I just skimmed the article again and there isn't a single word in there that any adult writer or journalist would have to use a thesaurus to find out about. Heck I'm 17 and the only word I had to look up was "engendered", and its meaning was pretty obvious in context anyway. Also, people are allowed to embellish their writing if they want it to sound more compelling, interesting, evocative, harsh, etc depending on their purpose. Many have, and that's why the whole field of literature analysis exists.