with. In return, Togedemaru acts as a solid check to Pokemon like Noivern and Mantine that would easily switch into Golisopod otherwise. Partners like Rhyperior and Gigalith can be important, to pair with Togedemaru (I think this could easily be removed, it doesn't add that much and sentence reads just even without it) as they provide strong checks to Incineroar and Chandelure, both of which this set struggles with. They also appreciate Togedemaru's Wish support. Incineroar appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support and can check threatening Fire-types like Chandelure, as well as Pokemon like Doublade and Escavalier than that Togedemaru can't handle. It also pressures Psychic-types like Reuniclus, Celebi and Necrozma.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Lilburr, 481709]]
- Quality checked by: [[Twilight, 344575], [Hilomilo, 313384]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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GP 1/1
[SET]
name: Choice Scarf
move 1: Zing Zap
move 2: Iron Head
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Nuzzle / Toxic
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Togedemaru is a unique Choice Scarf user that takes advantage of its excellent defensive typing and access to Lightning Rod to check Pokemon such as Heliolisk, Rotom-C,(full stop -> comma) and Choice Scarf Gardevoir. It is capable of revenge killing many Pokemon in the tier, like Inteleon, Ribombee,(AC) and Espeon, and its attacks, while weak, are enough to pose a threat to many common Pokemon like Sylveon and Mantine. However, against neutral targets, its attacks are quite weak;(RSC) and (I feel like the semicolon here is unnecessary, the two sentences don't need to be separated, in fact I think that "and" slightly improves flows) (idm either) it needs significant prior damage to revenge kill the likes of Noivern, Lucario,(AC) and Darmanitan. U-turn allows Togedemaru to maintain offensive momentum on the switches it forces against Fairy- and Water-types like Galarian Weezing and Milotic. Nuzzle is used to spread paralysis on switch-ins such as Incineroar and Cobalion,(RC) while also being able to halt setup sweepers like Dragon Dance Necrozma. Toxic can be used instead for its ability to pressure bulky Pokemon that Togedemaru can't beat on its own like Rhyperior and Umbreon.

There are many Pokemon that can stop Togedemaru in its tracks, like Incineroar and Doublade. For this reason, it's important to pair it with strong wallbreakers like Pangoro, Machamp, and Choice Band Haxorus that Togedemaru can bring in safely so that they can to (flows better and reduces verbosity) take advantage of these Pokemon. They also appreciate the paralysis support Togedemaru provides with Nuzzle. Offensive Pokemon that appreciate Togedemaru's ability to defensively deal with Electric-types like Heliolisk are good partners; Rhyperior is noteworthy for its ability to set up Stealth Rock and its resistance to Fire-type resistance, (either works here) allowing it to pivot into attacks from the likes of Incineroar and Darmanitan that would threaten Togedemaru. Water-types like Milotic and Vaporeon also appreciate Togedemaru checking Electric-types and can deal with Incineroar and Doublade for it. Noivern and Togedemaru have great defensive synergy; Noivern resists Fire-type and Fighting-type attacks and is immune to Ground-type attacks, while Togedemaru resists Ice-type and Dragon-type attacks aimed at Noivern. They can also form a momentum core with U-turn. Inteleon can also perform this role,(RC) while acting as a powerful wallbreaker that can weaken Pokemon that Togedemaru cannot OHKO, like Gigalith, Rhyperior and Doublade. Togedemaru is unable to revenge kill Dragon Dance Haxorus after a boost, so Sylveon is recommended as a partner. Sylveon's Wish support can also help Togedemaru with pivoting into Pokemon like Roserade and Toxtricity. Similarly, Golisopod can help with Haxorus too, as it is also (Again, this flows better in my opinion, as "also" pretty much covers the quite unnecessary bit you added) (don't add "also", implies that Sylveon also is a FI user so) capable of revenge killing Haxorus lacking Protect with First Impression. It also and resists Ground-type attacks aimed at Togedemaru from Pokemon such as Flygon and Choice Band Haxorus, while Togedemaru can take Electric-type attacks aimed at Golisopod from Heliolisk and Toxtricity.

[SET]
name: Specially Defensive
move 1: Iron Head
move 2: Wish
move 3: Spiky Shield
move 4: Toxic / U-turn
item: Leftovers
ability: Lightning Rod
nature: Careful
evs: 252 HP / 8 Atk / 196 SpD / 52 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
By virtue of its great typing and its ability (RC) Lightning Rod, Togedemaru can run an effective defensive set that allows it to act as an excellent check to Pokemon like Gardevoir, Toxtricity,(AC) and Heliolisk. Wish and Spiky Shield combine to give Togedemaru a form of reliable recovery that it can also pass to its teammates, helping Pokemon such as Gigalith and Galarian Weezing in checking opposing Pokemon continuously. Spiky Shield also helps Togedemaru to scout Choice-locked Pokemon like Gardevoir, Sylveon, and Pangoro (RC) and gets some damage off against contact attackers. Toxic allows Togedemaru to pressure opposing Pokemon that would otherwise wall this set freely, like Milotic, Mantine,(AC) and Rhyperior. U-turn can be used instead of Toxic in order (either works) to allow Togedemaru to act as a slow pivot; however, it makes Togedemaru much more passive overall. 8 Attack EVs allow Togedemaru to OHKO Gardevoir with Iron Head after Stealth Rock, and 52 Speed EVs allow it to outspeed Timid Sylveon. The remainder of the remaining (either works) EVs are used to maximize its special bulk.

This set fits best on balance and bulky offense teams that appreciate its defensive utility and ability to act as a pivot. However,(AC) (You're kinda making contrast here, so it's best to start a sentence with a connector that helps understand this) (agree) it is also very passive and needs a lot of support to make up for it. Partners like Machamp and Pangoro appreciate Togedemaru's ability to pivot in on their checks like Gardevoir and Sylveon (RC) and can make up for its passive nature with their strong attacks. Machamp also appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support to aid in pivoting into bulky Water-types and offsetting burn damage, while Pangoro appreciates it when (probably should keep when, assuming the one pivoting = panda) pivoting into Necrozma. Galarian Weezing is a good partner, resisting Fighting-type attacks and being immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Rhyperior and Flygon thanks to Levitate, and it can also provide Defog support for Togedemaru. In return, Togedemaru can take strong Psychic- and Steel-type attacks aimed at Galarian Weezing from the likes of Espeon and Duraludon, as well as providing it with Wish support. Golisopod is a helpful teammate for this set too, as it can provide a good check to the likes of Cobalion lacking Stone Edge and Doublade, both of which this set can struggle with. In return, Togedemaru acts as a solid check to Pokemon like Noivern and Mantine that would easily switch into Golisopod otherwise. Partners like Rhyperior and Gigalith can be important, to pair with Togedemaru (I think this could easily be removed, it doesn't add that much and sentence reads just even without it) as they provide strong checks to Incineroar and Chandelure, both of which this set struggles with. They also appreciate Togedemaru's Wish support. Incineroar appreciates Togedemaru's Wish support and can check threatening Fire-types like Chandelure, as well as Pokemon like Doublade and Escavalier than that Togedemaru can't handle. It also pressures Psychic-types like Reuniclus, Celebi and Necrozma.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Lilburr, 481709]]
- Quality checked by: [[Twilight, 344575], [Hilomilo, 313384]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

done, thanks a bunch and thank you Milak for the amcheck <3
ready for upload
 
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