Your EV spread is missing 16 points. It should be:
248 HP / 24 Def / 236 Spe
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Your EV spread is missing 16 points. It should be:
248 HP / 24 Def / 236 Spe
Shurtugal, I don't think you understand the point of this set. This Gliscor isn't a designated Baton Passer; more of a walling Gliscor that happnes to be able to pass a Substitute. Removing Poison Heal and the subsequent recovery is just going to make it less able to do that, as far as I am concerned. Perhaps mention Leftovers + Sand Veil in AC on a Sand team but emphasise it decreases Gliscor's ability to make substitutes?
Otherwise this looks like a really cool set. Great for getting frail nukes like Staraptor onto the field unscathed. Maytbe mention that this Gliscor appreciated Pokemon that love substitutes and resist its weaknesses? I don't know if that's too obvious but 'free switch to frail Sweeper' and 'Free Sub for something that resists water/ice' seem like they're two seperate uses of this Gliscor (both very cool) so perhaps the writing should indicate that these are different but equally useful roles?
Isn't Facade almost as powerful as EQ? It can't be that bad. Remember that the primary function of this is still defensive, checking threats etc, and it's really good to have something to hit annoying balloon users and levitate pokemon such as Rotom-W.
It's a million times better than Ice Fang, at least, which seems to find its way onto a number of Gliscor sets.
[SET]
name: SubPass
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Baton Pass
move 3: Earthquake
move 4: Toxic / Taunt / Facade
item: Toxic Orb
traitability: Poison Heal
nature: Impish
evs: 248 HP / 24 Def / 236 Spe
Set Comments[SET COMMENTS]
<p>AlthoughWhile many other Gliscor sets aim to sweep or stall, this set focuses on keeping momentum while still being able to wall common threats. The combination of Substitute and Baton Pass allows Gliscor topass off the Substitute, which gives the recipientgive a teammate a free switch-in, anda possiblepotentially an intact Substitute as well.Since the set is not expectedAs this set has significant surprise factor, especially with the rise in popularity of Toxic Stall Gliscor,more often than not your opponent will use a move to hit Gliscor, soyour opponent will more often than not attempt to hit Gliscor with a super effective move. Gliscor can then Baton Pass to a Pokemon that resists the predicted move, andstill have a Sub intactlikely preserve the Substitute. This works especially well withset-up PokemonsPokemon that utilize boosting moves, as they will always appreciate a free turnof set-upto set up behind a Substituteis always appreciated.</p>
<p>There are manyviablemovesto put intothat are viable in the fourth slot. Toxic is great for crippling walls (such as?), while Taunt is a solid option to shut downpokemonSteel-type walls such as Ferrothorn, Skarmory, and Forretress, andto preventalso prevents phazers fromphazing out Gliscor or the Pokemon you chose to Baton Pass tothwarting the Baton Pass strategy. Finally, Facade is a good option to hitLevitatorsLevitate users, such as Rotom-W, for solid damage.</p>
Additional Comments.[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>236 Speed EVs allow Gliscor to outspeed neutral-natured Lucario, all Heatranwithout a Scarfbar Choice Scarf variants, most other Gliscor, and Jolly Mamoswine. 248 HP EVsare usedenable Gliscor to take minimal damage from Stealth Rockand to take hits well, while the remaining EVs are dumped into Defenseto assist thatand an Impish nature is chosen to let Gliscor sponge hits even more effectively. An alternative spread of 248 HP / 68 Def / 192 Spe with a Jolly nature can be used to outspeedmax speedall Rotom,andas well asmax investedbase 100'sbase 100 Speed Pokemon (such as?). As far as alternative move options go, Protect, boosting moves such as Swords Dance and Rock Polish, and Ice Fang can all work well in the fourth slot. Protectcan be used in the last move slot as well tolets Gliscor better pivot around Choice users, boosting movessuch as Swords Dance and Rock Polish can be used to give the recipient a boostcan make the recipient an even greater threat, and IceFang canbe used todeal with threats such as Salamence,andnon-Roost Dragonite,Dragonite that lack Roost if they pose a threat to your team.</p>
<p>Good Baton Pass recipients include Pokemon that resist Water-type and Ice-type attacks, as they can take the attacks Gliscor attracts with ease, allowing those Pokemon to keep the Substitute intact—which Gliscor tends to attract—as their resistances allow the Substitute to stay intact.Any Pokemon that appreciates coming in without taking any damage, especially frail Pokemon due to their lack of ability to take many hits, are great receivers. Sweepers that would enjoy having a Substitute for a free turn of set-up work as well.Frail Pokemon that cannot take a hit, as well as setup sweepers that appreciate the free turn, also work. (recommend some in particular and explain why) As this set attracts Rotom-W, Ferrothorn is a good recipient as it can maintain the Substitute and use it as a ticket to set up hazards. Ifyou areGliscor is not running Ice Fang, Ferrothorn can alsobe Baton Passed toswitch in on Landorus'sHPHidden Power Ice,as it again, willwhich will again give Ferrothorn a free opportunity to set up hazardsas well.</p>
<p>Powerful Water-orand Ice-type attacks will decimate Gliscorwhileif it's not behind a Substitute. Skarmory canWhirlwind the Pokemon Gliscor Baton Passes touse Whirlwind to phaze the recipient, andGliscor cannot do anything in returnthere is nothing Gliscor can do outside of Taunt.Politoed can Perish Song Gliscor preventing the Baton Pass recipientPerish Song users such as Politoed can prevent Gliscor's Substitute recipients fromgettingstaying in for more than a few turnsbefore they are forced to switch out;(Politoed, along with other bulky waters have to be wary of Toxic, although Politoed can use Rest or Refresh to clear status)however, Politoed needs to be wary of Toxic. (therefore? with that in mind, suggest some teammates. as it stands, this list of counters belongs in [checks and counters], not here! the point of including counters in [ac] is so you can also recommend teammates to patch up the weaknesses of this set.)
[SET]
name: SubPass
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Baton Pass
move 3: Earthquake
move 4: Toxic / Taunt / Facade
item: Toxic Orb
ability: Poison Heal
nature: Impish
evs: 248 HP / 24 Def / 236 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
<p>While many other Gliscor sets aim to sweep or stall, this set focuses on keeping momentum while still being able to wall common threats. The combination of Substitute and Baton Pass allows Gliscor to give a teammate a free switch-in, and potentially an intact Substitute as well. As this set has significant surprise factor, especially with the rise in popularity of Toxic Stall Gliscor, your opponent will more often than not attempt to hit Gliscor with a super effective move. Gliscor can then Baton Pass to a Pokemon that resists the predicted move, and likely preserve the Substitute. This works especially well with Pokemon that utilize boosting moves, as they will always appreciate a free turn to set<space>up behind a Substitute.</p>
<p>There are many moves that are viable in the fourth slot. Toxic is great for crippling walls such as bulky wWaters-types, while Taunt is a solid option to shut down Steel-type walls such as Ferrothorn, Skarmory, and Forretress, and also prevents phazers from thwarting the Baton Pass strategy. Finally, Facade is a good option to hit Levitate users, such as Rotom-W, for solid damage.</p>
[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>236 Speed EVs allow enable Gliscor to outspeed neutral-natured Lucario, all Heatran bar Choice Scarf variants, most other Gliscor, and Jolly Mamoswine. 248 HP EVs enablesure that Gliscor to takes minimal damage from Stealth Rock, while the remaining EVs are dumped into Defense and an Impish nature is chosen to let Gliscor sponge hits even more effectively. An alternative spread of 248 HP / 68 Def / 192 Spe with a Jolly nature can be used to outspeed all Rotom, as well as neutral-natured base 100 Speed Pokemon,(comma) such as Celebi and Jirachi. As far as alternative move options go, Protect, boosting moves such as Swords Dance and Rock Polish, and Ice Fang can all work well in the fourth slot. Protect lets Gliscor better pivot around Choice users, boosting moves can make the recipient an even greater threat, while Ice Fang can deal with threats such as Salamence and Dragonite that lack Roost if they pose a threat to your team.</p>
<p>Good Baton Pass recipients include Pokemon that resist Water- and Ice-type attacks—which Gliscor tends to attract—as their resistances allow the Substitute to stay intact. Frail Pokemon that cannot take a hit, (comma) such as Darmanitan, as well as setup sweepers that appreciate the free turn, also work. As this set attracts Rotom-W, Ferrothorn is a good recipient as it can maintain the Substitute and use it as a ticket to set up hazards. If Gliscor is not running Ice Fang, Ferrothorn can also switch in on Landorus's Hidden Power Ice, which will again give Ferrothorn a free opportunity to set up hazards.</p>
<p>Powerful Water- and Ice-type attacks will decimate Gliscor if it's not behind a Substitute. Skarmory can use Whirlwind to phaze the recipient, and there is nothing Gliscor can do to it outside of Taunt. Finally, Perish Song users such as Politoed can prevent Gliscor's Substitute recipients from staying in for more than a few turns; however, Politoed needs to be wary of Toxic. Electric-types can hit both Skarmory and Water-types like Politoed for super effective damage. Rotom-W works well due thanks to the its ability to take Water- (hyphen) and Ice-type attacks as well.</p>