Formatting was just me being stupid when I switched from skeleton.
I should have gotten most everything. Thanks!
I should have gotten most everything. Thanks!
[Overview]
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<p>While Heracross is often overlooked, Heracrosshas many strong points to boast when looking for a team it has several advantages over other common Pokemon that enable it to function well in the VGC 2012 metagame. With its excellent Bug / Fighting-typing (remove hyphen), Heracross can hit several top threats, such as Terrakion, Cresselia, (add comma) and Tyranitar for super effective damage. Boasting a terrific base 125 Attack stat, which is only further boosted by its fantastic ability Guts, Heracross can easily dispatch dispose of the opposing team Pokemon with ease. With decent base 80 / 75 / 95 defenses, Heracross can also take a hit or two before ultimately going down. With Due to its average base 85 Speed, Heracross benefits greatly from Tailwind, Trick Room, (add comma) and Thunder Wave or Icy Wind support, all of which allow it to get the jump on faster threats. Heracross isn't the perfect Pokemon, (add comma) however,; (remove comma, add semi-colon) Heracrossit is plagued with a weakness to Fire-, Flying-, and Psychic-type moves, all of which are commonly used in the VGC metagame. Even with its faults, with proper team support Heracross can flourish and should be able to find its way onto any team easily can fit onto any team with ease.</p>
[SET]
name: Guts Abuse
move 1: Megahorn
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Rock Slide / Earthquake / Facade
move 4: Protect
item: Flame Orb / Toxic Orb
ability: Guts
nature: Adamant / Jolly
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
<p>This set aims to demolish the opponents team through hard-hitting moves and abusing common type-weaknesses. After a Guts boost, Heracross's attack stat is boosted to unimaginable levels, allowing it to destroy common threats such as Cresselia, Tyranitar, and Politoed amongst others. Megahorn easily dispatches of destroys Cresselia and Amoonguss, two Pokemon which that are commonly seen in VGC. Ludicolo is also hit for super effective damage by Megahorn, but Heracross takes a lot of damage from Scald or Surf in the rain. Fighting-type moves are notorious for hitting large amounts of Pokemon for super effective damage and Heracross's STAB Close Combat KOs those Pokemon with ease and smacks hits Pokemon who are neutral to it for large amounts of damage as well. The third move is useful for picking up on extra coverage which Heracross's team is lacking in Your choice of third move depends on what coverage move benefits your team most. Rock Slide and Earthquake are good spread moves for most teams, hitting and hit a good portion of the metagame for super effective damage. Rock Slide helps amend for its Flying-type weakness Heracross against Flying-types, doesn't harm its ally, and hits Shedinja. Earthquake works well with most of Heracross's recommended teammates, as well as smashing and hits a large amount lot of the metagame for significant amounts of damage. After a Guts boost, Facade's Base Power doubles to a cool 140 becomes a cool 140 base power which hits almost everything for neutral damage. Protect is a crucial move in VGC,; (remove comma, add semi-colon) shielding it shields Heracross from a potential fatal attack and activating activates Heracross's Guts. The choice between Flame Orb and Toxic Orb is moot a superficial one. Toxic Orb does less damage over short periods of time, but the length of battles is much battles tend to last longer than before so Flame Orb is typically the superior item. While unlikely, Toxic Orb prevents Heracross's attack to be halved Attack from getting halved if its ability were to be switched.</p>
[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>An Adamant nature ties with other neutral Base 85s, (comma) while Jolly gets the jump on neutralKrookodile, neutral Lucario, neutral and Rotom formes, as well as Excadrill out of sand,. (remove comma, add period) This also enable Heracross to Speed tie with as well as tying with neutral Hydreigon. Suicune and Aerodactyl make for great Tailwind partnets partners as both deal with a few counters to Heracross (such as?). Tornadus, Salamence, and Crobat also make for good Tailwind partners. If Thunder Wave is more appealing for team support than Tailwind, Pokemon such as Thundurus, Togekiss, Rotom-W, and Cresselia are great partners. Thundurus dispatches of destroys Flying-types, Togekiss draws in potentially threatening attacks with Follow Me, Rotom-W threatens Fire-types, while Cresselia is overall good support and Cresselia makes for an excellent allround support Pokemon. Starmie is faster than all of the Dragon-types and rains on their parade with Ice Beam. Mamoswine is very useful for checking both Dragons-types and Zapdos, both of which are common checks to Heracross. Ninetales and Politoed also make for good teammates, removing Hail or Sand as well as removing some counters to Heracross (such as?).</p>
[Other Options]
<p>To utilize Heracross's decent bulk, a more defensive set with spread of 252 HP / 68 Atk / 4 Def / 172 SpD / 12 Spe, allowing Heracross to survive a Dragon Gem boosted Draco Meteor from Latios, two Heat Waves from Zapdos, as well as doing and does massive damage to Cresselia with a Bug Gem boosted Megahorn. Feint can negate the opponents Protects, but losing out on a coverage move hurts Heracross greatly. Aerial Ace gains some useful coverage, but its power Base Power is too low to be usable. Knock down Smack Down, when used in conjunction with an Earthquake user, or Earthquake on Heracross, can be is feasible, but forces Heracross to Protect often, wasting its Guts ability. Night Slash hits Ghost-types, but has overlapping coverage with Megahorn more often than not. If you're partner can activate Guts, using another item, such as a Bug Gem, can be usable, but the set-up is difficult to accomplish consistently. Stone Edge can be used to hit Zapdos harder than Rock Slide, but one crucial miss can lose you a game, and the fact that Rock Slide is a spread move and can flinch the opponent is too good to pass up on. Utilizing a Choice Scarf lets Heracross outpace faster threats, but being locked into a move and losing Guts far outweighs positive that the Speed gained grants.</p>
[Checks and Counters]
<p>Zapdos outpaces outspeeds Heracross, can KO with both Heat Wave and Hidden Power Flying, resists both its STABs, and only fears Rock Slide. Acrobatics users can dispatch of Heracross with ease, as most are faster than Heracross it. Chandelure can utilize Heat Wave with ease and often caries a Focus Sash, and therefore makes for a decent check to Heracross. Infernape outpaces outspeeds Heracrpps and can easily KO it with its Fire-type move of choice, or even Encore Heracross's Protect. Salamence and Dragonite outpace outspeed Heracross, walls most of its attacks, and can use a Fire-type move or Hidden Power Flying to KO Heracross. Latios also outpaces outspeed and can use its STAB Psychic to remove KO Heracross.</p>
[Unreleased]
<p>Heracross receives Moxie as a hidden ability from Dream World. When utilizing a Choice Scarf, Heracross could find itself easily gaining Moxie boosts after KOing an opposing Pokemon. While a Moxie Set has lots of potential, overall the main set would be more effective (you need to say why. Also the sentence before this one is self-evident).</p>
Utilizing a Choice Scarf lets Heracross outpace faster threats, but being locked into a move and losing Guts far outweighs positive that the Speed gained grants.
I'm having trouble understanding this sentence. I feel like you're missing a word between outweighs and positive, but it could just be me.
This is my bad, it should readDid you refresh before you rechecked? Because a solid 90% of the changes you told me to make were already done to the first paragraph.Utilizing a Choice Scarf lets Heracross outpace faster threats, but being locked into a move and losing Guts is quite detrimental to Heracross's effectiveness.
Yeah, I was just building on my old check.
I could have sworn it was outpaces instead of outspeeds. Ah well.
nah, it's outspeeds
Thanks again. I should have gotten the rest of the changes. Curious as to why you just now touched the bottom half of the analysis...
I only did the second half now because (as I mentioned in my first check) I wanted to give you a chance to correct the formatting and a couple of other things before giving it a proper check.
[Overview]
<p>While Heracross is often overlooked; it has several advantages over other common Pokemon that enable it to function well in the VGC 2012 metagame. With its excellent Bug / Fighting, Heracross can hit several top threats, such as Terrakion, Cresselia, and Tyranitar for super effective damage. Boasting a terrific base 125 Attack stat, which can be further boosted by its fantastic ability Guts, Heracross can dispose of opposing Pokemon with ease. With decent base 80 / 75 / 95 defenses, Heracross can also take a hit or two before going down. Due to its average base 85 Speed, Heracross benefits greatly from Tailwind, Trick Room, and Thunder Wave or Icy Wind support, all of which allow it to get the jump on faster threats. Heracross isn't the perfect Pokemon, however; it is plagued with a weakness to Fire-, Flying-, and Psychic-type moves, all of which are commonly used in the VGC metagame. Even with its faults, with proper team support Heracross flourishes and is able fit onto any team with ease.</p>
[SET]
name: Guts Abuse
move 1: Megahorn
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Rock Slide / Earthquake / Facade
move 4: Protect
item: Flame Orb / Toxic Orb
ability: Guts
nature: Adamant / Jolly
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
<p>This set abuses common type weaknesses to demolish the opponents team through hard-hitting moves. After a Guts boost, Heracross's attack stat is boosted to unimaginable levels, allowing it to destroy common threats such as Cresselia, Tyranitar, and Politoed amongst others. Megahorn easily destroys Cresselia and Amoonguss, two Pokemon that are commonly seen in VGC. Ludicolo is also hit for super effective damage by Megahorn, but Heracross takes a lot of damage from Scald or Surf in the rain. Fighting-type moves are notorious for hitting large amounts of Pokemon for super effective damage and Heracross's STAB Close Combat KOs those Pokemon with ease and hits Pokemon who are neutral to it for large amounts of damage as well. Your choice of third move depends on what coverage move benefits your team most. Rock Slide and Earthquake are good spread moves, and hit a good portion of the metagame for super effective damage. Rock Slide helps Heracross against Flying-types, doesn't harm its ally, and hits Shedinja. Earthquake works well with most of Heracross's recommended teammates, and hits a lot of the metagame for significant amounts of damage. Facade hits almost everything for neutral damage and, after a Guts boost, its Base Power doubles to a cool 140. Protect is a crucial move in VGC; it shields Heracross from a potential fatal attack and activates Guts. The choice between Flame Orb and Toxic Orb is not very important. Toxic Orb does less damage over short periods of time, but battles tend to last longer than before so Flame Orb is typically the superior item. While unlikely, Toxic Orb prevents Heracross's Attack from getting halved if its ability were to be switched.</p>
[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>An Adamant nature ties with other neutral Base 85s, (comma) while Jolly gets the jump on all neutral Krookodile, Lucario, and Rotom formes, as well as Excadrill out of sand. This also enables Heracross to Speed tie with neutral Hydreigon. Suicune and Aerodactyl make for great Tailwind partners as both deal with a few counters to Heracross, namely Fire- and Flying-types. Tornadus, Salamence, and Crobat also make for good Tailwind partners. If Thunder Wave is more appealing for team support than Tailwind, Pokemon such as Thundurus, Togekiss, Rotom-W, and Cresselia are great partners. Thundurus destroys Flying-types, Togekiss draws in potentially threatening attacks with Follow Me, Rotom-W threatens Fire-types, and Cresselia makes for an excellent all-round support Pokemon. Starmie is faster than all of the Dragon-types and rains on their parade with Ice Beam. Mamoswine is very useful for checking both Dragons-types and Zapdos, both of which are common checks to Heracross. Ninetales and Politoed also make for good teammates; they can remove hail or hand and put pressure on Fire-types. Politoed can also use Ice Beam to deal respectable damage to Zapdos and other Flying-types.</p>
[Other Options]
<p>To utilize Heracross's decent bulk, a more defensive spread of 252 HP / 68 Atk / 4 Def / 172 SpD / 12 Spe, allowing Heracross to survive a Dragon Gem boosted Draco Meteor from Latios, two Heat Waves from Zapdos, and does massive damage to Cresselia with a Bug Gem boosted Megahorn. Feint can negate the opponents Protect, but losing out on a coverage move hurts Heracross greatly. Aerial Ace gains some useful coverage, but its Base Power is too low to be usable. Smack Down, when used in conjunction with an Earthquake user, or Earthquake on Heracross, is feasible, but forces Heracross to Protect often, wasting its Guts ability. Night Slash hits Ghost-types, but has overlapping coverage with Megahorn. If you're partner can activate Guts, using another item, such as a Bug Gem, can be usable, but the set-up is difficult to accomplish consistently. Stone Edge can be used to hit Zapdos harder than Rock Slide, but one crucial miss can lose you a game, and the fact that Rock Slide is a spread move and can flinch the opponent is too good to pass up on. Utilizing a Choice Scarf lets Heracross outpace faster threats, but being locked into a move and losing Guts far outweighs positive that the Speed gained grants.</p>
[Checks and Counters]
<p>Zapdos outspeeds Heracross, can KO with both Heat Wave and Hidden Power Flying, resists both its STABs, and only fears Rock Slide. Acrobatics users can dispatch of Heracross with ease, as most are faster than it. Chandelure can utilize Heat Wave and often caries a Focus Sash, and therefore makes for a decent check to Heracross. Infernape outspeeds Heracross and can easily KO it with its Fire-type move of choice, or even Encore Heracross's Protect. Salamence and Dragonite outspeed Heracross, wall most of its attacks, and can use a Fire-type move or Hidden Power Flying to KO Heracross. Latios also outspeeds and can use its STAB Psychic to KO Heracross.</p>
[Unreleased]
<p>Heracross receives Moxie from Dream World. When utilizing a Choice Scarf, Heracross outspeeds key threats, such as Latios, Terrakion, Thundurus and others, and retains most of its hard-hitting power. While a Moxie set has lots of potential, overall the main set is more effective due to not being as weak to Speed lowering moves such as Icy Wind, Tailwind, and Trick Room, as well as boasting more overall power.</p>
spelling and grammar standards thread said:Community-created terms such as "Speed tier" are not capitalized beyond the normal conventions, but Nintendo-created terms such as "Base Power" are capitalized as they would be in-game.
Always append 's to a noun when signifying a singular possessive (Latias's Soul Dew) or plural possessive that doesn't end in s (Lucario's Swords Dance), and simply a ' when signifying a plural possessive for a word that ends in s (All Latios' Draco Meteor).
2) People saying "abuse" when they mean "capitalize on" or just "use". For example, "Cloyster can abuse 125 Base Power Icicle Spear" or "Team support is vital in order to fully abuse specially defensive Heatran" or "Toxicroak is best paired with Politoed to abuse his Dry Skin ability."
To abuse something is to misuse it for a bad purpose. For example, intentionally triggering Acid Rain would be abuse. Using a powerful Pokemon/ability/move in a normal way is never abuse. Pokemon with Thunderbolt and Ice Beam are not "abusing" BoltBeam coverage. Salamence does not "abuse" his high Attack stat. Toxicroak is not "abusing" his Dry Skin ability in rain; he's using it exactly how he should be. This error is extremely common in our analyses right now, but it is an error, plain and simple, and people need to stop making it.
[Overview]
<p>While Heracross is often overlooked; it has several advantages over other common Pokemon that enable it to function well in the VGC 2012 metagame. With its excellent Bug / Fighting typing, Heracross can hit several top threats, such as Terrakion, Cresselia, and Tyranitar, for super effective damage.Boasting aThanks to its terrific base 125 Attack stat, which can be further boosted by its fantastic ability Guts, Heracross can dispose of opposing Pokemon with ease. With decent base 80 / 75 / 95 defenses, Heracross can also take a hit or two before going down. Due to its average base 85 Speed, Heracross benefits greatly from Tailwind, Trick Room, and Thunder Wave or Icy Wind support, all of which allow it to get the jump on faster threats. Heracross isn't the perfect Pokemon, however; it is plagued withaweaknesses to Fire-, Flying-, and Psychic-type moves, all of which are commonly used in the VGC metagame. Despite its faults, Heracross flourishes with proper team support, and is able to fit onto any team with ease.</p>
[SET]
name: Guts
move 1: Megahorn
move 2: Close Combat
move 3: Rock Slide / Earthquake / Facade
move 4: Protect
item: Flame Orb / Toxic Orb
ability: Guts
nature: Adamant / Jolly
evs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
<p>This set takes advantage of common type weaknesses to demolish the opponents's team through hard-hitting moves. After a Guts boost, Heracross's Attack stat is boosted to unimaginable levels,allowingwhich allows it to destroy common threats, such as Cresselia, Tyranitar, and Politoed, amongst others. Megahorn easily destroys Cresselia and Amoonguss, two Pokemon that are commonly seen in VGC.Ludicolo is also hitMegahorn also hits Ludicolo for super effective damageby Megahorn, but Heracross takes a lot of damage from Scald or Surf in the rain. Fighting-type moves are notorious forhitting large amounts of Pokemon for super effective damage andtheir super effective coverage; indeed, Heracross's STAB Close Combat KOesthosemany Pokemon with ease, and hits even Pokemon who are neutral to it for large amounts of damage as well.</p>
<p>Your choice of third move depends on what coverage move benefits your team most. Rock Slide and Earthquake are good spread moves, and hit a good portion of the metagamefor super effective damagesuper effectively. Rock Slide helps Heracross against Flying-types, doesn't harm its ally, and hits Shedinja, while Earthquake works well with most of Heracross's recommended teammates, and hits a lot of the metagame for significant amounts of damage. Facade hits almost everything for neutral damage and, after a Guts boost, its Base Power doubles to a cool 140. Protect is a crucial move in VGC; it shields Heracross from a potentially fatal attack and activates Guts.The choice between Flame Orb and Toxic Orb is not very important. Toxic Orb does less damage over short periods of time, but battles tend to last longer than before so Flame Orb is typically the superior item. While unlikely, Toxic Orb prevents Heracross's Attack from getting halved if its ability were to be switched.</p>
[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]
<p>The choice between Flame Orb and Toxic Orb is not very important. Toxic Orb does less damage over short periods of time, but battles tend to last longer than before so Flame Orb is typically the superior item. While unlikely, Toxic Orb prevents Heracross's Attack from being halved if its ability were to be switched. An Adamant nature lets Heracross Speed tieswith other neutral base 85s, while a Jolly one enables it to getsthe jump on all neutral Krookodile, Lucario, and Rotom formes,as well asExcadrill out of sand. This also enables Heracross to, as well as Speed tie with neutral Hydreigon. </p>
<p>Suicune and Aerodactyl make for great Tailwind partners as both deal with a few counters to Heracross, namely Fire- and Flying-types. Tornadus, Salamence, and Crobat also make for good Tailwind partners. IfThunder Wave is more appealing for team support than Tailwindyou'd rather provide Heracross with Thunder Wave support, Pokemon such as Thundurus, Togekiss, Rotom-W, and Cresselia are great partners. Thundurus destroys Flying-types, Togekiss draws in potentially threatening attacks with Follow Me, Rotom-W threatens Fire-types, and Cresselia makes for an excellent all-round support Pokemon. Starmie is faster than all of the Dragon-types and rains on their parade with Ice Beam. Mamoswine is very useful for checking both Dragons-types and Zapdos, both of which are common checks to Heracross. Ninetales and Politoed also make for good teammates;, as they can remove hailorand sand, and put pressure on Fire-types. Furthermore, Politoed canalsouse Ice Beam to deal respectable damage to Zapdos and other Flying-types.</p>
[Other Options]
<p>To utilize Heracross's decent bulk,A more defensive spread of 252 HP / 68 Atk / 4 Def / 172 SpD / 12 Spe, allowing Heracross tocapitalizes on Heracross's decent bulk. Specifically, this Heracross survives a Dragon Gem-boosted Draco Meteor from Latios,and two Heat Waves from Zapdos, anddoescan do massive damage to Cresselia with a Bug Gem-boosted Megahorn. Feint can negate the opponents' Protect, butlosing out onthe loss of a coverage move hurts Heracross greatly. Aerial Ace gains some useful coverage, but its Base Power is too low to be usable. Smack Down, when used in conjunction with either an Earthquake user,or Earthquake on Heracross, is feasible, but forces Heracross to Protect often (this only refers to if hera's partner is using EQ though?), wasting its Guts ability. Night Slash hits Ghost-types, but has overlapping coverage with Megahorn. Ifyou'reHeracross's partner can activate Guts,usingHeracross can use another item, such as a Bug Gem,can be usable,but the set-up is difficult to accomplish consistently. Stone Edgecan be used to hithits Zapdos harder than Rock Slide does, but one crucial miss can lose you a game, and the fact that Rock Slide is a spread moveand can flinch the opponentwith a flinch chance is too good to pass up on.UtilizingA Choice Scarf lets Heracross outpace faster threats, but being locked into a move and losing Guts far outweighs the advantagesthatof the extra Speedgained grants.</p>
[Checks and Counters]
<p>Zapdos outspeeds Heracross, can KO with both Heat Wave and Hidden Power Flying, resists both its STABs, and only fears Rock Slide. Acrobatics users (such as?) can dispatch of Heracross with ease, as most are faster than it. Chandelure can utilize Heat Wave and often caries a Focus Sash, and therefore makes for a decent check to Heracross. Infernape outspeeds Heracross and can easily KO it with its Fire-type move of choice, or even Encore Heracross's Protect. Salamence and Dragoniteoutspeedoutrun Heracross, wall most of its attacks, and can use a Fire-type move or Hidden Power Flying to KO Heracross. Latios also outspeeds and can use its STAB Psychic to KO Heracross.</p>
[Unreleased]
<p>Heracross receives Moxie from the Dream World. When utilizing a Choice Scarf, Heracross outspeeds key threats, such as Latios, Terrakion, Thundurus and others, and retains most of its hard-hitting power. While a Moxie set has lots of potential,overallthe main set is more effectivedue to not being aoverall as it is less weak to Speed -lowering moves such as Icy Wind, Tailwind, and Trick Room,as well asand alsoboastingboasts moreoverallpower.</p>