Grammar-Prose Team Queue 3: Pretty Much the Same as the Last One

OU Garchomp is ready for GP checks.

Also, whoever takes a run at this, there's a bunch of "derivative writing" in my analysis (see PKgaming's post on p2 to see what it specifically is), and I'd like some help/focus on getting it out of the analysis. Thanks.
 

NixHex

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Also Doubles Salamence is ready for a second stamp. There's an ammy check but I only implemented a few of the changes so I'd like to get an official GP member do a full check. Thanks!
 

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