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Arceus-Fighting (Revamp) (QC 2/3)

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- EVs can be changed to fit your team. A stronger Stone Edge is possible but not worth it, while a stronger Judgment can be worth it for things like Ferro. Make sure you still outspeed Ho-oh.
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Remove the mention of investing in attack if you are going to say it's not worth it. (which it isn't) However, do mention investing in defense or special defense for things like Genesect/Ekiller or Darkrai.

Also, mention in the AC of CM that you can also take from spatk to put into HP. You also need to add teammates in that section since there's a lot of things (Mewtwo and Ho-Oh for example) that can switch into CM and be dicks so mention answers for them. (like Jirachi and Omastar) Also, take Stone Edge out of AC. (I talked with shrang and he agrees)

Ice Beam OHKOs Rayquaza but Dark Pulse is better otherwise since Giratina is still hit super effective
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Giratina is weak to both Ice and Dark. Dark Pulse lets CM Fightceus beat Ghost Arceus and kill Mewtwo faster.

I'm still going to hold off on approving til I see these changes and look over it again to see if there's anything else that is missing.
 
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- EVs allow Latios and Latias to be 3HKOd after SR
- You can move SpA EVs to HP to help with Genesect
- Kyogre and Arceus-Fighting work well together since Arceus kills Ferro
- This thing hates Arceus-Ghost/Ho-Oh
- Modest has a chance to OHKO EKiller but you lose to other Arceus now and Latios Latias
- Mewtwo and Ho-Oh are very good counters as long as Mewtwo doesn't switch into Dark Pulse, so good teammates that help beat them are Jirachi, Omastar, defensive Giratina
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Girainta is a pretty lame check to Mewtwo and Ho-Oh. You could have mentioned Heatran or Deo-D as other options.

Also, just for organization purposes move the modest mention to just below more HP evs mention since it still deals with ev spreads. Also, the HP evs aren't just for Genesect. It's mostly general bulk to have an easier time setting up or a better defensive check to things like Ekiller or Darkrai.
 
Giratina can take any hit from either of them (with 252/252+) so it was just something quick. Deo-D gets smashed by Banded Ho-Oh anyway but Heatran I put in.

Otherwise done.
 
Its not meant for the both of them. Mewtwo and Ho-Oh are very different mons so you would have to address them separately in your write up. You could mention Omastar and Heatran as stuff to help with Ho-Oh while Deo-D and Jirachi keep Mewtwo in line.

Anyways, just put that stuff in and then you can go ahead and do the write-up as it's QC Approved 2/3
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Thanks for the QC checks, I started writing up Donkeyceus and I should have more done later. If you notice anything before I finish let me know since I wasn't sure about what else to put in for teammates for Donkeyceus
 
dbzmariogeno use the <p></p> tags to wrap you paragraphs like in the overview. Also, you were supposed to save your skeleton in hide tags at the bottom at the analysis. (i'll edit that in for you)
 
Stone Edge is an easy OHKO against Ho-Oh even with a negative nature
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0- Atk Arceus-Fighting Stone Edge vs. 248 HP / 0 Def Ho-Oh: 332-392 (80 - 94.4%) -- guaranteed 2HKO

Change that line since it is incorrect.

this one becomes a wallbreaker
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Still not per definition a wallbreaker- I'd regard support Fightceus as exactly that, a utility mon that supports your team while combating a road range of threats.

Arceus has access to Swords Dance and perfect neutral coverage in 2 moves, but both are weak, and ExtremeKiller Normal Arceus has a STAB priority move while being able to hold an item, so you're better off running that if you reallly want a Swords Dance Arceus
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Remove "really."
 
Just checked and I accidentally did that calc with 0 hp, so fixed.

As for wallbreaker vs utility, if QC says to change it then fine.
 
The issue is that we did tell you to change it in the skeleton which that, and a lot of other information, seems to have been lost in the transition.
 
you had to rely 100% on the qc team to get the sets right and you still missed important information; this analysis is sloppily written with vague prose and lackluster facts.

sorry, no can do.
 
I appreciate the enthusiasm but it's clear from this write-up that you lack the experience necessary to write this analysis even with a proper skeleton. I'm going to have to take this away but that doesn't mean you aren't allowed to write future analyses. You just need to make absolutely sure you have sufficient knowledge of the Pokemon and the metagame. (We'll spare you the trouble of writing the full thing up in future instances. I gave you the benefit of the doubt seeing as this was your first analysis. I apologize for the lost time.)
 
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