hi can you expand on "A note to V0x: if an analysis has little to change, don't change things just for the sake of it – a lot of the changes in there weren't really necessary..."?
most of them were necessary IMO. For example, 3 sentences all using listed is very repetitive, "to be on your team" is unnecessarily wordy, a 2 line sentence with 4 commas separating clauses is pretty clunky and works better split into 2 sentences, "can also be used as an" is also needlessly wordy. Maybe "fact" was extraneous (that rule is a bit picky). anyway, if I could hear your side of things that would be great no hard feelings C:
most of them were necessary IMO. For example, 3 sentences all using listed is very repetitive, "to be on your team" is unnecessarily wordy, a 2 line sentence with 4 commas separating clauses is pretty clunky and works better split into 2 sentences, "can also be used as an" is also needlessly wordy. Maybe "fact" was extraneous (that rule is a bit picky). anyway, if I could hear your side of things that would be great no hard feelings C:
