Inescapable Death Team(First Team)

DarkSpawn

This is my first time making a team and i am kinda new to competitive play but heres the team i made, revisions and advice are welcome.

Umbreon@Focus Band
Ability:Synchronize
EVs:252 Def, 252 SDef, 4 Hp
Nature:Imprish
-Mean Look
-Baton Pass
-Wish
-Confuse Ray

Umbreon starts off using mean look to prevent my opponent from switching out and then confuses the him then baton passes to uxie to set up. If opponent uses taunt, switch to someone to quickly take him out. If opponent uses explosion thats why focus band theres.

Uxie@Light Clay
Ability:Levitate
EVs:128 Def, 128 SDef, 252 Spe
Nature:Jolly
-Reflect
-Light Screen
-Stealth Rock
-U-turn

Uxie is dual screen and sets up defenses for the team plus stealth rock for a little bit of damage when opponent sends out next Pokemon. U-turns out to a sweeper.

Azelf@Life Orb
Ability:Levitate
EVs:252 SpA, 252 Spe, 4 Hp
Nature:Timid
-Nasty Plot
-Grass Knot
-Psychic
-Flamethrower

Azelf is the nasty plot sweeper, takes care of anyone with too high defense for physical attackers and uxie lets him set up some nasty plots.

Tyranitar@Choice Band
Ability:Sand Stream
EVs:252 Hp, 252 Atk, 4 Def
Nature:Adamant
-Payback
-Avalanche
-Rock Slide
-Earthquake

Tyranitar is the main physical sweeper with his choice band and his slow speed will most likely get hit first and double the power of avalanche and payback. His sand steam ability will boost his SDef and when opponent switches in on a pokemon that i cant take out switch to metagross who isnt buffed by sandstorm.

Metagross@Expert Belt
Ability:Clear Body
EVs:252 Atk, 252 Spe, 4 Hp
Nature:Adamant
-Thunder Punch
-Ice Punch
-Zen Headbutt
-Earthquake

Metagross is another physical sweeper meant to take out anything that Tyranitar cant and his move coverage is broad.

Breloom@Toxic Orb
Ability:Poison Heal
EVs:252 Atk, 252 Spe, 4 Hp
Nature:Adamant
-Spore
-Focus Punch
-Seed Bomb
-Mach Punch

Breloom will take out anything that the rest of the team can't with the spore and focus punch combination. I would prefer to send Breloom out after uxie to ensure spore.
 
Well. first off.... im not a mod, but this thread might get locked due to this rule

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

You can read the rules here: http://www.smogon.com/forums/announcement.php?f=52&a=121

There are a lot of other things wrong with this team, but ill let other people nitpick.
 
err with breloom i recomend the sub puncher in case they wake up also focus band is generley band in play replace with a focus sash or better yet leftovers. Also sizzor seems to annoy this team u turning to weakening your team and then when everyones on low health bullet punching. also i would either change tyranitar to dragon dance or meatagross to agillity helping you break through oppenents teams.

KarateF22 said:
Well. first off.... im not a mod, but this thread might get locked due to this rule

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.
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And this belongs in the OU team rating section, not that you'll gte much help because of breaking rule 3 but pointing that out.


edit: i also just noticed the moves and items of the team and i'm shocked: No meteor mash on Metagross and giving it 252 speed EV's? Rock slide instead of Stone edge on Tyranitar?( the moves for that set are horrible) Focus band on Umbreon when you can use Focus sash? ( and even then it would be a waste) It also just has 4 HP EV's when it should have way more then that.
 
Uh, yeah... What tier is this supposed to be? Because I think you ment it to be OU (since Tyrantiar and Metagross are OU) but unfortunately you posted it in the "Other Team" Forum. So its a OU team. Sorry Beserker Lord, you posted while I was writing. Sorry for the repeat. My bad.
 
Tyranitar@Choice Band
Ability:Sand Stream
EVs:252 Hp, 252 Atk, 4 Def
Nature:Adamant
-Payback
-Avalanche
-Rock Slide
-Earthquake
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Interesting set, and Avalanche seems good in principle, but you are relying on getting attacked for it to be effective. I don't see it having any advantage other Tyranitar's other options. Aqua Tail hits Hippowdon harder if it is slacking off or yawning. Stone Edge hits Dragons such as Salamence and Dragonite hard anyway. Celebi takes more damage from Crunch, or Payback if you insist on running it. I strongly recommend Pursuit on this set, possible over Earthquake, as it allow you to hit Latias and Gengar for massive damage as the flee in fear. This will get moved to the OU RMT section in time
 
oh sorry, i thought that the team would be considered OU only if all the members are OU. So can anyone move this thread please.
 
Umbreon wants leftovers, nothing other than close combat/ superpower will kill it in one hit, and you shouldn't be staying in on those moves anyway

your tyranitar should have pursuit over avalanche... Salamence is already weak to rock an latias is weak to dark... And tyranitar has no business attacking flygon anyway

if you want a nasty plot sweeper I recommend infernape instead because heatran can switch into that azelf and cause major problems for your team

EDIT: for gods sake give metagross meteor mash... It doesn't matter what you replace, just something
 
umbreon with focus band is kinda bad
try leftovers perhaps?
your team is dd tyranitar weak
have at least 1 good encounter
perhaps gliscor?
 
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