yeah, I didn't read the thread. I'm sorry!!
skimmed through it and I do like your changes, ugh, I wish I'd seen it before I started checking! would probably have saved me some work .-.
just two things I wanted to point out though
"Armaldo's 75/100/80 defenses" need spaces both before and after the slashes, and
"a Choice Banded X-Scissor" should be "Choice Band-boosted"
apologies again for overlooking your check!