Accelgor (Analysis) (GP 0/2)

[06harrisj]

@Delta 2777: Thanks for the QC, I added Rain Dance to OO.

@Foxy Grandpa: I've made the changes, thanks for pointing them out.

I'll write it up for GP later Today or Tomorrow.

 

[06harrisj]

Ready for GP checks.

 

[JockeMS]

Add <p> and </p> at the begining and at the end of each paragraph. After that, change the prefix to Copyediting and then it's ready. ;)

 

[06harrisj]

Thanks, have done.

 

[Great Sage]

This analysis is so substantially sub-par that it would be infeasible to expect GP to fix it; the set comments are not nearly sufficiently expository, and mistakes like "Unburn" in the Dream World section heavily suggest that you did not write with proper care. As such, Accelgor will (once again) be reassigned.