Thanks mate! Thanks for the clarification on formats too! I don't expect everyone to comment on my set, but I thought you would, if you saw it.
It was a shaky analysis, that's for sure. I do standard OU all the time, perhaps I'm not ready to go to the lower tiers or (god-forbid) LC. I only have modest battling skills (I average around 1000), and I haven't applied for tutorship yet, and that's probably why I'm not able to test my sets the way they should be played before putting it for C&C submission.
I may not be able to make the best sets, but is there a vacancy for a writer?
Thanks for taking the time to help a new member!