It was terrible though XD anyway, some of the sentences didn't flow very well and it was a little jumpy, but you'll have to wait for more specific help since I'm just so damn tired now. I have to go to bed now, work tomorrow (yes at 8:00PM, I have to get up before 4:00 AM). I had work today too btw, so I've been through a whole day... soooo maybe when I'm not so tired XD