Help critiqing with Rain Dance team (RMT)

[J-Dubb]

(RMT) Critique my team The Dancers

Meet the Dancers (my teams Nickname):

Ok So her how my team looks

Bronzong

@ Leftovers
Relaxed
Levitate
EV's: 252 Hp/ 160 Atk/ 96 spd

~Rain Dance
~Hypnosis
~Gyro Ball
~Earthquake

This my lead pokemon starts up rain dance and only weakness is fire thanks to levitate so seeing as this is a rain dance team got lots of water pokemon to cover that

Azumarill​

@ Choice band
Adament
Huge Power
EVs: 252 Att/ 252 HP/ 4 Spd

~Waterfall
~Focus Punch
~Double edge
~Aqua Jet

With Rain dance activated + Huge Power + Stab + Aqua Jet + Choice band can Crush Teams pokemon. Rest of moves mostly fillers seeing as aqua Jets main move

Lucario

@ Choice Specs
Timid
Ev's: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

~Vaccum Wave
~Dragon Pulse
~Dark Pulse
~Aura Sphere

Ah my Favorite Pokemon and a sp.sweeper on my team. Vaccum wave to finish off weakend pokemon and rest of moves are great type coverages

Kingdra

@ Damp Rock
Modest
Swift Swim
Ev's: 252 HP / 252 SpA / 4 Spe

~Rain Dance
~Ice Beam
~Surf
~Dragon Pulse

My second Rain dance pokemon and with damp rock makes rain dance last longer. Also ice beam for dragons who try to attack kingdra and surf for STAB. Dragon Pulse also fits into both section above

Electivire

@ Expert Belt
Mild
Ev's: 252 Atk / 80 SpA / 176 Spe

~Ice Punch
~Thunder
~Cross Chop
~Earthquake

Switch him in on poentail thunder attacks to raise speed and while raining thunder 100% accuray so it deadly rest stander on Electivire

Ludicolo

@ Leftovers
Calm
Rain Dish
Ev's: 204 Hp/ 80 Sp.att/ 120 Sp.def/ 104 Spd

~Rain Dance
~Surf/Ice Beam
~Leech Seed
~Grass knot

Ok my sp.tank and final Rain dancer. With leftover + Leech Seed + Rain Dish he will be hard to kill. Grass knot for STAb and other water I face but not sure what to do with last move

So how does it look all criticizm welcome

 

[J-Dubb]

Wow 78 view and nobody has somthing to say, come on I want to know if this team any good?

 

[strikesocom]

Your team can't really hold up well vrs other bulky waters, notable ones being Milotic and Tentacruel; Tentacruel especially, who resists both of Lucario's STABs, takes only neutral damage from Grass-Knot, out runs Azumarrill and can utilize HP Electric.

Swampert is a good solution, it can set up SR for some indirect damage and take Neutral-damage from Tentacruel's attacks and EQ it if it actually tries to stay in.

 

[J-Dubb]

Your team can't really hold up well vrs other bulky waters, notable ones being Milotic and Tentacruel; Tentacruel especially, who resists both of Lucario's STABs, takes only neutral damage from Grass-Knot, out runs Azumarrill and can utilize HP Electric.

Swampert is a good solution, it can set up SR for some indirect damage and take Neutral-damage from Tentacruel's attacks and EQ it if it actually tries to stay in.

ok swampert can be put in who should i drop

Note: I'll be runnig a Mixpert Swampet for your informtaion here moveset

Swampert @ Leftovers/Damp Rock
Relaxed
Evs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 52 SpA
Stealth Rock
Avalanche
Surf
Earthquake

Edit: But for tentacrul couldn't i throw in Bronzong and use an EQ ?

 

[toybox]

Tell me what your team does at the hands of Celebi? Yeah, big trouble.

Perhaps, Heracross>Luke, not only does it kill Celebi, but it also can switch into SpecsLuke Aura Sphere, whom nothing else in your team can switch into safely.

 

[J-Dubb]

Tell me what your team does at the hands of Celebi? Yeah, big trouble.

Perhaps, Heracross>Luke, not only does it kill Celebi, but it also can switch into SpecsLuke Aura Sphere, whom nothing else in your team can switch into safely.

to be honsest never face a celebi before bt i guess there some truth in you words. Hmm my team dosn't seem to be doing good here should I just drop it or is there a chance on improving it?

 

[Ash Borer]

ice beam really isnt doing anything for kingdra, give it waterfall in that place.

and less HP and more attack evs, along with a life orb.

 

[J-Dubb]

I'm Dropping this Team Lock please I'll post my new idea for a team to