BH Arceus-Fire (Orichalcum Pulse) [GP 1/1]

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[SET]
name: Orichalcum Pulse
move 1: V-create
move 2: Solar Beam
move 3: Growth / Glacial Lance
move 4: Morning Sun / Strength Sap
item: Life Orb / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Orichalcum Pulse
nature: Naive
evs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fire / Grass

[SET COMMENTS]
Arceus-Fire's Orichalcum Pulse-boosted V-create is the strongest relevant attack in the tier, letting it force out most Pokemon by threatening an OHKO. Arceus-Fire's niche over other V-create users, such as Zacian-C, is its powerful Solar Beam, which removes common physical walls such as Dondozo and Groudon. Growth enables Arceus-Fire to set up on passive walls, whereas Glacial Lance targets Dragon-types such as Eternatus and Giratina. Life Orb increases Arceus-Fire's power to absurd levels, OHKOing Arceus formes that don't resist its moves and 2HKOing most resistant targets with V-create. Heavy-Duty Boots, on the other hand, allows Arceus-Fire to take better advantage of its resistance to common Fairy- and Fire-type attacks and check many Zacian-C sets lacking Ground-type moves. Arceus-Fire has difficulty breaking past Fire-immune foes, most commonly Well-Baked Body Steel-types, so it pairs well with teammates that can handle these targets like Groudon and Headlong Rush Zacian-C. Imposter-proofing is done with Well-Baked Body Steel-types or Primordial Sea users. Tera Fire boosts the power of V-create even further, while Tera Grass grants a Ground resistance and a much stronger Solar Beam.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Augustakira, 445464]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036,], [Tea Guzzler, 577920]]
 
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[SET]
name: Orichalcum Pulse
move 1: V-Create
move 2: Solar Beam
move 3: Growth / Glacial Lance
move 4: Morning Sun / Strength Sap
item: Life Orb / Heavy Duty Boots
ability: Orichalcum Pulse
nature: Naive
evs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fire / Grass

[SET COMMENTS]

Arceus-Fire's Orichalcum Pulse-boosted V-create is the strongest relevant attack in the tier, allowing it to uses an incredibly powerful STAB Orichalcum Pulse boosted V-Create to punch through a large majority of the tierPokemon. Unlike Zacian-Crowned, it backs up a powerful V-Create with Solar Beam, hitting the go-to physical wall Fur Coat Dondozo super effectively on it's weaker sideArceus-Fire's niche over other V-create users, such as Zacian-C, is its powerful Solar Beam which removes common physical walls such as Dondozo and Groudon. i probably wouldn't mention "go-to" physical walls, just as a rule of thumbGrowth enables Arceus-Fire to exploit passive walls, whereas Glacial Lance allows it to targets Dragon-types such as Eternatus and Giratina. Life Orb turns upincreases Arceus-Fire's power to absurd levels, allowing it to OHKO neutral Arceus Formes and 2HKO most resistant targets with V-Create. Heavy-Duty Boots, on the other hand, allow Arceus-Fire to take better advantage of it's defensive profile to switch in on common Fairy and Fire type attacks. Arceus-Fire has trouble with Fire-immune opponents, most commonly Well Baked Body Steel-types, so it pairs well with teammates that can handle these targets like Headlong Rush Zacian-Crowned or Groudon. Tera Fire boosts the power of V-Create even further, while Tera Grass allows Arceus-Fire to take on Ground types as well as to OHKO Dondozo with it's Life Orb boosted Solar Beam. grants a Ground resistance and a much stronger Solar Beam.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Augustakira, 445464]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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:sv/arceus-fire:
[SET]
name: Orichalcum Pulse
move 1: V-Create V-create
move 2: Solar Beam
move 3: Growth / Glacial Lance
move 4: Morning Sun / Strength Sap
item: Life Orb / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Orichalcum Pulse
nature: Naive
evs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fire / Grass

[SET COMMENTS]

Arceus-Fire's Orichalcum Pulse-boosted V-create is the strongest relevant attack in the tier, allowing it to punch through a large majority of the Pokémon. Arceus-Fire's niche over other V-create users, such as Zacian-C, is its powerful Solar Beam which removes common physical walls such as Dondozo and Groudon. Growth enables Arceus-Fire to exploit passive walls, whereas Glacial Lance targets Dragon-types such as Eternatus and Giratina. Life Orb increases Arceus-Fire's power to absurd levels, allowing it to OHKO neutral Arceus Formes and 2HKO most resistant targets with V-Create V-create. Heavy-Duty Boots, on the other hand, allow Arceus-Fire to take better advantage of its defensive profile to switch in on common Fairy and Fire type attacks Mention some specific stuff like how it can check Zacian-C. Arceus-Fire has trouble with Fire-immune opponents, most commonly Well Baked Body Steel-types, so it pairs well with teammates that can handle these targets like Headlong Rush Zacian-Crowned Zacian-C or Groudon. This set is giga Imposter-bait so need to mention good improofs. Tera Fire boosts the power of V-Create V-create even further, while Tera Grass grants a Ground resistance and a much stronger Solar Beam.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Augustakira, 445464]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 

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[SET]
name: Orichalcum Pulse
move 1: V-Create
move 2: Solar Beam
move 3: Growth / Glacial Lance
move 4: Morning Sun / Strength Sap
item: Life Orb / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Orichalcum Pulse
nature: Naive
evs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fire / Grass

[SET COMMENTS]

Arceus-Fire's Orichalcum Pulse-boosted V-create is the strongest relevant attack in the tier, allowing it to punch through a large majority of the Pokémon letting it force out most Pokemon by threatening an OHKO. no accent for Pokemon in most relevant instances Arceus-Fire's niche over other V-create users, such as Zacian-C, is its powerful Solar Beam which removes common physical walls such as Dondozo and Groudon. Growth enables Arceus-Fire to exploit set up on passive walls, whereas Glacial Lance targets Dragon-types such as Eternatus and Giratina. Life Orb increases Arceus-Fire's power to absurd levels, allowing it to ensuring it OHKOes neutral Arceus Formes and 2HKOes most resistant targets with V-Create. Heavy-Duty Boots, on the other hand, allows even if the item is "plural", like choice specs, treat it as if singular Arceus-Fire to take better advantage of its defensive profile to switch in on common resistance to Fairy- and Fire-type (hyphens) attacks and in order to check many Zacian-C sets lacking Headlong Rush Ground-type moves. blades is an option Arceus-Fire has trouble with difficulty breaking past Fire-immune opponents, most commonly Well-Baked (hyphen) Body Steel-types, so it pairs well with teammates that can handle these targets like Groudon or Headlong Rush Zacian-C or Groudon. as far as i can tell, your structure would imply that not all groudons run ground moves, whereas putting groudon first specifies that zacian is the one who isn't always carrying a ground move Imposter-proofing is done with Well-Baked (hyphen) Body Steel-types or Primordial Sea users. Tera Fire boosts the power of V-create even further, while Tera Grass grants a Ground resistance and a much stronger Solar Beam.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Augustakira, 445464]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]] probably don't stamp me until further notice since this might just be bad and proper QC ends up binning half of it anyway lol
 

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[SET]
name: Orichalcum Pulse
move 1: V-create V-Create
move 2: Solar Beam
move 3: Growth / Glacial Lance
move 4: Morning Sun / Strength Sap
item: Life Orb / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Orichalcum Pulse
nature: Naive
evs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fire / Grass

[SET COMMENTS] (removed linebreak)
Arceus-Fire's Orichalcum Pulse-boosted V-create is the strongest relevant attack in the tier, letting it force out most Pokemon by threatening an OHKO. Arceus-Fire's niche over other V-create users, such as Zacian-C, is its powerful Solar Beam, (ac) which removes common physical walls such as Dondozo and Groudon. Growth enables Arceus-Fire to set up on passive walls, whereas Glacial Lance targets Dragon-types such as Eternatus and Giratina. Life Orb increases Arceus-Fire's power to absurd levels, ensuring it OHKOing OHKOes neutral Arceus formes that don't resist its moves Formes (if this is what you meant; "neutral" just sounded vague to me) and 2HKOing 2HKOes most resistant targets with V-create. V-Create. Heavy-Duty Boots, on the other hand, allows Arceus-Fire to take better advantage of its resistance to common Fairy- and Fire-type (forgot the hyphen here) attacks and check many Zacian-C sets lacking Ground-type Ground-Type moves. Arceus-Fire has difficulty breaking past Fire-immune foes, opponents, most commonly Well-Baked Body Steel-types, so it pairs well with teammates that can handle these targets like Groudon and or Headlong Rush Zacian-C. Imposter-proofing is done with Well-Baked Body Steel-types or Primordial Sea users. Tera Fire boosts the power of V-create even further, while Tera Grass grants a Ground resistance and a much stronger Solar Beam.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Augustakira, 445464]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036,], [Tea Guzzler, 577920]]
Tea Guzzler fine check imo, some notes below
missed a "V-create" here; the "create" is always with a lowercase c
opponents refers to the player, foes to the pokemon. keep this in mind for future checks!
"formes" is lowercase.
when a subject is plural and followed by a multi-item list, it should have "and" and not "or". or is used when the subject is singular. (e.g. Groudon needs a teammate that can cover its weaknesses, like Yveltal or Zacian-C. / Pivots like Dondozo and Zacian-C help get Groudon onto the field with ease.)
your prose changes were fine overall! i liked changing "defensive profile to switch in on common..." into "resistance to..." and switching around the example order to make sure that it had the correct meaning in the sentence that included Headlong Rush Zacian-C and Groudon.
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