Monotype Indeedee-F (Psychic)

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[SET]
name: Offensive Support (Psychic)
move 1: Healing Wish
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Mystical Fire
move 4: Trick / Hyper Voice
item: Choice Specs
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Access to Psychic Surge, a Ghost immunity, and decent offensive stats make Indeedee-F a good option on Psychic teams. Psychic Surge is great for boosting its team's Psychic-type STAB moves, as well as blocking priority such as Bisharp's Sucker Punch and Mimikyu's Shadow Sneak. However, its access to Healing Wish is what truly differentiates itself from Indeedee-M, enabling it to support its teammates if they get worn down. On the other hand, Indeedee-F's Speed is notably lower than its male counterpart's, which means it fails to Speed tie with Pokemon such Kyurem and Obstagoon and fails to outspeed Pokemon like Rotom-H and Kommo-o. Its slightly lower Special Attack compared to Indeedee-M also means that it has a harder time beating Pokemon such as Zeraora with a Choice Specs-boosted Psychic. Psychic is its most powerful attack and is boosted by Psychic Surge, being able to deal significant damage to bulky Pokemon such as Toxapex, Hippowdon, and Torkoal while OHKOing offensive Pokemon such as Mamoswine. Mystical Fire hits Steel-type Pokemon such as Aegislash, Ferrothorn, and Bisharp. Trick cripples defensive Pokemon such as Snorlax and Corviknight by locking them into one attack, while Hyper Voice is another STAB option that avoids having to worry about Dark-type Pokemon like Obstagoon, Morpeko, and Crawdaunt in matchups such as Normal, Electric, and Water switching in. It also hits Pokemon such as Shiftry and Salazzle behind a Substitute.

Indeedee-F's Healing Wish support is especially good for Pokemon like Mew, Hatterene, and Jirachi so that they can take on matchups such as Steel, Dragon, Water, and Fairy with more consistency. In return, Mew can break past defensive Pokemon that Indeedee-F struggles against such as Snorlax, Corviknight, and Tyranitar using its combination of Taunt, Knock Off, and Will-O-Wisp. Hatterene's Magic Bounce is crucial for preventing entry hazards such as Ferrothorn's Spikes, Toxapex's Toxic Spikes, and Sticky Web that wear down or slow down Indeedee-F. Gardevoir and Jirachi are both Choice Scarf users that can carry Healing Wish, forming a strong support core with Indeedee-F, as well as revenge killing faster Pokemon like Sand Rush Excadrill and Hydreigon respectively. Gardevoir and Hatterene are also good for beating Dark-type Pokemon like Hydreigon, Grimmsnarl, and Weavile, and all three of them appreciate Psychic Surge's ability to boost their STAB Psychic attacks and allow them to avoid priority moves from Pokemon such as Bisharp, Grimmsnarl, and Mimikyu. Celebi's access to Thunder Wave and Healing Wish means it can slow down faster Pokemon and support Indeedee-F and the rest of the team. Orbeetle can slow down Pokemon like Mimikyu and Salazzle for Indeedee-F because of its access to Sticky Web.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Psychic)
move 1: Healing Wish
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Trick
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Indeedee-F's ability to use a fast Healing Wish is what differentiates it from its male counterpart and allows it to support its teammates if they ever get worn down. However, on the downside, its Special Attack and Speed are both lower than Indeedee-M's, meaning it can't outspeed Choice Scarf Excadrill and has to Speed tie with Choice Scarf Duraludon as a revenge killer. Psychic Surge's support is great for Psychic teams, being able to stop priority users such as Bisharp, Crawdaunt, Mamoswine, and Mimikyu as well as boosting Psychic-type STAB moves. Psychic is Indeedee-F's strongest attack and allows it to deal a decent amount of damage to foes like Zeraora, Mimikyu, Mamoswine, and Cinderace under Psychic Terrain. It also hits Poison-type Pokemon like Toxapex, Salazzle, and Gengar for super effective damage. Dazzling Gleam hits Dark- and Dragon-type Pokemon such as Hydreigon, Obstagoon, and Dragapult for super effective damage. Trick cripples defensive Pokemon such as Hippowdon as well as setup sweepers like Kyurem and Reuniclus by locking them into one move.

The entirety of Psychic teams appreciates Indeedee-F's Psychic Surge and Healing Wish support as well as its Ghost immunity. Mew is an effective stallbreaker that can break down common defensive Pokemon like Hippowdon, Ferrothorn, and Snorlax for Indeedee-F using Will-O-Wisp, Taunt, and Knock Off. It can also use Nasty Plot in conjunction with Fire Blast to beat Steel-type Pokemon such as Bisharp, Ferrothorn and Aegislash Indeedee-F cannot damage well. In return, Indeedee-F can revenge kill Pokemon like Hydreigon and Zeraora that threaten Mew with their super effective attacks. Gardevoir and Celebi can also use Healing Wish, and as a result, they can form a strong support core with Indeedee-F. Gardevoir and Jirachi work together with Indeedee-F as Choice Scarf users to break down shared checks and sweep teams, and both appreciate Psychic Terrain along with Trick Room Hatterene, as it allows them to deal with priority users such as Bisharp, Mimikyu, and Crawdaunt as well as boost their STAB Psychic attacks. Hatterene's access to Magic Bounce means it can keep away Sticky Web that slows down Indeeedee-F and hamper it as a revenge killer. Celebi can pivot into attacks such as Seisimtoad's Hydro Pump and Alolan Raichu's Rising Voltage for Indeedee-F using its good defensive typing.

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Ready, if some stuff on the second paragraph of Choice Scarf is formatted weirdly in in terms of readability, please let me know on Discord and I'll reword it
 

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Choice Specs Set
-"Kommo-o", not "Kommo-O"
-Lucario isn't as important of an example when it comes to speed difference between Female and Male formes. Kyurem-B is, however.

Choice Scarf Set
-Mystical Fire -> Dazzling Gleam here, or Gleam slashed behind Mystical Fire. Between Hat, Garde, and Jirachi, you don't need Gleam as much for Dark/Dragon here I'd like to say.
-Because I recommended the above, revenge killing Hydreigon with Indeedee is no longer certain; use a different example.
-Wording when it comes to the Jirachi/Garde/Hat here is kinda weird. You say that the former two appreciate Psychic Terrain, but it's written in a way that makes it feel like Hatterene has the speed to deal with those priority users? Under Trick Room + Terrain that would apply, but the wording here is rather confusing to read here so I'd just generalize it a good bit.

Nothing is necessarily wrong with the content here; just keep an eye out for small inconsistencies and grammar errors here and there.

QC 1/2
 

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Spoke on discord about not including Mystical Fire on Choice Scarf. Otherwise I implemented this, ready for check 2
 

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[Specs]
Gardevoir, Hatterene, and Jirachi appreciate Indeedee-F's ability to set Psychic Terrain as it boosts their STAB Psychic atatcks as well as allowing them to avoid priority from Pokemon such as Bisharp, Hatterene, and Mimikyu.
- hatterene does not have priority, do you mean grimmsnarl and sucker punch

[Scarf]
Trick cripples defensive Pokemon such as Hippowdon as well as setup sweepers like Kyurem-B and Reuniclus by locking them into one move attack.
- slight nitpick but its one move not one attack

Mew is an effective stallbreaker that can break down common defensive Pokemon like Hippowdon, Ferrothorn, and Snorlax for Indeedee-F using Will-O-Wisp, Taunt, and Knock Off.
- def talk about np mew and its ability to break steel for scarf indeedee which is hopelessly walled by all steels ever

Good work, QC 2/2!

 

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[SET]
name: Offensive Support (Psychic)
move 1: Healing Wish
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Mystical Fire
move 4: Trick / Hyper Voice
item: Choice Specs
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Access to Psychic Surge, a Ghost immunity, and decent offensive stats make Indeedee-F a good option on Psychic teams. Psychic Surge is great for boosting it and its teammates its team's Psychic-type STAB moves, as well as blocking priority such as Bisharp's Sucker Punch and Mimikyu's Shadow Sneak. However, its access to Healing Wish is what truly differentiates itself from male Indeedee-M, being able enabling it to support its teammates if they get potentially worn down. On the other hand, Indeedee-F's Speed is notably lower than its male Indeedee's counterpart's, which means it fails to Speed tie with Pokemon such as Kommo-o, Kyurem-B, (AC) (dead) and Obstagoon and failing fails to outspeed Pokemon like Rotom-H. Its slightly lower Special Attack being slightly lower than male Indeedee's compared to Indeedee-M also means that it has a harder time beating Pokemon such as Zeraora with a Choice Specs-boosted Psychic. Psychic is its most powerful attack and is boosted by Psychic Surge, being able to deal significant damage to bulky Pokemon such as Toxapex, Hippowdon, and Torkoal while OHKOing offensive Pokemon such as Mamoswine. Mystical Fire hits Steel-type Pokemon such as Aegislash, Ferrothorn, and Bisharp. Trick cripples defensive Pokemon such as Snorlax and Corviknight by locking them into one attack, while Hyper Voice is another STAB option as a STAB attack that doesn't need avoids having to worry about Dark-type Pokemon like Obstagoon, Morpeko, and Crawdaunt in matchups such as Normal, Electric, and Water switching in. It also hits Pokemon such as Shiftry and Salazzle behind a Substitute.

Indeedee-F's Healing Wish support is especially good for Pokemon like Mew, Hatterene, and Jirachi (RC) so that they can take on matchups such as Steel, Dragon, Water, and Fairy with more consistency respectively. In return, Mew can break past defensive Pokemon that Indeedee-F struggles against such as Snorlax, Corviknight, and Tyranitar using its combination of Taunt, Knock Off, and Will-O-Wisp. Hatterene's Magic Bounce is crucial for preventing entry hazards such as Ferrothorn's Spikes, (AC) and Toxapex's Toxic Spikes, as well as and Sticky Web (RC) that chip and wear down or slow down Indeedee-F down respectively. Gardevoir and Jirachi are both Choice Scarf users that can carry Healing Wish, forming a strong support core with Indeedee-F, as well as revenge killing faster Pokemon like Sand Rush Excadrill (RC) and Kyurem-B (dead) respectively. Gardevoir and Hatterene are also good for beating Dark-type Pokemon like Hydreigon, Grimmsnarl, and Weavile, (comma) Gardevoir, Hatterene, and Jirachi and all three of them appreciate Indeedee-F's Psychic Surge's ability to set Psychic Terrain as it boosts boost their STAB Psychic atatcks as well as allowing attacks and allow them to avoid priority moves from Pokemon such as Bisharp, Grimmsnarl, and Mimikyu. Celebi's access to Thunder Wave and Healing Wish means it can slow down faster Pokemon and support Indeedee-F and the rest of the team respectively. Orbeetle can slow down Pokemon like Mimikyu and Salazzle for Indeedee-F because of its access to Sticky Web.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Psychic)
move 1: Healing Wish
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Dazzling Gleam
move 4: Trick
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Psychic Surge
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Indeedee-F's ability to use a fast Healing Wish is what differentiates it from its male Indeedee, counterpart and allows Indeedee-F it to support its teammates if they ever get worn down coupled with its ability to use it quickly in tandem with Choice Scarf. However, on the downside, its Special Attack and Speed are both lower than male Indeedee's Indeedee-M's, meaning it can't outspeed Choice Scarf Excadrill and has to Speed tie with Choice Scarf Duraludon as a revenge killer. Psychic Surge's support is great for Psychic teams, being able to stop priority users such as Bisharp, Crawdaunt, Mamoswine, and Mimikyu as well as boosting Psychic-type STAB moves. Psychic is Indeedee-F's strongest attack and allows it to deal a decent amount of damage to foes like Zeraora, Mimikyu, Mamoswine, and Cinderace under Psychic Terrain. It also hits Poison-type Pokemon like Toxapex, Salazzle, and Gengar for super effective damage. Dazzling Gleam hits Dark- and Dragon-type Pokemon such as Hydreigon, Obstagoon, and Dragapult for super effective damage. Trick cripples defensive Pokemon such as Hippowdon as well as setup sweepers like Kyurem-B (dead) and Reuniclus by locking them into one move.

The entirety of Psychic teams appreciate appreciates Indeedee-F's Psychic Surge and Healing Wish support (RC) as well as its Ghost immunity. Mew is an effective stallbreaker that can break down common defensive Pokemon like Hippowdon, Ferrothorn, and Snorlax for Indeedee-F using Will-O-Wisp, Taunt, and Knock Off. It can also use Nasty Plot in conjunction with Fire Blast to beat Steel-type Pokemon such as Bisharp, Ferrothorn and Aegislash Indeedee-F cannot damage well. In return, Indeedee-F can revenge kill Pokemon like Hydreigon and Zeraora that threaten Mew with their super effective attacks. Gardevoir and Celebi are two can also use Healing Wish users, and as a result, they can form a strong support core with Indeedee-F. Gardevoir and Jirachi work together with Indeedee-F as Choice Scarf users to break down shared checks and sweep teams, and both appreciate Psychic Terrain along with Trick Room Hatterene, (AC) as it allows them to deal with priority users such as Bisharp, Mimikyu, and Crawdaunt as well as boost their STAB Psychic attacks. Hatterene's access to Magic Bounce means it can keep away Sticky Web that slow slows down Indeeedee-F and hamper it as a revenge killer. Celebi can set Stealth Rock, chipping down the opposing team for Indeedee-F, as well as pivot into attacks such as Seisimtoad's Hydro Pump for it.

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