had to give amoonguss several read-throughs before i could decide what i wanted to say - the tone you're using is really interesting! my first impression was basically 'wat', but i think it works. it's not exactly Formal Writing, but it's clear and informative and engaging - i personally don't have a problem with it; i even like it haha
nothing immediately leaps out at me prosewise in the later half of the analysis, but i'd try and tighten the overview as you generally want to be as concise as possible, for those people that just give it like a two-second scan-through to see what it does / if it's right for their team
also, you're probably going to proofread it after you're done so this likely isn't necessary haha, but there are some tiny convention mistakes such as Banded Medicham < Choice Band Medicham, and 'rapid spinner' somewhere isn't capitalized